Run: 2026-10-27-01M5YEGZA3Y9N0BSAV8SSEQJV3

Run Details

Duration:
6m 20s
Cost:
$0.087472
Provider:
Moonshot AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt snapped back. Aurora opened the door with the chain still fastened and found Lucien Moreau standing in the rain, one hand braced on his ivory-handled cane and the other pressed against his side. Water had loosened his platinum hair from its severe sweep. A lock hung over the amber eye; the black one fixed on her through the narrow gap. Blood darkened his charcoal waistcoat. Rory gripped the edge of the door. “You have a nerve showing up here.” “Several. One of them appears to be bleeding.” She started to close the door. “Aurora. They put your name on my debt.” The chain rattled as she released it. She caught his arm, pulled him across the threshold and slammed the door behind him. One deadbolt. Two. Three. “Cane on the table. Coat off. If you bleed on Ptolemy, I’ll finish what they started.” The tabby looked up from Eva’s encyclopaedia of Mediterranean curses, took in Lucien’s ruined suit and resumed washing his paw. Lucien set the cane beside a stack of research notes. “Your welcome has lost none of its warmth.” “My welcome left with you. Sit down.” He lowered himself onto the only chair not occupied by books. The cramped flat smelled of turmeric from the curry house downstairs, rain-wet wool and the dust of too much paper. Scrolls crowded the windowsill. Eva had annotated the lampshade. Rory had been sleeping on the sofa while her own flat above Silas’s bar dried out from a burst pipe, and her clothes occupied a suitcase beneath the kitchen table. Lucien’s gaze touched the open suitcase, the blanket on the sofa, the cold cup of tea beside her laptop. “Don’t,” she said. “I haven’t asked anything.” “You were about to make the room feel sorry for me.” She took the first-aid box from the bathroom and returned to find him struggling with his coat buttons. His gloves were wet. Blood slicked his fingertips. Rory knocked his hands aside and opened the coat herself. A folded sheet of black paper slid from the inner pocket. Lucien caught it before it reached the floor. “First this.” He held it out. “Then you may lecture me about my clothes.” The paper flexed like skin between her fingers. Her full name crossed its centre in silver ink. Beneath it, lines of narrow script shifted whenever she looked away. She didn’t sit. “Explain.” “My father’s house revived an old claim against me. Your name was added as surety.” “Added by whom?” “A clerk with no imagination and excellent handwriting.” “Lucien.” His jaw tightened. “By my father.” Ptolemy jumped down from the encyclopaedia and disappeared behind the sofa. Rory laid the paper on the table, away from the blood on Lucien’s hand. “And burning it fixes this?” “If you do it. Your refusal has to accompany the fire.” She gave him a long look, then stepped over his outstretched legs and pulled a green notebook from beneath two dictionaries. “What are you doing?” “Checking whether the man who once called a lie of omission ‘an editorial choice’ has edited these instructions.” “I deserved that.” “You don’t get points for agreeing.” Eva’s notes on Avarosi contracts occupied six pages, most of them threats directed at absent scholars. Rory found the clause she needed near the bottom. Named surety. Unsealed claim. Refusal by the named, witnessed by flame. Nothing about transferring the debt to the person holding the match. She carried the paper to the sink. Lucien rose. “Sit.” “You shouldn’t stand over it when it catches.” “Then give me useful information before I strike the match.” He sank back into the chair. “The ink may object.” Rory held the page over the stainless-steel basin. “I, Aurora Carter, refuse this surety and every claim attached to it.” The match flared. Fire took the lower corner, turned blue and raced towards her name. The silver letters writhed. A sound like fingernails inside a glass filled the kitchen, then stopped as her name blackened and vanished. She dropped the last fragment into the sink. Ash settled over a teaspoon. For a moment, neither spoke. Lucien’s shoulders lowered. “Thank you.” “Coat.” This time he obeyed. She helped him out of it, then opened his waistcoat and shirt. A cut ran beneath his ribs, short and deep enough to make her anger change shape. She folded a clean tea towel and pressed it against the wound. He caught a breath through his teeth. “Who did this?” “A collector.” “Where is he?” “Reconsidering his profession in an alley off Hanbury Street.” “And the other one?” “Less enthusiastic about his.” Rory reached for the antiseptic. “You could have led them here.” “Eva’s threshold is warded. Your flat isn’t. I checked.” “You checked my flat?” “I went there first.” The cotton pad paused against his skin. Five months of silence, and he had walked back into her life by checking the locks. She cleaned the cut with brisk, careful strokes. Lucien watched her hands rather than her face. When she bent closer, his breath stirred the hair at her temple. She straightened before the contact could become something she had chosen. “You need stitches.” “I need you not to take me to hospital.” “Conveniently, I wasn’t offering.” She opened the first-aid box wider. “Eva has a closure charm somewhere.” “Second drawer. Beneath the takeaway menus.” Rory stared at him. He had the grace to look away. “You’ve been in this flat since you left?” “No. Before.” “Before I spent the night in your bed, or before you left money with Silas and vanished?” The black eye and