| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 25 | | tagDensity | 0.6 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 89.58% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1439 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 40.93% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1439 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "could feel" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "intricate" | | 6 | "flickered" | | 7 | "warmth" | | 8 | "resolved" | | 9 | "perfect" | | 10 | "chill" | | 11 | "pulsed" | | 12 | "resolve" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 90 | | matches | | |
| 47.62% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 90 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 100 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1455 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 87.55% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 42 | | wordCount | 1281 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.25 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 1 | | Aurora | 16 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Shade | 2 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Isolde | 3 | | Nyx | 10 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Dymas | 1 | | Varga | 1 | | Seer | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Veil" | | 2 | "Shade" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Nyx" | | 5 | "Varga" | | 6 | "Seer" |
| | places | | 0 | "Cardiff" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 0.875 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 73.08% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "whisper that seemed to come from everywhere at once, from the dark spaces between the trees rather than from the tall, shadow-wrapped figure standing beside her" | | 1 | "as if inviting her to follow" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.062 | | wordCount | 1455 | | matches | | 0 | "not petrified, not dead, but living wood twisted into shape, their bark smooth as river s" | | 1 | "not dead, but living wood twisted into shape, their bark smooth as river s" | | 2 | "not grass but something else" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 29 | | mean | 50.17 | | std | 27.09 | | cv | 0.54 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 72 | | 1 | 36 | | 2 | 35 | | 3 | 62 | | 4 | 38 | | 5 | 85 | | 6 | 79 | | 7 | 36 | | 8 | 45 | | 9 | 70 | | 10 | 80 | | 11 | 1 | | 12 | 37 | | 13 | 61 | | 14 | 48 | | 15 | 28 | | 16 | 63 | | 17 | 112 | | 18 | 24 | | 19 | 45 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 45 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 97 | | 24 | 80 | | 25 | 51 | | 26 | 51 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 52 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 201 | | matches | | 0 | "were catching" | | 1 | "was walking" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 17 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 100 | | ratio | 0.1 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx reached out a hand — a silhouette, a suggestion of fingers — and the nearest blossom turned toward it, its petals opening wider." | | 1 | "The sound of Richmond Park behind her — the distant traffic, the bark of a dog, the rustle of ordinary wind — fell away, replaced by a hush so complete it seemed to have texture, a soft pressure against her eardrums." | | 2 | "They were oak — not petrified, not dead, but living wood twisted into shape, their bark smooth as river stones and warm to the touch." | | 3 | "The path — if it could be called a path — wound between the standing stones, and Aurora noticed that with each step, the grove seemed to rearrange itself behind her." | | 4 | "She thought of Isolde's footprints — or rather, the lack of them — and felt a chill that had nothing to do with the temperature." | | 5 | "\"Don't follow it,\" Nyx said, their hand — solid now, and real — closing around Aurora's arm." | | 6 | "Its trunk was thicker than a car, its bark a deep, ridged black, and in its branches — she had to look twice to be sure — in its branches, small lights moved." | | 7 | "Shapes that might have been animals — a deer with antlers like bare branches, a fox with eyes that burned with a pale, cool fire — slipping between the trees." | | 8 | "They grew in a perfect ring, and the grass inside the ring was not grass but something else — silver-white and soft, like the mane of a horse made of moonlight." | | 9 | "\"Or you're early. Time is difficult here. But you've come. That's what matters.\" She looked past Aurora to Nyx, and something passed between them — a recognition, a wariness, an old understanding that Aurora couldn't read." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1266 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "tall, shadow-wrapped figure" |
| | adverbCount | 47 | | adverbRatio | 0.03712480252764613 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004739336492890996 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 100 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 100 | | mean | 14.55 | | std | 9.86 | | cv | 0.678 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 6 | | 1 | 31 | | 2 | 35 | | 3 | 36 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 24 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 26 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 24 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 41 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 25 | | 23 | 25 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 31 | | 34 | 28 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 31 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 31 | | 39 | 1 | | 40 | 22 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 23 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 25 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 23 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 17 |
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| 43.33% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.32 | | totalSentences | 100 | | uniqueOpeners | 32 | |
| 41.67% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "Then it turned and drifted" |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 30.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 38 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "It was a thinning, a" | | 1 | "She had learned to trust" | | 2 | "It was true." | | 3 | "It was the winter solstice," | | 4 | "They gave off a scent" | | 5 | "It was cooler, sharper, carrying" | | 6 | "They were oak — not" | | 7 | "Their form flickered, solid one" | | 8 | "She pulled her hand away," | | 9 | "She flexed her fingers, watching" | | 10 | "It had no single source." | | 11 | "It seemed to filter down" | | 12 | "They walked deeper." | | 13 | "She looked back once and" | | 14 | "She lifted her boot and" | | 15 | "She thought of Isolde's footprints" | | 16 | "It was beautiful, and it" | | 17 | "She didn't know how she" | | 18 | "It was simply there, like" | | 19 | "It was part of the" |
| | ratio | 0.475 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 74 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "The boundary was not a" | | 1 | "It was a thinning, a" | | 2 | "Aurora paused at the edge" | | 3 | "Nyx's voice was a whisper" | | 4 | "She had learned to trust" | | 5 | "It was true." | | 6 | "A thick carpet of them" | | 7 | "It was the winter solstice," | | 8 | "They gave off a scent" | | 9 | "Nyx reached out a hand" | | 10 | "The Shade withdrew quickly." | | 11 | "Aurora stepped forward." | | 12 | "The air changed the moment" | | 13 | "It was cooler, sharper, carrying" | | 14 | "The sound of Richmond Park" | | 15 | "The silence was alive." | | 16 | "The standing stones themselves were" | | 17 | "They were oak — not" | | 18 | "Aurora laid her palm against" | | 19 | "The wildflowers grew right up" |
| | ratio | 0.925 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 83.33% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora paused at the edge of the clearing, the Fae blade a cold weight against her hip, its tip pointing toward the tree line as if it, too, could feel the pres…" | | 1 | "It seemed to filter down through the canopy from everywhere and nowhere, golden and green and faintly blue, shifting as if the leaves above were catching a sun …" | | 2 | "They came upon a tree that stopped Aurora in her tracks." | | 3 | "She felt the ground beneath her feet shift, as if the layers of the world were thinner here, and she was walking on a skin stretched fragile over something vast…" |
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| 25.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx said, their hand — solid now, and real — closing around Aurora's arm" | | 1 | "Nyx said, their voice a thread of sound" | | 2 | "Nyx said, their voice flat" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 25 | | tagDensity | 0.44 | | leniency | 0.88 | | rawRatio | 0.091 | | effectiveRatio | 0.08 | |