Run: 2026-10-27-01M5YFRG4JZXH0H8B47MHFR07K

Run Details

Duration:
9m 59s
Cost:
$0.156818
Provider:
Moonshot AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory locked her bicycle to the railings outside Richmond Park at eleven fifty-four. As she straightened, its bell gave a small, imperfect chime beneath her glove. She covered it with her palm until the metal stopped ticking. The last bus sighed away from the junction. Its rear lights vanished. Orange streetlamps divided the road into bright sections, with long stretches of dark between, and the park’s side gate stood open by the width of a hand. She had expected to climb it. The note in her coat pocket contained four lines: Midnight. The grove. Come alone. Bring what I gave you. Its paper matched the envelope in which the Heartstone had arrived. No postmark on either. No signature. Only the assurance that someone knew where she lived and what she had hidden at the bottom of her sock drawer. She had left Silas a copy of the note, a map and instructions to ring her at half past twelve. Alone was one thing. She had no intention of being untraceable. Rory left the gate as she found it and switched on her torch. For the first hundred yards, the park offered ordinary evidence of itself: a crushed drinks can, sweet wrappers trapped against a fence, mud scrolled with tyre tracks. Then the path entered the trees. The litter disappeared. So did the road noise, not all at once but in pieces. First the tyres. Then the low mechanical hum beneath them. By the time she reached the second line of trunks, she could hear her coat lining whisper against her sleeve. She stopped. Something moved in the grass behind her. The torch found wet blades, a split conker case, the black opening beneath a bush. No eyes. No fox trotting off with its brush held low. She waited for another sound. None came. The walk had taken eight minutes on Sunday. Tonight the path continued past the fallen branch she remembered, then past a second fallen branch with the same pale wound at its root. She checked the note again, though she knew every word, and walked on. She found the grove by the change in the grass. Beyond the ancient oak standing stones it grew fine and silver, without dew. Wildflowers crowded between them: red campion, purple vetch, small white blossoms whose names she had never learned. December had stripped the park outside. Here, every pale flower held her torch beam for a moment before giving it back. Rory crossed the boundary. Her watch showed twelve minutes past midnight. Her phone, which had agreed with it at the gate, showed eleven forty-eight. No service. No message waiting from Silas. An hour inside the grove could be minutes or days outside it. She had known that before accepting the invitation. Knowing it did not make the numbers on her phone any easier to look at. She put it away and gave the meeting five minutes. “It’s midnight,” she called. “More or less. You wanted to talk.” Her words sounded small without being quiet. “I brought the pendant. You can start with your name.” At the far edge of the clearing, something passed in front of a stone just after her torch left it. A narrowing of the dark. Nothing she could call a shape. She brought the beam back. The stone stood whole. A stem of campion beside it shook once, scattering no petals. Rory kept the light there until her eyes began to water. Nothing moved while she watched. The first pulse of warmth came as she checked her watch again. The Heartstone sat in her coat’s inside pocket, separated from her skin by cloth. Its heat pressed through the lining with a slow, deliberate push. She took it out. The silver chain slid over her glove, and the deep crimson stone settled into her palm, no larger than her thumbnail. A faint glow lived inside it, independent of the torch. The pendant warmed again. Rory closed her fingers around it. Near a Hel portal, it pulsed. She had tested that enough times to trust it. She had come for a name and an explanation, not a doorway. “No,” she said, addressing the clearing. “That isn’t part of the meeting.” Her bicycle bell rang behind her. One chime, then the smaller second note, a fraction late. The same sound it had made under her glove at the park gate. This time it came from deeper among the wildflowers. Rory turned towards it before she could stop herself. The torch illuminated blossoms, grass and the dark feet of the standing stones. No bicycle. No hand withdrawing from a handlebar. She faced the way out instead. Following sounds had already brought her far enough. She walked towards the gap through which she had entered. Wet grass crushed softly under her boots. One step. Two. Three. She stopped. Behind the left-hand stone, grass settled beneath a fourth footstep. Rory held the torch steady. A bird might have shifted in the branches. A deer might have put one hoof down and waited for her to move. Either explanation would have been improved by some breathing, a wingbeat, the knock of antler against bark. She heard none. Without lifting her boot, she scuffed her toe through the grass. Silence. She took one measured step. The answer came beyond the stone, closer than the bell had been. “I’m leaving,” she said. Nothing replied. Rory fixed on a pale birch beyond the boundary and walked straight towards it. She stepped through the gap without looking back. The ground should have sloped down to the park path. Instead it rose beneath her boots. Three paces on, wildflowers brushed her shins. Ahead stood the split boundary stone she had just passed. The clearing lay behind it. She had not turned. Her shoulders had stayed square to the birch, and the torch beam had never left the ground in front of her. Rory backed between the stones. The wildflowers returned to ankle height. When she looked for the birch, she found it over her left shoulder. Her watch had advanced two minutes. She chose a different