Run: 2026-10-27-01M5YF1YGK63FWBRR2E55XB3EE

Run Details

Duration:
6m 59s
Cost:
$0.101672
Provider:
Moonshot AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Heartstone had warmed through Rory’s shirt before Isolde stopped between the standing stones. Wildflowers crowded the grove around their ankles, blue and white heads turning in a breeze Rory could not feel. Oak roots gripped the mossy stones. Beyond them, Richmond Park lay in moonlight, ordinary as a wet pavement. Rory pressed two fingers to the pendant. Its crimson heart pulsed against her skin, paused, then pulsed again. “That’s either a door or a very specialised heart condition.” “Here is where the grove keeps a door it did not build.” Isolde’s silver hair slid over one shoulder as she faced the empty air. Her pale lavender eyes reflected something Rory could not see. Nyx rose from the shadow of an oak. In solid form they stood taller than the stones, a humanoid silhouette with violet lights where eyes belonged. Their outline smoked at the shoulders. “The Veil is pleated.” Their voice stirred the flowers without moving the air. “No rift. No tear. Someone folded it with patience.” Rory drew the Fae blade. Cold bit through her glove. Moonlight ran along the slender moonsilver leaf, though the clouds above the grove covered the moon. “And you expect me to cut a pleat.” “I expect nothing,” Isolde said. “Expectation is a net with wide holes.” Rory swallowed a reply and lifted the pendant instead. She turned in a slow circle, holding the chain loose. At each point north of the stones, the little gemstone dragged towards the same patch of empty air. Its warmth gathered there in regular beats. She followed the pull until the chain drew taut, then set the dagger’s point against the space beneath it. “Not the air,” Isolde said. “The refusal in it.” The blade met resistance. Rory angled her wrist, let the pendant tug once more, and sliced along its path. A note cracked inside the silence. Amber light spilled through the cut. Isolde crossed first. She passed between the standing stones without disturbing a petal or leaving a print in the silver dust. Nyx loosened into a ribbon of darkness and poured after her. Rory took one last breath of damp earth and stepped through. Heat settled over her tongue. It tasted of saffron, toasted hazelnut and the green sharpness of crushed stems. Her ears popped. For an instant she stood in two temperatures, one boot in Richmond’s moss and the other on smooth stone that thrummed beneath her heel. Then the grove slid behind a veil of gold. She had expected a vineyard. Isolde had used the word Dymas, and Rory had pictured hills, terraces, perhaps a picturesque demon with a napkin tucked under his chin. The hills rose on both sides of her and kept rising. Vine rows climbed their slopes, curved overhead and continued across an amber sky without a sun. Grapes hung above the impossible canopy, each as large as a lantern. Their translucent skins held drifting sparks that might have been seeds. Between the vines stood the remains of a hall. Its columns had been carved to resemble bundles of pale reeds, each bundle thicker than three men. Roots had lifted the floor into glossy black waves. Where the roof had fallen away, enormous copper bells hung from nothing. None possessed a clapper. One sounded as Rory watched, a low, buttery note that rolled through her ribs. Somewhere far off, corks popped in a quick percussion. Water boiled. A hundred pan lids rattled, though no kitchen broke the green distances. Nyx became solid beside her. Violet light moved across their face as they looked up. “There is no wind.” “There’s plenty of something.” Rory’s hair lifted from her neck. With it came the smell of her mother’s Welsh cakes, butter browning on the griddle, sugar gritting beneath her childhood fingers. She lowered the Fae blade. “Don’t eat,” Isolde said. “I deliver food for a living. I know better than to trust a meal with no bill.” “That wisdom will serve you here.” At the foot of the steps, a table ran the length of the ruined hall. Its surface had been polished until the black wood reflected the amber canopy. Plates covered it in irregular clusters: shallow silver dishes, bowls of red clay, shells large enough to bathe in. Chairs stood at distances that suited no single kind of body. One rose like a throne; another consisted of seven narrow perches arranged around a stalk. Every chair sat empty. Rory approached the nearest place setting. The plate held a smear of reflected sky. She blinked, and three Welsh cakes lay upon it, steam curling from their sugared tops. Her stomach contracted with an enthusiasm she resented. Nyx stopped at the next setting. A wooden bowl rested before them, filled with grey broth and a single crust of dark bread. Their outline tightened until the edges of their hands looked almost human. “Yours?” Rory kept her voice low. “Woodsmoke. Wet limestone. A room with one window.” Nyx passed two fingers above the bowl. The steam bent away from them. “This table is careless with its hospitality.” On Isolde’s plate lay a mound of white petals. She regarded it without expression. The petals opened, one after another, revealing black centres. Rory turned her own plate facedown. A offended click travelled along the table. Cup after cup snapped upright. Under a nearby cloche, something gave a soft, moist chew. Nyx’s head tilted. “It knows the difference between hunger and wanting.” “Good. Let it learn disappointment.” Rory crouched beside the table leg. Carvings covered the wood beneath the overhang, nearly hidden by gold pollen. She