| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 25 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Nyx said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 43 | | tagDensity | 0.581 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.04 | | effectiveRatio | 0.04 | |
| 81.32% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1606 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | 0 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "barely above a whisper" | | 1 | "softly" | | 2 | "carefully" | | 3 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 53.30% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1606 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "shimmered" | | 1 | "whisper" | | 2 | "comforting" | | 3 | "resonance" | | 4 | "charged" | | 5 | "sense of" | | 6 | "crystal" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "weight" | | 9 | "could feel" | | 10 | "pulsed" | | 11 | "depths" | | 12 | "flickered" | | 13 | "warmth" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "g with unease" | | 1 | "y with warmth" |
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| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 10 | | narrationSentences | 93 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "tried to" | | 1 | "seem to" | | 2 | "seemed to" | | 3 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 110 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1623 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 19 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 52 | | wordCount | 1320 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.74 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 23 | | Nyx | 7 | | Isolde | 12 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | London | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Dymas | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Courts | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.629 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "patterns that seemed to shift and writhe when she looked at them directly" | | 1 | "reds that seemed to pulse with their own heartbeat" | | 2 | "something like a fox but not quite, with fur" | | 3 | "not quite with fur that shifted through shades of russet and gold" | | 4 | "seemed abstract until now" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 2.465 | | wordCount | 1623 | | matches | | 0 | "not fireflies but something else, motes of golden luminescence" | | 1 | "not hostile, but it is not tame" | | 2 | "not with hostility, exactly, but with a kind of vast, patient attention" | | 3 | "not the strange sky above but something else entirely" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | | 0 | "called that — wound" | | 1 | "lights that pulsed" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 47 | | mean | 34.53 | | std | 28.56 | | cv | 0.827 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 52 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 46 | | 3 | 1 | | 4 | 69 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 34 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 80 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 98 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 76 | | 13 | 25 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 39 | | 17 | 54 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 20 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 94 | | 22 | 79 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 66 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 38 | | 28 | 61 | | 29 | 28 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 40 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 69 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 45 | | 38 | 89 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 37 | | 41 | 24 | | 42 | 44 | | 43 | 80 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 48 | | 46 | 14 |
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| 90.17% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "been replaced" | | 1 | "been contained" | | 2 | "was carpeted" | | 3 | "was gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 219 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 17 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 15 | | totalSentences | 110 | | ratio | 0.136 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory had noticed that on their walk through Richmond Park — the way the seer seemed to float just above the earth, as if gravity held no claim on her." | | 1 | "Rory exchanged a glance with Nyx — as much as one could exchange a glance with a creature whose eyes were faint violet glows in a face of shifting shadow — and stepped forward." | | 2 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in defiance of the season — bluebells and foxgloves and blooms she had no name for, their petals shimmering with a faint luminescence." | | 3 | "Every breath filled her lungs with sweetness and something else — a wildness, a sense of possibility that made her heart beat faster." | | 4 | "The ground beneath her feet felt strange — soft and springy, as if the earth itself were breathing." | | 5 | "The path — if it could be called that — wound deeper into the grove, and the trees grew stranger with every step." | | 6 | "Flowers bloomed from their branches in impossible colors — blues that hurt to look at, reds that seemed to pulse with their own heartbeat." | | 7 | "A sound drew her attention — a soft chittering, like a squirrel but deeper, more resonant." | | 8 | "Offerings lay upon it — bundles of herbs, bowls of honey, a rusted iron knife that looked ancient beyond measure." | | 9 | "She thought of her own life — twenty-five years, a blink compared to the age of this place." | | 10 | "The amber glow faded, replaced by something cooler, paler — moonlight, though the sun should still have been high in the sky." | | 11 | "She could feel the grove watching her now — not with hostility, exactly, but with a kind of vast, patient attention that made her feel very small." | | 12 | "As they emerged into another clearing, she saw a pool of water that reflected not the strange sky above but something else entirely — glimpses of other places, other realms, flickering like dreams half-remembered." | | 13 | "Something hung from those branches — offerings, yes, but also lights, thousands of tiny lights that pulsed and shimmered like captured stars." | | 14 | "She had stepped through the standing stones, and now she was somewhere else entirely — somewhere that existed in the spaces between everything, where time moved differently and impossible things bloomed in impossible colors." