Run: 2026-10-13-01M4V22GQYBX0SG1EH49HERBDG

Run Details

Duration:
28.3s
Cost:
$0.020038
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt clicked back. Rory yanked the heavy wood open, a curse primed on her tongue for the courier who had hammered on the door at midnight. The words died in her throat. Lucien Moreau stood in the dim stairwell. London rain darkened the shoulders of his tailored charcoal coat, and water dripped from the hem onto the worn linoleum. His platinum blond hair remained slicked back, defying the miserable East End weather, while his heterochromatic eyes—one burning amber, one a void of pure black—locked onto hers. He leaned a fraction of his weight onto his ivory-handled cane. Rory gripped the edge of the door. Her knuckles whitened. She swung the wood forward to slam it in his face. The tip of his cane shot out. It wedged against the floorboards, halting the heavy timber an inch from the frame. "That is no way to greet an old friend, *chérie*." "Eva isn't here." Rory kept her weight braced against the wood, refusing to give him an inch of clearance. "And you aren't my friend." "I did not climb three flights of stairs smelling of cheap turmeric to see Eva." Lucien pressed a palm flat against the door. He didn't shove, yet the wood yielded to the demon-blooded strength in his lean frame. "Let me in, Aurora. My leg is aching, and your hallway drafts are atrocious." "Go back to Soho. Bleed on your own Persian rugs." He stepped over the threshold anyway, forcing her to retreat a pace into the cramped entryway or press against his chest. She chose the retreat. The scent of him immediately conquered the rising aromas of the Brick Lane curry house downstairs—rain, crushed cloves, and cold ozone. Lucien kicked the door shut behind him. He turned, his mismatched gaze sweeping the disaster of the living room. Books towered in precarious pillars on the floorboards. Scrolls spilled from the sofa cushions, and yellow research notes hung taped to the radiator. Ptolemy, Eva's bloated tabby, hissed from the top of the bookshelf, ears flattened. "Charming," Lucien murmured. "I see the decor has not improved over the last six months." "State your business and get out." Rory crossed her arms, tucking her left hand beneath her right elbow. The small crescent scar on her wrist throbbed, a phantom ache triggered by the sheer proximity of him. "I have an early shift at the Golden Empress." Lucien unfastened the buttons of his wet coat. His movements were deliberate, unhurried, claiming space in the tiny room as though he owned the freehold. He draped the damp wool over the back of a wooden chair, revealing the immaculate charcoal waistcoat beneath. "Still playing delivery girl for Cheung? A waste of a Pre-Law mind." "Cheung pays on time and doesn't trade my secrets to Avaros syndicates." A muscle feathered in Lucien's jaw. The amber eye flared, catching the yellow glow of the single floor lamp. He planted the rubber ferrule of his cane between his Oxfords and rested both hands over the ivory handle, where Rory knew a foot of cold steel lay concealed. "I gave the syndicate an address in Docklands. An empty warehouse." "Which belonged to the people hunting me!" Rory stepped around a stack of grimoires, closing the distance between them until she had to tilt her chin to meet his glare. Her bright blue eyes burned. "You sold my location, Luc. Two hours after you left my bed." "I sold a decoy!" His voice dropped an octave, a low rumble that vibrated in the floorboards. The French cadence thickened, stripping away his polished Mayfair veneer. "They already had your scent. If I had not fed them the Docklands site, they would have torn Silas' bar apart brick by brick with you inside it. You think I took payment for that?" "You're a fixer. You don't breathe without taking a ten percent cut." "For everyone else in this rotting city, yes." Lucien released the cane with one hand, reaching out to catch a strand of her straight