Run: 2026-10-27-01M5YEETH0AYNGS5HFT41F69TP

Run Details

Duration:
43.0s
Cost:
$0.015687
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory came down the stairs with a parcel under her arm and found a woman standing beneath the photographs by the door. Rain darkened the shoulders of the woman’s coat. She held a folded umbrella by its crooked handle and studied a picture of Soho after the war. Rory stopped on the last step. The woman turned. Her hair had been cut close to her head, and the silver hoops she used to wear had gone. She wore a charcoal suit beneath her coat, with a strip of white shirt showing at each cuff. “Rory?” The parcel slipped against Rory’s ribs. She caught it before it fell. “Eva.” For a moment, neither moved. Then Eva put down the umbrella and crossed the room. Rory shifted the parcel behind her back so Eva could put her arms around her. The hug pressed a wet patch from Eva’s coat against Rory’s cheek. “You still smell of rain,” Rory said. “You smell of garlic.” “I work in a Chinese restaurant.” “I know. You told me.” Eva stepped back and looked at her. Rory had expected the short hair to make her friend’s face look harder, but it showed the small nick beneath her ear, where she had caught herself with a razor at seventeen. Silas stood behind the bar, polishing a glass. His silver ring struck the stem. “Friend of yours?” “Eva. We grew up together.” Rory laid the parcel on a stool. “This is Silas. I live upstairs.” “Is that what the stairs are for?” Eva glanced at the parcel. “I thought you were bringing him a present.” “It’s a replacement tap.” “The old one dripped,” Silas added. “It sprayed the ceiling.” “That was once.” Eva smiled at him, then took another look at Rory. Rory wore her delivery jacket, unzipped over a black T-shirt, and had scraped her hair behind her ears. There was a grease mark on one sleeve from the chain of her bicycle. “You’re in London,” Eva said. “I’ve been here three years.” “I meant tonight.” Eva took off her coat. “I walked past the green sign and remembered you lived over a bar. I couldn’t remember the name.” “You could have rung.” “I didn’t know whether you’d changed your number again.” “I sent you the new one.” “Two years ago.” Rory pulled out a stool. “You could have rung two years ago.” Eva sat. She set her umbrella against the bar, where it dripped onto the floorboards. Silas placed a cloth beneath it. “What can I get you?” “A lager, please.” “Rory?” “Tea. If there’s milk.” “There’s milk.” Silas filled a glass from the tap. His left leg lagged when he crossed to the kettle, and Rory reached for the mugs before he got there. “I’ve got it.” “I know where they are.” “So do I.” She took two mugs down, and he let her keep them. Eva watched the exchange with her hands folded on the bar. Her nails were short and bare. At school she had painted them with correction fluid whenever a teacher confiscated her polish. “You used to drink whisky,” she said. “I used to drink anything you put in front of me.” “You drank half my father’s whisky and filled the bottle with water.” “You filled it. I held the funnel.” “He blamed me.” “Your little brother blamed you. Your father blamed the dog.” Eva laughed. Rory remembered the kitchen in Cardiff: the yellow cupboards, the dog asleep under the radiator, Eva crouched on a chair with a funnel made from an envelope. She remembered standing guard at the door, enjoying the noise Eva made when she laughed with her mouth full. Silas put Eva’s lager down. “On a tab?” Eva reached into her coat for a card. “Mine,” Rory said. Eva looked up. “I can buy a drink.” “So can I.” “You work here too?” “I wash glasses when Silas needs a hand.” “And fix taps?” “I carry boxes. The plumber fixes taps.” Silas picked up the parcel. “Tomorrow,” Rory told him. “I only wanted to check the label.” “You checked it when it arrived.” He gave her a look, tucked the box under his arm and carried it through the back. Rory poured water over her tea bag. When she turned, Eva had taken the stool beside hers. “I’m in court tomorrow,” Eva said. “That’s why I’m in town. Housing case.” “You’re a solicitor?” “Barrister.” Rory looked at the cuffs, the coat, the umbrella with its polished wooden handle. “You hated barristers.” “I hated your father’s friends.” “You once called one of them a stuffed ham.” “He put his hand on my knee at your birthday lunch.” Rory’s mug knocked against the bar. “You never told me that.” “I told him to move it.” “And then?” “He moved it.” Rory searched Eva’s face. She remembered a long table, her father carving beef, Eva refusing a second helping while his friend poured himself more wine. “I thought you were cross because he called you a little socialist.” “I was cross about that too.” “You should have told me.” Eva took a drink. A thin line of foam stayed on her upper lip; she wiped it away with her thumb. “What would you have done?” “I don’t know. I’d have done something.” “You were sixteen. You’d have gone red and asked him if he wanted potatoes.” Rory wrapped both hands around her mug. The heat reached the crescent scar on her left wrist. “That sounds right.” “It isn’t a charge against you.” “You remembered it, though.” “I remembered him. You brought him up.” The kettle clicked as its metal cooled. At the other end of the bar, a man shut