Run: 2026-10-13-01M4V22APG6KP1BSP2NWEJH0ZD

Run Details

Duration:
29.1s
Cost:
$0.021458
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Green neon bled through the rain-streaked glass of The Raven’s Nest, casting an emerald pallor over the mahogany bar. Rory peeled off her soaked gauntlets. The scent of sweet-and-sour pork and wet wool clung to her jacket, a lingering ghost from her last drop-off for the Golden Empress. She dropped her crash helmet onto an empty stool. Silas limped from the far end of the counter, his left knee clicking against the floorboards. He set a tumbler of amber liquid in front of her, the silver signet ring on his right hand catching the dim light of the brass sconces. "Quiet night in Soho," Silas rumbled, his hazel eyes flicking toward the corner booth beneath a framed topographical map of pre-war Berlin. "Except for the ghost in the corner. Asked for a Welsh single malt. Kept staring at the stairs to the flat." Rory froze, the glass halfway to her lips. Her bright blue eyes narrowed as she pivoted on her stool. The man in the booth wore a charcoal bespoke suit that cost more than Rory made in six months of dodging London cabs on a moped. He was reading a leather-bound brief, a gold fountain pen resting between his fingers. When he looked up, the breath caught in Rory’s throat. "Callum?" He closed the folder. The soft, Ink-stained boy who used to share roll-ups with her behind the Cardiff law library was gone. In his place sat a man carved from granite and courtrooms, his jawline sharp, his posture rigid. "Aurora." Nobody called her that anymore. Not in London. Not since she packed a single rucksack and bolted down the M4. Rory picked up her drink and crossed the room, her heavy boots thudding against the worn wood. She slid into the red leather bench opposite him, keeping her helmet between them on the table like a barricade. "You look expensive," she said, taking a slow sip of the whiskey. "Your old man finally buy you that partnership, or did you have to sell a kidney?" Callum’s mouth twitched, a phantom of the crooked grin she remembered from their first year of Torts. He gestured toward her nylon jacket, the reflective strips peeling at the seams. "And you look like you’re about to hand me a summons. Or a spring roll." "Prawn crackers, actually. Left the last bag with a banker on Wardour Street." Rory leaned back, resting her left arm on the table. The cuff of her jacket rode up, exposing the small crescent-shaped scar on her wrist. Callum’s gaze dropped to the mark, then rose to her face. The amusement vanished from his eyes, replaced by a heavy, suffocating stillness. "Five years, Rory." "Four and a half," she corrected, tracing the rim of her glass. "I count the months. Keeps me sharp." "You disappeared." He rotated the gold pen against the leather folder. Click. Turn. Click. "One day you’re arguing constitutional law with Professor Davies, the next your flat is empty. Your phone is disconnected. Brendan was beside himself." "My father was beside his reputation," Rory snapped. Behind the bar, Silas paused his wiping of a pint glass, his grey-streaked auburn head tilting slightly before he resumed his work. Rory lowered her voice. "He didn't care that I left. He cared that Brendan Carter’s daughter dropped out two months before finals without a note." "I cared." The two words hung between them, heavier than the humidity in the room. Callum leaned forward, the green neon from the window slicing across his cheekbones. "I knocked on your door on Cathays Terrace until my knuckles bled," he said, his voice dropping the polished RP cadence he had acquired, slipping back into the valleys lilt of their youth. "I asked Evan where you were. He told me you’d gone to Amsterdam with some people you met at a pub. I didn't believe him. I went to the police, Rory. Brendan had the report buried." Rory stared at the black-and-white photograph on the wall behind Callum’s head—a bombed-out street in Coventry. She remembered the night she left. The purple bruising around her ribs. Eva’s frantic voice on a burner phone telling her to get on the National Express coach and not look back. She hadn't told Callum because