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1306 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 49 | | adverbRatio | 0.03751914241960184 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009954058192955589 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 110 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 110 | | mean | 14.75 | | std | 9.06 | | cv | 0.614 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 31 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 28 | | 5 | 1 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 30 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 34 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 30 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 28 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 23 | | 21 | 29 | | 22 | 27 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 28 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 23 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 23 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 18 | | 37 | 23 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 17 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 23 | | 44 | 20 | | 45 | 24 | | 46 | 27 | | 47 | 16 | | 48 | 18 | | 49 | 22 |
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| 65.15% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.44545454545454544 | | totalSentences | 110 | | uniqueOpeners | 49 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 22 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "she asked, her voice barely" | | 1 | "She moved without sound, without" | | 2 | "It was not gradual." | | 3 | "It was not subtle." | | 4 | "She could hear water somewhere" | | 5 | "Their violet eyes swept the" | | 6 | "She looked up to see" | | 7 | "It was small and sleek," | | 8 | "Its ears were too long," | | 9 | "They came to a clearing" | | 10 | "She approached the altar, running" | | 11 | "She thought of her own" | | 12 | "She thought of the Heartstone" | | 13 | "She didn't finish the sentence." | | 14 | "She didn't need to." | | 15 | "They walked on, deeper into" | | 16 | "She could feel the grove" | | 17 | "She knew the word from" | | 18 | "She thought of the Heartstone" | | 19 | "She thought of Dymas, of" |
| | ratio | 0.293 | |
| 33.33% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 64 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones rose from" | | 1 | "she asked, her voice barely" | | 2 | "Nyx drifted beside her, their" | | 3 | "A pause, and then, with" | | 4 | "Isolde had already passed between" | | 5 | "She moved without sound, without" | | 6 | "Rory had noticed that on" | | 7 | "Isolde called back, her voice" | | 8 | "Rory exchanged a glance with" | | 9 | "The moment she crossed the" | | 10 | "It was not gradual." | | 11 | "It was not subtle." | | 12 | "The air tasted of honey" | | 13 | "The light had shifted from" | | 14 | "The grove stretched before her," | | 15 | "The trunks were enormous, wider" | | 16 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in" | | 17 | "Isolde said, watching Rory's face" | | 18 | "Rory turned in a slow" | | 19 | "She could hear water somewhere" |
| | ratio | 0.853 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | technicalSentenceCount | 12 | | matches | | 0 | "The light had shifted from the pale gold of late afternoon to something deeper, more amber, as if the sun had been replaced by a distant forge fire." | | 1 | "The grove stretched before her, impossibly vast for a space that should have been contained within a London park." | | 2 | "Every breath filled her lungs with sweetness and something else — a wildness, a sense of possibility that made her heart beat faster." | | 3 | "The ground beneath her feet felt strange — soft and springy, as if the earth itself were breathing." | | 4 | "Tiny lights drifted through the air, not fireflies but something else, motes of golden luminescence that swirled and danced before dissolving into nothing." | | 5 | "Flowers bloomed from their branches in impossible colors — blues that hurt to look at, reds that seemed to pulse with their own heartbeat." | | 6 | "It was small and sleek, something like a fox but not quite, with fur that shifted through shades of russet and gold." | | 7 | "In the center stood a stone altar, worn by centuries of weather, its surface carved with symbols that matched the patterns on the tree bark." | | 8 | "Offerings lay upon it — bundles of herbs, bowls of honey, a rusted iron knife that looked ancient beyond measure." | | 9 | "She could feel the grove watching her now — not with hostility, exactly, but with a kind of vast, patient attention that made her feel very small." | | 10 | "As they emerged into another clearing, she saw a pool of water that reflected not the strange sky above but something else entirely — glimpses of other places, …" | | 11 | "Rory looked at the pool, at the impossible reflections that flickered across its surface." |
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| 85.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 25 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she asked, her voice barely above a whisper" | | 1 | "Isolde called back, her voice carrying a strange resonance" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 21 | | fancyCount | 9 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde called back (call back)" | | 1 | "Rory breathed (breathe)" | | 2 | "they murmured (murmur)" | | 3 | "Rory repeated (repeat)" | | 4 | "Rory muttered (mutter)" | | 5 | "Isolde agreed (agree)" | | 6 | "Nyx warned (warn)" | | 7 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" | | 8 | "Rory breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 43 | | tagDensity | 0.488 | | leniency | 0.977 | | rawRatio | 0.429 | | effectiveRatio | 0.419 | |