brushed them clean with her sleeve. Tiny figures marched around the leg in a continuous procession. They carried cauldrons, cleavers, baskets and long-handled pans. One wore a chef’s tall pleated hat. Another had braided hair and a knife belt. A third hunched beneath the weight of a wok. Their clothing crossed centuries and climates, but fine lines joined every set of ankles to a single carved mouth above them. The mouth smiled around a full place setting. “Not guests,” Rory said. Nyx bent beside her, their shadow covering three carvings at once. “A staff rota.” “A long one.” Rory traced the link between a cook’s ankle and the mouth. The line continued under her finger, worn smooth by hands that had touched it before hers. “Belphegor’s?” Isolde’s gaze stayed on the white petals. “A prince may set his table with anything. Land. Music. A lifetime.” “Contracted cooks.” “Contracted is a clean word for a dirty oven.” A bell overhead gave a bright citrus note. Rory stood too fast and struck a hanging bunch of grapes with her shoulder. Laughter burst from the fruit. Not one laugh, but dozens, compressed into a chord of open mouths and clashing glass. The sound rolled along the hall. Chairs scraped. Under the tables, dozens of shadows shifted into the shapes of seated guests. Nyx moved between Rory and the vines. Their body spread into a broad, lightless shield. The laughter faded. The chairs stopped. Rory kept her hand away from the pendant, which had begun to beat in time with the distant pan lids. “Do the shadows belong to anyone?” “Not now,” Isolde said. Nyx glanced at her. “That was almost an answer.” “It was two.” Rory stepped back from the grapes. Their sparks had gathered against the sides nearest her, tiny lights pressing through the skins. She walked around the table instead, giving each setting a wide berth. As she passed, roast fowl became bowls of noodles, noodles collapsed into jewelled sweets, and sweets dissolved into pale roots arranged like fingers. At the far end of the hall, the mosaic floor sloped into a sunken passage. Gold and crimson threads stretched across its entrance, braided so tightly that they resembled a sheet of glowing cloth. Nyx’s shadow flowed ahead of them. It touched the passage wall, thinned, and slipped beneath the braided light. A moment later their face emerged from the darkness on the other side. “A lower room. Shelves. No breath.” Their whisper returned through the stone beneath Rory’s boots. “The dark goes down farther than the building.” The Heartstone tugged towards the passage hard enough to pull the chain against Rory’s neck. Isolde examined the ward without touching it. “A lock can be a promise made by somebody else.” “And a dagger can be a rude reply.” Rory flexed her fingers around the Fae blade. Cold had numbed her palm. The crescent scar on her left wrist ached as she raised it. She chose one crimson thread and drew the moonsilver edge across it. The strand parted without sound. The others shivered. Gold light raced along the braid, gathering into furious knots, but Nyx pressed both hands into the wall and spread their shadow beneath the ward. Where their darkness covered it, the light lost its reflection. Rory cut again. Then again. On the fourth stroke, the whole braid unravelled. Threads spilled across the floor and became saffron, hundreds of dry red strands curling around her boots. The air beyond tasted of dust and cold iron. They entered a circular chamber sunk deep beneath the hall. Shelves climbed its walls in a continuous spiral, crowded with covered bowls. Some were no larger than thimbles; others could have held Rory’s torso. Writing crawled over their lids, rearranging itself whenever she tried to read it. A cracked bowl released a thread of steam. The steam became an apple tree in miniature, flowered, shed white blossom and vanished. From the next shelf came the crash of a market crowd. A bowl near Rory’s knee smelled of salt and hot tar. Another gave off the clean, mineral scent of snow. “Recipes?” she asked. Isolde passed her fingers above a sealed lid. The writing stilled beneath them. “A recipe instructs the hands. These instruct the blood.” Rory lifted the lid of a shallow bowl. Inside lay a spoonful of amber light. It brightened at her breath, and she heard Yu-Fei Cheung laughing in the Golden Empress kitchen, one unmistakable snort followed by the bang of a ladle against a stockpot. She replaced the lid. Nyx watched her from the next aisle. “Good?” “Complicated.” They moved deeper between the shelves. Isolde’s feet left the layered dust unmarked. Nyx’s shadow travelled ahead, pooling beneath each bowl before their body followed. Rory kept count of the turns, the shelves, the distances between sounds. Seven steps to the market noise. Twelve to the smell of snow. Three more to a bowl that hummed with bees. Beyond the last shelf, a broad stair descended between walls of copper pans. From below came a steady, many-handed chopping, precise enough to keep time with the pendant. Rory looked back at the spiral of covered bowls, then down at the waiting stairs. “If anyone offers me a tasting menu, you’re both on your own.” Nyx poured themselves onto the first step. “You refused the table before you saw the cutlery.” “I’ve seen the cutlery. I’m updating my position.” Isolde stepped past them, her silver hair catching the amber light. Rory followed with the Fae blade held low. The copper pans turned as she passed, their polished bellies gathering her reflection, Nyx’s drifting darkness and Isolde’s untroubled face, while the chopping below kept its patient measure.
