Run: 2026-10-13-01M4V22JT24E4PZG9SQCT3Z1QC

Run Details

Duration:
36.6s
Cost:
$0.026948
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third brass deadbolt slid back with a heavy click. Rory pulled the door open, the smell of toasted cumin and fenugreek from the curry house downstairs rushing into the stairwell to meet the London rain. Lucien Moreau filled the doorway. Water darkened the shoulders of his charcoal overcoat, though not a single strand of his slicked-back platinum hair was out of place. He leaned a fraction of his weight onto his ivory-handled cane. His gaze—one eye the warm gold of aged whiskey, the other an abyssal black—dropped from her face to the grease-stained Golden Empress takeaway polo she hadn’t bothered to change out of. Rory kept her grip tight on the brass doorknob. Six months of silence, and he materialized on Brick Lane without so much as a text message. "Eva isn't here." Rory pushed the door toward the frame. "Try the British Museum. Basement archives." Lucien’s gloved hand shot out, palm flattening against the scuffed wood. The door stopped an inch from the latch. He didn't push, just held the weight of it with infuriating ease. "I didn't climb three flights of rotting stairs for Eva, *ma petite*." His French accent curled around the syllables, low and rough like crushed velvet. "And if I don't step out of this draft in the next ten seconds, my leg is going to lock up, and you will have to drag me over the threshold yourself." "I'd leave you for the rats." "The Brick Lane rats have terrible table manners." He shifted, a genuine wince tightening the corner of his mouth as he adjusted his grip on the ivory handle. "Let me in, Aurora. Five minutes." The use of her full name, combined with the subtle tremor in his right knee, broke her resolve. Rory stepped back, letting go of the wood. Lucien stepped into the cramped flat, bringing the chill of the East London night with him. He surveyed the chaos of Eva's living space—towering stacks of leather-bound grimoires on the floorboards, Latin scrolls pinned under empty mugs, and parchment notes fluttering near the radiator. Ptolemy, a massive striped tabby, cracked one yellow eye open from his perch atop a pile of Aramaic translations, hissed once at the half-demon, and went back to sleep. "Charming," Lucien murmured, unbuttoning his damp overcoat. "Your friend still decorates like a sixteenth-century alchemist." "Don't touch the paper stacks. There's a system." Rory crossed her arms, tucking her hands beneath her elbows to hide the sudden tremor in her fingers. "Your five minutes started in the hallway, Luc. What do you want?" He draped his coat over the back of a wooden chair, the only clear surface within reach, revealing the immaculate three-piece charcoal suit beneath. Everything about him was sharp angles and expensive tailoring, an absurd contrast to the peeling floral wallpaper and the takeaway menus littering the counter. He turned to face her, both hands resting atop the ivory pommel of his cane. "You changed your number." "Phones break. Drop them in a puddle off Shoreditch High Street, they stop working. Funny how that happens." "And yet, Silas tells me you haven't been back to your own flat above his bar in four days." Lucien took a slow step forward, navigating a labyrinth of open encyclopedias. "You're hiding out here. Sleeping on a sofa that smells of cat hair and turmeric." "I'm cat-sitting." "Ptolemy is fully capable of opening his own tins, and we both know it." Lucien stopped two paces away. Close enough that the scent of him—rainwater, cedarwood, and the faint, metallic tang of ozone that clung to those with Avaros blood—cut right through the curry fumes. "Why did you run after the docks?" Rory laughed, a sharp, jagged sound that scraped her throat. She uncrossed her arms, her left wrist catching the amber glow of the mismatched streetlamps outside. The small crescent scar on her skin gleamed pale against her pulse point. "Run? Is that how you're rewriting it?" She stepped into his space, tilting her chin up to meet that unsettling, mismatched gaze. "I didn't run, Lucien. I walked away from a building you set on fire while I was still inside the perimeter." A muscle feathered in his jaw. "The ward was failing. The hounds were through the gate." "I had two minutes left on the cipher! Two minutes to pull the ledger before the whole network went dark." "You had thirty seconds before three hellhounds tore your throat out!" His voice dropped an octave, the polished fixer cracking to reveal the demon beneath. The black eye seemed to swallow the dim light of the room, expanding until the sclera vanished. "You think I care about a ledger? Let the underworld burn. You were standing in the middle of a summoning circle with a crowbar and a flashlight, Aurora." "Because that was the plan!" Rory shoved a stack of maps off the edge of the narrow kitchen table, needing something to do with her hands before she reached for his lapels. "My plan. The one we spent three weeks building in your office. We agreed on the risks." "I lied." The admission hung between them, heavy and suffocating. Rory stilled, her fingertips pressed white against the scarred wood of the table. "What?" Lucien hooked the tip of his cane around the leg of the wooden chair and dragged it closer, lowering himself onto the seat with a stiff grace. He stretched his bad leg out in front of him, rubbing a gloved thumb over the ivory handle where the thin blade was concealed. "I lied," he repeated, looking up at her through