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Run: 2026-10-27-01M5YGQD02X02VT3H2JAZ7W1YS
Run Details
Model:
Kimi K3.1 Pro (Reasoning, Max)
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Horror: alone in an eerie place at night
Duration:
11m 11s
Cost:
$0.185224
Provider:
Moonshot AI
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
51.31%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
83.33%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
47.02%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
100.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
85.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
38.89%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
90.1851%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Horror genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
The knocking stopped when Aurora
stepped into the clearing.
She kept her torch aimed
at the grass and waited for it to start again. Three knocks had drawn her off the Richmond path. Three more had brought her through bracken that snatched at her jeans.
Each time, she had found
an oak within reach and nobody behind it.
Her phone showed 00:41 and
no service.
Eva’s last message still filled
the screen. Richmond. The ring of stones. Bring the pendant. Come alone if you want her back.
Eva had been missing for
four days.
Her number had stayed dead
until that evening, when those two sentences had arrived without a greeting or a kiss at the end. Eva never forgot the kiss.
Even her messages about milk
had one.
Aurora had left Silas a
note, sent Yu-Fei her location and promised to call before one.
Then she had tied thirty
metres of orange cord to an oak at the edge of the trees and walked in. Sensible precautions for a senseless errand.
The cord now ran behind
her, a thin bright line through the dark.
Her torch beam found the
nearest standing stone.
Moss furred one side of
it.
An oak root had climbed
the other and sunk into the soil beyond, gripping rock and ground together. More stones leaned between the trees, some no higher than her waist, others tall enough to cast long shapes across the clearing. Wildflowers grew thickly around them. White and blue heads brushed her shins.
Their stems bent beneath her
boots and sprang up behind her, erasing her path. Beyond the park, London carried on without her. In here, she heard no traffic, no aircraft, no foxes.
Even the bracken had stopped
whispering against her coat.
The air tasted of cold
stone and crushed stems. Beneath that lay something sweet and stale, like perfume left in a closed room.
The Heartstone pulsed against her
breastbone.
Aurora caught it through her
shirt.
Heat spread from the deep
crimson gem, faded, then returned.
She drew it out on
its silver chain. No larger than her thumbnail, yet its
weight
dragged at her hand. A dull red point shone inside it. The pendant had arrived six weeks earlier without a sender.
It had never glowed in
her flat.
It had never felt warmer
than her own skin. A small bell chimed behind her. She turned. The beam swept over grass, flowers and the black gaps between the trees. Yu-Fei
used that bell
at Golden Empress when an order waited for collection. One bright note, sharp enough to cut through wok clatter and the extractor fans. Aurora had heard it hundreds of times. For an instant she smelled ginger and hot oil.
Then the sweetness in the
clearing returned, stronger than before. “Eva?”
Her voice travelled farther than
it should have done. “Rory.” Eva’s answer came from the left, down to the rough catch on the second syllable. Aurora swung the torch towards it. A narrow stone stood beside an oak. Nothing else. “Eva, where are you?” “You’re late.” The words came from the right now. There had been no movement between the two places. No
footsteps
. No breath. “It’s not one yet.” “Not this time.” Aurora’s thumb tightened around the torch until the switch hurt her skin.
She had taken enough late
deliveries to know how streets changed sound. Walls threw voices back. Alleys stripped them bare. A person calling from behind a car never sounded like a person calling from a doorway. This voice had not moved. Someone had placed it behind her. She did not call again. The message had bought whoever held Eva’s phone one search.
It would not get a
chase. Aurora would return to the gate, get a signal and bring help. As she turned, her light brushed a line of footprints. She stopped.
They crossed a patch of
bare earth near the centre of the clearing. Boot prints, clear at the heel and blurred at the toe. Aurora knelt without putting her knee on the ground. The left print had a notch near the back.
She had caught her own
boot on a broken crate behind Golden Empress last week. The split in the sole matched.
She held her boot beside
the print. Same length. Same width. Same worn bar beneath the ball of the foot. The prints led from the central stone to a gap on the far side of the clearing. She had not walked there. No second line returned. Something pale shifted at the edge of her sight. Aurora snapped her head up.
Her torch lit oak bark
and a tangle of roots.
She held the beam there
while her
pulse
knocked in her throat. Nothing moved.
She lowered it to the
footprints again. A single knock sounded behind her.