gap, one narrower than the first, and moved towards it. At the edge of her vision, the darkness beside a standing stone drew itself in. For an instant it had been wide enough to conceal a person. Then it was only stone again. She swept the torch across it. The beam shook. She corrected her grip with both hands. The light made a tunnel of whatever it touched and hid everything outside it. Rory switched it off. Moonlight returned by degrees. The standing stones separated from the trees. The wildflowers turned grey, then white where their petals faced the sky. Between her fingers, the Heartstone glowed crimson. It pulsed once more. To her left, a flower bowed. The stem beside it bent next, though no breeze touched her face. The disturbance travelled three feet through the grass and stopped beside the nearest stone. Rory shifted until she could see the gaps on both sides of her. “I know you’re there,” she said. From the far side of the clearing, her own voice answered. “I know you’re there.” It had the dry catch she heard in recordings of herself and the same small drop at the end of the sentence. It even included the breath she had taken before speaking. Rory did not repeat the words. The silver chain hung motionless from her fist. Beyond the nearest stone, something pressed the grass down with a soft, wet crush. She drew a breath and held it. Behind the stone, someone let it out.
created_at"2026-10-27T10:51:08.826Z" 10/27/2026, 10:51:08 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.06% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1268
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
68.45% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1268
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"mechanical"
count1
1
word"whisper"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count2
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"measured"
count1
highlights
0"mechanical"
1"whisper"
2"pulse"
3"warmth"
4"pulsed"
5"silence"
6"measured"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences140
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences140
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences144
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1268
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount1232
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.97
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Midnight1
Heartstone3
Silas2
Sunday1
Hel1
Rory12
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Silas"
2"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Hel"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences97
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.789
wordCount1268
matches
0"not all at once but in pieces"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences144
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs70
mean18.11
std15.8
cv0.872
sampleLengths
037
139
26
319
438
531
613
778
82
97
1026
117
1245
1310
1451
154
1627
1735
1810
1911
207
2110
2231
235
2415
2516
2612
2760
284
296
3027
3112
326
3323
349
3530
3614
3721
382
3910
4044
413
4211
431
445
4512
464
472
4845
4910
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences140
matches
0"been improved"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs194
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences144
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1235
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.022672064777327937
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0024291497975708503
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences144
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences144
mean8.81
std5.38
cv0.611
sampleLengths
013
113
211
38
44
527
66
710
82
92
105
1111
124
132
1421
1520
164
177
1813
1927
206
213
2212
233
247
2520
262
277
2815
292
309
315
322
338
3424
3513
3610
3713
3817
396
4015
414
427
4313
442
455
4612
478
4815
4910
50.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.3541666666666667
totalSentences144
uniqueOpeners51
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences123
matches
0"Only the assurance that someone"
1"Then the path entered the"
2"Then the low mechanical hum"
3"Instead it rose beneath her"
4"Then it was only stone"
ratio0.041
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences123
matches
0"She covered it with her"
1"Its rear lights vanished."
2"She had expected to climb"
3"Its paper matched the envelope"
4"She had left Silas a"
5"She had no intention of"
6"She waited for another sound."
7"She checked the note again,"
8"She found the grove by"
9"Her watch showed twelve minutes"
10"Her phone, which had agreed"
11"She had known that before"
12"She put it away and"
13"Her words sounded small without"
14"She brought the beam back."
15"Its heat pressed through the"
16"She took it out."
17"She had tested that enough"
18"She had come for a"
19"she said, addressing the clearing"
ratio0.293
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount86
totalSentences123
matches
0"Rory locked her bicycle to"
1"She covered it with her"
2"The last bus sighed away"
3"Its rear lights vanished."
4"She had expected to climb"
5"The note in her coat"
6"Its paper matched the envelope"
7"She had left Silas a"
8"She had no intention of"
9"Rory left the gate as"
10"The litter disappeared."
11"Something moved in the grass"
12"The torch found wet blades,"
13"She waited for another sound."
14"The walk had taken eight"
15"Tonight the path continued past"
16"She checked the note again,"
17"She found the grove by"
18"Wildflowers crowded between them: red"
19"December had stripped the park"
ratio0.699
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences123
matches
0"By the time she reached"
1"Either explanation would have been"
2"To her left, a flower"
ratio0.024
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences58
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
97.1504%