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Run: 2026-10-27-01M5YFBR8W2M1K7PNZFQDXWP65
Run Details
Model:
Kimi K3.1 Pro (Reasoning, Max)
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
10m 20s
Cost:
$0.176948
Provider:
Moonshot AI
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
89.42%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
76.95%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
46.80%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
100.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
77.58%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
39.55%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
37.88%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
92.2723%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
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Aurora opened the door and
found Lucien Moreau bleeding on her threshold.
He leaned on his ivory-handled
cane with the weary elegance of a man waiting for a train.
His charcoal suit still held
its cut, but blood had blackened one side of his shirt.
A strand of platinum hair
hung over his brow. One amber eye met hers.
The other, black from lid
to lid, gave nothing away. “Before you close it, there is a man downstairs with a crossbow.” She pushed the door. “He also has your name.” The door stopped. “Which one?” “Malphora.”
Aurora caught his lapel and
hauled him inside.
A glass broke in Silas’s
bar below. Somebody cheered. Bass
pulsed
through the floorboards, along with the smell of beer and old smoke.
Her flat made no allowance
for drama. One room, a narrow bed, a kettle with a chipped lid, and enough of Eva’s books to build a second wall.
Her Golden Empress jacket hung
from its peg, still carrying the scents of star anise and sesame oil. She shot the bolt.
Lucien had stopped pretending the
cane was decoration. “Chair.” “I may ruin the upholstery.” “It came from a skip.” “Then my standards and I shall endure.”
He lowered himself into the
chair.
Aurora took the cane from
his hand, twisted the ivory handle, and drew out the thin blade concealed inside.
She laid it on the
table beyond his reach. His gaze followed it. “You remember the mechanism.” “You’d be alarmed by what I remember.”
She fetched the first-aid kit
from beneath the sink. When she returned, he had removed his jacket but not his smile. That had become less convincing. “How long?” “Since Highgate? One hundred and twelve days.” “Since someone opened your side.” “Nine minutes.” “Then we’ve time for you to be quiet.” Dried blood had glued his shirt to the wound.
She cut the linen with
scissors rather than wait for him to perform an undressing he would make troublesome. The injury ran beneath his ribs, narrow and deep. Black grit lined the edges. Aurora pressed gauze against it. Lucien’s knuckles blanched on the chair arm. “A collector’s hook?” “Nasty things. Designed to keep the merchandise alive.” “Merchandise.” “His aim needed work.”
Once, she had traced the
pale seam beneath his collarbone while he told her a filthy story in French.
Now she kept her attention
on the wound. The crescent scar on her left wrist showed white against his skin. His gaze snagged on it.
She turned her hand so
he could no longer see the place he had kissed. “Inside pocket,” he said.
She reached into his discarded
jacket and found a folded sheet of grey vellum. Warm. It contracted against her palm. The writing surfaced as she opened it. Aurora Carter. Laila. Malphora. The name she used for deliveries no restaurant needed to know about sat between her birth name and the one she used in rooms where humans
were outnumbered
.
She had never written all
three on anything.
His signature occupied the bottom
of the page. “You signed it.” “I signed the original passage order.” “Did you know it would take my name?” “No.” Aurora pressed harder. Lucien’s jaw tightened, but he made no sound. “Did you know it would take something?” “Yes.” “There we are.” The vellum stirred between her fingers. A fine black line crept from her printed name towards her thumb.
She dropped it on the
table and pinned it beneath the cane’s empty sheath. Lucien watched the sheath rather than her face. “The key at Highgate needed a living bearer. I gave the house an alias. An alias has no blood and no lineage. The account should have closed when you delivered the box.” “It had teeth.” “It was an old key.” “It bit me.” “Yes. That was when I understood the terms had changed.” “And before that? When you put the box in my hands and told me not to open it?” “I had run out of people whose names I could afford to lose.” Aurora looked at him then. He held her gaze. No polished excuse. No elegant turn of phrase to carry him past the ugliness of it. “You mean you ran out of people you didn’t mind spending.” “Yes.” The word took more air out of the room than his wound had.
He had cleaned the bite
that night. He had sworn no one would touch her, and he had stayed when she asked him to stay. She remembered that because it was the only choice he had allowed her. He left before she woke. No note. No call. Two men with paper-white faces came asking for Malphora the following week. “I dealt with the collectors I found,” he said. “You missed two.” His fingers stopped moving against the chair. “What happened?” “Silas showed one the cellar. I showed the other my kitchen knife.” “Aurora.” “Don’t sound disappointed. You taught me where to put it.” She folded a fresh pad over the wound and secured it with a bandage. Her hands worked without shaking. That pleased her. The rest of her offered no such cooperation. “Where did you go?” “Avaros. My father keeps the original claim in his archive.” “Your father, the demon.” “You make it sound like a hobby.” “He put my name in a book.” “He puts a great many things in books. People he dislikes get shelf space.” “You could have sent a message.” “You would have come after me.” “So you left me with no truth and a target on my back.” “I left wards.” “They scratched themselves off the windows.” For the first time since the door had opened, Lucien looked away. Aurora tore off the end of the bandage with her teeth. “You didn’t stay away to protect me. You stayed away because telling me meant giving me a choice.” “I went to correct my mistake.” “And if you’d knocked before you finished correcting it?” “You would have hated me.” “I already hated you. We could have saved time.” His mouth moved.
