Run: 2026-10-13-01M4V231WR9MCEKJD8BMXP9BP9

Run Details

Duration:
30.7s
Cost:
$0.022288
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Green neon bled through the rain-streaked glass of The Raven's Nest, casting a sickly, emerald pallor over the damp coats of the evening crowd. Rory wiped down the mahogany bar top with a damp rag, her movements rhythmic, practiced. The scent of sweet and sour pork still clung to her wool jumper—a souvenir from her afternoon shift at the Golden Empress—mingling with the stale Guinness and floor wax of Silas’ establishment. Behind her, Silas moved with his familiar, uneven gait. His left knee clicked against the floorboards as he carried a crate of tonic water toward the back. The silver signet ring on his right hand caught the amber glow of the spirit bottles. He didn't look at Rory, yet he missed nothing, his hazel eyes scanning the framed maps of pre-war Europe and monochrome photographs of forgotten men that lined the walls. The bell above the door gave a dull clank. Soho rain blew in, sharp and cold. Rory didn't look up from the brass tap she was polishing. "Table service ended at nine. If you want a pint, you come to the wood." "Still got the Cardiff charm, then. Though I expected a wig and a gown by now, Aurora." The rag stopped. The voice was deeper than it had been three years ago, sanded down at the edges by London smog and expensive whiskey, losing the soft Valleys lilt they had both grown up with. Rory lifted her head. Her bright blue eyes locked onto the man shaking out an umbrella by the threshold. Liam. In university, Liam had worn charity-shop corduroys with frayed hems and carried dog-eared copies of Marxist theory in a canvas rucksack. The man standing under the green neon wore a charcoal Savile Row overcoat tailored to a razor's edge. His hair, once a bird's nest of curls, sat tamed under pomade. A gold Patek Philippe peeked from beneath a crisp French cuff. Rory tossed the rag into the sink beneath the counter. She leaned her hip against the till, crossing her arms so her right sleeve covered the small crescent scar on her left wrist. "Nobody calls me Aurora. Not since I left Wales." Liam stepped up to the bar, placing his umbrella on the brass footrail. He looked at the row of taps, then past her shoulder at Silas, who had paused near the heavy bookshelf at the end of the counter. Silas gave Rory a slow blink—the universal signal for *do I throw him out?*—before Rory shook her head a fraction of an inch. Silas limped away toward the cellar stairs. "Eva told me you were in Soho," Liam said, resting his forearms on the sticky varnish, heedless of his bespoke wool sleeves. "She left out the part where you were pulling pints in a dive." "I don't pull pints. I deliver takeaway on a moped. I just live upstairs and cover the bar when the owner's knee flares up." Rory grabbed a clean tumbler. "What are you drinking? We don't have whatever vintage they serve at your Chambers." "Double Laphroaig. Neat." Rory reached for the bottle on the middle shelf. Her fingers were red at the knuckles from the October wind. She poured the amber liquid, the peat smoke rising between them like a flare. She slid the glass across the wood. Liam didn't touch it. He watched her face, tracing the sharp line of her jaw framed by straight, shoulder-length black hair. "You vanished, Rory. One week we’re cramming for tort law in the library, eating cold toast, and the next, your flat is empty. Your dad came down to campus looking like a ghost. Said you’d packed two bags and bought a coach ticket." "My father loves a dramatic narrative. Makes him good in front of a jury." "It wasn't your dad I was worried about." Liam's fingers tapped the side of the glass. "Evan had a black eye the day after you left. Said he walked into a cupboard door." Rory's expression didn't flicker. She picked up a lemon and a paring knife, slicing the fruit into neat, thin wheels. "Cupboards in Cathays are notoriously aggressive. Did you come in here to reminisce about student housing, or are you lost on your way to Mayfair?" "I had a meeting on Dean Street. Saw the sign. Thought I'd get out of the wet." Liam took a slow sip of the scotch, his eyes never leaving hers. "I work for Sterling & Vance now. Corporate