lashes damp with rain. "When we mapped the heist in Soho. When you leaned over my desk with your hair falling in your ink, explaining how you would bypass the blood wards while I held the perimeter. I agreed to your timeline because if I hadn't, you would have walked out of my office and done it alone." "You blew the charges early on purpose." The realization hit her like a physical blow, knocking the wind from her ribs. "It wasn't the hounds. You collapsed the tunnel to force me out." "And then you vanished into the fog with the courier before the dust settled," Lucien countered, a bitter edge creeping into his tone. "Not a word. Just a middle finger through the smoke and six months of dead air. Do you have any idea what I tore apart in this city looking for a scratch on you?" "I didn't ask you to protect me, Luc!" "I don't require your permission!" He surged back to his feet, the cane clattering against a stack of books and sending half a dozen volumes thudding to the rug. Ptolemy bolted from the room, a blur of striped fur disappearing into the bedroom. Lucien didn't look down. He closed the distance between them, trapping Rory against the edge of the kitchen table. He braced one hand on the wood beside her hip, leaning in until the heat radiating from his body raised goosebumps along her bare arms. "I've spent my life brokering deals with monsters, Rory. Weighing lives in gold and favors. Everything has a price. Everything is expendable." His left hand came up, the leather of his glove impossibly soft as his knuckles brushed the straight black hair back from her cheek. "And then you walk into my parlor with a law school dropout's arrogance and a Golden Empress delivery bag, and suddenly I am bankrupting myself just to keep you breathing." Rory's breath hitched. Her heart hammered a frantic rhythm against her ribs, traitorously fast. She hated how much she had missed his voice. Hated the way her body leaned into the touch of his gloved hand before her brain could issue the order to pull back. "I left Cardiff because a man thought he owned my choices," she whispered, her bright blue eyes locked onto his amber one. "Evan used his fists. You used C4 and a hero complex. From where I'm standing, the view looks remarkably similar." Lucien flinched as if she had struck him across the face. He pulled his hand back immediately, the leather curling into a tight fist against his chest. The demonic darkness receded from his black eye, leaving behind a raw, human vulnerability that made Rory's stomach twist. "Never compare me to him," Lucien breathed, the words barely audible over the rain lashing the windowpane. "I would rather slit my own throat with my cane than cage you." "Then why did you blow the tunnel?" "Because the night before the job, you fell asleep on my Chesterfield," he said, his voice cracking on the confession. "You had my coat pulled up to your chin, and you talked in your sleep, and I stood there in the dark for two hours watching you breathe. And when we got to the docks, and I smelled the brimstone on the wind, I realized I couldn't survive London if you weren't in it." Silence descended on the flat, thick and electric. Downstairs, the muffled bass of a Bollywood track vibrated through the floorboards. Rory looked at the proud tilt of his jaw, the shadows hollowed out beneath his eyes, the way he was forcing himself to stand upright on a bad leg without his cane just to take whatever punishment she decided to hand out. For six months, she had convinced herself she was just an asset to him—a clever human pawn the great Frenchman had overruled when the board got messy. She reached out, her fingers catching the silk of his charcoal tie. Lucien froze, his chest rising and falling against the back of her knuckles. "You're an idiot," Rory said, tugging the silk just enough to force his head down an inch. "The greatest information broker in East London, and you didn't even check the dead-drop behind the butcher's shop in Whitechapel." Lucien blinked, a crease forming between his pale brows. "The Whitechapel drop has been defunct for three years." "Which is why nobody was watching it." Rory pulled harder on the tie, bringing his mouth within a fraction of hers. "I got the ledger out before your charges went off, Luc. I've been waiting six months for you to come collect your half." His breath caught, warm against her lips. The amber eye flared bright, the black one dilating until there was nothing left between them but the heat of the small room. His hands came up, stripping the leather gloves from his fingers and letting them drop to the floor beside the cane. When his bare hands framed her face, his skin was fever-hot. "Six months," he murmured against her mouth, his thumb tracing the sharp line of her cheekbone. "You let me rot for six months over a book?" "You ruined my coat at the docks," Rory replied, her hands sliding up from his tie to tangle in the slick platinum hair at the nape of his neck, ruining its perfection. "It was vintage." "I'll buy you a hundred coats." "Shut up, Frenchman." Rory closed the final inch, pressing her mouth to his. Lucien groaned, a sound torn from the bottom of his chest, and lifted her effortlessly onto the edge of the kitchen table, sending the remaining research notes fluttering to the floor like white leaves. His hands gripped her waist through the thin cotton of her work shirt, pulling her flush against the tailored wool of his suit as his mouth parted hers, tasting of rain and peppermint and six months of starved desperation.
created_at"2026-10-13T16:38:34.064Z" 10/13/2026, 4:38:34 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"His French accent curled around [around]"
1"He surged back [back]"
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.393
leniency0.786
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.071
97.41% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1932
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
53.42% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1932
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"abyssal"
count1
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"velvet"
count1
4
word"resolve"
count1
5
word"chill"
count1
6
word"navigating"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count1
8
word"complex"
count1
9
word"stomach"
count1
10
word"electric"
count1
11
word"vibrated"
count1
12
word"pawn"
count1
13
word"silk"
count2
14
word"tracing"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"abyssal"
2"silence"
3"velvet"
4"resolve"
5"chill"
6"navigating"
7"pulse"
8"complex"
9"stomach"
10"electric"
11"vibrated"
12"pawn"
13"silk"
14"tracing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences76
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences76
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences110
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen55
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords2
totalWords1926
ratio0.001
matches
0"ma petite"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
84.43% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions49
wordCount1220
uniqueNames19
maxNameDensity1.31
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
London2
Moreau1
Golden1
Empress1
Brick1
Lane1
Lucien14
French1
East1
Eva1
Latin1
Aramaic1
Rory16
Close1
Avaros1
Ptolemy2
Silence1
Bollywood1
Frenchman1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Lucien"
2"Eva"
3"Latin"
4"Rory"
5"Ptolemy"
6"Silence"
7"Frenchman"
places
0"London"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
3"East"
globalScore0.844
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences72
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1926
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences110
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs57
mean33.79
std22.36
cv0.662
sampleLengths
036
15
264
326
416
531
657
76
834
926
1073
1115
1238
1363
144
1518
1646
172
1853
1939
2043
2116
2220
2370
2449
252
268
2714
2851
2967
3033
3157
328
3329
3414
3544
3676
3746
3842
3946
4030
417
4274
4320
4469
4512
4613
4737
4818
4944
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences76
matches
0"was concealed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs190
matches
0"was forcing"
38.96% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences110
ratio0.036
matches
0"His gaze—one eye the warm gold of aged whiskey, the other an abyssal black—dropped from her face to the grease-stained Golden Empress takeaway polo she hadn’t bothered to change out of."
1"He surveyed the chaos of Eva's living space—towering stacks of leather-bound grimoires on the floorboards, Latin scrolls pinned under empty mugs, and parchment notes fluttering near the radiator."
2"Close enough that the scent of him—rainwater, cedarwood, and the faint, metallic tang of ozone that clung to those with Avaros blood—cut right through the curry fumes."
3"For six months, she had convinced herself she was just an asset to him—a clever human pawn the great Frenchman had overruled when the board got messy."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1233
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.0202757502027575
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.004866180048661801
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences110
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences110
mean17.51
std10.65
cv0.608
sampleLengths
010
126
25
322
411
531
69
717
810
96
1011
118
1212
1325
1432
156
1628
176
1818
198
2016
2128
2229
237
248
2526
2612
2724
2824
2915
304
3118
3231
3315
342
3519
3627
377
3810
3916
4013
4122
4221
436
4410
4520
4625
4717
4828
4932
57.88% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.36363636363636365
totalSentences110
uniqueOpeners40
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
ratio0
77.89% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences76
matches
0"He leaned a fraction of"
1"His gaze—one eye the warm"
2"He didn't push, just held"
3"His French accent curled around"
4"He shifted, a genuine wince"
5"He surveyed the chaos of"
6"He draped his coat over"
7"He turned to face her,"
8"She uncrossed her arms, her"
9"She stepped into his space,"
10"His voice dropped an octave,"
11"He stretched his bad leg"
12"he repeated, looking up at"
13"He surged back to his"
14"He closed the distance between"
15"He braced one hand on"
16"His left hand came up,"
17"Her heart hammered a frantic"
18"She hated how much she"
19"she whispered, her bright blue"
ratio0.355
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount71
totalSentences76
matches
0"The third brass deadbolt slid"
1"Rory pulled the door open,"
2"Lucien Moreau filled the doorway."
3"Water darkened the shoulders of"
4"He leaned a fraction of"
5"His gaze—one eye the warm"
6"Rory kept her grip tight"
7"Rory pushed the door toward"
8"Lucien’s gloved hand shot out,"
9"The door stopped an inch"
10"He didn't push, just held"
11"His French accent curled around"
12"He shifted, a genuine wince"
13"The use of her full"
14"Rory stepped back, letting go"
15"Lucien stepped into the cramped"
16"He surveyed the chaos of"
17"Ptolemy, a massive striped tabby,"
18"Lucien murmured, unbuttoning his damp"
19"Rory crossed her arms, tucking"
ratio0.934
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
ratio0
74.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Close enough that the scent of him—rainwater, cedarwood, and the faint, metallic tang of ozone that clung to those with Avaros blood—cut right through the curry…"
1"He braced one hand on the wood beside her hip, leaning in until the heat radiating from his body raised goosebumps along her bare arms."
2"The demonic darkness receded from his black eye, leaving behind a raw, human vulnerability that made Rory's stomach twist."
3"Lucien froze, his chest rising and falling against the back of her knuckles."
11.36% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"His voice dropped, the polished fixer cracking to reveal the demon beneath"
1"Lucien countered, a bitter edge creeping into his tone"
2"Lucien breathed, the words barely audible over the rain lashing the windowpane"
3"he said, his voice cracking on the confession"
4"he murmured, his thumb tracing the sharp line of her cheekbone"
60.71% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"Lucien murmured (murmur)"
1"he repeated (repeat)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
3"Lucien breathed (breathe)"
4"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.143
leniency0.286
rawRatio0.625
effectiveRatio0.179
78.5632%