the amber one returned to hers. “After.” She found the charm in the second drawer: a paper packet stamped with Eva’s initials and labelled FOR IDIOTS WITH KNIFE WOUNDS. Rory tore it open. “This will pull.” “So will the conversation.” She pressed the charm over the cleaned cut. It tightened beneath her palm, drawing the edges together. Lucien’s hand closed around the back of the chair. Wood creaked. Rory kept her palm against his side until the charm cooled. His skin carried the heat of the magic. Beneath it, his heart struck hard enough for her to feel. “Five months,” she said. “You sent Silas a postcard from Marseille. You sent Eva a warning about a cursed violin. You sent me money.” “I sent what I thought would make it easier.” “For whom?” He didn’t answer. She removed her hand. Lucien caught her wrist before she could step back, then released it at once. His fingers had touched the crescent-shaped scar below her thumb. “I’m sorry,” he said. “No.” “No, you don’t believe me?” “No, you don’t get to be gentle now and expect it to change the order of things.” She dropped the used packet on the table. “I told you about Evan. Enough of it. You knew what it did to me when someone decided what I could cope with and called it kindness.” “Yes.” “Then you decided I could cope with waking up alone. With hearing from Silas that you’d left London. With wondering whether I’d misunderstood every hour before that.” Lucien buttoned his shirt over the charm. The task demanded more attention than it should have; his fingers missed the same button twice. “My father had seen you leaving my rooms,” he said. “I thought distance would make you uninteresting to him.” “And after the first week?” “He remained interested.” “After the first month?” “I remained a coward.” The answer took the floor from under her next question. Lucien pushed himself upright. He looked wrong without the coat and cane, less like a man who could purchase secrets and more like one who had run out of places to put them. “I called it protection because cowardice sounded ugly.” “It sounds ugly now.” “It should.” He rested both hands on the back of the chair. “I could have written. I could have told you the danger and let you choose. Instead, I left you with an explanation that made you the mistake.” Rory folded the bloodied towel in half. Then in half again. “I checked my phone every morning for a month.” His mouth parted, but nothing came out. “Not all day,” she said. “I had work. I had a life. Don’t look so pleased.” “I’m not.” “You look like you’ve been punched in a different place.” “That is closer.” She put the towel down. “What do you want, Lucien?” “At present, not to fall over.” “After that.” He drew a breath. The charm at his ribs pulled; he ignored it. “I want to come back without an emergency. I want to argue with you over breakfast and discover whether you always steal the blankets or did it once to punish me.” “I relocated them. There’s a legal distinction.” “There is not.” “You never studied law.” “No. I studied you and left before the examination.” She hated that he could still make something in her chest loosen. She hated the familiar angle of his mouth, the damp collar against his neck, the fact that he had counted the buttons wrong because she was standing close. “You think this is charming?” she asked. “No. I think it’s true. I’ve exhausted charming.” “What happens when you become frightened again?” “I become frightened in the same room.” “And if I tell you to leave?” “I leave after saying goodbye. I don’t send Silas with an envelope.” Rory looked at the black ash in the sink. On the table, his cane lay beside Eva’s notes, its concealed blade still sheathed. He had put every weapon down when she asked. “This doesn’t mean you’re forgiven,” she said. “I understand.” “It doesn’t mean we’re back where we were.” “We weren’t honest enough there to make it worth returning to.” She crossed the space between them and took hold of his open shirt collar. His hands stayed on the chair. “Ask me,” she said. “May I kiss you?” “You’re learning.” She kissed him before he could answer. Lucien made a low sound against her mouth, surprise giving way to hunger. His hand settled at her waist, warm through her shirt, but he let her set the distance. Rory kept one palm against his uninjured side. The kiss carried none of their old careful bargaining. She took his lower lip between her teeth; he gripped the chair again and laughed when she pulled back. “Did I hurt you?” “Briefly.” “Which part?” “Yes.” She struck his shoulder with two fingers. He caught her hand and kissed the scar on her wrist, then waited. Rory nodded. His lips brushed the same place once more. “The sofa’s narrow,” she said. “I’ve slept in worse conditions.” “You’re not sleeping yet. I need to make sure that charm holds.” “Of course.” “And you can stop looking delighted. You’re still an idiot with a knife wound.” He glanced at Eva’s label on the table. “The documentation supports you.” Rory steered him towards the sofa and swept a pile of scrolls onto the floor. Ptolemy emerged from behind it, inspected Lucien’s boots and jumped onto his lap before he had fully sat down. Lucien went still. “He remembers you,” Rory said. “He has put his claws through my trousers.” “He expresses affection through property damage.” She sat beside them. Lucien laid his free hand, palm up, on the cushion between them. Rory slipped her fingers through his. Ptolemy settled across both their laps. Lucien looked down at the cat, then at her, and had the sense not to say anything else.