his newspaper and asked Silas for the bill. Coins scraped across the counter. Eva took off her jacket. There was a crease at each elbow, and a loose thread hung from one cuff. She pulled it free and rolled it between her fingers. “I saw your mother in Cardiff last spring,” she said. Rory glanced at her. “She didn’t mention it.” “We met at a crossing. She asked about my work, and I asked about you.” “What did she say?” “That you were well. That you liked London.” “She got half of it.” Eva waited, but Rory drank her tea. She had let it brew too long. “She asked if I’d seen you,” Eva went on. “What did you say?” “The truth.” “That we hadn’t?” “That I’d spoken to you when you left Cardiff, and not much since.” Rory set the mug down. “She rang me after that.” “She didn’t tell me she would.” “She rang to ask why I’d given you my address and not her.” “I didn’t know she hadn’t got it.” “I hadn’t given it to anyone yet. You had the restaurant address.” Eva looked at the coaster beneath her glass. She turned it over, then back. “I gave it to her.” Rory drew her sleeve over the scar. “She came here.” “I’m sorry. She told me she wanted to send you a birthday card.” “She sent a card. Then she came here.” “What happened?” “She stood outside the restaurant until Yu-Fei brought her in. Yu-Fei gave her tea, and I finished my deliveries.” “You wouldn’t speak to her?” “I spoke to her after.” “And?” “She asked when I was coming home. I told her I wasn’t.” Eva ran her finger along the rim of her glass. “I should have asked you first.” “Yes.” The man with the newspaper left. Cold air entered with the sound of traffic and faded when the door shut. Eva’s umbrella had stopped dripping. “She looked frightened,” Eva said. “Your mother.” “She was frightened. I’d stopped answering her calls.” “Why?” “She kept passing the phone to my father.” Eva picked at the edge of the coaster. “He wanted to talk about my degree,” Rory said. “Mum wanted me to talk to him about it. I wanted them both to stop asking when I’d go back.” “You were good at it.” “I passed my exams.” “You used to argue with the lecturer who took your tutorials.” “He told us a woman’s bank statements were evidence that she couldn’t manage money. She’d emptied the account because her husband kept taking her wages.” “You won that argument.” “I went home and looked up the case, and I found out I’d got the dates wrong.” “You never told me that.” “You bought me chips to celebrate. I didn’t want to give them back.” Eva smiled, but Rory kept her eyes on the tea bag string wound around her finger. “You could still finish,” Eva said. “I could.” “Would you want to?” “Not enough to do it.” Eva sat back. She had a small burn on the side of her hand, a pale patch against her skin. “You sound different.” “I’m five years older than the last time you saw me.” “That’s not what I meant.” “What did you mean?” Eva took a breath. “You used to ask me what I thought. About everything. A haircut, a course, whether you should tell your father to stop bringing you application forms.” “I remember.” “You stopped asking after you met Evan.” Rory unwound the string from her finger. “I asked you about him.” “Once.” “You didn’t like him.” “He wouldn’t let you answer a question without answering it for you.” “He let me.” Eva’s eyes met hers. “He did it at the pub. I asked if you wanted another drink, and he told me you’d had enough.” “I had.” “You were halfway through your second.” Rory pulled the tea bag from her mug with a spoon. She laid it on a saucer and pressed it flat. “You came round the next week,” she said. “I brought your umbrella.” “It wasn’t raining.” “You’d left it at my flat.” “You brought it because you wanted to talk about him.” “Yes.” Rory remembered Eva on the doorstep, the umbrella tucked under one arm. Evan had been in the kitchen, making coffee. Rory had kept her voice low, though Eva’s had carried into the hall. “You called him a bully.” “I did.” “I told you to leave.” “You told me I was jealous.” Rory put down the spoon. “I remember that too.” Eva rubbed the loose thread from her cuff between her palms until it disappeared. “You told me I couldn’t stand you having a boyfriend.” “I knew it wasn’t true.” “You knew where to put it, though.” Rory looked towards the back room. Silas had returned to the till; he lifted a bottle from a shelf and checked its label without looking at either of them. “I wanted you to go before he came out,” Rory said. “He’d heard us arguing before. He’d ask questions afterwards.” “You could have come with me.” “I know that now.” “I stood by the gate for an hour.” Rory turned. “Why?” “I thought you’d come out. I thought you’d tell him I’d upset you and take a walk to calm down.” “You should have knocked again.” “He came to the window.” Rory remembered Evan closing the curtains that afternoon. She had asked why, and he had told her the sun was in his eyes. “I didn’t know.” “I went home when it got dark. I kept the umbrella.” “You rang the next day.” “You didn’t answer.” “He’d taken my phone.” Eva gripped her glass. Rory reached for her tea, found it cold, and left it where it was. “I saw the missed calls later,” she said. “I should have rung you back when I got it.” “You rang me when you left.” “Two years later.” “I told you to come to London.” “You did. You found the number