| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 23 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Rory exhaled slowly [slowly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 47 | | tagDensity | 0.489 | | leniency | 0.979 | | rawRatio | 0.043 | | effectiveRatio | 0.043 | |
| 72.73% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1650 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "gently" | | 2 | "softly" | | 3 | "slightly" | | 4 | "precisely" | | 5 | "perfectly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 63.64% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1650 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "could feel" | | 3 | "perfect" | | 4 | "crystallized" | | 5 | "comforting" | | 6 | "shimmered" | | 7 | "traced" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 101 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 101 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 124 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 65 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1632 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 22 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 64.22% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 62 | | wordCount | 1224 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 1.72 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Rory | 21 | | Heartstone | 3 | | English | 1 | | November | 1 | | Grove | 2 | | London | 1 | | Nyx | 13 | | Isolde | 11 | | Fae | 2 | | Veil | 3 | | Kvled | 1 | | Moss | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Veil" | | 4 | "Kvled" | | 5 | "Moss" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Grove" | | 3 | "London" | | 4 | "Fae" |
| | globalScore | 0.642 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "something like the memory of rain on stones" | | 1 | "quite colors—a blue that hummed at the edge of hearing, a red that felt warm on the tongue" | | 2 | "patterns that seemed to shift when Rory wasn't looking directly at them" | | 3 | "as if sleeping" |
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| 77.45% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.225 | | wordCount | 1632 | | matches | | 0 | "not disturbed, but released, drifting upward like seeds on a thermal current" | | 1 | "not a face, quite, but the suggestion of one, eyes closed as if sleeping" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 124 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 46 | | mean | 35.48 | | std | 22.73 | | cv | 0.641 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 53 | | 1 | 40 | | 2 | 43 | | 3 | 28 | | 4 | 45 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 66 | | 7 | 60 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 80 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 55 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 38 | | 15 | 78 | | 16 | 56 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 32 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 37 | | 22 | 24 | | 23 | 34 | | 24 | 31 | | 25 | 72 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 52 | | 28 | 55 | | 29 | 30 | | 30 | 30 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 22 | | 33 | 44 | | 34 | 65 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 37 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 22 | | 39 | 55 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 86 | | 42 | 35 | | 43 | 27 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 65 |
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| 98.32% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "were gone" | | 1 | "were frightened" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 199 | | matches | | 0 | "was not entirely comforting" | | 1 | "wasn't looking" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 18 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 15 | | totalSentences | 124 | | ratio | 0.121 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones announced themselves before the grove did—five rough-hewn oaks, ancient and silvered with lichen, arranged in a circle that should not have fit within the bounds of Richmond Park." | | 1 | "Not the warmth of sun-baked wood—something deeper, like the pulse beneath skin." | | 2 | "Not gradually—there was no thinning of trees, no rustle of undergrowth." | | 3 | "Not vanished—she could feel them behind her, a pressure in the air like a held breath—but the path back had folded itself away, and in its place stood a corridor of hawthorn trees whose branches had grown together into a living arch." | | 4 | "The ground sloped gently downward, carpeted in that luminous moss, and in the distance—far further than any clearing could reasonably extend—a grove of silver-barked trees caught light that came from nowhere." | | 5 | "The moss gave softly under Rory's boots, and with each step tiny motes of light rose up—not disturbed, but released, drifting upward like seeds on a thermal current." | | 6 | "The silver grove pulled at them both—Rory could feel the compulsion in it, a gentle tug behind her sternum that had nothing to do with her own desires." | | 7 | "The wildflowers here bloomed in colors that weren't quite colors—a blue that hummed at the edge of hearing, a red that felt warm on the tongue." | | 8 | "Through it, the world looked slightly different—sharper, as if the leaf itself were a lens." | | 9 | "Some had grown into arches and spirals, and in the heart of one twisted trunk, a face had formed in the grain—not a face, quite, but the suggestion of one, eyes closed as if sleeping." | | 10 | "It was a hole cut into the fabric of the world, and the edges of it shimmered with that telltale distortion—the Veil made visible." | | 11 | "\"Because of the winter solstice.