Not a smile, but the ghost of one
. “I missed that.” “Don’t.” “I missed you.” She tied off the bandage and pulled it tight enough to make him curse in French. His plan took six sentences. A passage through Silas’s cellar. A car beyond the alley. Papers under the name Laila. A house outside London where no Moreau could cross the threshold without invitation. Eva’s flat if Aurora refused to leave the city, though he advised against it. “Three deadbolts and a tabby cat. I’ll feel invincible.” “Ptolemy has survived worse than collectors.” “I’m not taking this to Eva’s door.” “Then the car leaves London.” “And you?” Lucien reached for his jacket. A second paper slid from beneath the first. Aurora caught it before he could. His full name covered the top line. Beneath it sat the black seal of Avaros, a circle with a bite taken from its edge. She read enough. “Substitution.” “An elegant solution.” “You offered yourself.” “My father has wanted me home for years. I am giving him a reason to stop shopping.” “And you thought you’d tuck this behind my travel papers?” “I thought you would be angry after you were safe. I preferred that order.” She held the paper between them. “You came to say goodbye.” “I came to get you out.” “No. You came to turn your surrender into a favour, then vanish before I could refuse it.” “What would you have me do? Knock on your door, ask you to love me, and leave the bill on your table?” The question stripped something from his voice. Not the polish. The distance. Aurora’s grip loosened on the paper. “I never asked you to love me.” “No. You asked me to stay.” He rose before she could stop him. The effort cost him. She saw it in the hand he pressed to his side and in the breath he held until the pain passed.
Then he stood close enough
for her to smell blood beneath the cloves on his clothes. His gaze dropped to her mouth, then returned to her eyes. He lifted one hand and stopped before touching her cheek. “Ask.” “May I?” “No.” He lowered his hand. No argument. No charming little theft. Aurora caught his lapels and kissed him. He went still for one startled second.
Then his cane struck the
floor and his hand found her waist. He kissed her as though one hundred and twelve days had made him worse, not better. Blood and whisky. The bitter trace of cloves. Her fingers slid to the back of his neck, where his platinum hair had come loose, and his grip tightened at her hip. For a few seconds, there was no contract, no Avaros, no bed stripped in anger.
Only the hard fact of
him, alive and warm and still capable of taking more than she meant to give. She ended the kiss before it could turn tender. A strand of her black hair clung to his cheek. He did not brush it away. “That changes nothing.” “No.” “And you’re not going to Avaros.” “Aurora.” “You don’t get to use your life to make mine tidy.” “You never needed me to make your life tidy.” “Good. Remember that.” She crossed to the hob and turned on the gas. Understanding moved through his face. “Don’t.” Aurora held the substitution paper over the blue flame. “That is the only executed copy.” “Good.” “It took three days and a finger to acquire.” “Which finger?” “Not one of mine.” The paper caught. Green fire
raced
around the seal. Lucien lunged, then stopped with one hand clamped to his ribs. Aurora dropped the burning sheet into the sink. It writhed against the steel and gave off a smell like singed hair. He stared at it. “You have removed my means of settling this.” “I removed your favourite way of leaving.” The bass below stopped. Lucien’s attention snapped to the door. The wounded man vanished from his posture. Something colder took his place, all
measured
breath and calculation. “Window?” “Fire escape. It’s rusted shut.” “Can you run?” “Can you?” “No.” “Honesty. We’re making progress.” Glass burst across the sink. Aurora seized his jacket and dragged him down. A black crossbow bolt punched through the space where his throat had been and nailed the grey vellum to the table. Ink spilled from the page. It ran against the grain of the wood and formed a single word. OPEN. Three courteous knocks sounded at the front door. “Lucien,” a man called from the landing. “Father says you have kept his book long enough.” Aurora looked at Lucien. “Brother?” “Half.” “Of course.” The bolt in the table
began to
vibrate. The front lock answered with a click. Lucien retrieved his cane. Aurora took up the thin blade, then thought better of it and put it into his hand. She armed herself with the iron poker from beside the hob. “Cellar?” “Blocked.” “You said it would be clear.” “I said I had paid for it to be clear.” “Your plans are sentimental.” Wood cracked around the lock. Lucien stepped in front of her. Aurora moved to his uninjured side and levelled the poker at the door. “Together,” he said. “Don’t make it sound romantic.” The door split from top to bottom.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
4
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
114
tagDensity
0.035
leniency
0.07
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
100.00%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1891
