Run: 2026-10-27-01M5YETV90KN9HKYVZMZMCBCFX

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Duration:
1m 2s
Cost:
$0.023455
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The first officer at the cordon held out a piece of bone. Quinn looked at it in his blue-gloved palm. It was no longer than the top joint of her thumb, polished smooth, with a notch cut into one end. “Found it in the victim’s pocket?” she asked. “No, ma’am. The woman who called it in said you’d need one to get through.” Behind him, a maintenance door stood open in the wall of a Camden underpass. A second officer was visible on the other side, halfway down a flight of concrete steps. He looked up at Quinn and lifted a hand. “And you let her give you this?” “She gave us three. Said there wasn’t time to explain.” “Where is she?” “Downstairs.” Quinn took the bone by its edges and slipped it into an evidence bag. The officer watched her put the bag in her coat pocket. The stairs smelled of wet plaster and old electricity. At the bottom, she passed through a tiled passage where the station name had been chiseled away. The air changed at an iron gate: warmer beyond it, carrying the scents of hot metal, candle wax and something sweet turning rotten. The platform had once served a single track. The rails were still there, sunk in darkness, but the opposite platform was crowded with stalls made from doors and packing cases. Strings of lamps hung between the pillars. Most had been extinguished. Under the surviving lights, tables displayed stoppered bottles, bundles of dried roots and shallow trays of small, bright objects Quinn could not identify. Police tape stretched across the platform. Four officers stood inside it, looking as if they had been sent to the wrong address. Detective Sergeant Malik Shah met her beside a defunct ticket machine. He was holding a paper cup of coffee in both hands. “Before you ask,” he said, “I haven’t touched any of the merchandise.” “You found the body?” “First response did. Our caller brought them in.” A woman sat on a bench behind him, her worn leather satchel at her feet. She had curly red hair, round glasses and a scatter of freckles across a pale face. As Quinn approached, she tucked a curl behind her left ear, then immediately pulled it loose again. “Eva Kowalski,” Shah said. “British Museum.” “Research assistant,” the woman corrected. “Restricted archives.” Quinn took out her notebook. “You called at nine forty-two.” “Yes.” “What brought you here, Miss Kowalski?” “I was meeting someone.” “The dead man?” Eva’s fingers tightened around the strap of her satchel. “Yes.” “Name?” “Anton Vale.” “Purpose of the meeting?” “He had something he wanted me to look at.” “What?” “I don’t know. He wouldn’t tell me over the phone.” Quinn waited. Eva looked toward the stalls, not at her. “Did you see anyone else?” “When I came down, the Market was open. There were dozens of people. I went to Anton’s stall, found him and called the police. Then people started leaving.” “Why?” “They don’t like police.” “That makes one of us,” Shah said. Eva did not smile. Quinn glanced at the satchel. Several book spines protruded from it, their edges softened by use. “You brought reference books to a meeting about an object you knew nothing about?” “I bring them everywhere.” “Did you know Vale well?” “No. We’d spoken twice before. He dealt in manuscripts, among other things.” “Stay here, please.” Quinn followed Shah along the platform. Their footsteps disturbed grit on the old tiles. A row of stalls had been abandoned in a hurry: a stool lay on its side, and a kettle continued to hiss over a small gas burner. Someone had left a child’s mitten beside it, though Quinn had seen no children. The dead man lay behind a counter built from railway sleepers. He was on his back, one arm crooked above his head, the other resting beside a shallow brass dish. A narrow knife protruded from his chest. His coat had fallen open, and blood had spread over his shirt in a dark, stiff fan. “Paramedics confirmed life extinct,” Shah said. “They didn’t move him beyond checking. Scene photographer’s been through, and forensics are on their way.” Quinn crouched at the edge of the stall. A lamp burned on the counter, throwing a yellow circle over the merchandise. There were glass cases of coins and seals, and an open ledger with a pen laid carefully across the pages. Under the counter sat a wooden cash box. “Who found the knife?” she asked. “Still in him when the first officers arrived. Looks like something from the stall. There’s an empty velvet slot in that case.” The case stood open on the counter, directly above the body. Its velvet lining was indented in the shape of a blade. Two other knives remained in their slots. “Any witnesses to an argument?” “Not yet. Most of the traders cleared out before we could get names. One stayed long enough to say Vale was alive at nine. He heard him talking to a woman.” “Kowalski?” “That’s what he thought. Red