She rose and took hold
of the orange cord. It slid through her fingers as she followed it, damp with sap. She walked backwards at first, keeping the clearing in view. When a root caught her heel, she turned and counted her paces instead. Thirty-eight should bring her to the first trees. After that, the ground sloped towards the path. At forty, wildflowers still brushed her shins. At fifty-two, her torch found the central stone. The cord ran across the grass and wrapped around its base. It ended there in a double knot, one loop tucked through the other with the tail folded back. Her knot. She had tied it to the oak outside because it held under
weight
and came free when she pulled the tail. Aurora pulled it now. The stone answered with a dull knock from inside. Her pocketknife was open in her hand before she remembered reaching for it. She stepped away from the stone. The cord went slack.
Somewhere beyond the clearing, wood
creaked under a slow, steady
weight
. Her phone
vibrated
. One bar of service
flickered
onto the screen. A message from Silas appeared, followed by a stream of missed-call notices. Three days, Rory. Police have been here. Yu-Fei’s beside herself. Just call. Aurora read it twice. The time at the top of her phone had changed to 03:18. The date had moved forward three days. Its battery had dropped by two per cent. The signal vanished. She pressed the side button and held it until the power menu appeared. Her thumb hovered. Another message
began to
load beneath Silas’s name, only the first words visible. Don’t let it The screen went black. Aurora put the phone away. She picked a gap between two oaks, fixed her torch on it and walked. No cord this time. No voices. She would keep the gap in sight and not look at anything else. Her boots pressed into the soft grass. Behind her, another set of
footsteps
answered. She took two quick steps, then a slow one. Quick, quick, slow. She stopped. One more step sounded behind her. Close enough to bend the flowers against the back of her coat. Aurora turned with the knife raised. The clearing lay empty. Her own trail led back to the central stone. Beside its final print sat a fresh impression, deeper than the rest. Grass sprang up inside it while she watched. The Heartstone
pulsed
again. Heat bit through her shirt. Once. Twice. On the third
pulse
, a knock answered from beneath her boots. She looked down. A narrow seam had opened in the grass near the central stone. No soil showed inside it. Her torch beam reached the edge and stopped, though she
could feel
the ground beneath the light. The wildflowers on either side bent towards the darkness. Their petals
trembled
without touching one another. The pendant dragged at its chain. Aurora unfastened the clasp and slipped the silver links over her head. She held the chain between finger and thumb. The Heartstone swung towards the seam and hung there, level with the ground. Its inner glow brightened with each
pulse
. Something below answered in the same rhythm. “Rory, don’t run.” Eva’s voice rose from the seam. Close now. No misplaced
echo
. No rough recording hiss. Aurora bent before she could stop herself. “Rory, run.” The same voice called from the gap between the oaks. Aurora straightened. She looked from the seam to the gap, then chose neither. She moved sideways, keeping the knife in front of her, and let the pendant go. It did not drop. For one breath it hung above the grass.
Then the chain snapped taut
and the stone shot towards the seam. It vanished without a sound. The darkness below opened wider. Aurora ran. The
footsteps
behind her stopped copying. They multiplied. She aimed for the narrowest space between two stones, where no flowers grew. Five paces. Four. Bracken showed beyond the oaks, and past it the slope that led back to the park path. A hand closed around her left wrist. Its thumb pressed into the small crescent scar there. Aurora slashed backwards. The knife cut empty air. The grip remained, cold through her sleeve, and hauled her off balance. She drove her boots into the ground. Another hand caught her waist and pulled. The seam scraped wider, roots parting with soft, fibrous snaps. Aurora plunged the knife into an oak root beside the gap and seized the handle with her free hand. The root held. She hung between it and the clearing, one arm stretched behind her, her shoulder burning. The thing holding her gave a patient tug. “Not this time,” it whispered. Eva’s voice. Aurora’s mouth would have made the same shape. She hooked one boot around the root and pulled with everything she had. The knife tore free. Aurora fell backwards through the flowers. Hands caught her below, one at her wrist, one at her ankle, others opening in the dark beneath her.
