Run: 2026-10-27-01M5YGPDVDWDJBMXXHX3FBWP3M

Run Details

Duration:
43.4s
Cost:
$0.015104
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The man in the green jacket stepped out of the pharmacy with a paper parcel tucked under his arm. Detective Harlow Quinn watched him from the shelter of a bus stop, rain dripping from the brim of her cap onto her notebook. Tomás Herrera. Former paramedic. No licence, no registered practice, and a habit of buying enough dressings to supply a small ward. He checked the street, raised his collar and crossed against the lights. Quinn put her notebook away and followed. A bus surged through the junction, throwing water over her shoes. By the time it passed, Herrera had reached the corner. He glanced back. His warm brown eyes found hers beneath the cap. He ran. Quinn shoved through the bus stop crowd. “Police! Move!” A woman yanked a child out of her path. Quinn hit the pavement at a sprint, her coat slapping against her thighs. Herrera turned into a narrow street between a betting shop and a closed café. She caught a glimpse of his short, dark curls before he vanished around a delivery van. “Tomás Herrera! Stop!” He vaulted a stack of empty beer kegs. Quinn took the gap beside them, clipped her shoulder on the van’s mirror and kept moving. The mirror snapped inward behind her. Herrera burst onto the high street. A taxi braked, its horn blaring as he crossed in front of it. Quinn followed, one hand on the bonnet. The driver wound down his window. “Are you both mad?” “Call the police.” “I thought you were the police!” She had already reached the far pavement. Herrera cut through a knot of people outside a takeaway. One of them stumbled into Quinn, spilling chips across the wet concrete. She caught the woman by the elbow, set her upright and pushed on. Ahead, Herrera ducked beneath a shutter that had stopped halfway down. Quinn heard voices inside, then a crash. She dropped to one knee and slid under the metal. The shutter scraped her back. She came up in a shop full of plastic suitcases and cheap umbrellas. A rack had fallen across the aisle. Behind the counter, an older man held a cricket bat. “He went through there!” He pointed the bat at a door behind a curtain of hanging scarves. Quinn stepped over the rack. “Police. Stay here.” The back door opened onto an alley crowded with bins. Rainwater ran down the brickwork and gathered around a drain clogged with takeaway cartons. Herrera hauled himself over a chain-link fence at the far end, the paper parcel still clamped under one arm. Quinn drew her baton as she ran. “Stop, Herrera!” He dropped on the other side. She caught the fence, found a foothold and climbed. The wire bit through her wet gloves. Her worn watch strap snagged on a twisted end, and for one dragging moment she hung by her left wrist. She tore it free and landed hard enough to jar her teeth. Herrera had crossed another road. He ran down a flight of concrete steps beside a shuttered music venue. Quinn followed, checking the traffic before she crossed. A cyclist swore at her and swerved. At the bottom of the steps, she found a narrow passage with a railway arch at one end. A strip light flickered above a steel door. Herrera pulled at the handle. Locked. He spun when Quinn entered the passage. Water ran from his jacket cuffs. He held the parcel against his chest, and beneath the open neck of his shirt a small medallion flashed against his olive skin. “Hands where I can see them,” Quinn called. “I’ve got medicine in here.” “Put it down.” “Someone needs it.” “Then tell me where, and I’ll send an ambulance.” His mouth tightened. “They can’t go to hospital.” “Why not?” Herrera looked past her, calculating the distance to the steps. Quinn shifted to block them. “I know you lost your licence,” she continued. “I know you’ve been working out of the Raven’s Nest. I also know a man walked out of that bar with a stab wound last Thursday and nobody called it in.” “He would have died waiting for an ambulance.” “Who stabbed him?” “I didn’t ask.” “Then you can start answering questions now.” Herrera glanced at the parcel. “Two minutes. That’s all I need.” “You ran past three hospitals.” “And none of them would take her.” Quinn advanced, baton low beside her leg. “Show me what’s in the bag.” Herrera raised his free hand. A scar ran along his left forearm, pale against the wet skin. He set the parcel on a ledge, then reached into his jacket. “Keep your hand out of there.” “I need a key.” “Slowly.” He drew out a short piece of cord. A white disc hung from it, no larger than a two-pound coin. Quinn saw marks cut into its surface. “That doesn’t look like a key.” “It opens the door.” “Hand it over.” Herrera did not move. Quinn took another step, close enough to smell rain and antiseptic on his clothes. “Who’s behind the door?” “People who won’t appreciate a police officer coming in.” “Try me.” A metallic knock sounded from the other side. Three taps, a pause, then two more. Herrera’s eyes flicked toward the door. Quinn saw the shift in his weight and lunged. He snatched up the parcel and slammed the white disc against a small brass plate beside the handle. The lock clicked. Quinn caught his sleeve. Herrera twisted, and the wet fabric tore at the seam. He drove through the opening, knocking the door against her shoulder. She hit it with her baton, forcing it wide enough to follow. A broad man stood inside with a chain wrapped around one fist. Herrera shoved past him. “Shut it!” The man swung the chain at Quinn. She ducked, stepped inside its arc and