for the restaurant too.” “Yu-Fei was looking for someone with a bike.” “I didn’t have one.” “You borrowed mine.” Rory looked down at her stained sleeve. “I still have it.” “The blue one?” “I changed the tyres and the saddle. The bell came off on a bus.” Eva pressed her fingers to her mouth, then lowered them. “That was my brother’s bell.” “He can have it back if he finds the right bus.” Eva laughed, and Rory did too. Eva’s laugh stopped first. “I nearly didn’t answer when you rang,” she said. “I saw your name and let it ring. Then I thought about the umbrella by my front door.” Rory touched the handle of her mug. “I’d have rung again.” “I didn’t know that.” Silas came over with the kettle. “Fresh tea?” Rory nodded and pushed her mug towards him. Eva moved her glass aside to make room. As Silas poured, she picked up the soggy tea bag by its string and carried it to the little bin beneath the counter. “You still take milk?” Rory asked. “Yes.” “You used to put six sugars in.” “Four.” “Six when your mother wasn’t there.” Eva held out her hand for the spoon. “Give me two.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences186
tagDensity0.108
leniency0.215
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2154
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2154
totalAiIsms0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences116
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences116
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences282
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2154
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions55
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"She remembered a long table, her father carving beef, Eva refusing a second helping while his friend poured himself more…"
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions98
wordCount1008
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity4.27
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity7
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Rory41
Eva43
Silas10
Cardiff1
Evan2
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Silas"
3"Evan"
places
0"Soho"
1"Cardiff"
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences75
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2154
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences282
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs233
mean9.24
std8.92
cv0.965
sampleLengths
048
16
240
31
412
51
642
77
84
96
105
1139
1214
133
1418
1520
164
176
184
193
2010
2132
225
235
2426
254
269
276
283
295
307
3115
326
335
343
351
364
372
3827
393
405
413
4211
4332
447
4511
4612
477
483
4910
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences116
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs187
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences282
ratio0.007
matches
0"A thin line of foam stayed on her upper lip; she wiped it away with her thumb."
1"Silas had returned to the till; he lifted a bottle from a shelf and checked its label without looking at either of them."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1008
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount10
adverbRatio0.00992063492063492
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences282
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences282
mean7.64
std5.31
cv0.695
sampleLengths
022
18
218
36
43
519
618
71
86
96
101
115
1210
1315
1412
157
164
176
185
197
2032
218
226
233
2412
256
2612
278
284
296
304
313
3210
3318
3414
355
365
378
3818
394
409
416
423
435
447
452
4613
476
485
493
41.49% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats24
diversityRatio0.1702127659574468
totalSentences282
uniqueOpeners48
34.01% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences98
matches
0"Then Eva put down the"
ratio0.01
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences98
matches
0"She held a folded umbrella"
1"Her hair had been cut"
2"She wore a charcoal suit"
3"She caught it before it"
4"His silver ring struck the"
5"She set her umbrella against"
6"His left leg lagged when"
7"She took two mugs down,"
8"Her nails were short and"
9"She remembered standing guard at"
10"He gave her a look,"
11"She remembered a long table,"
12"She pulled it free and"
13"She had let it brew"
14"She turned it over, then"
15"She had a small burn"
16"She laid it on a"
17"She had asked why, and"
ratio0.184
5.92% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount89
totalSentences98
matches
0"Rory came down the stairs"
1"Rain darkened the shoulders of"
2"She held a folded umbrella"
3"Rory stopped on the last"
4"The woman turned."
5"Her hair had been cut"
6"She wore a charcoal suit"
7"The parcel slipped against Rory’s"
8"She caught it before it"
9"Rory shifted the parcel behind"
10"The hug pressed a wet"
11"Eva stepped back and looked"
12"Rory had expected the short"
13"Silas stood behind the bar,"
14"His silver ring struck the"
15"Rory laid the parcel on"
16"Eva glanced at the parcel"
17"Eva smiled at him, then"
18"Rory wore her delivery jacket,"
19"Eva took off her coat"
ratio0.908
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences98
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Silas added (add)"
dialogueSentences186
tagDensity0.086
leniency0.172
rawRatio0.063
effectiveRatio0.011
86.0474%