Run: 2026-10-20-01M5C67A5QRTXWK8R5T6CY1XZA

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24.3s
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$0.001494
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InferenceNet

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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The mist took them before they reached the standing stones. It was not the gray-yellow fog of a London morning, thin and smelling of exhaust. This was a living thing, cool and velvety against Aurora's cheeks, and it swallowed sound the way wool swallows water. One moment she could hear Nyx's voice behind her, a whisper riding the damp air, and the next there was only the soft crunch of her own boots on grass that shouldn't have been there. "Stay close," Isolde said. Her voice didn't carry so much as arrive, appearing directly in Aurora's ear as though the Fae had leaned in to confide a secret. "The Grove doesn't like to be surprised." Aurora turned to check on the others and found that the others had become suggestions of themselves. Nyx was a deeper darkness against the white, a tall outline that flickered at the edges, there and not there. Isolde walked ahead in her silver-green cloak, her bare feet leaving no mark on the wet grass. Aurora looked down at her own boots, at the crushed blades springing back up behind her, and felt a childish urge to ask whether they were still in Richmond Park. The mist thinned. It didn't part—nothing so dramatic—it simply grew less interested in them, drawing back like a curtain losing its nerve. Colour bled in from the edges of the world: first the bruised purple of distant trees, then the impossible green of the grass beneath her feet, a green so deep and saturated it made her think of stained glass. Then the mist was gone and they stood in a clearing that could not have existed within the boundaries of any park she knew. The standing stones rose before them in a rough circle, each one taller than a man and older than any history she could name. They were not the gray, lichen-crusted sarsens she had seen in photographs of Avebury. These were pale as bone, veined with something that caught the light and threw it back in slow pulses, like breath. The oak tree at the circle's heart was enormous, its trunk wide enough that three men could not have joined hands around it, and it grew at an angle that made Aurora's stomach lurch—not leaning, precisely, but tilting into some direction that wasn't quite up. "What is this place?" she heard herself say. "The grove at the world's hinge," Isolde said. "Or a hinge. One of them." She had stopped at the edge of the stones and was watching Aurora with those pale lavender eyes, patient as a cat at a mousehole. "It is not on any map you would recognize, and time keeps a different ledger here. If we stay an hour, it may cost us a minute. Or a day." Nyx stepped past her, and the grass beneath their feet didn't bend so much as darken, as if remembering shadow. They turned in a slow circle, their violet eyes narrow. "I know this place," they said, and there was something strange in that wind-whisper voice. Something almost like recognition. "Not this grove. But this feeling. The edges of the world were like this, in the between places." "Were they?" Isolde asked mildly. Nyx didn't answer. They had crouched to touch a flower that grew at the base of the nearest stone—a thing like a white poppy, but the petals glowed faintly, and when Nyx's shadow-fingers passed over them, they closed like eyes. "It's alive," Nyx said. "Not the way plants are alive. Awake." Aurora moved past them into the circle. The air changed as she crossed between two stones, grew thicker, heavier, and she had the sensation of stepping into a warm bath. Her skin prickled. The Heartstone pendant at her throat, tucked beneath her jumper, had begun to pulse with heat. She pulled it out and saw the crimson gem was glowing, a faint inner light that turned her fingers the colour of a sunset. "Isolde," she said. "The pendant—" "Interesting." Isolde had not moved. "There is no portal to Hel here. Not anymore. But the stone remembers." She tilted her head, silver hair slipping over one shoulder. "It was a gift, you said? From an unknown benefactor." "You know I don't know who—" "I know." Isolde's smile was slight and not altogether comforting. "I know a great many things. It is the knowing what to do with them that eludes me." The grove was larger than it had seemed from the boundary. Paths wound away from the clearing, but they were paths in name only—trodden earth that curved around the roots of trees which grew at impossible angles, their branches weaving together overhead into a canopy that filtered the light into something green and submarine. Aurora followed one, drawn more by curiosity than intention, and found that the others followed her without being asked. The flowers here grew in profligate, nonsensical profusion. Bluebells in November. Roses