struck his wrist with the baton. The chain hit the floor. He grabbed for her coat; she drove her shoulder into his chest and sent him against the wall. Herrera disappeared down a staircase. The man recovered and reached for the door. Quinn planted a boot against it. “Police. Hands up.” He stared at her, then at the staircase. “You brought a copper down here?” “Your wrist isn’t broken. Don’t make me change that.” He raised both hands. Quinn stepped inside and pulled the door shut behind her. The lock snapped into place. The passage smelled of damp plaster and old smoke. A single red bulb burned over the stairs. Quinn kept the baton in her right hand and reached for her radio with her left. “Control, this is Detective Quinn. I’m in pursuit of Tomás Herrera. Entered a stairwell off Kentish Town Road, behind the closed music venue. Request assistance.” Static crackled through the speaker. “Control, do you copy?” A voice broke through, thin and distorted. “Detective, repeat your—” The rest dissolved into a hiss. Quinn lifted the radio closer to the ceiling. Nothing. From below came a shout, then the clang of metal. She looked at the door. No handle on this side, only a brass plate like the one outside. The man with the chain rubbed his wrist. “You need a token to get out?” “You need one to get anywhere.” “Give me yours.” He showed her empty palms. “You hit it out of my hand.” The white disc lay beside the chain. Quinn crouched without taking her eyes off him and picked it up. It felt warm despite the cold passage. A carved line ran through its centre, branching into finer cuts. “Bone?” she asked. The man pulled his injured wrist against his chest. “You’re not meant to be here.” “Open the door.” He shook his head. “I can’t. You’ve got the token.” Quinn pressed the disc to the brass plate. The lock clicked. She opened the door far enough to see the rain outside, then shut it again. She had an exit. Below, another shout rose through the stairwell. “Tommy! What happened?” “Move!” Footsteps hammered across a hard floor. Quinn took out her phone. One bar appeared, then vanished. She held it toward the open door and sent her location to the duty desk, with Herrera’s name and the description of the entrance. The message sat on the screen. When it showed as sent, she put the phone away. She could wait for uniform officers. They could secure the entrance, bring a key team, work out where the stairs led. Herrera would have time to reach the person he had mentioned. If that person existed, Quinn wanted to see the injury before anyone cleaned it up or moved them. She looked down the stairs. The red light reached only the first landing. Three years earlier, Morris had gone through a door without waiting for her. The floor beyond it had been wet, though the roof held and every pipe in the building had tested sound. Quinn still remembered the mark his fingers had left on the concrete. She put the bone disc in her pocket. “Stay here,” she told the man. He let out a short laugh. “You think I’m following you?” Quinn went down. The stairwell twisted through two landings. Old station tiles showed beneath patches of flaking paint. At the bottom, a second door stood ajar, and noise poured through it: bargaining voices, the scrape of wheels, a burst of laughter cut short. Quinn edged the door open with her baton. An abandoned Tube platform stretched beneath a curved ceiling. Stalls crowded the tiled wall and spilled toward the tracks. Bare bulbs hung from wires, lighting tables loaded with bottles, knives, folded cloth and boxes secured with padlocks. Steam rose from a food cart. The air smelled of frying onions, candle wax and something sharp enough to sting her nose. Across the tracks, a tiled sign bore the remains of a station name. Someone had painted over it in black. Herrera pushed through the crowd twenty yards ahead. He reached a stall hung with strips of red fabric and passed the parcel to a woman behind the counter. Quinn started toward them. A man at the nearest table raised his head. His eyes tracked her badge, clipped inside her open coat. “Police.” He did not shout. He did not need to. The word travelled from stall to stall. Hands closed over boxes. A woman swept a tray of glass vials beneath her counter. Someone pulled a curtain across the entrance to a side tunnel. Quinn kept moving. “Tomás! Don’t run again.” Herrera looked over his shoulder. The woman at the fabric stall opened the parcel, pulled out a packet of dressings and vanished through a gap in the hanging cloth. “Where did she go?” Quinn called. “To a patient.” “Then take me to her.” Herrera put both palms on the counter. “She’s bleeding. You can question me after I stop it.” A thin man blocked Quinn’s path, carrying a tray of small cages. Something inside one cage struck the bars with a sound like a spoon on glass. “Move,” Quinn told him. “You can’t come through here.” She showed him her warrant card. “I can arrest you for obstruction.” He looked at the card. “You can try.” Quinn stepped around him. He shifted with her, cages rattling. She caught the edge of the tray and pushed it aside without spilling it. At the fabric stall, Herrera ducked through the gap. Quinn reached the counter and found the woman’s hand gripping the curtain from the other side. “Police. Open it.” The hand disappeared. Quinn pulled the fabric back. A narrow service passage ran behind the stalls. Herrera knelt beside a figure on a camp bed, cutting away a blood-soaked sleeve with medical scissors. The woman from the stall pressed a folded cloth against