Run: 2026-10-13-01M4V21MWS43RTYMDZZH7ZTGQ1

Run Details

Duration:
30.8s
Cost:
$0.021076
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The shimmering distortion of the Veil snapped shut behind Rory's shoulder blades with a sound like a plucked cello string. At her collarbone, the Heartstone Pendant cooled from a searing brand to a dull throb. She exhaled, her boots sinking into soil as dark and rich as ground espresso. London’s grey drizzle vanished. Above them stretched a sky of bruised, warm amber, stripped of sun or clouds, casting a honeyed twilight over a landscape that defied every law of earthly botany. "Breathe with your mouth closed, little mortal. Even the pollen here has teeth." Nyx’s voice scraped through the quiet like dry leaves skittering across stone. The Shade towered beside her, six feet of shifting, ink-black silhouette. In the amber radiance of Dymas, their edges bled smoke into the humid air, two violet eyes burning in the void of their face. Rory ignored the warning and drew a breath through her nose. The air tasted thick. Roasted figs, fermented plums, and an undertone of warm copper coated her tongue. Her stomach cramped, a sudden, hollow ache that made her knees lock. "It’s not pollen. It’s the air itself. It wants us to eat." She hooked a thumb into her belt loop, her left wrist brushing the hilt of the Fae-Forged Blade strapped to her thigh. The moonsilver remained an icicle against her hip, a welcome anchor of frost against the sticky, spice-laden heat of Gluttony. Ahead of them, Isolde Varga drifted over a carpet of crimson moss. The Half-Fae left no indentations in the plush ground, her waist-length silver hair catching the amber light like spun glass. She stopped beside a gnarled trunk that looked less like wood and more like braided, calcified muscle. "Where the Prince of Plenty sets his table, the guests become the garnish, should they linger past the third course." Isolde tilted her head, pale lavender eyes reflecting a canopy of translucent leaves. Through the crystalline foliage, veins of gold liquid pulsed in a slow, rhythmic beat. "Right. No lingering. Keep moving." Rory stepped past the seer, her boots squelching in the damp loam. The orchard stretched into infinity, rows of twisted arbors bowing under the weight of impossible fruit. Translucent globes the size of human heads hung from thorny vines, their skins stretched tight over swirling, luminescent nectar. As Rory passed beneath a low-hanging bough, the fruit trembled. A chorus of faint, rhythmic clicks echoed from inside the rinds, like tiny fingernails tapping against glass. She picked up her pace, her bright blue eyes scanning the gaps between the trellises. The deeper they walked, the more the geometry of the gardens warped. Stone pathways paved with iridescent shells wound up hillocks that seemed to swell and subside like a sleeper’s chest. A breeze rolled through the valley, carrying the distant, orchestral clatter of silver against porcelain and a low, rumbling murmur that vibrated in Rory’s molars. Nyx melted from a solid stride into a ribbon of darkness, slithering up the trunk of a bone-white pomegranate tree. They coalesced on a high branch, violet gaze fixed on the horizon. "Three leagues north, the vineyards end in a chasm of boiling sugar. To the east, the bone-mills grind." "And the spice gardens?" Rory shielded her eyes, peering up at the Shade. The small crescent scar on her left wrist itched, a phantom sting triggered by the dense magic saturating the dirt. Nyx dropped from the bough, landing without a sound, their shadow-flesh rippling like disturbed water before solidifying. "Ahead. Through the weeping arbors." They pressed deeper. The bone-white trees gave way to towering weeping willows whose fronds were spun from brittle, amber crystal. As the trio passed beneath the hanging strands, the glass vines chimed against one another, playing a discordant, chiming melody that set Rory’s teeth on edge. She reached out to push a curtain of crystal strands aside. Isolde’s