hair, glasses. She says she got here at half nine.” “Did he see her face?” “From across the platform.” Quinn looked back at Eva. The woman was speaking to an officer now, her hands moving quickly. The officer offered her a bottle of water. She shook her head. Shah lowered his voice. “There’s blood on her cuff.” “Has it been sampled?” “Officer spotted it when she came in. Forensics will take a swab.” “Could be transfer when she found him.” “She says she didn’t touch him.” Quinn studied the body again. The blood on Vale’s shirt had dried in ridges around the folds. There was very little on the floor. A dark smear marked the edge of the brass dish, and another ran beneath the cuff of his coat. “Did he sell food?” she asked. “Not that I saw.” “Why the dish?” Shah shrugged. “Maybe it held coins.” Quinn leaned closer without crossing the tape. The dish was almost clean inside, but at its rim a thin brown line had settled into an engraved groove. A second line marked the floor where the dish met the tiles. “His sleeve’s wet,” she said. Shah bent beside her. “Blood?” “Water, I think.” The coat was darker around the wrist. Beneath the cuff lay a small puddle, already gathering dust at its edges. Quinn looked up at the low ceiling. No pipe ran above the stall, and the tiles around the body were dry. “Someone washed the dish,” she said. “Or spilled something.” “After he died?” “We don’t know when he died.” “No.” She looked at the blood on the shirt. “But somebody put that dish down in the water afterward. See the clean ring?” The ring showed around half the dish’s base. On the other half, water had crept underneath and dissolved a narrow brown smear. Shah followed her gaze. “You think they caught his blood in it?” “I think we need the lab to tell us what’s in the engraving. And I want the water sampled before anyone steps in it.” She moved to the other end of the counter. The knife case was open, its lid propped against a stack of books. The empty slot had a small white price tag attached to its edge. A matching tag lay under the blade in the next slot. Quinn took her pen from her pocket and pointed to the empty space. “Any sign that knife was pulled out in a hurry?” “Not necessarily. Could have been a sale.” “Could have been. But the tag’s still attached.” She examined the other knives. Each had a fine thread tied through a hole in its handle, the thread secured to its tag. The empty slot’s thread had been cut cleanly, close to the velvet. “If somebody grabbed it during an argument,” she said, “they took time to cut it loose.” Shah considered the case. “Vale could have been showing it to a customer.” “He could.” Quinn looked at the dead man’s hands. His nails were clean. No blood marked his palms, and his fingers had settled loosely against the floor. The position meant little by itself. But the coat beneath his shoulder had bunched upward, and the dust on the tile showed two pale, parallel streaks leading from the back of the stall. She walked around to see where they began. A narrow service passage ran behind the traders’ counters. At Vale’s stall it ended at a brick wall, where an old advertising poster had been pasted over a blocked doorway. The poster advertised a holiday resort in France. Its lower corner had peeled away, revealing a strip of dark blue paint beneath. Quinn crouched. A fresh scrape crossed the paint at knee height. Below it, the dust was disturbed in a broad arc. “Someone dragged him out of here,” Shah said. “Possibly.” Quinn held her pen near the scrape. A fragment of wood clung to the paint, pale and fibrous. “Or dragged something.” A wooden packing case stood three feet away. Its corner was splintered. Shah looked from the case to the streaks. “That could have made them.” “Yes.” He gave her a sideways glance. “You were hoping for a body-shaped answer?” “I’d settle for an answer that stays put.” She stood and studied the blocked doorway. The poster had been pasted over the bricks, but not all of it lay flat. A vertical crease ran down the middle, and the paper at the bottom had torn recently. Through the tear, she could see not brick but a black gap. Quinn touched the poster lightly with the end of her pen. It gave inward. “Door,” she said. Shah came closer. “They papered over it?” “Looks that way.” There was no handle on this side. Quinn moved her pen along the seam until it met a small brass catch, concealed beneath the paper. The metal was scuffed and bright where fingers had rubbed it. “Get photographs before we open it,” she said. While Shah called the photographer back, Quinn returned to Eva. “Mr. Vale was expecting you at nine?” Eva nodded. “I was late.” “Why?” “The train stopped between stations. I called him, but he didn’t answer.” “Can we see the call on your phone?” Eva produced it from her coat. Her hand shook as she unlocked the screen. The outgoing call was recorded at nine twelve. Quinn noted the number and gave the phone back. “Did you speak to anyone before you found