totalAiIsmAdverbs
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
89.42%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1891
totalAiIsms
4
found
0
word
"pulsed"
count
1
1
word
"traced"
count
1
2
word
"raced"
count
1
3
word
"measured"
count
1
highlights
0
"pulsed"
1
"traced"
2
"raced"
3
"measured"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
1
narrationSentences
145
matches
0
"d in anger"
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
145
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"began to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
255
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
repeatedSegmentCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
32
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1891
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
18
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
76.95%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
48
wordCount
1232
uniqueNames
13
maxNameDensity
1.46
worstName
"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity
2.5
worstWindowName
"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien
12
Moreau
2
Silas
2
Eva
2
Golden
1
Empress
1
French
2
Carter
1
Malphora
2
Laila
2
London
1
Aurora
18
Avaros
2
persons
0
"Lucien"
1
"Moreau"
2
"Silas"
3
"Eva"
4
"Carter"
5
"Laila"
6
"Aurora"
places
0
"French"
1
"London"
globalScore
0.769
windowScore
0.833
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
93
glossingSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
1
per1kWords
0.529
wordCount
1891
matches
0
"Not a smile, but the ghost of one"
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
255
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
181
mean
10.45
std
12.72
cv
1.218
sampleLengths
0
12
1
57
2
12
3
4
4
5
5
3
6
2
7
1
8
8
9
69
10
4
11
8
12
1
13
5
14
5
15
7
16
34
17
4
18
4
19
7
20
26
21
2
22
7
23
5
24
2
25
8
26
42
27
5
28
7
29
3
30
8
31
1
32
4
33
59
34
4
35
20
36
7
37
2
38
1
39
1
40
36
41
8
42
3
43
6
44
8
45
1
46
3
47
8
48
7
49
1
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
145
matches
0
"were outnumbered"
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
201
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
255
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1235
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
28
adverbRatio
0.022672064777327937
lyAdverbCount
2
lyAdverbRatio
0.0016194331983805667
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
255
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
255
mean
7.42
std
5.33
cv
0.719
sampleLengths
0
12
1
17
2
16
3
9
4
5
5
10
6
12
7
4
8
5
9
3
10
2
11
1
12
8
13
7
14
2
15
14
16
7
17
21
18
18
19
4
20
8
21
1
22
5
23
5
24
7
25
6
26
19
27
9
28
4
29
4
30
7
31
9
32
12
33
5
34
2
35
7
36
5
37
2
38
8
39
9
40
19
41
9
42
5
43
5
44
7
45
3
46
8
47
1
48
4
49
19
46.80%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
14
diversityRatio
0.3137254901960784
totalSentences
255
uniqueOpeners
80
100.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
4
totalSentences
132
matches
0
"Once, she had traced the"
1
"Then he stood close enough"
2
"Then his cane struck the"
3
"Only the hard fact of"
ratio
0.03
77.58%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
47
totalSentences
132
matches
0
"He leaned on his ivory-handled"
1
"His charcoal suit still held"
2
"She pushed the door."
3
"Her flat made no allowance"
4
"Her Golden Empress jacket hung"
5
"She shot the bolt."
6
"He lowered himself into the"
7
"She laid it on the"
8
"His gaze followed it."
9
"She fetched the first-aid kit"
10
"She cut the linen with"
11
"His gaze snagged on it."
12
"She turned her hand so"
13
"She reached into his discarded"
14
"It contracted against her palm."
15
"She had never written all"
16
"His signature occupied the bottom"
17
"She dropped it on the"
18
"He held her gaze."
19
"He had cleaned the bite"
ratio
0.356
39.55%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
111
totalSentences
132
matches
0
"Aurora opened the door and"
1
"He leaned on his ivory-handled"
2
"His charcoal suit still held"
3
"A strand of platinum hair"
4
"The other, black from lid"
5
"She pushed the door."
6
"The door stopped."
7
"Aurora caught his lapel and"
8
"A glass broke in Silas’s"
9
"Bass pulsed through the floorboards,"
10
"Her flat made no allowance"
11
"Her Golden Empress jacket hung"
12
"She shot the bolt."
13
"Lucien had stopped pretending the"
14
"He lowered himself into the"
15
"Aurora took the cane from"
16
"She laid it on the"
17
"His gaze followed it."
18
"She fetched the first-aid kit"
19
"That had become less convincing."
ratio
0.841
37.88%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
1
totalSentences
132
matches
0
"Now she kept her attention"
ratio
0.008
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
49
technicalSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
4
uselessAdditionCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
4
fancyCount
0
fancyTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
114
tagDensity
0.035
leniency
0.07
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
92.2723%