Run: 2026-10-27-01M5YGS0ENGYDKK158EXEDWTXS

Run Details

Duration:
10m 21s
Cost:
$0.157183
Provider:
Moonshot AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The bone token had the weight of a coat button and the colour of weak tea. Quinn pressed it to the iron door, which had no keyhole, and felt the lock withdraw behind the metal. A constable had given her the token at street level with the warning that Miss Kowalski wanted it back intact. Quinn turned it between her gloved fingers. Three grooves crossed its surface. A hole had been drilled off-centre, and something dark had collected in the bore. She noted the time on her worn leather watch: 02:43. Camden still murmured above her, buses grinding over wet tarmac, a siren stretching itself thin somewhere towards Mornington Crescent. Below the door, forty-two steps descended into a station that no longer appeared on public maps. Police lamps stood along the platform. Their hard white glare stripped the colour from the tiles and left the track bed in strips of shadow. The rails had been lifted, though the chairs remained in rows, furred with rust. Chalk squares marked the floor between the columns. Hooks hung from wires where no lamps remained. Black wax had pooled around a champagne cork; beside it lay a chicken’s foot and an empty jar labelled in a hand Quinn could not read. The body lay beyond the old ticket barrier. DS Mercer waited beside it with his notebook closed. “Robbery,” he said before she reached him. “Leonard Fitch, fifty-two. Dealer in antiques when the provenance held up, receiver when it didn’t. We’ve had him twice for handling. His wallet’s gone, his pockets are inside out, and whatever he brought to sell isn’t here.” “Apart from the object in his hand.” “A brass compass. Not worth killing anyone over.” Quinn looked along the platform. A woman sat on a bench outside the tape, both arms locked around a worn leather satchel. Books distorted its sides. Curly red hair had escaped around her face, and her round glasses reflected the lamps whenever she turned towards the body. “And Miss Kowalski?” “Says she found him. Says she came to meet him, which makes her either a witness or the other half of the transaction.” Mercer lowered his voice. “She also says this was a market until three nights ago. Then it moved.” “Did she say where?” “She was waiting for someone to ask the moon.” Quinn stepped over the tape and approached the woman. Eva Kowalski’s museum pass hung beneath her coat collar: research assistant, restricted archives. Freckles stood out across her cheeks. She tucked hair behind her left ear, but it sprang back before Quinn reached the bench. “What time did Fitch telephone you?” “Twenty past midnight. He said he had an instrument the museum ought to examine. He wouldn’t discuss it on the phone.” “So you came to an abandoned station alone.” “I came to the Veil Market. There’s a difference when it’s open.” “Your statement says it wasn’t.” Eva’s green eyes flicked towards the chalk squares. “It moved at the full moon. It always does. The stalls, the sellers, the licences, such as they are. What you can see is rubbish and pitch marks.” “You still needed a bone token to enter.” “The door opens for the token. It doesn’t care whether there’s anything left to sell.” Quinn glanced at the satchel. “What did Fitch want you to examine?” “A compass.” “Convenient that he had one ready for you to identify.” Eva’s fingers tightened on the satchel buckle. “He said it had found something he couldn’t identify. That’s why he called me.” Mercer joined them, his notebook still tucked under one arm. “Illegal market, disputed price, knife. Fitch’s associates ran when your witness started down the stairs. We don’t need a moving address or a supernatural instrument.” “No,” Quinn said. “We need the scene to agree with you.” She returned to the body. Fitch had been a broad man, heavy through the chest and shoulders. He lay on his back with his head pointed towards the tunnel and one knee bent. A single dark puncture marked his shirt beneath the left ribs. Blood had soaked a patch no wider than Quinn’s hand. None had pooled beneath him. His right hand rested on his stomach, closed around a small brass compass. The left lay open beside his hip. Green stained the creases of that palm and the pads of the thumb and forefinger. Quinn walked around him without crossing the photographer’s markers. She stopped at his feet, then at his head. Mercer watched her. “Knives don’t oblige us with arterial spray. He could have bled internally.” “He could.” She crouched beside the torso. A dried runnel descended through the shirt fabric towards Fitch’s belt. A second stain crossed his left side, thin and dark where the cloth had folded against him. “He was upright after the knife went in. Long enough for the blood to run down. Then he lay on his left side.” “Before or after someone carried him in?” “That depends on whether your carriers wore hovercraft.” Mercer’s jaw shifted. “Explain.” Quinn pointed her torch at the floor without switching it on. Dust coated the platform in a skin of soot and plaster. Yellow flags marked Eva’s footprints from the stairs to a point two metres from the body, then back