black hair. Rory slapped his hand away. Skin cracked against skin. Lucien didn't flinch. He left his hand suspended in the air between them, fingers slightly curled, before letting it drop to his side. The heat radiating off him made the cramped flat feel airless. Six months of silence, of staring at her phone at three in the morning, of scrubbing the phantom feel of his mouth from her skin, coalesced into a sharp, suffocating knot behind her ribs. "You didn't tell me," she whispered. "You dressed, you walked out, and then Eva called to say my name was on the ledger." "Because you do not trust me, Aurora." He took a step forward, ignoring the limp that stiffened his right hip. "If I had woken you and told you to run, you would have assumed it was a trap. You look at me and you still see the men who broke your wrist in Cardiff. You wait for the betrayal." Rory's breath hitched. She dropped her arms to her sides, her hands curling into fists. "I trusted you the night before." "No. You wanted me the night before. There is a vast difference." He was close enough now that she could see the silver flecks around the rim of his amber iris, the faint shadow of blond stubble along his throat. He hooked the ivory handle of his cane over a stack of encyclopedias, letting it hang there, and raised both hands to frame her face. He paused a fraction of an inch from her cheekbones, waiting. Giving her the choice. Rory didn't step back. If she moved, she would shatter. His palms settled against her jaw. His skin was scorching, a stark contrast to the November chill clinging to his cuffs. His thumbs brushed the apples of her cheeks, tracing the sharp bone beneath. "Why are you here, Lucien?" "A dead drop in Whitechapel came through an hour ago." His thumb slipped lower, dragging across her bottom lip. Her mouth parted on a shallow inhale. "A bounty from the lower circles. They are looking for a girl with blue eyes and a delivery bike. I bought the contract myself to take it off the market, burned the paper, and broke the courier's fingers." "That sounds expensive." "Astronomical." He leaned down, resting his forehead against hers. His breath brushed her lips, warm and spiced. "You are ruining my profit margins, *chérie*." "I didn't ask you to protect me." "Try stopping me." Her left hand rose, fingers tangling in the silk of his lapels, her scarred wrist pressing flat against his sternum. Underneath the tailored wool and linen, his heart hammered a frantic, uneven rhythm—nothing like the cold, calculating monster the underworld feared. She pulled him down the final inch. His mouth crashed onto hers, swallowing her sharp intake of breath. There was nothing gentle in the kiss; it tasted of six months of fury and the metallic tang of fear. Lucien groaned against her lips, one arm banding around her waist to haul her flush against his body, lifting her onto her toes. Books toppled behind them, thudding onto the rug as he backed her against the edge of the crowded oak desk. Rory dragged her nails through his slicked-back hair, ruining the neat style until pale strands fell across his forehead. He tilted his head, deepening the kiss, his tongue tangling with hers as his free hand swept a pile of parchment off the desk. Scrolls rolled across the floorboards. He gripped her hip, lifting her onto the cleared edge of the wood so she was level with him. She wrapped her legs around his hips, pulling him between her thighs. He hissed against her throat, a harsh sound of pain as the movement jarred his bad leg, yet he pressed closer, burying his face in the curve of her neck. His teeth grazed her pulse point. "Tell me to leave," he rasped against her skin, his hands gripping the hem of her jumper, knuckles brushing the bare skin of her ribs. "Tell me to walk out those three deadbolts, and I will go." Rory locked her ankles behind his back and tugged his waistcoat open, popping a charcoal button that skittered across the floorboards. "Shut up, Luc."
