| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 12 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 96.55% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1451 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 41.42% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1451 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "comforting" | | 3 | "echo" | | 4 | "flickered" | | 5 | "rhythmic" | | 6 | "throb" | | 7 | "pulsed" | | 8 | "scanning" | | 9 | "weight" | | 10 | "pulse" | | 11 | "trembled" | | 12 | "vibrated" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 131 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 131 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 137 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 11 | | markdownWords | 37 | | totalWords | 1446 | | ratio | 0.026 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde. Center of the Grove. Midnight. Leave by the roots." | | 1 | "00:01" | | 2 | "03:44" | | 3 | "19:12" | | 4 | "A Hel portal." | | 5 | "Snap." | | 6 | "Click. Click. Click." | | 7 | "It only moves when I don't look at it." | | 8 | "\"Rory.\"" | | 9 | "\"Come here, Rory. Look at me.\"" | | 10 | "Click-click." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 96.04% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 42 | | wordCount | 1390 | | uniqueNames | 18 | | maxNameDensity | 1.08 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | October | 2 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 2 | | Rory | 15 | | London | 1 | | Hel | 3 | | Fae | 2 | | Isolde | 2 | | Fae-touched | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 2 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Hill | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "October" | | 1 | "Empress" | | 2 | "Yu-Fei" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Isolde" | | 5 | "Heartstone" | | 6 | "Pendant" | | 7 | "Evan" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Golden" | | 3 | "London" | | 4 | "Fae" | | 5 | "Cardiff" | | 6 | "Hill" |
| | globalScore | 0.96 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 95.05% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 91 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "sounded like heavy canvas dragging across" | | 1 | "looked like an arm—if an arm had three el" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1446 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 137 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 58 | | mean | 24.93 | | std | 16.72 | | cv | 0.671 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 30 | | 2 | 64 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 66 | | 5 | 30 | | 6 | 35 | | 7 | 35 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 26 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 1 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 32 | | 15 | 37 | | 16 | 31 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 64 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 42 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 28 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 49 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 31 | | 31 | 27 | | 32 | 46 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 36 | | 37 | 22 | | 38 | 36 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 20 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 53 | | 44 | 21 | | 45 | 44 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 43 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 40 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 131 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 221 | | matches | | 0 | "was trying" | | 1 | "was already creeping" |
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| 38.58% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 137 | | ratio | 0.036 | | matches | | 0 | "This was Fae territory—Isolde’s pocket realm." | | 1 | "In the edge of her vision, it looked like an arm—if an arm had three elbows and ended in a cluster of long, pale reeds." | | 2 | "It wasn't a voice; it was the mimicry of a voice, assembled from the sounds of grinding stones and rushing water." | | 3 | "She smelled it now—copper, wet dog, and the ozone stench of a blown fuse." | | 4 | "The fingers—eight of them, bendable as rubber—dug into the soil, ripping up handfuls of petals." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1405 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | | adverbCount | 42 | | adverbRatio | 0.0298932384341637 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0071174377224199285 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 137 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 137 | | mean | 10.55 | | std | 6.99 | | cv | 0.663 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 5 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 1 | | 8 | 30 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 1 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 24 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 60.54% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.3897058823529412 | | totalSentences | 136 | | uniqueOpeners | 53 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | | 0 | "Even the distant, ever-present hum" | | 1 | "Then the digits scrambled, flashing" | | 2 | "Instead, she took a slow" | | 3 | "Just the bag, sitting crookedly" | | 4 | "Then, from the southern pillar," | | 5 | "Instead, she threw her weight" |
| | ratio | 0.051 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 33 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn't the comforting heat" | | 1 | "She stopped, the thermal delivery" | | 2 | "They were in full, violent" | | 3 | "She pulled her phone from" | | 4 | "She tucked the dead brick" | | 5 | "She reached into the collar" | | 6 | "Her breath hitched." | | 7 | "she muttered, her bright blue" | | 8 | "She took three brisk steps" | | 9 | "She turned her head, straight" | | 10 | "It sounded like heavy canvas" | | 11 | "It shifted left, long and" | | 12 | "Its inner glow pulsed faster," | | 13 | "She backed away from the" | | 14 | "She set the thermal bag" | | 15 | "She stopped cold." | | 16 | "They stood in a neat" | | 17 | "It was the unmistakable sound" | | 18 | "It reached toward the red" | | 19 | "*It only moves when I" |
| | ratio | 0.282 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 75 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory stepped between the ancient" | | 1 | "Warmth hit her face first." | | 2 | "It wasn't the comforting heat" | | 3 | "She stopped, the thermal delivery" | | 4 | "The receipt stapled to the" | | 5 | "Center of the Grove." | | 6 | "Rory’s voice dropped dead a" | | 7 | "The air swallowed the sound" | | 8 | "They were in full, violent" | | 9 | "She pulled her phone from" | | 10 | "The screen flickered." | | 11 | "Rory pressed the power button." | | 12 | "She tucked the dead brick" | | 13 | "A slow, rhythmic throb started" | | 14 | "She reached into the collar" | | 15 | "The thumbnail-sized crimson stone at" | | 16 | "*A Hel portal.*" | | 17 | "Her breath hitched." | | 18 | "This was Fae territory—Isolde’s pocket" | | 19 | "A tear leading to Hel" |
| | ratio | 0.641 | |
| 85.47% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | | 0 | "While she watched, a single" | | 1 | "If she looked at the" |
| | ratio | 0.017 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone Pendant flared against her skin, shifting from warm to scorching." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Rory breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 12 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0.75 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |