Run: 2026-10-27-01M5YEB4EKAYA5KPEJ4HD66JC8

Run Details

Duration:
8m 26s
Cost:
$0.118798
Provider:
Moonshot AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The sole of Quinn’s right shoe skidded on Camden High Street. She caught a shop shutter, took the impact through her palm and kept Marr’s grey coat in sight. He had twenty metres on her, a canvas satchel clamped under one arm and no concern for the traffic he forced to brake. Rain had turned the road into a smear of brake lights. Water ran from Quinn’s cropped salt-and-pepper hair and gathered beneath her collar. She lowered her shoulders and ran. “Police! Out of the road!” A man filming from beneath a shop awning lifted his phone higher. Quinn put a hand on the lens as she passed and shoved it down. Marr dodged between two buses. A black cab struck its horn and slid towards the kerb. Quinn slapped its bonnet, crossed in front of it and caught the sulphurous stink of wet brakes through the open window. Four hours earlier, she had watched Marr leave the Raven’s Nest beneath its green neon sign. Her source had placed him in the room behind the bookshelf, the room that appeared on no licensing plan. He had entered empty-handed and emerged with the satchel. Six minutes with the clique had given him a shape to carry and a reason to look over his shoulder. He had made her at Camden Lock. He had walked one circuit of the food stalls to confirm it, bought nothing, then run. Marr hooked an arm around a stack of delivery crates and dragged them into her path. Quinn planted one foot on the bottom crate, vaulted as the stack folded and landed in a stream of packaging foam. Something burst beneath her heel. She kept moving. She pulled her radio from inside her coat. “Control, Detective Quinn. Foot pursuit, male suspect, south from Camden High Street. Grey coat, canvas satchel. He’s armed.” Static worried at the speaker. “Say again, Quinn. Your location’s breaking up.” Marr turned into an alley between a shuttered pharmacy and a chicken shop. Quinn followed him into the smell of grease and rain-filled cardboard. “Units to the service roads behind the high street. I need a containment, not a convoy.” “Units are two minutes out.” Marr glanced back. She had gained three metres. He kicked a wheelie bin at her shins. Quinn twisted past it, clipped the wall and lost the ground she had made up. Beyond the alley, a hoarding carried a demolition notice softened by old rain. Marr ducked through a gap where the plywood had been prised away. Quinn went through after him. An abandoned station entrance sat behind the hoarding, its tiled front squeezed between newer buildings. The old roundel had been painted black. A torn shutter exposed a stairwell descending below street level, and the handrail shone where countless palms had polished away the rust. Her intelligence file had given this place three lines and a warning. The Veil Market. Entry by token. A location that changed with every full moon. The rest had consisted of statements from people her superintendent no longer considered reliable. Marr took the stairs two at a time. Quinn caught the satchel strap on the sixth step and hauled him backwards. He struck the tiles with one shoulder. She trapped his arm, reached for her cuffs and saw the knife come out of his sleeve. The blade opened her coat from elbow to wrist. Cold air touched her skin before the blood did. She seized his knife wrist and drove it against the wall. “You’re under arrest.” “For running?” “We’ll start with the knife.” Marr slammed his forehead into her cheek. Light jumped across Quinn’s vision. Her grip loosened. He slashed through the satchel strap, tore himself free and stumbled down the remaining steps. A white disc on a black cord dropped from his ripped coat pocket and bounced off the tiles. Marr did not stop for it. Quinn scooped it up as she passed. Bone, not ivory. A groove had been cut through its centre and filled with something black. The cord was still warm from his pocket. At the bottom, an iron door blocked the passage. Marr pressed a second disc into a brass slot. A shutter snapped open behind it, and an eye examined him through the gap. “Business?” “Buying.” The door opened on warm air and the murmur of a crowd. Marr looked back at Quinn. Blood ran along her wrist and dripped from her fingertips. “Your badge won’t open this.” “Neither will a satchel full of stolen names.” “It’s not names I’m selling.” He slipped through. The door closed behind him. Quinn reached it before the echo of his footsteps died. She struck the iron with the heel of her hand. “Metropolitan Police. Open the door.” The shutter moved aside. The eye reappeared, pale and heavily lidded. “Token.” She held her warrant card to the gap. “That man assaulted a police officer.” “Then don’t buy from him.” “There are units on their way. You can open this door or explain an obstruction charge from the back of a van.” The eye dropped to her card, then rose to her face. “Not currency.” The shutter closed. Quinn keyed her radio. “Control, Quinn. Suspect has entered a structure below the disused station entrance. I need units behind the hoarding, service alley off—” The speaker produced a long, empty hiss. She tried again and gave the full location. No answer came. Her phone had one bar when she pulled it out; by the time she opened a message to her sergeant, the bar had gone. Rain hissed on the steps above her. Beyond the iron door came a restrained percussion, too even for footsteps, and a woman laughing close to the other side. Quinn climbed two stairs towards the street. Her training offered a clean sequence. Hold the entrance. Preserve the token. Wait for uniform. Seal both ends of the alley and obtain a warrant for premises whose ownership would occupy someone in legal services for a week. She looked at her worn leather watch. The second hand crossed twelve. Marr had been inside for forty-eight seconds. In fifty more, the satchel could pass to another buyer. In two minutes, he could leave through an exit that did not appear on any plan. The file said the Market moved at the full moon. Tonight was the last reliable intelligence they had. Her thumb found the groove in the bone disc. Three years ago, DS Morris had gone through a service door while Quinn held a stairwell and waited for instructions. They had found him in a dry room with water in his lungs. At the inquest, she had answered every question with the precision expected of her and supplied nothing that explained the wet footprints stopping beside his body. She descended the two steps. The cut on her arm had started to throb. She folded her coat sleeve over it, pressed the cloth hard against the skin and knocked again. The eye returned. Quinn opened her palm. “One entry?” “If it’s valid.” “And if it isn’t?” “You get to keep it.” A brass tray slid out beneath the slot. She laid the disc on it. The tray withdrew. Something clicked behind the door, followed by a wet crunch. The gatekeeper gave a small grunt. “First visit?” “That obvious?” “You’re still standing like you expect a camera.” Quinn lowered her hand from the place where her warrant card usually sat. “Rules?” “No blood on the tiles. No handling stock without an invitation. No drawn weapons.” “I’m bleeding.” “Then mind the tiles.” The iron door opened. Quinn stepped through. A narrow stair carried her down between tiled walls. Old adverts had been scraped away, leaving pale rectangles and fragments of smiling faces. With each step, the rain lost definition. By the final turn, she could hear only the Market: coins on glass, low bargaining, a violin being tuned, something knocking from inside a closed box. The passage opened onto a disused Tube platform. Stalls covered the platform and continued along the track bed, their roofs stitched from tarpaulin, velvet and sections of police incident tape. Lamps hung from the old electrical cables. Their bulbs burned white, amber and a chemical green that stained the tiles beneath them. Quinn stopped at the edge and counted exits. The passage behind her. A service staircase choked with merchandise. Two tunnel mouths, one curtained, the other open. On her left, a vendor weighed red crystals on a set of brass scales. Each measurement made the flame above his burner bend away from the pan. Across the tracks, keys turned themselves inside a glass case while a customer read their teeth through a magnifying lens. A woman in a post office uniform sold envelopes from a suitcase, naming no prices until her buyers whispered into her ear. Quinn put her phone away. No service. No photograph would focus on the vendor with the scales; the screen showed only a bright smear where his hands should have been. She wiped her bleeding fingers on the inside of her coat and moved into the crowd. People gave her room without appearing to notice her. A man with mirrors sewn into his lapels stepped aside. Two teenagers sharing a paper cone of blue powder stopped talking until she passed. Quinn kept her gaze on coats, satchels and hands. Tomás Herrera worked beneath a surgical lamp at the far end of the platform. A St Christopher medallion hung against his shirt, swinging as he leaned over his patient. His short dark curls were damp with sweat. The scar along his left forearm disappeared beneath a rolled sleeve and emerged again near his wrist, white against his olive skin. His patient lay across a camp bed with a wound below the ribs. Black threads moved under the skin around it. Herrera held a clamp in one hand and a curved needle in the other. “Herrera.” “You’re standing in my light.” Quinn shifted one pace. “Marr. Grey coat. Canvas satchel, cut strap.” “Does he need treatment?” “He needs a cell.” “Then you’ve both had a disappointing night.” The black threads around the wound drew tight. Herrera adjusted the clamp without looking at her. “I can come back with a warrant for every stall on this platform.” “You can come back with an orchestra. Keep your voice down.” His patient’s eyes opened. The pupils had narrowed to vertical cuts. Quinn looked away first. She scanned the track side and found a flash of grey beside the open tunnel. Herrera’s needle paused. “If I point, will you stop blocking my lamp?” “Yes.” He lifted his chin towards the tracks. “He went through the chemists’ row. Keep your badge covered. You’ll empty my clinic.” Quinn was already moving. She passed bottles bearing broken prohibition seals, a table of passports whose photographs changed when tilted, and a man selling revolvers wrapped in altar cloth. At the platform edge, she saw Marr push a fold of banknotes into a vendor’s hand. The satchel was gone. In its place he carried a narrow metal case. Marr glanced back and saw her. He vaulted onto the track bed, scattering gravel, and ran for the open tunnel. Quinn jumped down after him. Her shoes struck beside the rail. She found her footing and ran.
created_at"2026-10-27T10:26:22.302Z" 10/27/2026, 10:26:22 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1884
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
78.77% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1884
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"echo"
count1
1
word"footsteps"
count2
2
word"structure"
count1
3
word"restrained"
count1
4
word"throb"
count1
5
word"velvet"
count1
6
word"scanned"
count1
highlights
0"echo"
1"footsteps"
2"structure"
3"restrained"
4"throb"
5"velvet"
6"scanned"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences159
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences159
filterMatches
0"notice"
1"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences201
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1884
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
69.65% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions60
wordCount1618
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity1.61
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Quinn26
Camden2
High1
Street1
Marr15
Raven1
Nest1
Lock1
Veil1
Market3
Morris1
Tube1
Herrera4
St1
Christopher1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Marr"
2"Raven"
3"Market"
4"Morris"
5"Herrera"
places
0"Camden"
1"High"
2"Street"
3"St"
4"Christopher"
globalScore0.697
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences120
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1884
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences201
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs115
mean16.38
std16.02
cv0.978
sampleLengths
052
129
25
326
437
564
623
745
88
918
105
117
1224
1316
145
158
1648
175
1844
1940
208
2113
2224
2318
2411
253
262
275
287
2941
306
3131
3232
331
341
3512
3615
375
388
395
408
4120
425
4311
441
458
466
475
4822
4911
94.23% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences159
matches
0"been prised"
1"been painted"
2"been scraped"
3"being tuned"
4"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs276
matches
0"was already moving"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences201
ratio0.01
matches
0"Her phone had one bar when she pulled it out; by the time she opened a message to her sergeant, the bar had gone."
1"No photograph would focus on the vendor with the scales; the screen showed only a bright smear where his hands should have been."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1623
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.01725200246457178
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0024645717806531116
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences201
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences201
mean9.37
std5.97
cv0.637
sampleLengths
011
118
223
311
412
56
65
712
814
95
1011
1121
1216
1319
149
1520
167
1716
1816
1921
205
213
228
2318
245
257
2613
2711
2816
295
303
315
328
3315
3413
3512
365
3715
387
3922
4012
413
423
438
4414
458
4613
477
4817
499
54.89% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.35323383084577115
totalSentences201
uniqueOpeners71
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences158
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences158
matches
0"She caught a shop shutter,"
1"He had twenty metres on"
2"She lowered her shoulders and"
3"Her source had placed him"
4"He had entered empty-handed and"
5"He had made her at"
6"He had walked one circuit"
7"She kept moving."
8"She pulled her radio from"
9"She had gained three metres."
10"He kicked a wheelie bin"
11"Her intelligence file had given"
12"He struck the tiles with"
13"She trapped his arm, reached"
14"She seized his knife wrist"
15"Her grip loosened."
16"He slashed through the satchel"
17"He slipped through."
18"She struck the iron with"
19"She held her warrant card"
ratio0.253
45.44% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount131
totalSentences158
matches
0"The sole of Quinn’s right"
1"She caught a shop shutter,"
2"He had twenty metres on"
3"Rain had turned the road"
4"Water ran from Quinn’s cropped"
5"She lowered her shoulders and"
6"A man filming from beneath"
7"Quinn put a hand on"
8"Marr dodged between two buses."
9"A black cab struck its"
10"Quinn slapped its bonnet, crossed"
11"Her source had placed him"
12"He had entered empty-handed and"
13"He had made her at"
14"He had walked one circuit"
15"Marr hooked an arm around"
16"Quinn planted one foot on"
17"Something burst beneath her heel."
18"She kept moving."
19"She pulled her radio from"
ratio0.829
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences158
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences70
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Her source had placed him in the room behind the bookshelf, the room that appeared on no licensing plan."
1"At the inquest, she had answered every question with the precision expected of her and supplied nothing that explained the wet footprints stopping beside his bo…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
88.0996%