created_at"2026-10-13T16:38:33.178Z" 10/13/2026, 4:38:33 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Rory stepped around [around]"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.056
96.38% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1383
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
60.23% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1383
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"throbbed"
count1
2
word"vibrated"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"stark"
count1
5
word"chill"
count1
6
word"tracing"
count1
7
word"silk"
count1
8
word"calculating"
count1
9
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"throbbed"
2"vibrated"
3"silence"
4"stark"
5"chill"
6"tracing"
7"silk"
8"calculating"
9"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences76
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences76
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences100
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1379
ratio0.001
matches
0"chérie"
1"chérie"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
95.16% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount1003
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.1
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
East1
End1
Lucien9
Brick1
Lane1
Eva1
Rory11
Oxfords1
French1
Mayfair1
November1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Lucien"
2"Eva"
3"Rory"
places
0"East"
1"End"
2"Brick"
3"Lane"
globalScore0.952
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1379
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences100
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean31.34
std22.03
cv0.703
sampleLengths
028
16
265
321
421
510
624
752
810
946
1055
1115
1245
1343
1412
1512
1648
1711
1847
1962
2012
2126
229
2368
2423
2559
2621
2712
2868
2910
3034
315
3264
333
3424
357
363
3748
3874
3967
4048
4137
4221
433
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs164
matches
0"was scorching"
28.57% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences100
ratio0.04
matches
0"His platinum blond hair remained slicked back, defying the miserable East End weather, while his heterochromatic eyes—one burning amber, one a void of pure black—locked onto hers."
1"The scent of him immediately conquered the rising aromas of the Brick Lane curry house downstairs—rain, crushed cloves, and cold ozone."
2"Underneath the tailored wool and linen, his heart hammered a frantic, uneven rhythm—nothing like the cold, calculating monster the underworld feared."
3"There was nothing gentle in the kiss; it tasted of six months of fury and the metallic tang of fear."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1010
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.015841584158415842
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0019801980198019802
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences100
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences100
mean13.79
std8.56
cv0.621
sampleLengths
05
123
26
37
420
527
611
77
83
911
107
1114
1210
1319
145
1523
1615
1714
1810
1921
204
2121
227
2312
248
2515
2613
273
2812
2918
3018
319
328
3317
3418
3512
3612
376
3813
3929
4011
4130
425
4312
4417
4510
4635
4712
4826
495
60.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.4
totalSentences100
uniqueOpeners40
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
ratio0
25.41% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences74
matches
0"His platinum blond hair remained"
1"He leaned a fraction of"
2"Her knuckles whitened."
3"She swung the wood forward"
4"It wedged against the floorboards,"
5"He didn't shove, yet the"
6"He stepped over the threshold"
7"She chose the retreat."
8"He turned, his mismatched gaze"
9"His movements were deliberate, unhurried,"
10"He draped the damp wool"
11"He planted the rubber ferrule"
12"Her bright blue eyes burned."
13"His voice dropped an octave,"
14"He left his hand suspended"
15"He took a step forward,"
16"She dropped her arms to"
17"He was close enough now"
18"He hooked the ivory handle"
19"He paused a fraction of"
ratio0.486
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount69
totalSentences74
matches
0"The third deadbolt clicked back."
1"Rory yanked the heavy wood"
2"The words died in her"
3"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
4"London rain darkened the shoulders"
5"His platinum blond hair remained"
6"He leaned a fraction of"
7"Rory gripped the edge of"
8"Her knuckles whitened."
9"She swung the wood forward"
10"The tip of his cane"
11"It wedged against the floorboards,"
12"Rory kept her weight braced"
13"Lucien pressed a palm flat"
14"He didn't shove, yet the"
15"He stepped over the threshold"
16"She chose the retreat."
17"The scent of him immediately"
18"Lucien kicked the door shut"
19"He turned, his mismatched gaze"
ratio0.932
67.57% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences74
matches
0"If she moved, she would"
ratio0.014
69.60% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"His movements were deliberate, unhurried, claiming space in the tiny room as though he owned the freehold."
1"Lucien groaned against her lips, one arm banding around her waist to haul her flush against his body, lifting her onto her toes."
2"He tilted his head, deepening the kiss, his tongue tangling with hers as his free hand swept a pile of parchment off the desk."
3"Rory locked her ankles behind his back and tugged his waistcoat open, popping a charcoal button that skittered across the floorboards."
83.33% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Rory kept, refusing to give him an inch of clearance"
66.67% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Lucien pressed (press)"
1"Lucien murmured (murmur)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.083
leniency0.167
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.167
81.7863%