slender hand darted out, fingers cold as river stones wrapping around Rory’s scarred wrist. "A toll is asked by every door that weeps. Give it skin, and it will take the bone." Isolde released her and pointed a pale finger toward the base of the willow. Nested among the roots lay the desiccated husks of three woodland birds, their feathers intact, their flesh dissolved into pools of glistening, ruby jelly that the roots were actively drinking. Rory yanked her hand back, wiping her palm on her jeans. She drew the Fae-Forged Blade. The leaf-shaped moonsilver drank the amber twilight, glowing with a faint, defiant luminescence that made the crystal vines recoil an inch, chiming in shrill protest. "Good to know. Stay behind the knife." She used the flat of the freezing blade to part the crystalline curtain. The strands hissed against the moonsilver, weeping droplets of clear, smoking sap that sizzled into nothingness upon hitting the metal. Beyond the willow veil, the ground dropped away into a terraced amphitheatre carved from rose-veined marble. Rory halted on the top step, her breath catching. Hundreds of tiers descended into a mist-filled basin. Instead of seats, each marble ledge supported sprawling, bioluminescent flora. Enormous lotus blossoms made of spun suet and velvet petals unfurled, releasing plumes of golden spore-dust that drifted upward like reverse snow. Streams of dark, steaming wine cascaded down gutters carved into the staircases, filling aqueducts that crisscrossed the sunken garden. In the centre of the basin stood a pavilion constructed entirely of rib-bones from some leviathan beast, bleached white and draped in vines bearing black, beating hearts for berries. "Look at the soil on the lower tiers." Nyx pointed a shadowy claw toward the third terrace down. Rory squinted through the rising golden spores. The dark earth lining the flowerbeds wasn't dirt. Millions of tiny, translucent beetles swarmed over one another, chewing fallen petals and excreting the glowing compost that fed the roots. The hum she had mistaken for distant conversation was the sound of a billion mandibles working in unison. "The soil hungers, the wine remembers, and the gardener sleeps beneath the roots." Isolde glided down the first marble step, her silver hair floating on the updraft of warm, spiced air. She knelt beside the wine gutter, gazing into the dark red torrent without touching it. Faces formed and dissolved in the foam—open mouths, hollow eyes, stretching toward the surface before the current dragged them under. "Helbound souls. Contracted from Earth." Rory stared at the rushing wine, her grip tightening on the freezing hilt of her dagger until her knuckles turned white. Her stomach gave another violent twist, demanding she kneel and drink, demanding she tear a petal from the suet-lotuses and gorge herself until her lungs burst. The compulsion pressed against the back of her skull like a physical thumb. She pressed the flat of the moonsilver blade against her own forearm. The shock of unnatural cold shattered the mental haze. "Nyx. Can you scout the pavilion without touching the ground?" The Shade’s violet eyes narrowed, the edges of their tall form fraying into wisps of midnight that tugged toward the shadows cast by the giant lotus blossoms. "The light here is greedy, Rory. It eats the dark. The shadows under those petals are not empty. They are mouths." As if to prove the Shade's point, the shadow beneath the nearest lotus rippled. A row of pale, translucent tendrils, like the anemones of a deep-sea trench, rose from the dark patch on the marble, waving blindly toward the warmth of Rory’s boots. Rory stepped back, her heel clicking against the stone. "Right. We stick together, stay in the open light, and keep off the dirt." She looked down the dizzying drop of the rose-marble stairs toward the bone pavilion. The black heart-berries on its roof pulsed in time with the crimson pendant at her throat, a dual rhythm drumming through the thick, amber heat of the alien realm.
