Run: 2026-10-27-01M5YGZJ7W4JV53S9B9SQZ82A0

Run Details

Duration:
11m 57s
Cost:
$0.194112
Provider:
Moonshot AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory opened the door and Lucien Moreau’s knees gave way. He caught the frame with one gloved hand. The ivory head of his cane struck the coconut mat. Rain had blackened the shoulders of his charcoal suit and dragged his platinum hair across his forehead, but neither accounted for the colour of his face. Blood had soaked through his waistcoat along his left side. “Eva’s in Manchester.” “Then my timing is—” “If you say impeccable, I’m shutting the door.” His mouth twitched. One amber eye and one black remained fixed on hers. “I was going to say unfortunate.” “Your shirt’s unfortunate. How much of that is yours?” “Most of it.” From the bottom of the stairwell came the click of the street door. Lucien’s fingers tightened around his cane. “There are three men behind me,” he said. “They have been patient because I still possess something they want.” “Human?” “One of them was.” Rory looked past him. The landing bulb painted his shadow up the wall; below it, another shadow climbed the stairs without bothering with footsteps. Lucien drew a folded sheet of black paper from inside his jacket. Her name ran across the top in silver ink. Aurora Carter. “Come in, Lucien.” She caught his lapel and brought him over the threshold. His jaw clenched as Eva’s wards took his measure, then he stumbled into the flat. Rory slammed the door and drove home all three deadbolts. Ptolemy emerged from beneath a pile of annotated scrolls, took in the blood, and retreated behind the sofa. “You could have rung,” she said. “You blocked my number.” “You could have avoided giving me a reason to.” “I have been assured that self-improvement is a lifelong project.” “Not if you keep this up.” The flat offered few places for a wounded half-demon to collapse. Books covered the sofa. A scroll occupied the armchair, held open by two cold cups of tea. Research notes fanned across the table, and the curry house’s extractor fan pushed cumin and hot oil through the floorboards. Rory swept the armchair clear and pointed. “Sit. Jacket off. If you drip on anything written in Eva’s handwriting, she’ll finish what they started.” Lucien lowered himself into the chair. His cane slipped. Rory caught it and laid it across the table with the ivory handle towards her. His eyebrows rose. “Yes, I remember what’s inside it.” “I had intended to offer you the blade.” “You can intend things with your jacket off.” He obeyed. The waistcoat followed, though his left arm failed him at the cuff. Rory helped him without commenting on how well she remembered the weight of his shoulders. Fifty-one days had done nothing to improve that particular inconvenience. Fifty-one days since he had kissed her in a service corridor off Chancery Lane, his cane braced across the door and her hands fisted in his shirt. Fifty-one days since he had stepped back, restored his cuffs to their usual order, and called it an error in judgement. She had spent the journey home composing replies and the following fortnight refusing to send any of them. Rory opened the black paper. Beneath her name sat a clause naming her surety for the Moreau debt. The final line promised collection before dawn. “What does your father want?” “My return to Avaros. My surrender of several interests in London. An apology composed in blood, if he can secure the appropriate ink.” “And I’m the encouragement?” “Yes.” She put the paper on the table. “You vanished so your family wouldn’t notice me. Excellent work.” “My talents have been overstated.” “Why does he think I matter?” Lucien looked at the books rather than at her. “Because I never mentioned you.” “That makes no sense.” “It does to him. I traffic in information. He knew what I sold, what I traded, what I gave away to secure a favour. You were the one entry he could not find.” Lucien’s mouth flattened. “He found the blank space and put your name in it.” Rory folded the contract along its existing crease. “You don’t get to make that sound romantic.” “No.” The shirt stuck to his wound. She fetched Eva’s first-aid kit, a clean tea towel and the kitchen scissors. When she cut the fabric away, a sliver of black glass showed beneath his ribs. “A hospital,” she said. “Would struggle with the patient records.” “Lucien.” “The glass keeps the wound open. Remove it and I can manage the rest.” She washed her hands and cleaned the tweezers. Kneeling beside the chair put her face level with his chest. Her gaze kept returning to his mouth, so she gave it medical tasks: check his colour, count his breaths, ask whether the room spun. “Does the room spin?” “Only when you frown.” She pressed the tea towel against his side. He swore in Marseille French. “London French lacks the vocabulary?” “London French lacks the commitment.” She braced her left hand against his skin. The crescent scar on her wrist showed white beside his ribs. His gaze dropped to it, then returned to her face. “Stop performing,” she said. “When was I performing?” “At the door. Dying man with a tragic document. Very effective.” “I came because the document named you.” “And the rest?” “What rest?” “The part where you went to my flat above Silas’s first. Yu-Fei wouldn’t have told you I was here unless you’d asked.” The tweezers paused. Lucien’s breath caught as she found the edge of the glass. “I had hoped to avoid discussing my movements while you were armed.” “You should have thought of that before you got