him?” “A man at the gate. I gave him my token and went straight to the stall.” “Did you see Vale talking to another woman?” “No.” “Did you see anyone wearing glasses? Anyone with red hair?” Eva hesitated. “There was a woman with a red scarf. I only saw her from behind. She was leaving Anton’s stall when I arrived.” “What time?” “I don’t know exactly. Half nine, perhaps.” “Why didn’t you mention her?” “You asked if I saw anyone else. There were dozens of people.” “You knew which stall I meant.” Eva pushed her hair behind her left ear. “I didn’t think she mattered. She was already walking away.” “What did she look like?” “Tall. Dark coat. The scarf was over her hair, so I couldn’t see what color it was.” “Did she have glasses?” “I didn’t see her face.” “And the blood on your cuff?” Eva looked down at her sleeve. A rust-colored mark lay along the seam. “I knelt beside him. I didn’t touch him, but I put my hand on the counter to get up.” Quinn went back to the stall. There was a smear on the inner edge of the counter, at about the height of Eva’s sleeve. It was not visible from the front. Shah had finished on the phone. “Photographer’s coming.” “Check that smear against the blood on Kowalski’s cuff,” Quinn said. “And ask her for a statement about the woman in the scarf.” “You believe her?” “I believe someone could have made the mark without touching Vale.” “What about our witness? He heard Vale arguing with a woman at nine.” “Find out precisely what he heard. Whether he recognized Vale’s voice. Whether he saw the woman leave.” Shah looked toward the hidden door. “And if someone moved the body?” “The blood should tell us where he was stabbed. The floor here doesn’t look like enough, but we wait for forensics.” The photographer arrived with a camera and a tired expression. Quinn stood back while he worked, then put on fresh gloves. With the scene recorded, she pressed the brass catch. The door opened toward her, tearing the poster down its crease. Beyond it was a cramped room lined with shelves. A single electric bulb glowed over a desk. There were ledgers stacked against one wall, a locked metal cabinet against another, and a sink in the corner. The sink was wet. Quinn stopped at the threshold. A pink film stained the white enamel around the drain. On the draining board stood a second brass dish, identical to the first. A cloth lay crumpled beside it. Shah let out a slow breath. “That’s more like it.” “Maybe.” Quinn looked down. Blood had gathered in the grout between the floor tiles near the desk. It had been wiped, but the cloth had missed the narrow channels. There was more beneath the desk, where the tiles met the wall. On the desktop lay a small brass compass, its casing mottled green with verdigris. Fine markings circled the glass face. The needle swung as Quinn watched, then settled toward the back wall. A chair had been overturned beside the desk. One of its legs was broken, exposing a pale splinter. Quinn looked back into the passage at the mark on the door. It was the same height as the broken leg. “Someone carried the chair out and brought it back,” she said. “Why?” “The door opens inward. If the chair was against it, you’d have to move it to get through.” Shah peered at the desk. “Could be Vale was killed in here, and whoever did it dragged him out. Washed up afterward.” “Then took a knife from the case and put it in him?” “Why not use the knife that killed him?” Quinn looked at the compass again. Its needle twitched, turned a few degrees and stopped. There was no visible magnet on the desk, no obvious reason for the movement. “Perhaps they needed us to find a different weapon,” she said. Vale’s shirt would have to be examined. The wound might tell them whether the knife had been inserted after death, or whether it matched the cut beneath. She had no intention of guessing before the pathologist saw him. Shah pointed at a rectangular patch in the dust on the desktop. “Something’s missing.” The clean area was larger than a paperback, smaller than a sheet of A4. Beside it lay a torn strip of brown wrapping paper. Quinn could make out the impression of writing on the desk beneath: two lines pressed hard enough to score the wood. The top line was mostly hidden by the compass. The lower read: …ask Kowalski to identify— The rest had been gouged away. Quinn turned to Shah. “Don’t let her leave.” Eva saw them coming. She stood before they reached the bench. “There’s a note in his office,” Quinn said. “Vale wanted you to identify something.” Eva’s face tightened. “I told you.” “You said you didn’t know what it was.” “I didn’t.” “Why choose you?” “He knew where I worked.” “So do a lot of people. What had you identified for him before?” Eva glanced at the officers nearby. “Can we speak somewhere else?” “No.” For a moment Quinn thought she would refuse. Then Eva opened her satchel and took out a small notebook. “Six weeks ago he brought me a photograph of an inscription,” she said. “He wanted a translation. I