\" Isolde's voice shifted—still musical, but with a jagged edge." | | 12 | "She reached out—the Fae blade in her other hand, cold and steady—and touched the shimmer at the pool's edge." | | 13 | "A sound rose from the water, from the air, from the bones of the earth beneath her knees—a low, resonant frequency like the lowest string of a harp drawn too tight." | | 14 | "Their eyes were wary, but there was excitement there too, buried deep—the same unreasonable curiosity that had made them travel all this way." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1245 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 45 | | adverbRatio | 0.03614457831325301 | | lyAdverbCount | 17 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013654618473895583 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 124 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 124 | | mean | 13.16 | | std | 11.23 | | cv | 0.853 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 31 | | 1 | 4 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 31 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 23 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 22 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 42 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 20 | | 31 | 31 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 25 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 28 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 19 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 31 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 28 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 26 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 27 |
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| 52.69% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.3548387096774194 | | totalSentences | 124 | | uniqueOpeners | 44 | |
| 40.16% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "Then Nyx pulled her back," |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 21 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "Their voice carried on the" | | 1 | "Her fingertips tingled, and she" | | 2 | "It tasted of honey and" | | 3 | "She caught one in her" | | 4 | "It dissolved against her skin" | | 5 | "She made herself walk slowly," | | 6 | "They grew in perfect spirals," | | 7 | "It was heavier than it" | | 8 | "Her silver hair moved without" | | 9 | "She had left no footprints" | | 10 | "Their violet eyes reflected Isolde's" | | 11 | "They followed her deeper." | | 12 | "It was a hole cut" | | 13 | "She lifted it, and the" | | 14 | "She pointed, and her finger" | | 15 | "She reached out—the Fae blade" | | 16 | "Their voice was tight." | | 17 | "Their form had gone thin" | | 18 | "She turned and began to" | | 19 | "Her silver hair drifted like" |
| | ratio | 0.253 | |
| 56.39% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 67 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones announced themselves" | | 1 | "Rory counted them twice." | | 2 | "Their voice carried on the" | | 3 | "Rory stopped at the threshold," | | 4 | "The bark was oddly warm." | | 5 | "Her fingertips tingled, and she" | | 6 | "Nyx drifted past her, their" | | 7 | "Rory touched the Heartstone at" | | 8 | "The crimson gem had been" | | 9 | "Nyx's violet eyes narrowed to" | | 10 | "The air changed." | | 11 | "It tasted of honey and" | | 12 | "The standing stones were gone." | | 13 | "Rory exhaled slowly" | | 14 | "The Grove stretched before them," | | 15 | "The ground sloped gently downward," | | 16 | "The sky above was a" | | 17 | "The moss gave softly under" | | 18 | "She caught one in her" | | 19 | "It dissolved against her skin" |
| | ratio | 0.807 | |
| 60.24% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones announced themselves before the grove did—five rough-hewn oaks, ancient and silvered with lichen, arranged in a circle that should not have …" | | 1 | "It tasted of honey and ozone and something older, something like the memory of rain on stones that had never known rain." | | 2 | "The ground sloped gently downward, carpeted in that luminous moss, and in the distance—far further than any clearing could reasonably extend—a grove of silver-b…" | | 3 | "The sky above was a soft violet twilight, scattered with stars that formed unfamiliar constellations, and yet the air held the warmth of late summer." | | 4 | "It dissolved against her skin with a faint chime, leaving a shimmer that sank into her flesh and faded." | | 5 | "The silver grove pulled at them both—Rory could feel the compulsion in it, a gentle tug behind her sternum that had nothing to do with her own desires." | | 6 | "The grass beneath the silver trees was shorter, softer, and scattered with fallen leaves that had crystallized where they landed, each one a delicate tracery of…" | | 7 | "Her silver hair moved without wind, and her lavender eyes reflected light that wasn't there." | | 8 | "The silver trees grew closer together, their trunks twisting in patterns that seemed to shift when Rory wasn't looking directly at them." | | 9 | "Their eyes were wary, but there was excitement there too, buried deep—the same unreasonable curiosity that had made them travel all this way." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 23 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 47 | | tagDensity | 0.213 | | leniency | 0.426 | | rawRatio | 0.1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.043 | |