Run: 2026-10-27-01M5YF728YJVPR8SAJZWYC44MC

Run Details

Duration:
50.9s
Cost:
$0.018387
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door opened against Lucien’s cane. Rory caught it before it struck the wall. He stood on the landing in a charcoal suit, one hand wrapped around the ivory handle, the other holding a brown paper parcel. Rain had darkened the shoulders of his jacket. “You had my number,” she said. “You blocked it.” “That was a clue.” She pushed the door towards him. He caught the edge with his palm, and her gaze dropped to his hand. “Take it off.” He did. “There’s a man downstairs who followed me from Soho,” he said. “He came into the bar behind me. I don’t want him to see this parcel in your hands.” Rory looked past him. Music climbed through the floorboards, followed by a burst of laughter from Silas’ bar. The landing itself was empty. “What’s in it?” “Eva’s notebook.” Rory’s fingers tightened around the door. “The one you copied?” “The same.” “And you brought it here instead of taking it to her?” “I rang her. She told me she’d break my fingers if I came near her flat.” He lifted the parcel an inch. “I believed her.” Rory held out her hand. “I need you to look at something inside with me.” “I can look at it without you.” “You can. You won’t be able to read all of it.” She reached for the parcel. Lucien moved it against his chest. “Don’t do that,” she said. His jaw shifted. For a moment she thought he might refuse. Then he gave her the parcel. The paper had gone soft with rain. She peeled back a corner and saw the cracked green cover, the strip of tape Eva had stuck across the spine, and a black cat hair caught beneath it. Rory opened the door wider. “Five minutes.” Lucien stepped inside. She shut the door and slid the bolt across, leaving him in the narrow hallway while she took the parcel into the kitchen. He followed, his cane tapping once against the bare floor before he lifted it. Her delivery bag sat on the table, its zip open, a pair of chopsticks poking from the side pocket. She pushed it onto a chair and unwrapped the notebook. A folded sheet of cream paper lay on top. “Where did you get this?” she asked. “From a broker named Vale. He bought the copy I gave him.” Rory unfolded the sheet. Columns of numbers covered it, each headed by a small drawing: a key, a fish, a crown, a closed eye. “You sold it to him.” “Yes.” “You told me you’d lent it to him. You made it sound as though he’d kept it without asking.” “I lied.” The words came without a pause. Rory placed the sheet on the table. “You had a fortnight to tell me that.” “I know.” “Eva spent half a day sweeping glass off her kitchen floor. Ptolemy hid under the bath until morning. You knew who’d paid for the break-in, and you watched us wonder.” “I knew Vale had bought the notes. I didn’t know he’d send someone to Eva’s flat.” “You knew he might.” Lucien rested both hands on the handle of his cane. “Yes.” Rory looked at the notebook instead of him. Eva’s handwriting filled the first page, packed into every margin. She had drawn a tiny crown over one line and a fish beside another. “The drawings match,” Rory said. “Eva marked the passages Vale wanted. The numbers are his prices. I can read the names in the last column, but I can’t connect them to the passages without knowing her symbols.” “Why do we need the names?” “Because Vale made more copies. He gave me the original, and he gave me this when I asked who else had seen it.” “Asked?” Lucien’s mismatched eyes met hers. “I persuaded him.” Rory glanced at the cane. A dark mark stained the edge of one cuff. “Did you kill him?” “No.” “Did you enjoy yourself?” “No.” She pulled out a chair. “Sit down, then. Your five minutes started on the landing.” He took the chair opposite her. The kitchen felt smaller with him in it. His coat carried rain and the clean, sharp scent of soap she remembered from mornings when his clothes had ended up across the back of her bedroom chair. Rory turned the notebook towards herself. “The crown means a name. Eva used it for people who thought they were important.” “That narrows it down.” “The fish means a location. She was hungry when she made the key.” His mouth moved at one corner. She kept her eyes on the page. “And the closed eye?” “Something she didn’t want anyone to find.” Lucien drew the sheet closer. His sleeve brushed her wrist, and she moved her hand before he could notice the crescent scar. “The names are disguised,” he said. “Vale used letters from the French alphabet in reverse. A becomes Z, B becomes Y.” “That’s not French. That’s a child passing notes in class.” “It worked on the man who stole the sheet for me.” Rory found a pen in her delivery bag and wrote the alphabet across the back of an envelope. Lucien watched her. “You still press too hard,” he said. “And you still comment when nobody asks.” The nib had torn the paper. She turned the envelope over and began again. They worked through the first name together. Lucien read out the letters; Rory replaced each one. The