again. The first officers had added their own paths. SOCO had laid stepping plates beside them. No other prints disturbed the dust. “Fitch was thirteen stone, perhaps more. Nobody dragged him. There are no heel furrows and no smear beneath his shoulders. Nobody carried him without putting a heel down. If they brushed the floor afterwards, they did it without leaving a brush mark or disturbing the blood on his shirt.” “They could have worn covers.” “Covers hide a tread pattern. They don’t abolish weight.” She moved the torch beam to Fitch’s exposed sole. Yellow clay filled two grooves in the rubber. The rest of the tread was dry. “Every boot that came down those stairs picked up soot. His didn’t. He brought that clay with him, and it isn’t on your platform.” Mercer opened his mouth, then looked at Eva’s footprints again. Quinn rose and studied the hands. Fitch’s watch rode his right wrist. Quinn’s own sat on her left, its strap pale where years of fastening had polished the leather. “Left-handed,” she said. “Or he liked wearing his watch there.” “The compass left verdigris on his left palm. There’s none on his right. His right cuff is also fastened. His left isn’t.” “You think the compass was planted.” “I think the hand around it is part of the arrangement.” The photographer finished his close-ups and stepped back. Quinn took the compass between two fingers. Verdigris mottled its casing. Protective sigils covered the face in lines so fine they vanished unless the glass caught the light. There were no cardinal points. The black needle pointed along the platform. Behind her, Eva’s shoes scraped the floor. “That’s a Veil Compass.” Quinn kept her eyes on the needle. “You recognise the sigils?” “Some of them. The museum has drawings, not an intact example. They were made by Shade artisans and sold through the Market.” “What does it do?” “It finds openings. Rifts, portals, passages between places. It points to the nearest one.” Mercer gave the tiled ceiling a patient look. “Or it finds the nearest magnetic field. We’re in a Tube station.” Quinn rotated the compass until the sigils lay upside down. The needle travelled around the face and settled in the same direction. She walked six paces towards the tunnel. Its bearing changed. When she stopped, it pointed behind her at the same stretch of wall. She held it over the iron chairs in the track bed. The needle twitched, then returned to the wall. She repeated the test beside a steel stanchion and again beneath a police lamp’s battery pack. The compass continued to reject north, iron and Mercer’s explanation. “Which wall?” she asked. Mercer unfolded a station plan from his folder. “Cross-passage behind it. It connected to a service lift. Both were filled when the station closed.” “Show me.” He put the plan on the ticket barrier and traced a pencil line with one finger. “Solid infill. No other access from this level.” Quinn approached the wall with the compass held flat. The needle aimed between two rusted advertisement frames. Condensation silvered the tiles on either side. A door-sized section between them remained dry. She lowered herself to one knee and set her torch on the floor. Light skimmed across the dust. A pinhead of blood appeared near the skirting. A second spot marked the grout at the base of the dry tiles. Between them lay a crescent of yellow clay, no longer than her fingernail. It rested on top of the soot. A cobweb crossed the upper corner of the wall. At waist height, its strands ended along a line finer than a crack. The rest hung from that unseen border, supporting nothing. Quinn did not touch it. She moved the compass an inch to the left. The needle corrected her. Mercer came up behind her. “A hidden door doesn’t make this occult. If there’s a void, someone could have opened it from the other side.” “It makes your staircase irrelevant.” “It could still be robbery.” “It could still be the motive. It isn’t this scene.” She stood and faced him, keeping the compass between them. “Fitch stood after he was stabbed. He then lay somewhere on his left side. Someone fastened his story around him afterwards: compass in the wrong hand, wallet gone, watch left behind because a watch would have complicated the robbery. His body reached this platform without using the stairs, crossing the dust or leaving a carrier’s footprint. That clay is the only soil he brought with him.” Mercer looked at the dry tiles. “And you’ve decided he came through a wall.” “I’ve decided the wall is the only route your evidence hasn’t excluded.” “Because of that compass?” “Because every other route failed before I picked it up.” Quinn returned the compass to the photographer’s open evidence tray and stripped off her gloves. “Get the construction plans, not the public survey. I want the cross-passage, the service lift and any work order that mentions infill. Have the wall photographed with the light at floor level before anyone touches it. Fitch wasn’t killed during a deal here. He was killed elsewhere, arranged elsewhere and delivered to a place where the Market’s leftovers would explain him.” Mercer’s pencil hovered above the station plan. For the first time since Quinn had arrived, he opened his notebook.
