Run: 2026-10-27-01M5YFGC0V7YXB4K55T40ATTGT

Run Details

Duration:
9m 19s
Cost:
$0.145086
Provider:
Moonshot AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Eva’s message was twenty-six seconds long. For the first nine, she breathed into the phone while something knocked on wood: twice, a pause, then once. “Richmond. Isolde’s grove. Bring the pendant. If you hear me before you see me, don’t answer.” Three more knocks followed. The call ended before Rory could hear whether Eva made another sound. She had played the message on the bus, outside the Golden Empress, and again at Richmond Park’s locked gate. Eva’s phone had refused every call since. Whoever had sent the message knew about the Heartstone, and Eva had chosen her words with care. No jokes. No apology for the hour. That, more than the knocking, had put Rory on the bus with a delivery torch in her pocket and the pendant beneath her shirt. She had left Yu-Fei a note saying where she’d gone and when to raise the alarm. At twelve minutes past midnight, Rory ducked through the gap in the railings and entered the park. Wet grass shone beyond the reach of the street lamps. Water ticked from the branches, and each step pressed a cold seep through the seams of her trainers. Richmond kept a border of city noise even after midnight: tyres on the wet road, an aircraft labouring overhead, the occasional mechanical cough of a bus. She walked until those sounds thinned behind the oaks. The first wrong thing was that she found the path. Eva had brought her to Isolde’s grove twice before. Both times they had searched for it, circling the same copse while Eva insisted the turning lay beside a split trunk. Tonight the path opened as soon as Rory raised the torch. Pale earth divided the grass without a stray root or fallen branch across it. She followed for twenty paces before she noticed the second footstep. It came after hers, faint enough to be an echo bouncing between trunks. Rory shortened her stride. The sound shortened with it. She scuffed one heel through the leaves and heard the scuff repeated from the dark on her left. She stopped and shone the torch between the trees. Rain jewelled the bark. Nothing else occupied the beam. “Eva?” Her voice travelled a short distance and vanished. Rory waited with her finger on the torch switch. When no answer came, she walked on. The standing stones emerged between the ancient oaks, their surfaces grooved and silvered by age. Roots had fastened around several of them like hands gripping furniture before a move. Beyond lay the clearing. Foxgloves stood among wood anemones; red campion flowered beneath a fringe of frost. Seasons had never meant much in the grove. That part, at least, was familiar. Tonight every flower faced the centre. Rory passed her hand above a cluster near the boundary. No breeze moved them. When she withdrew her hand, the nearest stem gave a small jerk and settled. Her phone showed no signal. The time read 00:16. She tore a strip from a yellow order slip and wedged it beneath the root marking the widest gap between the stones. Then she checked that she could see it from inside the clearing. Beneath her shirt, the Heartstone contracted with warmth. Rory pulled it free. The crimson gem rested in her palm, no larger than her thumbnail, its silver chain sliding between her fingers. A dull light turned inside it without reaching the surface. Another pulse of heat followed. She had learnt to distrust that warmth. It meant a Hel portal lay close enough for the stone to notice. She looked back along the path. The torch beam reached perhaps eight metres before the trunks took it. Eva’s warning offered no instruction for this part. Bring the pendant. Don’t answer a voice you can’t see. Nothing about what to do if the pendant began announcing a door into Hel. “Ten minutes,” Rory said. “Then I go for help.” She stepped between the stones. The temperature did not change, but the sweat along her spine turned unpleasantly conspicuous. She swept the torch around the clearing, keeping the yellow slip at the edge of her vision. No figure waited beside the stones. No phone light answered hers. “Eva? I’m at the boundary. I’ve brought it.” From beyond the nearest stone, Rory’s own voice repeated her. “Eva? I’m at the boundary. I’ve brought it.” The copy preserved the roughness in her throat after a long delivery shift. It even caught the small lift she gave Eva’s name when she was worried. It was not an echo. An echo would have returned from the stones. This voice had stood to her right. Rory turned the torch on it. Her beam struck bark, wet leaves, a fallen branch furred with moss. At its farthest edge, a flower stem straightened. Her teeth had already parted around Eva’s name. She closed her mouth. The chain tightened in her fist. She wrapped it once around her left wrist to stop the gem swinging and moved along the boundary. The warmth faded when she approached the marked gap. It strengthened when she passed the next stone. She tested the change with two paces backwards, then two forwards. Cooler. Warmer. Whatever had drawn her here had chosen the ground well. She searched without crossing the centre. Behind one stone she found a crescent of flattened