restructuring." The knife paused against the cutting board. Rory looked at the gold watch again, then up to his eyes. "Sterling & Vance. The firm that represented the mining conglomerate in the Merthyr valley buyout. You organized a sit-in outside their Cardiff branch in second year. You chained yourself to a radiator, Liam." A muscle feathered in Liam's jaw. He looked down into his glass, swirling the liquor. "Radiators are cold. And idealism doesn't pay off forty grand in student debt, Rory. We can't all just run away and become invisible when things get ugly." The bar grew quiet, save for the low hum of the cooler and the murmur of two old men playing dominoes in the corner booth. Rory set the knife down. She placed both hands flat on the counter, leaning in until she could smell his cologne—sandalwood and something metallic. "You think I ran away because of the exams?" "I think you had a golden ticket," Liam said, his voice dropping an octave, tight and serrated. "Brendan Carter's daughter. You had a pupillage lined up before we even sat the finals. You had the brains, you had the name, and you threw it in the Thames to... what? Bring chow mein to bankers?" "My father's name was a leash." Rory pulled her left hand back, her thumb unconsciously rubbing the crescent scar on her wrist. "And Evan was the weight at the end of it. Everyone in that faculty knew what he was doing. Including you." Liam flinched. The polished barrister veneer cracked, revealing the twenty-year-old boy who used to hide behind textbooks. "I didn't know. Not until after." "You sat across from me at the union three days before I left," Rory said, her voice level, devoid of heat, which made it cut twice as deep. "I was wearing a turtleneck in June. My lip was split. You asked me if I'd finished the reading on contract law. You looked right at the bruise, Liam, and then you looked at your notes." Liam swallowed hard. He reached into his coat pocket and pulled out a leather wallet, extracting a crisp twenty-pound note. His hands, manicured and soft, trembled as he laid the money next to the glass. "I didn't know how to get involved, Rory. Evan's uncle was on the admissions board for the Inns of Court. If I kicked up dust—" "You wouldn't have gotten the Savile Row coat." Rory picked up the twenty, popped the till, and dropped it in. She pulled out a five and a handful of coins, dropping them onto a dry patch of the wood. "I don't blame you for being a coward, Liam. Most people are. Just don't walk into my bar and lecture me on wasted potential." From the back of the room, the heavy oak door by the cellar clicked shut. Silas emerged, wiping his hands on a bar towel. He limped behind the counter, his tall frame filling the narrow space beside Rory. He didn't look at Liam, instead picking up a bottle of gin and holding it to the green light to check the level. "Everything alright here, Rory?" Silas asked, his tone mild, though his knuckles were white against the glass bottle. Liam looked at the older man, taking in the grey-streaked beard, the quiet, dangerous stillness of him, and the way Rory's shoulders dropped half an inch the moment Silas stepped close. This was her world now. Dark wood, secret corners, and men who didn't look away from bruises. "The scotch is fine," Liam said, though he had barely touched it. He left the change on the bar and picked up his umbrella. "Eva asks about you. Every time I see her. She thinks you're happy here." "Tell Eva I'll call her on Sunday," Rory said. She picked up the paring knife again and went back to the lemons. "And Liam?" He stopped, one hand on the brass handle of the front door. "Take the umbrella drip-tray by the mat on your way out. Silas hates wet floors." Liam stood there for a beat, the green neon washing the healthy colour from his face, leaving him looking hollow beneath the expensive wool. He didn't say goodbye. The bell clanked, the Soho wind rushed in, and the door pulled itself shut on its hydraulic hinge. Silas set the gin bottle down. He reached over, took Liam's half-full glass of Laphroaig, and poured it down the sink drain. "Friend from the old country?" Silas asked, running the tap to wash the peat smell away. Rory speared a lemon wheel onto the rim of a clean glass. "Nobody I know."