created_at"2026-10-27T11:08:54.111Z" 10/27/2026, 11:08:54 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.085
leniency0.169
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1767
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
83.02% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1767
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"flicked"
count1
2
word"stomach"
count1
3
word"magnetic"
count1
4
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"flicked"
2"stomach"
3"magnetic"
4"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences105
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences105
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences159
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen66
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1767
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
51.48% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions47
wordCount1015
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.97
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Miss1
Kowalski2
Mornington1
Crescent1
Quinn20
Mercer12
Fitch4
Eva6
persons
0"Miss"
1"Kowalski"
2"Quinn"
3"Mercer"
4"Fitch"
5"Eva"
places
0"Mornington"
1"Crescent"
globalScore0.515
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences85
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"appeared near the skirting"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1767
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences159
matches
0"warning that Miss"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs91
mean19.42
std16.61
cv0.856
sampleLengths
035
146
245
381
48
59
644
77
88
947
103
1141
124
139
1444
156
1621
178
1812
195
2036
218
2215
2312
242
2510
2621
2735
2811
295
3049
315
3235
3318
3415
352
3633
3723
387
398
404
4156
426
4349
445
459
4624
4724
4810
4929
98.58% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences105
matches
0"been drilled"
1"been lifted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs168
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences159
ratio0.006
matches
0"Black wax had pooled around a champagne cork; beside it lay a chicken’s foot and an empty jar labelled in a hand Quinn could not read."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1019
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"left lay open beside his"
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.022571148184494603
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0009813542688910696
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences159
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences159
mean11.11
std8.91
cv0.802
sampleLengths
016
119
220
37
45
514
610
719
816
96
1019
1114
128
138
1426
158
169
177
1837
197
208
215
2217
234
2421
253
2627
2714
284
299
309
3113
326
3316
346
3521
368
3712
385
398
4028
418
4215
435
447
452
4610
477
4814
4910
71.28% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.44654088050314467
totalSentences159
uniqueOpeners71
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences102
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences102
matches
0"She noted the time on"
1"Their hard white glare stripped"
2"he said before she reached"
3"She tucked hair behind her"
4"She returned to the body."
5"He lay on his back"
6"His right hand rested on"
7"She stopped at his feet,"
8"She crouched beside the torso."
9"She moved the torch beam"
10"She walked six paces towards"
11"Its bearing changed."
12"She held it over the"
13"She repeated the test beside"
14"He put the plan on"
15"She lowered herself to one"
16"It rested on top of"
17"She moved the compass an"
18"She stood and faced him,"
ratio0.186
33.53% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount87
totalSentences102
matches
0"The bone token had the"
1"Quinn pressed it to the"
2"A constable had given her"
3"Quinn turned it between her"
4"A hole had been drilled"
5"She noted the time on"
6"Camden still murmured above her,"
7"Police lamps stood along the"
8"Their hard white glare stripped"
9"The rails had been lifted,"
10"Chalk squares marked the floor"
11"Hooks hung from wires where"
12"The body lay beyond the"
13"DS Mercer waited beside it"
14"he said before she reached"
15"Quinn looked along the platform."
16"A woman sat on a"
17"Books distorted its sides."
18"Mercer lowered his voice"
19"Quinn stepped over the tape"
ratio0.853
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences102
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.068
leniency0.136
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.7296%