Run: 2026-10-20-01M5C68NSEH2XT3KZ6YSKM0MWQ

Run Details

Duration:
17.3s
Cost:
$0.000945
Provider:
InferenceNet

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The iron gate at the edge of Richmond Park stood open. Rory had expected to have to climb it. She stepped through, her delivery bag slung over one shoulder, the strap digging into the muscle. Her torch beam cut a narrow path through the trees, catching the undersides of leaves, the pale bark of birches. The air smelled of wet earth and something sweeter, like crushed flowers. The pendant against her chest pulsed once. A small warmth, gone as quickly as it came. She walked. The path curved, marked by no signs, no lamps, only the grooves of a trail worn by feet. Her boots squelched in the mud. Above, the moon hung in a clear sky, but the trees grew thick here, their branches interlocking like fingers. She kept the torch on. It helped. The silence was wrong. Not quiet — silence. The kind that pressed against her ears and made her swallow just to hear the sound. No owls. No distant traffic. No wind through the leaves. Even her footsteps seemed muffled, swallowed by the damp ground. She checked her watch. Nearly eleven. She'd promised Yu-Fei she'd make this delivery and be back before midnight. A special order for a customer at the edge of the park. The address had been written on a scrap of paper in Yu-Fei's neat handwriting, but there was no house number, no street name. Just "the Grove" and a set of directions that felt more like a riddle than a route. Rory stopped. The trees had thinned. Ahead, a clearing opened up, ringed by standing stones. Ancient oaks, their trunks wide as cars, their roots knotted into the earth. She stepped into the clearing and felt the shift. The air changed. Warmer. Still. The same way a room feels after someone has just left it. She took out the paper again. The instructions said to wait by the largest stone. She found it — a massive oak on the far side, its bark scored with markings she didn't recognise. She set her bag down and sat on a flat rock nearby. The pendant pulsed again. Stronger this time. She pressed her hand to it through her shirt, felt the heat radiating. "Hello?" Her voice came out thin. She cleared her throat. "Delivery from the Golden Empress." No answer. The wildflowers at the edges of the clearing seemed to lean toward her, their pale petals open despite the hour. She didn't know much about flowers, but she knew they closed at night. These didn't. She checked her watch again. Eleven-fifteen. She'd give it ten more minutes. A sound. Soft. Like someone dragging a sack over grass. She turned her head. The edge of the clearing was dark, the trees beyond a black wall. She aimed her torch. The beam lit a ring of trunks and ferns, nothing else. "Anyone there?" The sound stopped. The silence that followed was deeper than before, heavier. Rory stood up, the torch held out like a weapon. Her mother used to say that fear was just a lack of information. Fill in the blank and the fear goes away. She'd never told her mother how wrong that was. A whisper. Not words — just breath passing over something. She spun. The standing stones. Had one of them moved? She counted them, then counted again. Fourteen. She was sure there had been fourteen before. She walked towards the nearest stone, her footsteps deliberate, her torch fixed on its surface. The markings were not random. They formed shapes she almost recognised — spirals, crescents, something like a hand with too many fingers. She reached out to touch it. The pendant burned. She yanked her hand back, hissing through her teeth. The heat spread through her chest, radiating outward, and she pulled the pendant out by its chain. It glowed. Crimson light pulsed from the gemstone, bright enough to cast shadows on the stone. The shadows moved. Not with her hand. Independent. A shape at the corner of her vision, low to the ground, slipping behind a tree. She whipped around. Nothing. "Okay," she said, her voice steadier than she felt. "I'm going to leave now." She bent to pick up her bag. The strap was caught on something. She tugged. It gave, and she stumbled back. The rock she'd been sitting on was gone. In its place, a patch of wildflowers, their stems bent as if something had crushed them. She didn't run. Running felt like surrender. But she walked fast, back the way she came, her torch beam swinging wildly. The path was there. It was there. She followed it, her breath coming in short bursts, her ears straining for any sound. The whispering started again. From all sides now. A soft, continuous murmur, like a crowd reciting a prayer under their breath. She couldn't make out words, but she felt them in her teeth, a vibration that ran up her jaw and into her skull. The pendant pulsed in rhythm with the whispers. Warm. Steady. Almost comforting. She stopped. The path ahead was gone. She turned in a circle, her torch beam catching only trees, ferns, the same standing stones she'd just left behind. She was back in the clearing. Or a clearing. The largest stone was there, its markings faintly visible, glowing in the red light of the pendant. "No," she said. "No, no, no." The whispers grew louder. She pressed her hands over her ears, but the sound didn't diminish. It was inside her head now, a pressure behind her eyes. She squeezed them shut. When she opened them, the clearing was full of people. Not people. Shapes. Tall, thin, made of shadows that moved against the moonlight. They stood between the stones, still as the trees, their heads tilted toward her. She couldn't see faces. Just the suggestion of them, hollows where eyes should be, a faint ripple where mouths might form. She didn't scream. She couldn't. Her throat had closed, her lungs locked. She stood frozen, the torch beam swinging from one shape to the next, her hand shaking. One of them stepped forward. Its movement was wrong — too smooth, like a puppet on strings. It reached out a hand. Long fingers, too many joints, ending in points. The pendant flared. A wave of heat washed over her, and the shape recoiled, its hand snapping back. The whispers turned to hisses. Rory found her voice. "What do you want?" The shapes didn't answer. But one of them — the one who had reached for her — tilted its head. A sound came from it, not speech, but something like wind through a hollow reed. The pendant pulsed again. The light it cast grew brighter, pushing the shadows back. The shapes retreated, melting into the trees, their forms dissolving like mist. The whispers stopped. Rory stood alone in the clearing. Her torch flickered, then died. The pendant's glow was the only light, casting a pool of red around her feet. She could see the path now, clear and straight, leading back the way she'd come. She ran.