told him it wasn’t a language I recognized.” “Was that true?” “Yes. But I’d seen similar marks in material held by the Museum. Material we don’t make available to the public.” “What kind of material?” Eva looked toward the stall. “Objects recovered from places people couldn’t explain.” “That covers a good deal.” “I know how it sounds.” “Did Vale tell you where he got the photograph?” “No. He said he might be able to obtain the object itself.” “And today he called you?” “He sent a message this afternoon. He said he had it.” “Show me.” Eva passed over the phone again. The message was brief: Got it. Come at 9. Bring the old books. Quinn handed it back. “Did you tell anyone you were meeting him?” “My friend. Aurora. I texted her when I got here.” “Before or after you found the body?” “Before. I said I was going to meet Vale and I’d call her afterward.” “Anyone else?” “No.” “Did Vale tell anyone?” “I don’t know.” Behind them, a forensics officer arrived with equipment cases. Shah directed her toward the hidden room. She paused at the doorway and called for another officer to bring additional lighting. Quinn watched the compass on the desk. From this distance she could no longer see the needle, only the green-stained brass and the protective-looking marks around its face. Something about it troubled her, though she could not yet have said what. It had been left on a cleared desk beside the outline of the missing object. If it belonged to Vale, the killer had either overlooked it or had no use for it. She thought of Morris, three years ago, standing in another room where an ordinary object had seemed out of place. She had dismissed it then. By the time she went back, the object was gone and Morris was dead. “Miss Kowalski,” she said, “do you know what that compass is?” Eva followed her gaze through the torn doorway. Her color drained. “It points to the nearest rift,” she said. “What does that mean?” “A place where—” Eva stopped and pressed her lips together. “I don’t know how to explain it so you’ll believe me.” “Try.” “A place where you can cross from here to somewhere else.” Shah had come back in time to hear her. He looked at Quinn, waiting. Quinn kept her eyes on Eva. “Is that what Vale found?” “I don’t know.” “Can the compass tell us where the place is?” “It points toward it.” “Then why was it on the desk?” “I don’t know that either.” A sharp click came from the office. The forensics officer had lifted the compass with gloved hands. Its lid had sprung open. She held it away from her face. “Sorry,” she called. “There’s a catch on the side.” Quinn went to the doorway. Inside the lid, beneath the glass face, was a folded scrap of paper. The officer carefully removed it with tweezers and laid it on an evidence tray. It was a photograph, folded twice. Even from the threshold Quinn could see the red scarf. The woman in it stood beside Vale at his stall, facing the camera. Her hair was concealed, but her face was clear: narrow, unsmiling, a small scar cutting through one eyebrow. On the back, in dark ink, someone had written a name and a number. Shah read it over the officer’s shoulder. “Do we know her?” Quinn took out her notebook and copied the details. “We’ll find out.” She looked back at Eva, who had moved closer despite being told to stay by the bench. “Is that the woman you saw?” Eva leaned forward. “The coat and scarf look right. I can’t swear it’s her.” “Do you recognize her face?” “No.” Quinn gave the number to Shah. He stepped away to make the call. Around them, the platform was filling with the quiet, methodical noise of the investigation: cases opening, officers conferring, a camera shutter clicking behind the stall. The compass lay open on the tray. Its needle had shifted again, now pointing past the office wall toward the dark end of the platform. Quinn asked the officer to photograph its position before sealing it. Then she went to find the witness who had heard the argument. He had seen a woman in a red scarf at nine, if Eva was right about what he had mistaken for hair. Whether she had been there again at half nine, and whether Vale had still been alive when Eva arrived, were questions he might yet help answer.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags27
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences177
tagDensity0.153
leniency0.305
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.76% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount3418
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count2
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
3
adverb"loosely"
count1
4
adverb"lightly"
count1
5
adverb"precisely"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"quickly"
2"very"
3"loosely"
4"lightly"
5"precisely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
89.76% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount3418
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"footsteps"
count1
1
word"velvet"
count3
2
word"electric"
