Run: 2026-10-27-01M5YFBR61W81K72DP8Y6HSPEJ

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Duration:
13m 41s
Cost:
$0.224668
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Moonshot AI

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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door opened, and Lucien Moreau fell through it. Aurora caught him by the lapels before his head struck Eva's floorboards. Blood warmed her knuckles. His ivory-handled cane spun beneath a stack of scrolls. On the landing behind him, a claw scraped plaster, and another stair creaked. She hauled him across the threshold and slammed the door. One deadbolt. Two. Three. Blue light threaded the doorframe, and the scraping stopped. Ptolemy shot off an atlas and vanished behind the sofa. "Tell me you didn't bring that here." "I brought myself. It followed." "That's a distinction without a difference." "You always did enjoy a technicality." "And you always did hide behind one." His knees buckled. Aurora caught him again, swore, and steered him towards the sofa. He had lost none of his weight and most of his manners. "Can you stand?" "Not with any elegance." "Then do it without." The cramped flat offered little space for a wounded man. Books, scrolls, and research notes crowded every surface. Curry spice rose through the floorboards from the restaurant below, mingling with the copper reek of blood. Aurora had borrowed the flat while workmen replaced her ceiling above Silas's bar. Eva had left her three deadbolts, a hostile cat, and enough occult clutter to conceal a small army. Lucien had never been invited to either address. She shoved Eva's notes aside and lowered him onto the sofa. His tailored charcoal suit had a slit beneath the left ribs. His platinum hair had broken loose from its usual sleek order, and one strand clung to the blood on his cheek. When he opened his eyes, the amber one fixed on her. The black one reflected nothing. Aurora fetched the first-aid tin from the bathroom and pliers from Eva's toolbox. "What am I looking at?" "A message from my father." "Your father's in Avaros." "He retains an excellent postal service." She cut away his shirt. A sliver of black metal protruded from the wound, no wider than a knitting needle. Fine characters crawled across its surface. The flesh around it had taken on the bruised shine of a plum. "And the thing outside?" "The postman." Something pressed against the door. The blue light along the frame dimmed, then strengthened. From behind the sofa came Ptolemy's low, outraged growl. Aurora folded a towel and pressed it around the wound. "How long do we have?" "Eva's wards are holding it on the landing. The deadbolts are decorative." "Eva doesn't ward her door." "Ask her what the blue chalk beneath the mat is for." Of course he knew. Lucien knew which locks could be bribed, which books bit, and which police officers kept an altar in the garage. He had once told her that information was merely hospitality with fewer refreshments. She gripped the pliers. "What does your father want?" "To discourage my independence." "By killing you?" "By collecting you." Her hand stopped. Lucien watched her face with the care of a man reading a hostile contract. "Me." "He believes you will make me cooperative." "Will I?" "He has seldom shown such insight." The towel beneath her fingers grew hot. She changed it for a clean one and kept her eyes on the wound. "You could have phoned." "You blocked my number." "You could have written." "You returned the letters." "You could have respected that." "I did, until silence became a means of helping him find you." "So you came to a flat I'm borrowing and brought a collector with you." "I went to Silas's first. Then the Golden Empress. Your usual delivery route proved admirably difficult to follow." "Yu-Fei wouldn't tell you where I was." "Yu-Fei threw a ladle at my head." "She has good aim." "She does." Forty-three days had passed since Aurora left his house. The last time she had unbuttoned that shirt, he had been laughing against her mouth. An hour later, she had found the file in his study. Evan's name. Her parents' Cardiff address. Photographs of her outside the Golden Empress, taken before Lucien had ever ordered from the restaurant. He had called it protection. She had packed while he searched for a better word. Now her fingers brushed his skin as she adjusted the pliers. His abdomen tightened. His gaze lifted to hers, and for one dangerous second neither of them looked at the wound. "Evan's name." "What about it?" "Tell me the part you didn't put in the file." "He hired a finder when you left Cardiff. I purchased the contract before the finder reached London." "Without telling me." "Yes." "And you kept watching me." "Yes." "Stop saying yes like that makes it clean." "It does not. I won't decorate it, either." The handle of the door lowered