created_at"2026-10-27T10:38:49.883Z" 10/27/2026, 10:38:49 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.341
leniency0.683
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.69% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1882
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"tightly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"tightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
73.43% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1882
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"pulsed"
count2
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"stomach"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"traced"
count1
6
word"mosaic"
count1
7
word"whisper"
count1
8
word"raced"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"warmth"
2"silence"
3"stomach"
4"weight"
5"traced"
6"mosaic"
7"whisper"
8"raced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences165
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences165
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences192
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1882
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
55.43% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions82
wordCount1639
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity1.89
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Heartstone2
Rory31
Isolde15
Richmond2
Park1
Fae4
Dymas1
Welsh2
Nyx15
Cold2
Yu-Fei1
Cheung1
Golden1
Empress1
One3
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Rory"
2"Isolde"
3"Nyx"
4"Cold"
5"Yu-Fei"
6"Cheung"
7"One"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Golden"
globalScore0.554
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences131
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.531
wordCount1882
matches
0"Not one laugh, but dozens, compressed into a chord of open mouths"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences192
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs98
mean19.2
std15.96
cv0.831
sampleLengths
014
137
218
310
435
532
622
726
88
912
1044
1119
129
1319
1412
1543
1645
179
1828
1950
209
2156
2223
2315
244
2531
265
274
2817
296
3073
314
3229
338
3435
356
3628
3723
386
3922
403
418
425
4325
4463
458
464
4711
483
4931
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences165
matches
0"been carved"
1"been polished"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs263
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences192
ratio0.01
matches
0"One rose like a throne; another consisted of seven narrow perches arranged around a stalk."
1"Some were no larger than thimbles; others could have held Rory’s torso."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1642
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.021315468940316686
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0018270401948842874
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences192
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences192
mean9.8
std5.41
cv0.552
sampleLengths
014
119
26
312
47
511
610
725
810
98
1018
116
1213
139
145
155
1616
178
185
197
209
2110
2218
237
2419
255
264
274
2815
296
306
313
3218
3311
3411
355
3613
373
3824
399
405
4123
4211
4316
4412
4511
469
4717
489
4912
60.07% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3854166666666667
totalSentences192
uniqueOpeners74
42.74% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences156
matches
0"Then the grove slid behind"
1"Somewhere far off, corks popped"
ratio0.013
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences156
matches
0"Its crimson heart pulsed against"
1"Her pale lavender eyes reflected"
2"Their outline smoked at the"
3"Their voice stirred the flowers"
4"She turned in a slow"
5"Its warmth gathered there in"
6"She followed the pull until"
7"She passed between the standing"
8"It tasted of saffron, toasted"
9"Her ears popped."
10"She had expected a vineyard."
11"Their translucent skins held drifting"
12"Its columns had been carved"
13"She lowered the Fae blade."
14"Its surface had been polished"
15"She blinked, and three Welsh"
16"Her stomach contracted with an"
17"Their outline tightened until the"
18"She regarded it without expression."
19"She brushed them clean with"
ratio0.205
68.97% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount122
totalSentences156
matches
0"The Heartstone had warmed through"
1"Wildflowers crowded the grove around"
2"Oak roots gripped the mossy"
3"Rory pressed two fingers to"
4"Its crimson heart pulsed against"
5"Isolde’s silver hair slid over"
6"Her pale lavender eyes reflected"
7"Nyx rose from the shadow"
8"Their outline smoked at the"
9"Their voice stirred the flowers"
10"Rory drew the Fae blade."
11"Moonlight ran along the slender"
12"Rory swallowed a reply and"
13"She turned in a slow"
14"Its warmth gathered there in"
15"She followed the pull until"
16"The blade met resistance."
17"Rory angled her wrist, let"
18"A note cracked inside the"
19"Amber light spilled through the"
ratio0.782
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences156
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences73
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"For an instant she stood in two temperatures, one boot in Richmond’s moss and the other on smooth stone that thrummed beneath her heel."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.146
leniency0.293
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.8443%