Run: 2026-10-20-01M5C6991PY4DHJK5AETVNM8QF

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door swung inward before Rory’s knuckles had even left the wood. She’d meant to knock again, to announce herself properly, but the flat was a disaster zone of paper and the smell of cold curry, and Eva stood in the middle of it all, a half-unrolled scroll in one hand and a kitchen knife in the other. “You look like shit,” Rory said. Eva lowered the knife. “Charming. You’re early.” “You said eight. It’s five past.” “I said eight-ish. Ish is a crucial suffix.” Eva gestured with the scroll. “I’m in the middle of a transcription. The ink’s still wet. Don’t touch anything.” Rory stepped over a stack of books on the threshold, her delivery bag thumping against her hip. Ptolemy, the tabby, wound between her ankles and meowed once, imperious and unimpressed. The flat smelled of cardamom and old glue and the faint, sharp tang of ozone that always clung to Eva’s more ambitious research. “You summoned me,” Rory said, dropping her bag onto the one clear patch of floor. “At seven in the morning. With a text that just said ‘Come. Bring the dagger.’ What dagger, Eva? I deliver noodles for a living. I don’t exactly have a collection of ceremonial weapons lying around.” “You have the one from the Holloway job. The one you didn’t report.” Rory froze. “How do you know about that?” “Lucien told me.” The name landed between them like a dropped plate. Rory turned, slowly. “Lucien Moreau. You’ve been talking to Lucien.” “He came by. Three days ago.” Eva’s voice was carefully neutral. “He’s looking into something. Something big. The Holloway dagger is a piece of it.” “And you didn’t think to mention this before the text?” “I’m mentioning it now.” Eva set down the scroll, finally giving Rory her full attention. Her eyes were tired, shadowed. “He’s coming tonight. I need you both here. Together.” “No.” “Rory.” “Absolutely not. Whatever it is, find another delivery girl. I’m not working with him.” “He asked for you specifically.” Rory laughed. It was not a pleasant sound. “Of course he did. Did he also mention why? Or did he just flash that cane and give you a discount on his rates?” “He didn’t charge me a thing.” Eva’s voice was quiet. “He gave me the information for free. Said it was a favour. For you.” The words hit harder than they should have. Rory pressed her thumb into the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a habit she’d never been able to break. “I don’t want his favours.” “You don’t have to want them. You just have to be here when he arrives.” “When he arrives.” Rory looked around the room, at the chaos of Eva’s research, the wine bottles doubling as candle holders, the cat now draped across a pile of scrolls like a furry paperweight. “And if I’m not?” “Then I’m doing this alone, and someone is going to end up dead.” Eva met her gaze, steady. “Probably me.” The clock on the mantelpiece ticked. Ten minutes past eight. The words hung in the air, barbed and undeniable. Rory had known Eva for fifteen years. She knew when she was being manipulated, and she knew the difference between Eva being dramatic and Eva being right. This was the latter. “Fine,” Rory said. “But I’m not staying for wine.” She turned toward the door, meaning to leave, to walk off the tension that had settled into her shoulders. Her hand was on the deadbolt when a knock, sharp and precise, echoed through the flat. Three raps. Evenly spaced. Infuriatingly polite. Eva looked at her. Rory looked at Eva. “That’ll be him,” Eva said. “No shit.” The lock turned. The door opened. Lucien Moreau stood in the dim hallway of the Brick Lane stairwell, his platinum hair catching the light from a single dusty bulb. He wore his usual charcoal suit, impeccably tailored, and carried his ivory-handled cane loosely in his right hand. He looked the same as he had six months ago, the night everything had fallen apart. His eyes, one amber and one black, found hers immediately. “Rory.” Her name in his mouth was a weapon. It always had been. “Lucien.” She kept her voice flat. “You look well. Still breaking into people’s lives without an invitation?” “I knocked.” He gestured mildly to the door. “Your friend invited me. You, on the other hand, seem to be leaving.” “I was just told I couldn’t.” “Ah. Coercion via guilt. Eva’s specialty.” He stepped past her into the flat, the faint scent of cedar and smoke trailing behind him. He surveyed the room with a slow, assessing gaze. “I see she’s been busy. The Lumen texts. The Barlow bindings. And is that the Holloway dagger on the table, or have you found another cursed artifact to leave lying around?” “It’s the dagger,” Eva said, standing. “And it’s not staying. That’s why you’re both here.” Lucien crossed to the table, his cane tapping against the floorboards. He picked up the dagger, turning it over in his long fingers. “Interesting. Not Avarosian. Not Earthbound either. This is something else entirely.” “That’s what I’ve been trying to tell you,” Eva said. “The engraving. It’s not a language. It’s a map.” Rory stood by the door, her hand still on the deadbolt. She could leave. Eva had said it wouldn’t be fair to force her, had looked at her with that steady, pleading gaze. But the dagger was on the table now, and Lucien’s eyes were on her again, and the past was simmering beneath the floorboards like a fire someone had tried to smother. “The map leads where?” Rory asked, before she could stop herself. Lucien looked up. For a moment, something flickered behind his heterochromatic eyes. Surprise. Or satisfaction. “Avaros,” he said. “The demon realm. The one my father came from.” “And why would you want to go there?” “Because someone’s opened a door. A permanent one. And if the wrong people find it first, the consequences won’t be limited to London.” He set the dagger down, the blade catching the candlelight. “I need your help to find it. Both of you. You’re the only two people in this city who can read the signs I’ve been tracking.” “You need me,” Rory said, “or you want me?” The question came out sharper than she’d intended, a blade hidden in silk. Lucien’s expression didn’t change, but his knuckles went white around the head of his cane. “I’ve never lied to you,” he said. “No. You just left.” The silence was immediate, and absolute. Even Ptolemy stopped his purring. Eva opened her mouth, then closed it. Lucien took a step toward her. Rory didn’t step back. “I left to keep you safe,” he said, his voice low. “So you keep saying. But you never did explain what you were keeping me safe from.” “That’s