Then they began to pass
her down.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
1
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
9
tagDensity
0.111
leniency
0.222
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
100.00%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1643
totalAiIsmAdverbs
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
51.31%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1643
totalAiIsms
16
found
0
word
"pulsed"
count
2
1
word
"weight"
count
3
2
word
"footsteps"
count
3
3
word
"pulse"
count
3
4
word
"vibrated"
count
1
5
word
"flickered"
count
1
6
word
"could feel"
count
1
7
word
"trembled"
count
1
8
word
"echo"
count
1
highlights
0
"pulsed"
1
"weight"
2
"footsteps"
3
"pulse"
4
"vibrated"
5
"flickered"
6
"could feel"
7
"trembled"
8
"echo"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
199
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
2
narrationSentences
199
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"began to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
207
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
repeatedSegmentCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
23
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1643
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
1
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
83.33%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
51
wordCount
1620
uniqueNames
12
maxNameDensity
1.3
worstName
"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity
2.5
worstWindowName
"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora
21
Richmond
2
Silas
3
Yu-Fei
3
London
1
Heartstone
3
Golden
2
Empress
2
Eva
7
Rory
1
Three
3
One
3
persons
0
"Aurora"
1
"Silas"
2
"Yu-Fei"
3
"Heartstone"
4
"Eva"
5
"Rory"
6
"Three"
7
"One"
places
0
"Richmond"
1
"London"
2
"Golden"
globalScore
0.852
windowScore
0.833
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
139
glossingSentenceCount
1
matches
0
"sounded like a person calling from a doorw"
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
1643
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
207
matches
0
"used that bell"
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
95
mean
17.29
std
15.9
cv
0.919
sampleLengths
0
9
1
49
2
14
3
15
4
42
5
56
6
54
7
53
8
23
9
6
10
43
11
26
12
6
13
15
14
53
15
1
16
9
17
1
18
15
19
15
20
4
21
2
22
20
23
4
24
3
25
12
26
36
27
11
28
33
29
10
30
2
31
63
32
7
33
13
34
26
35
9
36
36
37
6
38
9
39
51
40
7
41
8
42
52
43
4
44
9
45
13
46
21
47
3
48
20
49
12
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
199
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
265
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
207
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1626
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
38
adverbRatio
0.023370233702337023
lyAdverbCount
2
lyAdverbRatio
0.0012300123001230013
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
207
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
207
mean
7.94
std
4.63
cv
0.583
sampleLengths
0
9
1
15
2
9
3
12
4
13
5
7
6
7
7
1
8
4
9
3
10
7
11
7
12
23
13
5
14
7
15
16
16
21
17
6
18
13
19
8
20
6
21
18
22
22
23
5
24
7
25
14
26
8
27
10
28
9
29
9
30
14
31
6
32
6
33
10
34
8
35
12
36
7
37
10
38
7
39
9
40
6
41
2
42
13
43
13
44
14
45
7
46
9
47
10
48
1
49
9
47.02%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
11
diversityRatio
0.3140096618357488
totalSentences
207
uniqueOpeners
65
100.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
7
totalSentences
176
matches
0
"Even her messages about milk"
1
"Then she had tied thirty"
2
"Even the bracken had stopped"
3
"Then the sweetness in the"
4
"Somewhere beyond the clearing, wood"
5
"Then the chain snapped taut"
6
"Then they began to pass"
ratio
0.04
100.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
49
totalSentences
176
matches
0
"She kept her torch aimed"
1
"Her phone showed 00:41 and"
2
"Her number had stayed dead"
3
"Her torch beam found the"
4
"Their stems bent beneath her"
5
"She drew it out on"
6
"It had never glowed in"
7
"It had never felt warmer"
8
"Her voice travelled farther than"
9
"She had taken enough late"
10
"She did not call again."
11
"It would not get a"
12
"They crossed a patch of"
13
"She had caught her own"
14
"She held her boot beside"
15
"She had not walked there."
16
"Her torch lit oak bark"
17
"She held the beam there"
18
"She lowered it to the"
19
"She rose and took hold"
ratio
0.278
85.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
132
totalSentences
176
matches
0
"The knocking stopped when Aurora"
1
"She kept her torch aimed"
2
"Each time, she had found"
3
"Her phone showed 00:41 and"
4
"Eva’s last message still filled"
5
"The ring of stones."
6
"Eva had been missing for"
7
"Her number had stayed dead"
8
"Eva never forgot the kiss."
9
"Aurora had left Silas a"
10
"The cord now ran behind"
11
"Her torch beam found the"
12
"Moss furred one side of"
13
"An oak root had climbed"
14
"Wildflowers grew thickly around them."
15
"Their stems bent beneath her"
16
"The air tasted of cold"
17
"The Heartstone pulsed against her"
18
"Aurora caught it through her"
19
"Heat spread from the deep"
ratio
0.75
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
176
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
65
technicalSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
1
uselessAdditionCount
0
matches
(empty)
38.89%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
1
fancyCount
1
fancyTags
0
"it whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences
9
tagDensity
0.111
leniency
0.222
rawRatio
1
effectiveRatio
0.222
90.1851%