Callum was safe, and Evan had a habit of breaking the things Rory valued. "Evan was a persuasive liar," Rory said, her voice flat. "He missed his calling. Should have been a barrister." Callum studied her face, taking in the straight black hair cropped at her shoulders, the new hardness around her mouth. "He did me over, you know. Six months after you left." Rory blinked, her focus snapping back to him. "What?" "Found him at the union bar. Had a few pints in me." Callum looked down at his immaculate hands. "Told him I knew he was lying about Amsterdam. Told him I knew what he did to you, even if you were too proud to admit it. He broke my nose in the car park." A cold knot tightened in Rory’s stomach. The boy she remembered hated violence. He used to rescue spiders from the lecture hall sinks with a folded piece of syllabus paper. "You shouldn't have done that, Cal." "Someone had to." He picked up his single malt and drained the rest of it. The ice clinked against his teeth. "I pressed charges. Your father represented him. Got it reduced to affray. Community service." Rory’s fingers whitened around her tumbler. Her father, the great defender of justice, protecting the monster who had put his daughter on a midnight bus to Victoria Station, all to keep the family name out of the local rags. "I didn't know," she whispered. "How could you? You were a ghost." Callum gestured around The Raven’s Nest, taking in the yellowed maps, the heavy bookshelf at the back that sat flush against the wainscoting, the towering ex-operative behind the taps who hadn't taken his hazel eyes off their booth once. "And now you’re here. Running takeaway through Soho and drinking in a place that smells like old secrets." "It’s a living." "You had the highest marks in our year, Aurora. You could have been at Lincoln’s Inn right now. You could have been across the aisle from me at the High Court tomorrow." "Wearing a horsehair wig and defending men like Evan?" Rory let out a dry, humourless laugh. "Pass. The tips are better in Chinatown, and nobody lies to me about why they want extra chilli oil." Callum reached across the table. His fingers brushed the leather of her gauntlet, stopping an inch from her scarred wrist. His skin was smooth, untouched by the windburn and handlebars that had calloused hers. "Come back to Cardiff," he said. "Just for a weekend. Your mother’s hair has gone completely white. She still keeps your room the way it was. The textbooks are still stacked on the desk." Rory looked at his hand, then at the bespoke cufflink peeking from his shirt sleeve. He had grown into the exact shape the world had demanded of him. He was successful, respected, anchored to the soil they had grown up in. She was untethered, living above a spy’s pub, answering to three different names depending on who knocked on the bookshelf door. The bridge between them hadn't just burned; the river had changed its course entirely. She pulled her arm back, sliding her hands under the table and onto her lap. "That girl died on the M4, Cal. The books are just paper." Callum’s hand remained on the table for a beat longer before curling into a fist and retreating. He picked up his leather brief, sliding the gold pen into his breast pocket with mechanical precision. When he stood, he buttoned his suit jacket, the armor sliding back into place. "I’m at the Savoy until Friday," he said, his voice returning to that crisp, courtroom detachment. "If the ghost decides she wants a coffee." He laid a crisp twenty-pound note on the table beside her dented helmet. Rory didn't look up as his polished Oxfords clicked across the floorboards toward the door. The bell above the entrance jangled, a brief gust of damp Soho air cutting through the warmth of the bar, and the green neon swallowed his silhouette. Silas limped over, picking up Callum’s empty glass and the twenty-pound note. He looked down at Rory, who was staring at the grain of the mahogany table. "Friend of yours?" Silas asked, pocketing the note. Rory picked up her whiskey and finished it in one swallow, the burn clearing the lump in her throat. "Used to be," she said, grabbing her helmet by the chin strap. "Before the weather changed."