the patient’s upper arm. Quinn stepped through. “Tomás.” He did not look up. He opened a packet with his teeth and spread a dressing over the wound. “Hold that there,” he told the woman. The patient’s hand clamped around her wrist. Its nails were black and curved, thick as horn. Quinn stopped beside the bed. The patient’s skin had a grey cast, and blood seeped through the cloth in dark, sluggish drops. Herrera tied the dressing in place. “You see why I couldn’t take her to hospital?” Quinn kept her baton at her side. “Who did this?” The patient turned her head. Her eyes had no visible whites. Herrera reached for another packet. “Ask her when I’ve stopped the bleeding.” A heavy footfall sounded at the passage entrance. The man with the cages stood among the hanging strips, the tray gone from his hands. Quinn shifted so she could see him and Herrera. “Nobody leaves,” she told them. The patient gripped the woman’s wrist harder. Herrera pulled a syringe from his bag and held out his hand for a vial. “Then give me some room.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences71
tagDensity0.127
leniency0.254
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
97.67% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2149
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
86.04% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2149
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"calculating"
count1
2
word"flicked"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"footsteps"
count1
5
word"footfall"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"calculating"
2"flicked"
3"weight"
4"footsteps"
5"footfall"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences200
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences200
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences262
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2149
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
29.96% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions74
wordCount1791
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity2.4
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn43
Herrera28
Morris1
Tube1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Herrera"
3"Morris"
places(empty)
globalScore0.3
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences145
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2149
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences262
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs158
mean13.6
std13.79
cv1.014
sampleLengths
042
121
212
37
433
52
67
72
852
93
1030
1132
124
133
146
157
1635
1728
1835
1917
205
213
2243
237
242
2554
2633
2731
281
2936
308
315
323
333
349
353
365
372
3815
3939
408
413
423
437
445
456
465
477
487
496
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences200
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs311
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences262
ratio0.004
matches
0"He grabbed for her coat; she drove her shoulder into his chest and sent him against the wall."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1794
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.01839464882943144
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0016722408026755853
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences262
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences262
mean8.2
std5.1
cv0.622
sampleLengths
019
123
22
32
417
512
67
711
810
93
109
112
127
132
149
1513
1614
1716
183
198
2016
216
226
2313
247
256
264
273
286
297
3010
3112
3213
3311
347
3510
365
3713
387
3910
4017
415
423
4310
4414
4519
467
472
486
499
47.71% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.2786259541984733
totalSentences262
uniqueOpeners73
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences191
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount54
totalSentences191
matches
0"He checked the street, raised"
1"He glanced back."
2"His warm brown eyes found"
3"She caught a glimpse of"
4"He vaulted a stack of"
5"She had already reached the"
6"She caught the woman by"
7"She dropped to one knee"
8"She came up in a"
9"He pointed the bat at"
10"He dropped on the other"
11"She caught the fence, found"
12"Her worn watch strap snagged"
13"She tore it free and"
14"He ran down a flight"
15"He spun when Quinn entered"
16"He held the parcel against"
17"His mouth tightened."
18"He set the parcel on"
19"He drew out a short"
ratio0.283
9.74% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount172
totalSentences191
matches
0"The man in the green"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn watched him"
2"He checked the street, raised"
3"Quinn put her notebook away"
4"A bus surged through the"
5"He glanced back."
6"His warm brown eyes found"
7"Quinn shoved through the bus"
8"A woman yanked a child"
9"Quinn hit the pavement at"
10"Herrera turned into a narrow"
11"She caught a glimpse of"
12"He vaulted a stack of"
13"Quinn took the gap beside"
14"The mirror snapped inward behind"
15"Herrera burst onto the high"
16"A taxi braked, its horn"
17"Quinn followed, one hand on"
18"The driver wound down his"
19"She had already reached the"
ratio0.901
52.36% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences191
matches
0"By the time it passed,"
1"If that person existed, Quinn"
ratio0.01
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences73
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she continued (continue)"
dialogueSentences71
tagDensity0.113
leniency0.225
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.028
87.4491%