Run: 2026-10-27-01M5YEAZ56X9AAY77H256RVFN9

Run Details

Duration:
7m 42s
Cost:
$0.114544
Provider:
Moonshot AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Quinn checked the worn leather watch on her left wrist at the bottom of the maintenance stairs. Two eleven in the morning. Rain still shone in her close-cropped salt-and-pepper hair, though none of it reached this far beneath Camden. Police tape had been knotted around a tiled column because there was nothing else to fasten it to. Beyond it, the abandoned platform held a market. Stalls stood between advertising panels whose paper had rotted into lace. Glass jars contained roots, teeth and liquids that gave off their own faint light. A row of stoppered bottles sweated against the cold. Envelopes sealed with black wax lay in weighted trays, each labelled with a price rather than a name. Lanterns hung from hooks driven into mortar older than the Metropolitan Police. At the platform edge, a man lay on his back with one shoe resting against the yellow line. DS Pryce waited beside the body, his paper overshoes already grey with dust. “Male, somewhere between forty-five and sixty. No wallet, no phone. Wound to the left temple. Ms Kowalski called it in at one thirty-seven. Response unit found her on the stairs with enough books to open a branch library.” Quinn stood square to the body and looked along the platform. Three crime-scene lamps burned around it. Elsewhere, the stalls receded into brown gloom. “Where is everyone?” “Gone. My working version is an argument after trading. Somebody shoves him, he hits his head on the coping, and our traders decide this is an excellent time to pack. Ms Kowalski arrives for the end of it and finds him.” “Does she agree?” “She agrees about the market. Less keen on the rest.” Quinn crouched outside the tape. The dead man wore a felted coat over a collarless shirt. Blood had stiffened the fabric around his neck. The wound at his temple was narrow, black at the centre and surrounded by a bruise the colour of a crushed plum. His head rested twenty centimetres from the stone coping. Pryce pointed with his pen. “There. One fall, one impact. No weapon for our scene-of-crime friends to hunt through the bins.” Quinn leaned closer without crossing the tape. The coping carried seventy years of soot. Its chipped edge showed pale stone, but none of the chips looked fresh. No blood marked it. Beneath the dead man’s head, the platform dust lay smooth. His collar had absorbed enough blood to hold a fold. “Lift his shoulder when the pathologist finishes.” Pryce lowered his pen. “You’ve developed X-ray vision?” “The back of his coat is the wrong colour.” Pryce looked at the exposed strip of fabric near the corpse’s armpit. Pale grit clung to the wool. Quinn rubbed a little dust from the platform between her gloved fingers. It was black and oily, ground down from decades of brake smoke and tunnel dirt. She moved to the dead man’s boots. Dust whitened the toes. The heels were clean. “If he was dragged, where are the marks?” “Carried, then. Doesn’t ruin the theory. Somebody could have moved him after he fell.” “From where?” Pryce’s gaze travelled along the empty platform. “That’s the part we’ll ask people once we’ve found them.” Quinn rose and walked between the stalls. Pryce followed, his shoes crackling on grit. No stock lay crushed underfoot. Nobody had swept a table clear in haste or abandoned a cash tin with its drawer hanging open. Crates stood in stacks, their lids tied down with cord. Glassware had been wrapped in felt. Folding chairs rested in ordered bundles, seat to seat, legs aligned. At one stall, a scale sat inside its fitted box. At another, three bundles of dried leaves had been labelled, weighed and packed into separate compartments. A handwritten ledger lay beneath a stone so its pages would not curl. Quinn lifted the stone with two fingers and turned a page. Columns of prices. Times. Initials beside completed sales. “Panic doesn’t wrap glass,” she said. “They could have packed before the argument.” “Then the argument didn’t empty the Market.” A woman sat on a bench beyond the last stall, watched by a uniformed constable. Round glasses reflected the lantern above her. Red curls had escaped the knot at her neck, and freckles stood out against her pale skin. A worn leather satchel rested between her feet, its flap strained by the corners of books. Quinn stopped in front of her. “Ms Kowalski.” “Eva.” “Not while we’re standing around a body.” Eva tucked a curl behind her left ear. Her green eyes moved to Quinn’s taped sleeves, then to the platform. “I told your sergeant what I saw.” “Tell me why you came.” “To buy a catalogue from a manuscript dealer. His stall was packed. I walked the length of the platform, found that man and called you.” “What is this place?” Eva glanced at Pryce. “He thinks it’s an unlicensed antiques fair with theatrical packaging.” Pryce folded his arms. “The jar with the whisper in it didn’t improve my view.” “It’s the Veil Market,” Eva said. “Enchanted goods, restricted alchemy, information. Some legal. Some not. Most of it depends which side of the law you’re standing on when you ask.” “And the station?” “Only the current address. The Market moves every full moon. It came here at the last one.” Quinn looked back towards the body. “Did you know him?” “No.” “Had you seen him before?” “No.” “Did you touch him?” “His wrist. There was no pulse.” Quinn returned to the tape. A disc lay in the dead man’s open coat pocket, no larger than a two-pound coin. It looked like bone, polished by handling and pierced near the rim. Three notches had been cut into one side. Eva watched from the bench. “An entry token.” Quinn held it up. “For the station?” “For the Market. Traders and customers need one. The cuts show which gathering issued it.” “So he didn’t wander down here looking for a place to sleep.” “No.” Pryce shifted his weight. “Or somebody put it on him so we’d think he belonged.” Quinn turned the token over. Grime filled the piercing. The edges had worn smooth. Whatever its history, it had not been placed in a clean pocket straight from a workshop. Near the corpse’s left hand lay a small brass compass. Verdigris had collected around its hinge and in the seam of its casing. Protective sigils covered its face, cut so fine that they vanished unless the glass caught the light. Quinn crouched again. A green crescent stained the crease below the dead man’s little finger. “Don’t touch that,” Eva said. Quinn looked over. “Because it’s evidence?” “Because you haven’t asked what it does.” “What does it do?” “It’s a Veil Compass. Shade work. The needle points towards the nearest supernatural rift or portal.” Pryce gave a short breath through his nose. “Useful. Ours appears to be