by a fraction. Aurora's pulse jumped, but Lucien did not look away from her. "Why?" "Evan did not want an address. He wanted you frightened enough to go back." Her thumb found the edge of the pliers and pressed until the metal hurt. "You could have told me that." "You had begun to sleep through the night. I chose your sleep over your trust." "That wasn't your choice." "No." "Stop agreeing with me because you're bleeding." "I agreed before that. I disliked the conclusion." His restraint angered her more than an excuse would have. An excuse she could have torn apart. Instead he lay among Eva's cushions, bleeding through her best towel, and handed her the truth without conditions. She hooked her black hair behind one ear and bent over the wound. "Why does your father care what you do with me?" "He discovered that I destroyed a profitable contract to keep one human woman out of his reach." "So he wants to punish you." "He wants to discover why." "And I'm the why." "You have always had an unfortunate gift for legal summaries." The corner of his mouth moved. Hers did not. "What did it cost you?" "Nothing you need to carry." "There's that habit again." Lucien's jaw tightened. Blood loss had drained the colour from his lips, but his voice remained smooth. "Six trading routes. Two associates who mistook my affection for weakness. A house in Marseille." "Your mother's house." His silence gave her the answer. Aurora stared at him. He had offered that house to her once, in the careless tone he used for expensive things. A week by the sea, he had said. No contracts. No London. She had accused him of trying to improve her with better scenery. "You sold it?" "My father currently holds the deed. The distinction is legal, not sentimental." "Everything's legal with you until it isn't." "An excellent summary of my childhood." She positioned the pliers around the black sliver. "Hold still." "I had no intention of dancing." "Pull against my hand. Don't touch the inscription." "Your bedside manner needs work." "So does your father's." She pulled. The metal came free with a sound like a plucked wire. Lucien swore in French, then in a language that made the windows shiver. Aurora dropped the sliver into an empty jam jar and screwed on the lid. The thing inside scratched at the glass. The black shine retreated from his skin. His breathing eased, but his head fell back against the sofa. Aurora caught his face between her hands. "Not dying, then?" "Your tenderness has revived me." "Lucien." He opened his eyes. "You came here to warn me." "And to see whether you would open the door." "That's manipulation." "That was hope. The distinction is often unflattering." His hand covered hers. His thumb brushed the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. He had kissed that scar once and listened to her story about a bicycle, a greenhouse, and her father's doomed rose bed. She had trusted him with the harmless wounds first. He had never given her the same courtesy. "You should have kept away." "Yes." "But you didn't." "No." "Why?" "I have a considerable tolerance for your anger. I have none for your funeral." The jar rattled on the table. Aurora ignored it. Lucien lifted his free hand towards her cheek, then stopped before he touched her. "If you wish me to leave, say so." "I want you to stop deciding for me." "Then decide." She kissed him. He remained still until she gripped his ruined shirt. Then his hand settled at her waist, warm through the thin cotton of her top. The kiss held none of his old patience. Blood touched her tongue. His breath caught, and she felt the fine tremor in the arm that held her upright. For several seconds, the flat narrowed to his mouth and the ache of forty-three unfinished conversations. Aurora pulled away while she still wanted to continue. "That changes nothing." "No." "And when we get out of this, you answer every question." "Every question is an ambitious brief." "Take the deal, Moreau." His thumb moved once against her waist. "I accept, Carter." Ptolemy growled. The first deadbolt turned by itself. Lucien's hand left her. He rose, swayed, and hooked his cane from beneath the scrolls with one foot. A hidden catch clicked. A thin blade slid from the ivory handle. The whisper at the keyhole stopped. Aurora wrapped the contract iron in a tea towel and closed her fist around it. "Does this hurt it?" "Yes." "Good." "The bedroom window reaches the roof." "No." "Aurora." "You don't get to make choices for me five minutes after admitting that's why I left." The second deadbolt snapped back. Blue light crawled across the doorframe, then broke into sparks. Lucien's mouth tightened. He looked at the window, at her, and finally shifted aside to make room at his shoulder. "Beside me, then." The third deadbolt sprang open. The door burst inward. Books spun from their stacks. Ptolemy screamed as a jointed shadow filled the landing, and the collector stepped into the flat wearing Evan's face. It raised a contract pierced through its palm. Aurora read her name at the bottom. Beneath it, in Lucien's unmistakable hand, was his signature.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1670