music below changed, the bass sending a faint shiver through the table. “Doyle,” she said. “Eva knows him.” “Does she trust him?” “Enough to lend him books. Not enough to lend him money.” “Call her.” Rory took out her phone. Eva answered on the second ring. “If this is about Lucien, I haven’t moved the rolling pin,” she said. “He’s here.” A pause. “Have you used it?” “He brought your notebook back.” Eva drew a breath. Rory pictured her in the Brick Lane flat, surrounded by notes, with Ptolemy sprawled across whichever page she needed. “Is the blue ribbon still in it?” Rory leafed through the notebook. A ribbon slipped from between two pages and hung over her hand. “Yes.” “Good. My grandmother gave me that. The notebook can go in the bin.” Lucien held out his hand for the phone. Rory ignored it. “There’s a list of people who bought copies,” she told Eva. “Doyle’s on it.” “He was at my door yesterday. I told him I’d lost the notes, and he offered to help me look.” “Does he know where the closed-eye passage points?” “He would if he had the copy.” Paper rustled at Eva’s end. “I’ll ring him.” “Don’t go to his place.” “I’ve still got the rolling pin, Rory.” Eva ended the call. Rory set down the phone. “You could have told her to be careful,” Lucien said. “She’d already decided what she was doing.” He looked at the sheet. “That must be a relief for you. Someone making her own decision.” Rory capped the pen. “Don’t do that.” “Do what?” “Make a joke out of it before I’ve finished being angry.” His hand left the sheet. He smoothed the crease in the tablecloth with one finger, although it sprang back as soon as he moved. “I didn’t mean to.” “No. You meant to make it easier to sit across from me.” “It would be easier if I could put my hand over yours.” The pen slipped from her fingers and rolled against the notebook. She caught it before it fell. “You don’t get to say that as if nothing happened.” “I know what happened.” “Then tell me why you did it.” Lucien took his time answering. Downstairs, someone dropped a glass. Silas’ voice rose above the music, demanding that nobody move until he found a broom. “Vale had information I wanted,” Lucien said. “He asked for Eva’s research in exchange. I thought I could give him a copy and keep the original out of his reach.” “What information?” “A name. Someone had been moving people across the city against their will.” “And you got it?” “Yes.” Rory searched his face. “So you decided the trade was worth it.” “I did.” “You decided for Eva. For me, too. I was the one who brought you the notebook.” He nodded. “I wanted to help you,” she said. “I thought you trusted me.” “I did trust you.” “No. You trusted me to fetch it and keep my mouth shut.” He opened his mouth, then closed it. She wanted him to argue. She wanted him to give her something she could take apart, piece by piece. Instead he reached into his jacket and put a small brass key on the table. “What’s that?” she asked. “The key you gave me.” She had forgotten he still had it. The tag was red, with her flat number written on it in black marker. The ink had worn away at one corner. “You could have posted it.” “I could have.” “Why didn’t you?” “I kept thinking I’d have a reason to use it.” Rory stared at him. “You never turned up.” “No.” “You let me sit here and wonder whether any of it mattered to you.” His fingers tightened around the cane handle. “It mattered. I didn’t know how to come back after you told me to leave.” “You could have started by telling the truth.” “I was ashamed of it.” “That didn’t make it mine to carry.” “No.” He pushed the key across the table. “It didn’t.” She picked it up. The brass had warmed against his hand. She slid it into her pocket, then dragged the envelope back between them. “Next name.” They decoded two more. Rory sent both to Eva, who replied with a photograph of Ptolemy sitting on the rolling pin. Underneath it she had typed, He has taken control of the weapon. Rory showed Lucien despite herself. His smile came before he could hide it. “He looks capable,” Lucien said. “He bites people who reach across him.” “An excellent judge of character.” The last name took longer. Lucien misread a letter, and Rory caught the mistake when the result produced a word neither of them recognised. “That’s a K,” she said. “It’s an R.” “Give me the sheet.” He leaned closer rather than handing it over. Their shoulders touched. Rory saw the small nick near his jaw, the one he had given himself shaving at her sink months ago. He had complained about her razor while she stood behind him and laughed. She pulled the paper towards the light. “K,” she repeated. “You’re right.” “I’d like that in writing.” “You have it. On the envelope.” She filled in the last name and sent it to Eva. Her phone buzzed almost at once. No idea who that is. I’ll ask Doyle. Rory typed, Ask him before you hit him. She put the phone down. Lucien sat beside her now rather than opposite, close enough that she could see the rainwater drying along the seam of his jacket. “You should