created_at"2026-10-27T10:29:33.648Z" 10/27/2026, 10:29:33 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences112
tagDensity0.125
leniency0.25
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1923
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
68.80% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1923
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"warmth"
count1
1
word"raced"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"charm"
count7
4
word"familiar"
count1
5
word"affection"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"raced"
2"silence"
3"charm"
4"familiar"
5"affection"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences131
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences131
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences229
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1923
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions27
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
73.66% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions48
wordCount1179
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.53
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien18
Moreau1
Eva6
Mediterranean1
Silas1
Avarosi1
Rory17
Ptolemy3
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Eva"
3"Silas"
4"Rory"
5"Ptolemy"
places(empty)
globalScore0.737
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences87
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1923
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences229
matches
0"hated that he"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs153
mean12.57
std12.44
cv0.99
sampleLengths
036
132
214
38
46
58
626
716
820
918
107
1170
1219
133
144
1511
1626
1710
1819
1914
2028
214
2215
233
248
251
266
2711
2819
2911
3021
314
3218
333
346
3547
367
372
381
398
4010
4110
4220
4337
4413
455
465
471
484
4940
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences131
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs209
matches
0"was standing"
92.95% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount4
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences229
ratio0.017
matches
0"A lock hung over the amber eye; the black one fixed on her through the narrow gap."
1"The task demanded more attention than it should have; his fingers missed the same button twice."
2"The charm at his ribs pulled; he ignored it."
3"She took his lower lip between her teeth; he gripped the chair again and laughed when she pulled back."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1185
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"other pressed against his"
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.030379746835443037
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0016877637130801688
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences229
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences229
mean8.4
std6.19
cv0.737
sampleLengths
05
131
210
317
45
57
67
78
86
98
107
1115
122
131
141
1516
1620
1710
188
197
2011
2120
224
235
2430
2519
263
274
2811
2918
304
314
3210
3311
348
356
368
378
389
3911
403
411
4215
433
448
451
463
473
4811
4914
48.91% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.314410480349345
totalSentences229
uniqueOpeners72
29.50% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences113
matches
0"Then in half again."
ratio0.009
57.17% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount46
totalSentences113
matches
0"She started to close the"
1"She caught his arm, pulled"
2"He lowered himself onto the"
3"She took the first-aid box"
4"His gloves were wet."
5"He held it out"
6"Her full name crossed its"
7"She didn’t sit."
8"His jaw tightened."
9"She gave him a long"
10"She carried the paper to"
11"He sank back into the"
12"She dropped the last fragment"
13"She helped him out of"
14"She folded a clean tea"
15"He caught a breath through"
16"She cleaned the cut with"
17"She straightened before the contact"
18"She opened the first-aid box"
19"He had the grace to"
ratio0.407
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount106
totalSentences113
matches
0"The third deadbolt snapped back."
1"Aurora opened the door with"
2"Water had loosened his platinum"
3"A lock hung over the"
4"Blood darkened his charcoal waistcoat."
5"Rory gripped the edge of"
6"She started to close the"
7"The chain rattled as she"
8"She caught his arm, pulled"
9"The tabby looked up from"
10"Lucien set the cane beside"
11"He lowered himself onto the"
12"The cramped flat smelled of"
13"Scrolls crowded the windowsill."
14"Eva had annotated the lampshade."
15"Rory had been sleeping on"
16"Lucien’s gaze touched the open"
17"She took the first-aid box"
18"His gloves were wet."
19"Blood slicked his fingertips."
ratio0.938
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences113
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences112
tagDensity0.089
leniency0.179
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.4996%