stabbed.” “Next time.” She drew the glass free. His whole body locked; his hand crushed the arm of the chair. Blood welled, thick and dark, then slowed beneath the pad she pressed into place. “There. You can be tragic without the props now.” For a while, neither of them spoke. Rory cleaned the tweezers and set them aside. Lucien watched her hands. He had the grace not to thank her with one of those polished sentences that made generosity sound like another form of debt. “Why did you kiss me?” she asked. His head tipped back against the chair. “Because you had just told three armed men that my plan lacked imagination. Because you were right. Because I had wanted to since you stole my cane in Spitalfields and used it to hook a set of keys out of a demon’s waistcoat.” “That was four months earlier.” “Yes.” “And calling it a mistake?” “Cowardice.” The answer cost her more preparation than a defence would have. She tore open a packet of gauze and kept her eyes on the seam. “You lied about why you needed me in that vault.” “Yes.” “I kissed you first.” “Yes.” “So you waited until afterwards to decide I’d made the mistake?” “No. I knew before. You kissed me without knowing what I had withheld. I should have stopped it. Instead, I enjoyed it, then punished you for my own failure.” His voice lost its varnish. “I am sorry, Rory. Not for the consequences. For doing it.” The gauze crackled between her fingers. “You don’t get points for naming it now.” “I know.” “And you don’t get to decide I’m safer when you disappear.” “I know.” “Stop agreeing with me.” His gaze lifted. “I had prepared several disagreements. They were all poor.” She laughed once, unwillingly, and hated how much easier the anger became when it had somewhere to go. Lucien looked at the contract on the table. “I thought distance would make you invisible to him. There was a less noble calculation as well. If I stayed, you would keep expecting the truth from me. I had already proved I could withhold it.” “I didn’t expect you to be harmless. I expected you to let me decide what to do with the truth.” “Yes.” She pressed the gauze over the wound and reached for the bandage. “Lean forward.” He did. She worked the bandage around his ribs, passing it from hand to hand behind his back. Each circuit brought her close enough to feel the heat of him through what remained of his shirt. He kept his arms out of her way. On the third pass, his fingers brushed hers and opened at once, leaving the choice with her. “What happens if I tell you to go when this is over?” she asked. “I go.” “And if I don’t?” “I would like dinner with you in a restaurant I have not chosen for its exits. I would like to ring you without wondering whether you’ll hang up. I would like to stop discovering new ways to apologise for the same mistake.” “That’s a lot to get from a knife wound.” “It is a contractual dispute.” “Of course it is.” “I cannot promise safety. My father would consider such a promise a challenge. I can promise not to make your choices for you.” He paused. “You may find the novelty exhausting.” Rory tucked the bandage into place and sat back on her heels. “I stopped checking my phone after three weeks.” His expression did not change, but his right hand closed around the arm of the chair again. “I stopped leaving your letters unopened on the table after four,” she continued. “I threw the last one away. I’d got very good at being angry with you. It was tidy.” “And now?” “Now you’ve bled on Eva’s tea towel.” “I can replace it.” “You’ll replace the chair as well.” “Naturally.” She rose, fetched the contract, and put it in his lap. “Until Eva gets back, you stay in that chair. No heroic exits to draw them away. No messages I don’t get to read. No deciding I’d prefer a clean disappearance.” “Agreed.” “After that, you can ask me to dinner.” “And you will say?” “I’ll decide after you’ve asked.” He accepted that with a nod. No argument, no attempt to improve the terms. Rory should have left it there. She had the first-aid kit to repack, Ptolemy to feed, a door to check. Instead, she put one knee on the edge of the chair and took hold of his open shirt. Lucien went still. “This doesn’t settle anything,” she said. “No.” “You’re still sleeping on the sofa.” He glanced at the sofa, where Ptolemy had begun kneading a denunciation of demonic contract law. “A formidable host.” “And you’re buying dinner.” “Rory.” She kissed him before he could turn her name into another negotiation. His mouth met hers with none of the corridor’s hunger. He waited through her first hesitation, then followed when she chose not to stop. His hand hovered at her waist until she covered it with hers and pressed it down. His fingers spread against her jumper. She had meant the kiss to be brief. He ruined that by losing his polish: a rough breath, a pause when she changed the angle, none of the practised grace she had once mistaken for certainty. When she drew back, he released her at once. She followed him an inch before catching herself. His mismatched eyes opened. “That complicates the morning,” he said. “No, it doesn’t.” “Excellent. I have always enjoyed clarity.” Ptolemy jumped onto the arm of the chair and stepped onto Lucien’s undamaged side. Lucien addressed the cat in French. Ptolemy responded by settling down. Rory picked up the roll of bandage and put it into Lucien’s free hand. “Make yourself useful.” He held the end while she secured it. His other hand remained open on the arm of the chair. Rory placed hers in it, then reached across him for the tape.