created_at"2026-10-20T08:18:53.371Z" 10/20/2026, 8:18:53 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.75% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1176
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
40.48% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1176
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"pulsed"
count5
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"silence"
count3
3
word"footsteps"
count2
4
word"whisper"
count1
5
word"comforting"
count1
6
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"warmth"
2"silence"
3"footsteps"
4"whisper"
5"comforting"
6"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences150
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences150
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences155
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen24
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1183
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions9
wordCount1159
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity0.43
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Yu-Fei"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Yu-Fei2
Rory5
persons
0"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Yu-Fei"
globalScore1
windowScore1
53.85% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences78
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"seemed muffled swallowed by the damp ground"
1"something like a hand with too many fingers"
2"something like wind through a hollow reed"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.845
wordCount1183
matches
0"not speech, but something like wind through a hollow reed"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences155
matches
0"say that fear"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean30.33
std17.7
cv0.583
sampleLengths
067
116
252
344
470
537
617
746
820
915
1037
1112
1242
132
1444
159
1635
1743
1845
1928
2014
2145
2243
2344
2412
2553
266
2731
2810
2948
3028
3130
3223
338
3435
3526
363
3741
382
93.57% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences150
matches
0"been written"
1"been fourteen"
2"was caught"
3"was gone"
4"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs199
matches(empty)
32.26% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences155
ratio0.039
matches
0"Not quiet — silence."
1"She found it — a massive oak on the far side, its bark scored with markings she didn't recognise."
2"Not words — just breath passing over something."
3"They formed shapes she almost recognised — spirals, crescents, something like a hand with too many fingers."
4"Its movement was wrong — too smooth, like a puppet on strings."
5"But one of them — the one who had reached for her — tilted its head."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1155
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount42
adverbRatio0.03636363636363636
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.006060606060606061
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences155
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences155
mean7.63
std5.53
cv0.724
sampleLengths
011
18
216
320
412
57
69
72
818
96
1019
115
122
134
144
1516
162
173
185
1910
204
212
2212
2312
2423
2517
262
274
289
2913
309
313
321
331
3412
356
369
3719
3812
394
403
4113
426
434
445
452
4620
4713
482
495
43.23% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.3096774193548387
totalSentences155
uniqueOpeners48
81.97% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences122
matches
0"Even her footsteps seemed muffled,"
1"Just and a set of"
2"Just the suggestion of them,"
ratio0.025
62.62% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount48
totalSentences122
matches
0"She stepped through, her delivery"
1"Her torch beam cut a"
2"Her boots squelched in the"
3"She kept the torch on."
4"She checked her watch."
5"She'd promised Yu-Fei she'd make"
6"She stepped into the clearing"
7"She took out the paper"
8"She found it — a"
9"She set her bag down"
10"She pressed her hand to"
11"Her voice came out thin"
12"She cleared her throat."
13"She didn't know much about"
14"She checked her watch again."
15"She'd give it ten more"
16"She turned her head."
17"She aimed her torch."
18"Her mother used to say"
19"She'd never told her mother"
ratio0.393
58.36% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount98
totalSentences122
matches
0"The iron gate at the"
1"Rory had expected to have"
2"She stepped through, her delivery"
3"Her torch beam cut a"
4"The air smelled of wet"
5"The pendant against her chest"
6"A small warmth, gone as"
7"The path curved, marked by"
8"Her boots squelched in the"
9"She kept the torch on."
10"The silence was wrong."
11"The kind that pressed against"
12"She checked her watch."
13"She'd promised Yu-Fei she'd make"
14"A special order for a"
15"The address had been written"
16"The trees had thinned."
17"She stepped into the clearing"
18"The air changed."
19"The same way a room"
ratio0.803
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences122
matches(empty)
ratio0
69.97% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"In its place, a patch of wildflowers, their stems bent as if something had crushed them."
1"She followed it, her breath coming in short bursts, her ears straining for any sound."
2"Tall, thin, made of shadows that moved against the moonlight."
3"She stood frozen, the torch beam swinging from one shape to the next, her hand shaking."
4"The shapes retreated, melting into the trees, their forms dissolving like mist."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said, her voice steadier than she felt"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.222
leniency0.444
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
81.0681%