count1
3
word"eyebrow"
count1
4
word"methodical"
count1
highlights
0"footsteps"
1"velvet"
2"electric"
3"eyebrow"
4"methodical"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences236
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences236
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences387
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords3418
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions53
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
49.91% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions107
wordCount2198
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity2
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Quinn44
Sergeant1
Malik1
Shah24
Eva24
Vale6
France1
Blood1
Kowalski1
Got1
Morris2
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Sergeant"
2"Malik"
3"Shah"
4"Eva"
5"Blood"
6"Kowalski"
7"Morris"
places
0"France"
globalScore0.499
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences174
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.293
wordCount3418
matches
0"not brick but a black gap"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences387
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs230
mean14.86
std14.32
cv0.963
sampleLengths
012
128
28
315
439
57
610
73
81
925
1049
1164
1222
1322
1412
154
168
1748
186
197
2010
211
226
234
243
2510
261
272
284
299
301
3110
3210
335
3428
351
364
377
384
3930
404
415
4212
433
4455
4554
4622
4749
486
4922
75.53% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount20
totalSentences236
matches
0"been chiseled"
1"been extinguished"
2"been sent"
3"been abandoned"
4"was indented"
5"been pasted"
6"was disturbed"
7"was splintered"
8"been pasted"
9"was scuffed"
10"was recorded"
11"been wiped"
12"been overturned"
13"was broken"
14"been inserted"
15"been gouged"
16"been left"
17"was gone"
18"was concealed"
19"being told"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs372
matches
0"was holding"
1"was speaking"
2"was filling"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences387
ratio0.003
matches
0"…ask Kowalski to identify—"
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1472
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.021059782608695652
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.006793478260869565
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences387
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences387
mean8.83
std5.57
cv0.631
sampleLengths
012
18
220
38
415
514
616
79
87
910
103
111
1214
1311
149
1517
1623
178
1822
197
204
2123
226
2316
2411
2511
2612
274
288
2915
3016
3117
324
332
345
352
365
375
381
396
404
413
429
431
441
452
464
479
481
4910
47.42% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.29198966408268734
totalSentences387
uniqueOpeners113
31.75% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences210
matches
0"Then Eva opened her satchel"
1"Then she went to find"
ratio0.01
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences210
matches
0"It was no longer than"
1"He looked up at Quinn"
2"He was holding a paper"
3"She had curly red hair,"
4"Their footsteps disturbed grit on"
5"He was on his back,"
6"His coat had fallen open,"
7"Its velvet lining was indented"
8"She shook her head."
9"She looked at the blood"
10"She moved to the other"
11"She examined the other knives."
12"His nails were clean."
13"She walked around to see"
14"Its lower corner had peeled"
15"Its corner was splintered."
16"He gave her a sideways"
17"She stood and studied the"
18"It gave inward."
19"Her hand shook as she"
ratio0.19
69.52% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount164
totalSentences210
matches
0"The first officer at the"
1"Quinn looked at it in"
2"It was no longer than"
3"A second officer was visible"
4"He looked up at Quinn"
5"Quinn took the bone by"
6"The officer watched her put"
7"The stairs smelled of wet"
8"The air changed at an"
9"The platform had once served"
10"The rails were still there,"
11"Strings of lamps hung between"
12"Police tape stretched across the"
13"Detective Sergeant Malik Shah met"
14"He was holding a paper"
15"A woman sat on a"
16"She had curly red hair,"
17"the woman corrected"
18"Quinn took out her notebook."
19"Eva’s fingers tightened around the"
ratio0.781
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount5
totalSentences210
matches
0"While Shah called the photographer"
1"If it belonged to Vale,"
2"By the time she went"
3"Even from the threshold Quinn"
4"Whether she had been there"
ratio0.024
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences96
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The woman was speaking to an officer now, her hands moving quickly."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags27
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags22
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"the woman corrected (correct)"
dialogueSentences177
tagDensity0.124
leniency0.249
rawRatio0.045
effectiveRatio0.011
91.7881%