grass, broad enough for someone to have sat with their back against it. She crouched and touched the blades. They were dry. Frost silvered the grass all around them, but none coated the hollow. Two knocks sounded behind her. Rory rose. The pause stretched. Then came the third. The pattern had moved from Eva’s voicemail into the clearing. She placed her palm against the stone beside her. Its grit bit into her skin. For several seconds she felt only the cold. Then a knock travelled through the rock and tapped the centre of her palm. She snatched her hand away. The stone stood silent. No crack marked it. No gap could have concealed a person’s arm. Rory wiped her palm on her coat and moved on. She had come for Eva, not to accept an invitation from the scenery. At the edge of her vision, something crossed the grass. She held the torch steady. The movement had occupied the margin where the beam faded, a brief interruption between one stone and the next. She waited. When it did not recur, she shifted one pace sideways without moving the light. A stem bowed. The one beyond it dipped next. Then a third, each bending in turn beneath a weight that left the upper air empty. The disturbance travelled six feet and stopped. Rory took another pace sideways. Nothing moved. She resisted the urge to look behind her. If the grove wanted her attention divided, it could work harder for it. She backed towards the marked gap instead, keeping the line of bent stems in front of her. The pendant pulsed again. Heat pressed through her shirt. Her phone vibrated. For one reckless instant she thought Eva had broken through. The screen showed no call, no message, only the clock. It read 03:41. Thursday had become Friday. Rory stared at the numbers until they changed to 03:42. The battery had fallen by one per cent. Her unsent message to Yu-Fei still sat at the top of the screen, waiting for a signal. She had been inside the grove for twelve minutes. Fifteen, if she allowed for the search along the boundary. Outside, more than three hours had passed. She put the phone away and looked at the yellow slip. It remained beneath the root, a small, practical square of the world she had left. Twenty paces, perhaps fewer. “Eva, I’m going for help. If you can hear me, stay away from the stones.” The words came out evenly. That pleased her until she realised she had given the clearing more of her voice to use. From the centre, Eva whispered, “Rory.” Rory’s shoulders locked. It sounded tired. Not frightened, not commanding. Tired in the way Eva had sounded after too many night shifts, when she would sit on Rory’s kitchen floor because climbing onto a chair required a decision. “Please.” Rory raised the torch and searched the centre. Flowers. Grass. The far stones. She did not answer. She turned towards the gap. One step. Two. She counted six, then stopped with her right foot raised. A seventh footstep pressed into the grass behind her. Rory lowered her foot. The faintest rustle followed, as though whatever stood there had adjusted its balance to match hers. She walked again. Three quick steps, a long one, two short. The following steps refused the pattern. They continued at an even pace, neither hurrying nor falling behind. The gap approached. Rory could see the pale path beyond it and the dark seam between two oaks where she had entered. She fixed her attention on the yellow paper. Twenty paces became ten. Five. “Rory.” Eva’s voice now came from the stone beside the gap. Rory stopped. The voice had crossed the clearing without making a journey. She looked straight ahead. “Don’t go yet.” She stepped over the root. The pendant cooled against her skin. Under her torch, the path remained where it had been, wet earth bordered by grass. She crossed onto it and listened for the next footstep. None came. Rory held her breath to sharpen the silence. No leaves shifted. No water fell. Even the knocking had ceased. She pinched her nose and sealed her lips. After four seconds, something at her back inhaled. Its exhale stirred the hair beneath her ear.
created_at"2026-10-27T10:46:42.472Z" 10/27/2026, 10:46:42 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity0.182
leniency0.364
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1601
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
59.40% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1601
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"mechanical"
count1
1
word"echo"
count3
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count3
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"pulsed"
count1
7
word"vibrated"
count1
8
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"mechanical"
1"echo"
2"familiar"
3"warmth"
4"pulse"
5"weight"
6"pulsed"
7"vibrated"
8"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences178
matches
0"d with warmth"
1"was worried"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences178
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences187
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1601
ratio0
matches(empty)
83.33% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"For the first nine, she breathed into the phone while something knocked on wood: twice, a pause, then once."
