Run: 2026-10-13-01M4V2163AFNNTSX3YAFTGEBE1

Run Details

Duration:
33.3s
Cost:
$0.020838
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt clicked. Brass mechanisms ground against the battered wood frame of Eva’s front door. Rory pulled the heavy slab inward, ready to snap at the delivery driver for leaning on the buzzer. The thick scent of toasted cumin and fenugreek from the curry house downstairs rushed up the stairwell, colliding with the sharp, familiar notes of bergamot and rain-soaked wool. Lucien stood on the cramped landing. Platinum hair, slick from the London drizzle, clung to his temples. Raindrops beaded on the lapels of a charcoal suit that cost more than Rory made in six months hauling takeaway bags for Yu-Fei. He leaned his weight onto his ivory-handled cane, his mismatched eyes—one liquid amber, the other a void of solid black—locking onto hers. Rory’s fingers tightened on the brass handle. The crescent scar on her left wrist throbbed, a phantom ache triggered by the sheer audacity of his presence. "You have the wrong postcode, Moreau. Mayfair is west." She shoved the door toward the jamb. The rubber tip of his cane shot out, wedging between the scuffed wood and the frame with a dull thud. "Leave the wood alone, Aurora. Eva is still paying off the last security deposit I financed." "Eva isn't here. She's in Oxford translating a thirteenth-century scroll for a guild contact, which means I'm on cat duty, which means I don't have to look at you." Lucien applied pressure to the door. Not brute demon strength, just steady, unrelenting leverage. Rory braced her trainers against the floorboards, refusing to yield an inch. Her straight black hair swung forward, brushing her jawline as she glared up at him. "My business is not with Eva." "Well, it’s certainly not with me. You made that clear on Blackfriars Bridge." A muscle feathered in his jaw. He shifted his grip on the ivory handle, his knuckles whitening. "The bridge was a tactical necessity. If the Avaros hounds had caught my scent on your coat, they would have torn you to ribbons before you reached the Tube." "You didn't just walk away to draw hounds, Luc. You wiped your ledger clean. Changed your numbers. Locked the wards on the Soho office so they burned my fingers when I knocked." She dropped her weight back, letting the door swing wide. The sudden lack of resistance tipped him forward half a step. He caught himself with preternatural grace, though his amber eye narrowed at the petty victory gleaming in her bright blue ones. Rory spun on her heel and marched into the claustrophobic sitting room. "Five minutes. Don't bleed on the parchment, and don't touch the tea." The door shut behind him. Three deadbolts slid home in rapid succession, the metallic clatter echoing off the walls. Eva’s flat offered nowhere to hide. Towers of leather-bound grimoires threatened to topple from the radiator covers. Loose leaves of vellum and sticky notes covered in frantic scrawls carpeted the floorboards, leaving a narrow trench between the kitchenette and a threadbare velvet sofa. Ptolemy, a massive tabby with one notched ear, cracked a yellow eye open from atop a stack of Babylonian translations, hissed once at Lucien’s demonic aura, and went back to sleep. Rory stood by the tiny stove, pouring boiling water into a chipped mug. Her back stayed rigid. She could feel him cataloging the room, his gaze sweeping over her oversized jumper and the Golden Empress uniform trousers folded over a chair. "You are still running deliveries for Cheung." "The tips are good and nobody tries to harvest my spleen. Plus, free dumplings." She turned, leaning her hip against the laminate counter, clutching the mug like a shield. "Speak your piece and get out. The fumes from the tandoori ovens give me a migraine when the room gets too crowded." Lucien didn't stay by the door. He navigated the paper-strewn trench with measured steps, his cane tapping a slow rhythm against the bare wood between the notes. He stopped three feet away. In the cramped quarters, his five-foot-eleven frame blocked out the weak yellow light from the hallway bulb. He reached into his breast pocket. Rory tensed, her