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
76.05% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1670
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"affection"
count1
4
word"dancing"
count1
5
word"tenderness"
count1
6
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"silence"
2"pulse"
3"affection"
4"dancing"
5"tenderness"
6"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences117
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences117
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences223
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen22
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1670
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
84.02% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions47
wordCount1061
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.32
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien12
Moreau1
Eva5
Silas1
Ptolemy4
Aurora14
Photographs1
Golden1
Empress1
London1
French1
Evan2
Blood3
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Eva"
3"Silas"
4"Ptolemy"
5"Aurora"
6"Empress"
7"Evan"
8"Blood"
places
0"Golden"
1"London"
2"French"
globalScore0.84
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences83
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1670
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences223
matches
0"unbuttoned that shirt"
1"offered that house"
2"kissed that scar"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs160
mean10.44
std11.91
cv1.141
sampleLengths
09
138
223
310
47
55
66
76
87
926
103
114
124
1366
148
1559
1613
175
185
194
206
2139
224
232
2423
2510
265
2712
285
2911
3037
314
325
334
343
353
363
3714
381
397
402
416
4221
434
444
454
464
475
4812
4914
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences117
matches
0"been invited"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs173
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences223
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount710
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount10
adverbRatio0.014084507042253521
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0028169014084507044
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences223
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences223
mean7.49
std4.81
cv0.642
sampleLengths
09
112
24
39
413
510
62
71
81
99
1010
117
125
136
146
157
163
1711
1812
193
204
214
2210
238
2417
2513
2618
278
2811
2911
3021
3111
325
3313
345
355
364
376
385
3915
406
4113
424
432
445
459
469
4710
485
4912
44.69% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats17
diversityRatio0.31390134529147984
totalSentences223
uniqueOpeners70
92.59% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences108
matches
0"Of course he knew."
1"Instead he lay among Eva's"
2"Then his hand settled at"
ratio0.028
79.26% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences108
matches
0"His ivory-handled cane spun beneath"
1"She hauled him across the"
2"His knees buckled."
3"He had lost none of"
4"She shoved Eva's notes aside"
5"His tailored charcoal suit had"
6"His platinum hair had broken"
7"She cut away his shirt."
8"He had once told her"
9"She gripped the pliers."
10"Her hand stopped."
11"She changed it for a"
12"He had called it protection."
13"She had packed while he"
14"His abdomen tightened."
15"His gaze lifted to hers,"
16"Her thumb found the edge"
17"His restraint angered her more"
18"She hooked her black hair"
19"Hers did not."
ratio0.352
20.19% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount95
totalSentences108
matches
0"The door opened, and Lucien"
1"Aurora caught him by the"
2"Blood warmed her knuckles."
3"His ivory-handled cane spun beneath"
4"She hauled him across the"
5"Ptolemy shot off an atlas"
6"His knees buckled."
7"Aurora caught him again, swore,"
8"He had lost none of"
9"The cramped flat offered little"
10"Curry spice rose through the"
11"Aurora had borrowed the flat"
12"Eva had left her three"
13"Lucien had never been invited"
14"She shoved Eva's notes aside"
15"His tailored charcoal suit had"
16"His platinum hair had broken"
17"The black one reflected nothing."
18"Aurora fetched the first-aid tin"
19"She cut away his shirt."
ratio0.88
46.30% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences108
matches
0"Now her fingers brushed his"
ratio0.009
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences53
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"His breath caught, and she felt the fine tremor in the arm that held her upright."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
91.4366%