the size of dinner plates, their petals branching in colours that didn't exist in any spectrum she could name—colours that seemed to her eye like a chord rather than a shade. The air smelled of wild garlic and old stone and something else, something sweet and faintly decayed, like the bottom of a bouquet left too long in water. "Don't touch the blue ones," Isolde said from behind her. Aurora lowered her hand. She hadn't realized she'd been reaching. "What do they do?" "Nothing pleasant. They are not flowers. Or they are flowers the way I am a woman." There was dry amusement in Isolde's voice. "They feed on memory. Your memories, specifically. You would forget why you came. You would forget the way out. Eventually you would forget there was a way out." Aurora stepped back from the blue flowers and found her pulse had quickened. The pendant was still warm against her palm, and she closed her fingers around it, drawing what comfort she could from the weight of it. Nyx had stopped beneath one of the strange, leaning trees and was staring upward. "There's something in the branches," they said. "Can you hear it?" Aurora listened. At first there was nothing—or rather, everything, the whisper of wind in leaves, the distant call of a bird she didn't recognize, the soft hushing of the grass. And then, beneath it, something else. A thread of sound so faint it might have been imagination: a voice, or many voices, singing a melody that had no clear direction, that seemed to circle back on itself the way the paths did. "Are they singing words?" Aurora asked. "No," Isolde said. "They are singing the idea of words. What the words would be if words could live without meaning." She had come to stand beside Aurora, and her presence was cool and solid, the only certain thing in all this uncertainty. "We should move. The grove is waking up to us, and it is not always friendly to visitors." They walked deeper, following a path that seemed to better itself as they went, roots lifting out of the way, branches leaning aside. The light grew dimmer, the green deepening to a cathedral murk. Aurora found herself thinking of stories her mother had told her when she was small—Tír na nÓg, the land of eternal youth, where you could spend a hundred years in what felt like an afternoon. Her mother had told those stories as warnings, she realized now. But she had never listened to them as warnings. She had listened to them as invitations. "The stones at the boundary," she said. "The ones we passed. What are they?" "Markers," Isolde said. "Wards. This grove is not solely of the Fae realm, nor solely of Earth. It is a pocket, a fold. The stones hold the edges from fraying." She paused, and her voice changed, became softer. "There was a time when many such places existed. The world was riddled with them like wormholes in old wood. Now there are few." "Because of the Veil?" "Because of many things. The Veil is one tube in a body that has been bleeding for centuries." Isolde stopped walking. Ahead, the path ended in a pool of water that reflected a sky Aurora could not see—not the gray English sky, but something else, a deep violet-black scattered with lights that were not stars. "We are near the heart of the grove. I can feel it. The pool is a mirror. It shows what is, and sometimes what will be." Aurora looked into the water. For a moment she saw only her own reflection—straight black hair, blue eyes, the scar on her wrist visible where her sleeve had pushed up. Then the reflection rippled, and the face looking back at her was not her own. It was older, or younger, or neither; it was her face the way it might look after a great deal of sorrow, or a great deal of joy, or both. "Nyx," she said, and her voice cracked. "Look." But Nyx was already looking. And where their reflection should have been, there was only a column of darkness, and within the darkness, a faint scatter of light. They stared at it for a long moment, and then stepped back. "I don't like it," Nyx said. "I don't like remembering." They turned away from the pool, and their shadow-stuff form seemed to shiver. "Can we go deeper? Or is this the heart? I don't want to be in this place longer than we have to." "It is not the heart," Isolde said. "Merely a mirror. The heart is further in. But we have already asked much of the grove, and the grove has given us much." She looked at Aurora, and her expression was unreadable. "There will be other visits. This place will not close itself to you now that you have found it." "How do you know that?" Isolde smiled. "Because it has not closed itself tonight. That is a choice. Such places always choose." She turned and began walking back the way they had come, and the path rose up to meet her feet, the branches bowing aside like courtiers before a queen. "Come. The grove will let us out where we came in. But I would not linger." Aurora followed, but she looked back once at the pool, at the violet sky reflected there. For a moment she thought she saw a shape moving in the water—something with too many limbs, or too few—and then it was gone, and there was only her own face again, and the faint pulse of the Heartstone in her hand, warm as a living thing.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags25