go,” she said. His gaze dropped to her mouth. “Yes.” Neither of them moved. Rory reached for the notebook, but his hand came down on the cover first. He lifted it at once. “Sorry.” “You used to reach for me like that.” “I remember.” “You used to stop when I asked.” “I can still do that.” Rory looked at the key tag in her palm. She had taken it from her pocket without noticing. She set it beside the notebook. “Then come here.” Lucien turned towards her. She caught the front of his jacket and kissed him before he could speak. His hand settled at her waist, careful at first, then firmer when she drew him closer. The edge of the table pressed into her hip. She pulled back far enough to look at him. “You don’t have the key any more.” “I noticed.” “And we haven’t finished this conversation.” “I noticed that too.” She kissed him again, and his fingers tightened against her waist.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences135
tagDensity0.163
leniency0.326
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2005
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2005
totalAiIsms0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences139
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences139
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences254
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2005
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions36
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
21.91% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions61
wordCount1093
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity2.56
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Lucien17
Rory28
Eva9
Brick1
Lane1
Ptolemy2
Paper1
Doyle1
Ask1
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Rory"
2"Eva"
3"Ptolemy"
4"Paper"
5"Doyle"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
globalScore0.219
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences79
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2005
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences254
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs186
mean10.78
std9.78
cv0.907
sampleLengths
06
139
26
33
44
520
63
72
829
923
103
112
126
134
142
1511
1625
175
1810
197
2011
2111
225
2317
2436
255
262
2740
2829
299
307
3112
3224
335
341
3519
362
3713
388
392
4030
4116
424
4310
441
4532
465
4732
486
4923
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences139
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs210
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences254
ratio0.004
matches
0"Lucien read out the letters; Rory replaced each one."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount698
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount8
adverbRatio0.011461318051575931
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences254
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences254
mean7.89
std5.74
cv0.727
sampleLengths
06
18
223
38
46
53
64
76
814
93
102
1111
1218
134
1414
155
163
172
186
194
202
2111
2222
233
245
2510
267
2711
285
296
305
313
328
336
347
3529
365
372
383
3923
4014
4119
4210
439
447
4512
464
4720
485
491
46.06% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.2283464566929134
totalSentences254
uniqueOpeners58
56.02% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences119
matches
0"Then he gave her the"
1"Instead he reached into his"
ratio0.017
48.57% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount51
totalSentences119
matches
0"He stood on the landing"
1"She pushed the door towards"
2"He caught the edge with"
3"He lifted the parcel an"
4"She reached for the parcel."
5"His jaw shifted."
6"She peeled back a corner"
7"She shut the door and"
8"He followed, his cane tapping"
9"Her delivery bag sat on"
10"She pushed it onto a"
11"She had drawn a tiny"
12"She pulled out a chair."
13"He took the chair opposite"
14"His coat carried rain and"
15"His mouth moved at one"
16"She kept her eyes on"
17"His sleeve brushed her wrist,"
18"She turned the envelope over"
19"They worked through the first"
ratio0.429
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount114
totalSentences119
matches
0"The door opened against Lucien’s"
1"Rory caught it before it"
2"He stood on the landing"
3"Rain had darkened the shoulders"
4"She pushed the door towards"
5"He caught the edge with"
6"Rory looked past him."
7"Music climbed through the floorboards,"
8"The landing itself was empty."
9"Rory’s fingers tightened around the"
10"He lifted the parcel an"
11"Rory held out her hand."
12"She reached for the parcel."
13"Lucien moved it against his"
14"His jaw shifted."
15"The paper had gone soft"
16"She peeled back a corner"
17"Rory opened the door wider."
18"Lucien stepped inside."
19"She shut the door and"
ratio0.958
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences119
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags18
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences135
tagDensity0.133
leniency0.267
rawRatio0.056
effectiveRatio0.015
85.7523%