created_at"2026-10-27T11:12:28.935Z" 10/27/2026, 11:12:28 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences107
tagDensity0.112
leniency0.224
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.85% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1942
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
92.28% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1942
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"footsteps"
count1
1
word"jaw clenched"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"footsteps"
1"jaw clenched"
2"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences112
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences112
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences207
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1942
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions22
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions44
wordCount1102
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.18
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Lucien13
Moreau2
Rory13
Carter1
Eva2
Chancery1
Lane1
Marseille1
French2
Ptolemy5
Fifty-one3
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Rory"
3"Carter"
4"Eva"
5"Ptolemy"
places
0"Chancery"
1"Lane"
2"Marseille"
3"French"
globalScore0.91
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences83
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1942
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences207
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs139
mean13.97
std14.34
cv1.026
sampleLengths
010
154
23
34
48
519
69
73
819
919
101
114
1224
1321
142
153
1635
1718
186
194
209
2110
226
2355
2417
2524
263
276
288
298
3029
3110
3248
3318
3425
355
3623
374
381
3917
405
416
4214
434
4447
4516
461
4734
484
496
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences112
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs201
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences207
ratio0.01
matches
0"The landing bulb painted his shadow up the wall; below it, another shadow climbed the stairs without bothering with footsteps."
1"His whole body locked; his hand crushed the arm of the chair."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1108
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.02256317689530686
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0009025270758122744
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences207
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences207
mean9.38
std7.42
cv0.791
sampleLengths
010
18
210
326
410
53
64
78
83
910
106
119
123
1313
146
158
1611
171
184
194
2020
2112
229
232
243
2510
2615
2710
2818
296
304
319
3210
336
3411
354
3613
3720
387
3917
406
413
4215
433
446
458
468
472
4812
4915
47.99% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.3140096618357488
totalSentences207
uniqueOpeners65
33.67% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences99
matches
0"Instead, she put one knee"
ratio0.01
46.26% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount43
totalSentences99
matches
0"He caught the frame with"
1"His mouth twitched."
2"Her name ran across the"
3"She caught his lapel and"
4"His jaw clenched as Eva’s"
5"His cane slipped."
6"His eyebrows rose."
7"She had spent the journey"
8"She put the paper on"
9"She fetched Eva’s first-aid kit,"
10"She washed her hands and"
11"Her gaze kept returning to"
12"She pressed the tea towel"
13"He swore in Marseille French."
14"She braced her left hand"
15"His gaze dropped to it,"
16"She drew the glass free."
17"His whole body locked; his"
18"He had the grace not"
19"His head tipped back against"
ratio0.434
30.71% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount85
totalSentences99
matches
0"Rory opened the door and"
1"He caught the frame with"
2"The ivory head of his"
3"Rain had blackened the shoulders"
4"Blood had soaked through his"
5"His mouth twitched."
6"Lucien’s fingers tightened around his"
7"Rory looked past him."
8"The landing bulb painted his"
9"Lucien drew a folded sheet"
10"Her name ran across the"
11"She caught his lapel and"
12"His jaw clenched as Eva’s"
13"Rory slammed the door and"
14"Ptolemy emerged from beneath a"
15"The flat offered few places"
16"Books covered the sofa."
17"A scroll occupied the armchair,"
18"Rory swept the armchair clear"
19"Lucien lowered himself into the"
ratio0.859
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences99
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she continued (continue)"
dialogueSentences107
tagDensity0.084
leniency0.168
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.019
87.6362%