gaze dropping to the cane where she knew eighteen inches of folded steel lay hidden. Instead of a weapon, he withdrew a tarnished silver token, stamped with the crest of a weeping eye, and set it on top of a dictionary beside the stove. "Vane is buying up debt in the East End. He acquired the mortgage on Silas’ bar four hours ago." The mug stopped halfway to Rory’s mouth. Steam curled against her chin. "Silas pays on time. Every month." "The bank sold the note to a shell company in Marseille. Vane owns the shell. By Friday, he will foreclose on the building, including the flat above it. Your flat." Rory set the mug down. Ceramic clicked hard against laminate. "Why does Vane care where I sleep?" "He doesn't care about your bed, *chérie*. He cares about who shares it." Lucien took another step, closing the gap. The scent of rain and dark spice wrapped around her, drowning out the curry house below. "He thinks you are still my leverage." A bitter laugh tore from her throat. "Well, that’s an easy fix. Send him a postcard. Tell him the Frenchman dumped the human girl two months ago because she became a liability to his bottom line." "I did not dump you." "You vanished!" Rory slammed her palm against the counter. A stack of index cards fluttered to the floor. "Three weeks after we pulled the job in Canary Wharf. Two days after you stayed in my bed until noon, tracing the scar on my wrist and speaking French so fast I couldn't catch half the words. You left me fifty grand in a dead drop and a burner phone with a dead battery. Do you know what that felt like?" "Like survival." His voice dropped, losing its polished Mayfair cadence, roughening with the gutter vowels of Marseille. "My father’s court sent an inquisitor through the veil. If he had seen me look at you the way I was looking at you that morning, he would have flayed the skin from your bones just to watch me break." "I'm not made of glass, Lucien! I survived Evan. I survived the crossing. I can handle a glorified demon accountant." "He was not an accountant, Aurora. And you are human." He raised his free hand, his fingers hovering an inch from her cheek. The heat radiating from his skin was higher than a normal man's, a feverish warmth that made her breath catch in her throat. She hated that her body remembered the exact temperature of his palms. She hated that her chin tilted up by reflex, seeking the contact before her brain could bark an order to retreat. Lucien’s black eye seemed to swallow the dim light of the kitchen, while the amber one burned like a banked fire. "I spent sixty days convincing the underworld that you meant nothing to me," he murmured, his thumb finally brushing the sharp line of her cheekbone. "Sixty days letting Vane believe you were a disposable asset I used for local logistics." Rory grabbed his wrist. Her fingers dug into the fine wool of his sleeve, right over the rapid, heavy thud of his pulse. Her own scar pressed against his cufflink. "Then why are you here? If Vane is watching my building, coming to Eva’s place blows your cover to hell." Lucien didn't pull away. Instead, he turned his hand in her grip, his calloused fingers sliding over the inside of her wrist, his thumb finding the small crescent indentation on her skin. The stroke was slow, deliberate, and devastatingly familiar. "Because Vane made a calculation error." Lucien leaned down until his forehead rested against hers, his breath warm against her parted lips. "He assumed I had the discipline to let him touch what is mine just to maintain a lie." "I'm not yours," she whispered, though her fingers curled tighter into his jacket, pulling him the last fraction of an inch closer until his chest pressed against hers. "Tell that to the three men I left unconscious in the alley behind Brick Lane ten minutes ago." His mouth brushed the corner of hers, a ghost of a touch that sent a shiver straight down her spine. "Pack a bag, Rory. You are not going back to Silas’ place tonight." "And where am I going?" "With me." His teeth grazed her lower lip before he pulled back just enough to meet her eyes. "The wards on the Soho office have been recalibrated. They won't burn you anymore."