because I didn’t know. Not then.” His jaw tightened. “I know now.” “Enough,” Eva said, stepping between them. Her voice was quiet but firm. “Whatever happened, whatever’s still happening, we don’t have time for it. The map leads to a door, and that door is already bleeding energy. I’ve felt it in the readings all week. If we don’t close it by the next full moon, the veil won’t just thin. It’ll tear.” Rory stared at Lucien. He stared back. The old, familiar heat crackled between them, the same heat that used to keep her up at night, that she’d tried to drown in three months of late shifts and cheap gin. He looked tired, she realised. Tired in a way that had nothing to do with a lack of sleep. “I’m not doing this for you,” she said. “I know,” he replied. “But you’re doing it.” He held her gaze a moment longer, then turned to Eva. “Show me the readings. The ones from the river. The pattern’s changing, and I need to understand how.” Eva nodded, moving toward the piles of paper, and the moment shattered. Rory let out a breath she hadn’t known she was holding. She closed the door. The deadbolts slid home with three heavy clicks. And she stayed.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Rory looked around [around]"
1"He gestured mildly [mildly]"
dialogueSentences65
tagDensity0.354
leniency0.708
rawRatio0.087
effectiveRatio0.062
88.97% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1360
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
2
adverb"loosely"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"carefully"
2"loosely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
66.91% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1360
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"absolutely"
count1
1
word"tension"
count1
2
word"echoed"
count1
3
word"simmering"
count1
4
word"flickered"
count1
5
word"silk"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"familiar"
count1
8
word"shattered"
count1
highlights
0"absolutely"
1"tension"
2"echoed"
3"simmering"
4"flickered"
5"silk"
6"silence"
7"familiar"
8"shattered"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
1
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
2
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
1"knuckles went white"
2"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences90
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences90
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences130
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen49
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1360
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions28
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions53
wordCount786
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.8
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Rory19
Eva22
Moreau1
Brick1
Lane1
Lucien7
Ptolemy2
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Moreau"
3"Lucien"
4"Ptolemy"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
globalScore0.101
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences46
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1360
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences130
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs65
mean20.92
std18.1
cv0.865
sampleLengths
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27
36
427
553
650
713
88
93
1019
1125
1210
1329
141
151
1614
175
1832
1924
2033
2115
2238
2320
2450
259
2635
276
288
295
302
316
3257
3310
341
3512
3617
3721
386
3963
4015
4134
4219
4364
4411
4527
468
4759
489
4928
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences90
matches
0"being manipulated"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs152
matches
0"was simmering"
1"was holding"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences130
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount789
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.030418250950570342
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.012674271229404309
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences130
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences130
mean10.46
std8.82
cv0.843
sampleLengths
012
146
26
34
43
56
613
714
817
913
1023
1115
1235
1313
142
156
163
179
183
197
2011
2114
2210
2315
245
259
261
271
2814
295
302
316
3224
3310
3414
358
3620
375
3815
3934
404
4118
422
436
444
459
467
4720
484
493
51.79% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.3384615384615385
totalSentences130
uniqueOpeners44
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
ratio0
84.86% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences74
matches
0"She’d meant to knock again,"
1"Her eyes were tired, shadowed."
2"It was not a pleasant"
3"She knew when she was"
4"She turned toward the door,"
5"Her hand was on the"
6"He wore his usual charcoal"
7"He looked the same as"
8"His eyes, one amber and"
9"Her name in his mouth"
10"It always had been."
11"She kept her voice flat"
12"He gestured mildly to the"
13"He stepped past her into"
14"He surveyed the room with"
15"He picked up the dagger,"
16"She could leave."
17"He set the dagger down,"
18"he said, his voice low"
19"His jaw tightened"
ratio0.338
0.54% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount68
totalSentences74
matches
0"The door swung inward before"
1"She’d meant to knock again,"
2"Eva lowered the knife."
3"Eva gestured with the scroll"
4"Rory stepped over a stack"
5"Ptolemy, the tabby, wound between"
6"The flat smelled of cardamom"
7"Rory said, dropping her bag"
8"The name landed between them"
9"Rory turned, slowly."
10"Eva’s voice was carefully neutral"
11"Eva set down the scroll,"
12"Her eyes were tired, shadowed."
13"It was not a pleasant"
14"Eva’s voice was quiet"
15"The words hit harder than"
16"Rory pressed her thumb into"
17"Rory looked around the room,"
18"Eva met her gaze, steady"
19"The clock on the mantelpiece"
ratio0.919
67.57% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences74
matches
0"Even Ptolemy stopped his purring."
ratio0.014
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The old, familiar heat crackled between them, the same heat that used to keep her up at night, that she’d tried to drown in three months of late shifts and chea…"
59.78% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags23
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Eva met, steady"
1"He set, the blade catching the candlelight"
2"he said, his voice low"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences65
tagDensity0.215
leniency0.431
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.9033%