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Isolde asked mildly [mildly]"
1"They turned away [away]"
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.521
leniency1
rawRatio0.08
effectiveRatio0.08
97.20% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1785
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"precisely"
count1
highlights
0"precisely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
63.59% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1785
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"whisper"
count3
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"stomach"
count1
3
word"lurch"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count3
5
word"comforting"
count1
6
word"quickened"
count1
7
word"weight"
count1
8
word"unreadable"
count1
highlights
0"whisper"
1"flickered"
2"stomach"
3"lurch"
4"pulse"
5"comforting"
6"quickened"
7"weight"
8"unreadable"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences87
matches(empty)
60.76% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences87
filterMatches
0"think"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences108
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen49
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1773
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
80.82% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions51
wordCount1301
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.38
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
London1
Aurora18
Nyx9
Fae1
Richmond1
Park1
Avebury1
Isolde13
Heartstone2
November1
Tír1
Ahead1
English1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Nyx"
2"Fae"
3"Isolde"
places
0"London"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
3"November"
globalScore0.808
windowScore0.833
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount6
matches
0"quite up"
1"as if remembering shadow"
2"colours that seemed to her eye like a chord rather than a shade"
3"direction, that seemed to circle back on itself the way the paths did"
4"path that seemed to better itself as they went, roots lifting out of the way, branches leaning aside"
5"felt like an afternoon"
87.20% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.128
wordCount1773
matches
0"not leaning, precisely, but tilting into some direction"
1"not the gray English sky, but something else, a deep violet-black scattered with lights"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences108
matches
0"found that the"
1"found that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean44.33
std29.2
cv0.659
sampleLengths
010
170
235
384
461
524
6104
78
869
967
105
1151
1273
135
1438
156
1628
1773
1871
1910
2014
2151
2238
2325
2472
256
2661
2796
2814
2962
304
3181
3275
338
3440
3545
3659
375
3862
3963
93.16% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences87
matches
0"was gone"
1"being asked"
2"was gone"
80.42% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs223
matches
0"was watching"
1"was glowing"
2"was staring"
3"was already looking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences108
ratio0.102
matches
0"It didn't part—nothing so dramatic—it simply grew less interested in them, drawing back like a curtain losing its nerve."
1"The oak tree at the circle's heart was enormous, its trunk wide enough that three men could not have joined hands around it, and it grew at an angle that made Aurora's stomach lurch—not leaning, precisely, but tilting into some direction that wasn't quite up."
2"They had crouched to touch a flower that grew at the base of the nearest stone—a thing like a white poppy, but the petals glowed faintly, and when Nyx's shadow-fingers passed over them, they closed like eyes."
3"Paths wound away from the clearing, but they were paths in name only—trodden earth that curved around the roots of trees which grew at impossible angles, their branches weaving together overhead into a canopy that filtered the light into something green and submarine."
4"Roses the size of dinner plates, their petals branching in colours that didn't exist in any spectrum she could name—colours that seemed to her eye like a chord rather than a shade."
5"At first there was nothing—or rather, everything, the whisper of wind in leaves, the distant call of a bird she didn't recognize, the soft hushing of the grass."
6"Aurora found herself thinking of stories her mother had told her when she was small—Tír na nÓg, the land of eternal youth, where you could spend a hundred years in what felt like an afternoon."
7"Ahead, the path ended in a pool of water that reflected a sky Aurora could not see—not the gray English sky, but something else, a deep violet-black scattered with lights that were not stars."