created_at"2026-10-13T16:38:49.509Z" 10/13/2026, 4:38:49 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.361
leniency0.722
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1526
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
67.23% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1526
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"scanning"
count1
3
word"charm"
count1
4
word"lilt"
count1
5
word"tracing"
count1
6
word"flicker"
count1
7
word"weight"
count1
8
word"trembled"
count1
9
word"potential"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"familiar"
2"scanning"
3"charm"
4"lilt"
5"tracing"
6"flicker"
7"weight"
8"trembled"
9"potential"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences74
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences74
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences98
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords5
totalWords1522
ratio0.003
matches
0"do I throw him out?"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
52.96% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions62
wordCount979
uniqueNames20
maxNameDensity1.94
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Golden1
Empress1
Guinness1
Silas9
Rory19
Europe1
London1
Valleys1
Liam16
Marxist1
Savile1
Row1
Patek1
Philippe1
French1
October1
Soho2
Laphroaig1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Empress"
3"Silas"
4"Rory"
5"Liam"
6"Patek"
7"Philippe"
places
0"Golden"
1"Europe"
2"London"
3"Row"
4"October"
5"Soho"
globalScore0.53
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1522
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences98
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs50
mean30.44
std19.36
cv0.636
sampleLengths
071
172
216
311
415
517
636
719
81
962
1033
119
1269
1335
1443
153
1641
1721
1843
1914
2033
2120
2225
2339
2419
2533
2615
2727
2849
299
3054
3143
3217
336
3464
3535
3625
3763
3861
3918
4048
4138
4224
4312
4415
4546
4622
4716
4812
493
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs151
matches
0"was polishing"
55.39% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences98
ratio0.031
matches
0"The scent of sweet and sour pork still clung to her wool jumper—a souvenir from her afternoon shift at the Golden Empress—mingling with the stale Guinness and floor wax of Silas’ establishment."
1"Silas gave Rory a slow blink—the universal signal for *do I throw him out?*—before Rory shook her head a fraction of an inch."
2"She placed both hands flat on the counter, leaning in until she could smell his cologne—sandalwood and something metallic."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount543
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount12
adverbRatio0.022099447513812154
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.003683241252302026
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences98
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences98
mean15.53
std8.87
cv0.571
sampleLengths
024
115
232
39
418
516
629
79
87
911
1015
1117
123
1333
144
1515
161
1721
1818
1912
2011
2110
2223
239
2413
2526
2623
277
2822
2913
3029
3114
323
339
3411
3514
367
374
3817
3943
4014
4116
4217
434
4416
4525
4630
479
487
4912
56.12% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.3673469387755102
totalSentences98
uniqueOpeners36
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
ratio0
90.42% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences71
matches
0"His left knee clicked against"
1"He didn't look at Rory,"
2"Her bright blue eyes locked"
3"His hair, once a bird's"
4"She leaned her hip against"
5"He looked at the row"
6"Her fingers were red at"
7"She poured the amber liquid,"
8"She slid the glass across"
9"He watched her face, tracing"
10"She picked up a lemon"
11"He looked down into his"
12"She placed both hands flat"
13"He reached into his coat"
14"His hands, manicured and soft,"
15"She pulled out a five"
16"He limped behind the counter,"
17"He didn't look at Liam,"
18"He left the change on"
19"She picked up the paring"
ratio0.324
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount66
totalSentences71
matches
0"Rory wiped down the mahogany"
1"The scent of sweet and"
2"His left knee clicked against"
3"The silver signet ring on"
4"He didn't look at Rory,"
5"The bell above the door"
6"Soho rain blew in, sharp"
7"Rory didn't look up from"
8"The rag stopped."
9"The voice was deeper than"
10"Rory lifted her head."
11"Her bright blue eyes locked"
12"The man standing under the"
13"His hair, once a bird's"
14"A gold Patek Philippe peeked"
15"Rory tossed the rag into"
16"She leaned her hip against"
17"Liam stepped up to the"
18"He looked at the row"
19"Silas gave Rory a slow"
ratio0.93
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
ratio0
89.29% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"He didn't look at Rory, yet he missed nothing, his hazel eyes scanning the framed maps of pre-war Europe and monochrome photographs of forgotten men that lined …"
1"The polished barrister veneer cracked, revealing the twenty-year-old boy who used to hide behind textbooks."
2"Liam stood there for a beat, the green neon washing the healthy colour from his face, leaving him looking hollow beneath the expensive wool."
48.08% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Liam said, his voice dropping an octave, tight and serrated"
1"Rory pulled, her thumb unconsciously rubbing the crescent scar on her wrist"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.194
leniency0.389
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
81.9833%