created_at"2026-10-13T16:38:03.428Z" 10/13/2026, 4:38:03 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1306
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1306
totalAiIsms29
found
0
word"searing"
count1
1
word"throb"
count1
2
word"stomach"
count2
3
word"crystalline"
count2
4
word"pulsed"
count2
5
word"rhythmic"
count2
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"trembled"
count1
8
word"echoed"
count1
9
word"scanning"
count1
10
word"porcelain"
count1
11
word"vibrated"
count1
12
word"crystal"
count3
13
word"glistening"
count1
14
word"marble"
count5
15
word"velvet"
count1
16
word"constructed"
count1
17
word"shattered"
count1
18
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"searing"
1"throb"
2"stomach"
3"crystalline"
4"pulsed"
5"rhythmic"
6"weight"
7"trembled"
8"echoed"
9"scanning"
10"porcelain"
11"vibrated"
12"crystal"
13"glistening"
14"marble"
15"velvet"
16"constructed"
17"shattered"
18"warmth"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"knuckles turned white"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences71
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences71
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences86
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1305
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount1132
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.24
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Veil1
Rory14
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Shade4
Dymas1
Fae-Forged2
Blade2
Gluttony1
Isolde5
Varga1
Half-Fae1
Nyx4
persons
0"Veil"
1"Rory"
2"Pendant"
3"Blade"
4"Isolde"
5"Varga"
6"Half-Fae"
7"Nyx"
places
0"Shade"
globalScore0.882
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"hillocks that seemed to swell and subside like a sleeper’s chest"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1305
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean27.77
std18.6
cv0.67
sampleLengths
020
161
213
347
440
512
642
749
820
927
105
1174
1215
1356
1432
1518
164
1729
1817
195
2046
2111
2215
2318
2444
2541
267
2733
2816
299
3059
3129
328
3310
3454
3513
3653
375
3860
3921
4010
4127
4221
4343
449
4514
4643
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences71
matches
0"were spun"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs185
matches
0"were actively drinking"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences86
ratio0.012
matches
0"Faces formed and dissolved in the foam—open mouths, hollow eyes, stretching toward the surface before the current dragged them under."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1152
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"sticky, spice-laden heat"
adverbCount14
adverbRatio0.012152777777777778
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.004340277777777778
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences86
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences86
mean15.17
std6.6
cv0.435
sampleLengths
020
115
214
34
428
513
612
711
824
911
104
1113
1212
1312
1422
1520
1612
1720
1817
1920
2013
2114
225
2312
2416
2519
2610
2717
2815
2912
3019
3125
3220
3312
3418
354
369
3720
3817
395
403
4117
4226
4311
4415
4518
4614
4730
4811
495
65.50% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.4069767441860465
totalSentences86
uniqueOpeners35
46.95% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences71
matches
0"Instead of seats, each marble"
ratio0.014
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount14
totalSentences71
matches
0"She exhaled, her boots sinking"
1"Her stomach cramped, a sudden,"
2"She hooked a thumb into"
3"She stopped beside a gnarled"
4"She picked up her pace,"
5"They coalesced on a high"
6"They pressed deeper."
7"She reached out to push"
8"She drew the Fae-Forged Blade."
9"She used the flat of"
10"She knelt beside the wine"
11"Her stomach gave another violent"
12"She pressed the flat of"
13"She looked down the dizzying"
ratio0.197
72.68% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount55
totalSentences71
matches
0"The shimmering distortion of the"
1"She exhaled, her boots sinking"
2"London’s grey drizzle vanished."
3"Nyx’s voice scraped through the"
4"The Shade towered beside her,"
5"Rory ignored the warning and"
6"The air tasted thick."
7"Her stomach cramped, a sudden,"
8"She hooked a thumb into"
9"The moonsilver remained an icicle"
10"The Half-Fae left no indentations"
11"She stopped beside a gnarled"
12"Isolde tilted her head, pale"
13"Rory stepped past the seer,"
14"The orchard stretched into infinity,"
15"A chorus of faint, rhythmic"
16"She picked up her pace,"
17"The deeper they walked, the"
18"Stone pathways paved with iridescent"
19"A breeze rolled through the"
ratio0.775
70.42% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences71
matches
0"As if to prove the"
ratio0.014
47.62% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences60
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Above them stretched a sky of bruised, warm amber, stripped of sun or clouds, casting a honeyed twilight over a landscape that defied every law of earthly botan…"
1"A breeze rolled through the valley, carrying the distant, orchestral clatter of silver against porcelain and a low, rumbling murmur that vibrated in Rory’s mola…"
2"The leaf-shaped moonsilver drank the amber twilight, glowing with a faint, defiant luminescence that made the crystal vines recoil an inch, chiming in shrill pr…"
3"The strands hissed against the moonsilver, weeping droplets of clear, smoking sap that sizzled into nothingness upon hitting the metal."
4"Enormous lotus blossoms made of spun suet and velvet petals unfurled, releasing plumes of golden spore-dust that drifted upward like reverse snow."
5"Streams of dark, steaming wine cascaded down gutters carved into the staircases, filling aqueducts that crisscrossed the sunken garden."
6"Millions of tiny, translucent beetles swarmed over one another, chewing fallen petals and excreting the glowing compost that fed the roots."
7"The Shade’s violet eyes narrowed, the edges of their tall form fraying into wisps of midnight that tugged toward the shadows cast by the giant lotus blossoms."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
88.2390%