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions50
wordCount1540
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.43
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory22
Eva15
Golden1
Empress1
Richmond2
Park1
Heartstone2
Yu-Fei2
Isolde1
Hel2
Friday1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Heartstone"
places
0"Golden"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
3"Isolde"
4"Hel"
globalScore0.786
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences114
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.625
wordCount1601
matches
0"neither hurrying nor"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences187
matches
0"was that she"
1"checked that she"
2"distrust that warmth"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs82
mean19.52
std16.23
cv0.831
sampleLengths
025
116
216
374
416
517
663
710
855
911
1040
1118
121
138
1416
1560
166
1728
189
1934
208
2138
2220
2350
249
255
2642
278
2810
298
3027
3120
3226
3312
3454
3510
3649
375
389
3910
4037
415
4216
4323
4410
4540
463
4729
485
492
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences178
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs265
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences187
ratio0.005
matches
0"Foxgloves stood among wood anemones; red campion flowered beneath a fringe of frost."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1543
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount39
adverbRatio0.025275437459494492
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.002592352559948153
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences187
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences187
mean8.56
std5.45
cv0.636
sampleLengths
06
119
216
34
412
519
67
717
82
95
1024
1116
1217
1310
1418
1526
169
1710
189
1921
2011
2114
2211
2313
244
255
2618
279
284
295
301
318
329
337
3415
3514
364
3713
388
396
406
4110
424
4314
445
454
4622
4712
488
494
49.73% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.32085561497326204
totalSentences187
uniqueOpeners60
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences164
matches
0"Then she checked that she"
1"Then came the third."
2"Then a knock travelled through"
3"Then a third, each bending"
4"Even the knocking had ceased."
ratio0.03
95.61% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount51
totalSentences164
matches
0"She had played the message"
1"She had left Yu-Fei a"
2"She walked until those sounds"
3"She followed for twenty paces"
4"It came after hers, faint"
5"She scuffed one heel through"
6"She stopped and shone the"
7"Her voice travelled a short"
8"Her phone showed no signal."
9"She tore a strip from"
10"She had learnt to distrust"
11"It meant a Hel portal"
12"She looked back along the"
13"She stepped between the stones."
14"She swept the torch around"
15"It even caught the small"
16"It was not an echo."
17"Her beam struck bark, wet"
18"Her teeth had already parted"
19"She closed her mouth."
ratio0.311
97.20% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount119
totalSentences164
matches
0"Eva’s message was twenty-six seconds"
1"The call ended before Rory"
2"She had played the message"
3"Eva’s phone had refused every"
4"That, more than the knocking,"
5"She had left Yu-Fei a"
6"Water ticked from the branches,"
7"Richmond kept a border of"
8"She walked until those sounds"
9"The first wrong thing was"
10"Eva had brought her to"
11"Both times they had searched"
12"Tonight the path opened as"
13"She followed for twenty paces"
14"It came after hers, faint"
15"Rory shortened her stride."
16"The sound shortened with it."
17"She scuffed one heel through"
18"She stopped and shone the"
19"Rain jewelled the bark."
ratio0.726
60.98% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences164
matches
0"Whoever had sent the message"
1"If the grove wanted her"
ratio0.012
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences67
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Then a third, each bending in turn beneath a weight that left the upper air empty."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
59.09% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"the centre Eva whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity0.182
leniency0.364
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.182
92.4001%