created_at"2026-10-13T16:38:25.761Z" 10/13/2026, 4:38:25 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Rory leaned back [back]"
1"Callum gestured around [around]"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.405
leniency0.81
rawRatio0.118
effectiveRatio0.095
93.12% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1453
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
82.79% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1453
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"tracing"
count1
1
word"lilt"
count1
2
word"stomach"
count1
3
word"mechanical"
count1
4
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"tracing"
1"lilt"
2"stomach"
3"mechanical"
4"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences79
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences79
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences104
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1452
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions58
wordCount1007
uniqueNames21
maxNameDensity1.89
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Golden1
Empress1
Berlin1
Rory19
London2
Ink-stained1
Cardiff1
Callum12
Torts1
Click2
Silas5
Coventry1
National1
Express1
Evan1
Victoria1
Station1
Oxfords1
Soho1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Callum"
4"Silas"
5"Evan"
6"Oxfords"
places
0"Berlin"
1"London"
2"Cardiff"
3"Coventry"
4"Victoria"
5"Soho"
globalScore0.557
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1452
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean29.63
std19.36
cv0.653
sampleLengths
057
143
243
319
450
51
639
71
820
937
1028
1130
1215
1338
1423
153
1619
1737
1855
192
2026
2169
2267
2319
2420
2511
269
2754
2830
296
3035
3139
325
3364
343
3532
3635
3734
3834
3976
4015
4112
4248
4324
4455
4527
468
4719
4816
96.38% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences79
matches
0"was gone"
1"was untethered"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs166
matches
0"was reading"
1"was staring"
87.91% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences104
ratio0.019
matches
0"Rory stared at the black-and-white photograph on the wall behind Callum’s head—a bombed-out street in Coventry."
1"The bridge between them hadn't just burned; the river had changed its course entirely."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1022
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"soft, Ink-stained boy"
1"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.015655577299412915
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0029354207436399216
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences104
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences104
mean13.96
std8.52
cv0.61
sampleLengths
019
16
223
39
416
527
622
721
88
911
1026
1114
1210
131
144
1518
1617
171
185
193
2012
2117
2220
2312
2416
2517
2613
2715
2823
2915
3011
3112
323
3312
347
3511
361
371
381
3923
408
4122
424
4321
442
4513
4613
4733
4836
4916
69.87% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.4423076923076923
totalSentences104
uniqueOpeners46
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
ratio0
72.05% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences73
matches
0"She dropped her crash helmet"
1"He set a tumbler of"
2"Her bright blue eyes narrowed"
3"He was reading a leather-bound"
4"He closed the folder."
5"She slid into the red"
6"she said, taking a slow"
7"He gestured toward her nylon"
8"she corrected, tracing the rim"
9"He rotated the gold pen"
10"he said, his voice dropping"
11"She remembered the night she"
12"She hadn't told Callum because"
13"He used to rescue spiders"
14"He picked up his single"
15"Her father, the great defender"
16"His fingers brushed the leather"
17"His skin was smooth, untouched"
18"He had grown into the"
19"He was successful, respected, anchored"
ratio0.37
7.95% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount66
totalSentences73
matches
0"Rory peeled off her soaked"
1"The scent of sweet-and-sour pork"
2"She dropped her crash helmet"
3"Silas limped from the far"
4"He set a tumbler of"
5"Silas rumbled, his hazel eyes"
6"Rory froze, the glass halfway"
7"Her bright blue eyes narrowed"
8"The man in the booth"
9"He was reading a leather-bound"
10"He closed the folder."
11"The soft, Ink-stained boy who"
12"Nobody called her that anymore."
13"Rory picked up her drink"
14"She slid into the red"
15"she said, taking a slow"
16"Callum’s mouth twitched, a phantom"
17"He gestured toward her nylon"
18"Rory leaned back, resting her"
19"The cuff of her jacket"
ratio0.904
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
ratio0
77.92% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The soft, Ink-stained boy who used to share roll-ups with her behind the Cardiff law library was gone."
1"Her father, the great defender of justice, protecting the monster who had put his daughter on a midnight bus to Victoria Station, all to keep the family name ou…"
2"His skin was smooth, untouched by the windburn and handlebars that had calloused hers."
3"She was untethered, living above a spy’s pub, answering to three different names depending on who knocked on the bookshelf door."
66.18% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Rory said, her voice flat"
1"he said, his voice returning to that crisp, courtroom detachment"
78.57% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she corrected (correct)"
1"Rory snapped (snap)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.238
leniency0.476
rawRatio0.3
effectiveRatio0.143
82.3582%