8"For a moment she saw only her own reflection—straight black hair, blue eyes, the scar on her wrist visible where her sleeve had pushed up."
9"It was older, or younger, or neither; it was her face the way it might look after a great deal of sorrow, or a great deal of joy, or both."
10"For a moment she thought she saw a shape moving in the water—something with too many limbs, or too few—and then it was gone, and there was only her own face again, and the faint pulse of the Heartstone in her hand, warm as a living thing."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1320
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount51
adverbRatio0.038636363636363635
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.00909090909090909
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences108
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences108
mean16.42
std11.71
cv0.713
sampleLengths
010
115
220
335
44
524
67
717
820
917
1030
113
1219
1339
1424
1524
1614
1721
1845
198
208
2131
2230
2320
2410
2515
264
2718
285
293
3037
314
327
337
3423
353
3616
3724
383
392
405
4123
4210
436
4410
4518
4611
4743
4819
498
65.74% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.4166666666666667
totalSentences108
uniqueOpeners45
90.09% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences74
matches
0"Then the mist was gone"
1"Then the reflection rippled, and"
ratio0.027
90.27% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences74
matches
0"It was not the gray-yellow"
1"Her voice didn't carry so"
2"It didn't part—nothing so dramatic—it"
3"They were not the gray,"
4"she heard herself say"
5"She had stopped at the"
6"They turned in a slow"
7"they said, and there was"
8"They had crouched to touch"
9"Her skin prickled."
10"She pulled it out and"
11"She tilted her head, silver"
12"She hadn't realized she'd been"
13"She had come to stand"
14"They walked deeper, following a"
15"Her mother had told those"
16"She had listened to them"
17"She paused, and her voice"
18"It was older, or younger,"
19"she said, and her voice"
ratio0.324
41.08% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount62
totalSentences74
matches
0"The mist took them before"
1"It was not the gray-yellow"
2"This was a living thing,"
3"Her voice didn't carry so"
4"Aurora turned to check on"
5"Nyx was a deeper darkness"
6"Isolde walked ahead in her"
7"Aurora looked down at her"
8"The mist thinned."
9"It didn't part—nothing so dramatic—it"
10"Colour bled in from the"
11"The standing stones rose before"
12"They were not the gray,"
13"These were pale as bone,"
14"The oak tree at the"
15"she heard herself say"
16"She had stopped at the"
17"Nyx stepped past her, and"
18"They turned in a slow"
19"they said, and there was"
ratio0.838
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
ratio0
12.99% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"One moment she could hear Nyx's voice behind her, a whisper riding the damp air, and the next there was only the soft crunch of her own boots on grass that shou…"
1"Nyx was a deeper darkness against the white, a tall outline that flickered at the edges, there and not there."
2"The oak tree at the circle's heart was enormous, its trunk wide enough that three men could not have joined hands around it, and it grew at an angle that made A…"
3"They had crouched to touch a flower that grew at the base of the nearest stone—a thing like a white poppy, but the petals glowed faintly, and when Nyx's shadow-…"
4"Paths wound away from the clearing, but they were paths in name only—trodden earth that curved around the roots of trees which grew at impossible angles, their …"
5"A thread of sound so faint it might have been imagination: a voice, or many voices, singing a melody that had no clear direction, that seemed to circle back on …"
6"They walked deeper, following a path that seemed to better itself as they went, roots lifting out of the way, branches leaning aside."
7"Ahead, the path ended in a pool of water that reflected a sky Aurora could not see—not the gray English sky, but something else, a deep violet-black scattered w…"
65.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags25
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"She had, and her presence was cool and solid, the only certain thing in all this uncertainty"
1"She looked, and her expression was unreadable"
2"She turned, and the path rose up to meet her feet, the branches bowing aside like courtiers before a queen"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags15
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.313
leniency0.625
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
77.6104%