created_at"2026-10-13T16:37:48.278Z" 10/13/2026, 4:37:48 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1441
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
41.01% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1441
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"familiar"
count2
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"throbbed"
count1
3
word"gleaming"
count1
4
word"echoing"
count1
5
word"velvet"
count1
6
word"could feel"
count1
7
word"navigated"
count1
8
word"measured"
count1
9
word"fluttered"
count1
10
word"tracing"
count1
11
word"warmth"
count1
12
word"pulse"
count1
13
word"calloused fingers"
count1
14
word"down her spine"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"weight"
2"throbbed"
3"gleaming"
4"echoing"
5"velvet"
6"could feel"
7"navigated"
8"measured"
9"fluttered"
10"tracing"
11"warmth"
12"pulse"
13"calloused fingers"
14"down her spine"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences65
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences65
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences92
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen61
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1439
ratio0.001
matches
0"chérie"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
86.93% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount872
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.26
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Eva2
London1
Rory11
Yu-Fei1
Babylonian1
Lucien8
Golden1
Empress1
Mayfair1
Marseille1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Rory"
2"Lucien"
places
0"London"
1"Marseille"
globalScore0.869
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences56
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1439
matches(empty)
94.20% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences92
matches
0"hated that her"
1"hated that her"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean29.37
std18.39
cv0.626
sampleLengths
016
146
26
356
426
59
627
716
829
941
106
1113
1217
1329
1432
1542
1612
1712
1819
1974
2041
217
2251
2349
2424
2529
2619
2712
286
2930
3017
3143
3236
335
3479
3557
3620
3710
3869
3921
4040
4130
4220
4340
4440
4528
4651
475
4832
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs136
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences92
ratio0.011
matches
0"He leaned his weight onto his ivory-handled cane, his mismatched eyes—one liquid amber, the other a void of solid black—locking onto hers."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount881
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.0170261066969353
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0022701475595913734
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences92
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences92
mean15.64
std9.96
cv0.637
sampleLengths
04
112
218
328
46
511
623
722
87
919
109
117
1220
1316
1429
156
168
1712
1815
196
2013
216
2211
2329
2432
2510
2611
2721
2812
2912
305
3114
326
3311
3426
3531
3613
374
3824
397
4029
4122
426
4321
445
4517
466
4718
4829
4919
64.49% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.41304347826086957
totalSentences92
uniqueOpeners38
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences65
matches
0"Instead of a weapon, he"
1"Instead, he turned his hand"
ratio0.031
84.62% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences65
matches
0"He leaned his weight onto"
1"She shoved the door toward"
2"Her straight black hair swung"
3"He shifted his grip on"
4"She dropped her weight back,"
5"He caught himself with preternatural"
6"Her back stayed rigid."
7"She could feel him cataloging"
8"She turned, leaning her hip"
9"He navigated the paper-strewn trench"
10"He stopped three feet away."
11"He reached into his breast"
12"His voice dropped, losing its"
13"He raised his free hand,"
14"She hated that her body"
15"She hated that her chin"
16"he murmured, his thumb finally"
17"Her fingers dug into the"
18"Her own scar pressed against"
19"she whispered, though her fingers"
ratio0.338
13.85% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount58
totalSentences65
matches
0"The third deadbolt clicked."
1"Brass mechanisms ground against the"
2"Rory pulled the heavy slab"
3"The thick scent of toasted"
4"Lucien stood on the cramped"
5"Platinum hair, slick from the"
6"Raindrops beaded on the lapels"
7"He leaned his weight onto"
8"Rory’s fingers tightened on the"
9"The crescent scar on her"
10"She shoved the door toward"
11"The rubber tip of his"
12"Lucien applied pressure to the"
13"Rory braced her trainers against"
14"Her straight black hair swung"
15"A muscle feathered in his"
16"He shifted his grip on"
17"She dropped her weight back,"
18"The sudden lack of resistance"
19"He caught himself with preternatural"
ratio0.892
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
ratio0
77.92% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Raindrops beaded on the lapels of a charcoal suit that cost more than Rory made in six months hauling takeaway bags for Yu-Fei."
1"The heat radiating from his skin was higher than a normal man's, a feverish warmth that made her breath catch in her throat."
2"Instead, he turned his hand in her grip, his calloused fingers sliding over the inside of her wrist, his thumb finding the small crescent indentation on her ski…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"he murmured, his thumb finally brushing the sharp line of her cheekbone"
1"Lucien leaned, his breath warm against her parted lips"
2"she whispered, though her fingers curled tighter into his jacket, pulling him the last fraction of an inch closer until his chest pressed against hers"
94.44% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.056
leniency0.111
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.111
85.2488%