pointing at a brick wall.” The compass needle did indeed aim down the platform, away from the body and the market entrance. Quinn lifted it with gloved fingers. The needle trembled, then settled. She turned the casing through ninety degrees. The needle returned to its original bearing. “Magnet in the wall,” Pryce said. “Brass case,” Eva replied. “And the needle isn’t iron.” Quinn rotated it again. The result did not change. She carried it two paces to the left. The needle shifted against the sigils, keeping the same distant point. “Could it be broken?” “It could be. That wouldn’t make it north.” Quinn set the compass down and followed its bearing. The platform ended in a shallow service recess. An enamel sign warned staff against entering without authorisation. Beneath it, an iron door sat flush with its frame, painted the same brown as the walls. Black dust coated the hinges. Pryce came up behind her. “We checked that. It’s a service cupboard.” “Who checked it?” “The response officer.” “Did he open it?” Pryce didn’t answer. Quinn crouched at the threshold. Black platform dust covered the floor on either side. Directly beneath the door lay a thin crescent of pale grit. She looked back at the corpse. Ochre dust on his coat. Blood in his collar. Clean heels. No blood on the coping. “Open it.” Pryce tried the handle. The latch gave with a snap that travelled along the empty tunnel. The door opened onto a room barely large enough for a desk. Ochre mortar dust coated the floor. A wooden stool lay on its side beside a wall streaked with old rust. Near the opposite corner, a dark stain spread across the concrete, its edge broken by two partial footprints. A smear crossed the threshold. It ended where the platform dust began. Eva had risen from the bench. The constable put a hand out to stop her coming closer, but she remained where she was, one curl caught against her glasses. Quinn stepped aside so Pryce could see. “He was struck in here,” she said. “He bled on that floor. Someone carried him out and laid him beside the coping.” Pryce looked from the stain to the body down the platform. “The fall was dressing.” Quinn held the bone token against the light, then lowered it. “The Market was closing. The stalls were packed. Our dead man came with a token and held that compass before he died. None of it puts him in a fight at the platform edge.” Behind her, the abandoned stalls stood in their orderly rows, every wrapped jar and folded chair awaiting collection. Quinn set her shoulders and surveyed the room again. “He was killed in here. Everything around his body was arranged for whoever came to find him.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences62
tagDensity0.097
leniency0.194
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1610
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
81.37% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1610
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"gloom"
count1
1
word"aligned"
count1
2
word"whisper"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"gloom"
1"aligned"
2"whisper"
3"pulse"
4"weight"
5"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences123
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences123
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences179
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1610
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions49
wordCount1081
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity2.04
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Metropolitan1
Police2
Pryce16
Quinn22
Eva7
persons
0"Pryce"
1"Quinn"
2"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore0.482
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences82
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like bone, polished by handling an"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1610
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences179
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs110
mean14.64
std14.24
cv0.973
sampleLengths
039
126
264
318
413
538
624
73
841
93
1010
1155
125
1316
147
1534
1610
177
184
194
209
2145
2215
238
2414
252
267
2710
2814
2950
3039
3119
326
337
347
3555
366
372
381
397
4020
417
425
4325
444
454
4610
474
4811
4930
93.85% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences123
matches
0"been knotted"
1"been wrapped"
2"been labelled"
3"been placed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs181
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences179
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1086
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.02117863720073665
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.003683241252302026
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences179
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences179
mean8.99
std6.28
cv0.699
sampleLengths
017
15
217
318
48
511
614
79
818
912
1018
1113
1238
1311
146
157
163
1741
183
1910
205
2111
228
2322
249
255
2616
277
287
2913
304
3110
3210
337
344
354
369
3712
386
3912
4015
417
424
434
448
4514
462
477
4810
497
76.35% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.4748603351955307
totalSentences179
uniqueOpeners85
57.97% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences115
matches
0"Elsewhere, the stalls receded into"
1"Directly beneath the door lay"
ratio0.017
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount11
totalSentences115
matches
0"His head rested twenty centimetres"
1"Its chipped edge showed pale"
2"His collar had absorbed enough"
3"It was black and oily,"
4"She moved to the dead"
5"Her green eyes moved to"
6"It looked like bone, polished"
7"She turned the casing through"
8"She carried it two paces"
9"She looked back at the"
10"It ended where the platform"
ratio0.096
73.04% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount89
totalSentences115
matches
0"Quinn checked the worn leather"
1"Police tape had been knotted"
2"Stalls stood between advertising panels"
3"Glass jars contained roots, teeth"
4"A row of stoppered bottles"
5"Envelopes sealed with black wax"
6"Lanterns hung from hooks driven"
7"DS Pryce waited beside the"
8"Quinn stood square to the"
9"Quinn crouched outside the tape."
10"The dead man wore a"
11"Blood had stiffened the fabric"
12"The wound at his temple"
13"His head rested twenty centimetres"
14"Pryce pointed with his pen."
15"Quinn leaned closer without crossing"
16"The coping carried seventy years"
17"Its chipped edge showed pale"
18"His collar had absorbed enough"
19"Pryce lowered his pen."
ratio0.774
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences115
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences62
tagDensity0.097
leniency0.194
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
90.5306%