Run: 2026-10-27-01M5YH35QX324B24953C73V6MH

Run Details

Duration:
45.5s
Cost:
$0.016024
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The oak standing stones had no roots that Rory could see. They rose from the grass in a crooked ring, their bark silvered by moonlight, their tops sawn flat as pillars. Between two of them, a patch of darkness hung without casting a shadow. Rory held the Heartstone away from her throat. The thumbnail-sized gem gave a faint red glow, and warmth pulsed against her fingers. “That’s a portal, then.” “A door,” Isolde said, “and a mouth. Take care which part you feed.” Rory glanced at her. Isolde stood among the wildflowers in a pale coat, her waist-length silver hair stirring in a breeze Rory couldn’t feel. The grass beneath her feet remained unbent. “You could have mentioned the mouth before we walked across half of Richmond Park.” “You might not have come.” “Exactly.” Nyx gathered themselves out of the shadow of an oak. In solid form they were taller than Rory by a good margin, a silhouette with faint violet eyes. Their edges moved like smoke in a draught. “The cook’s name again?” they whispered. “Mei Chen.” Rory took the folded photograph from her pocket. Mei stood outside the Golden Empress, squinting into the sun, one hand raised to shield her face. Behind her, Yu-Fei had caught the edge of the frame, smiling at something out of sight. “She used to work evenings. Her daughter hasn’t heard from her in eleven months.” Isolde regarded the photograph. “The living can be lost without being dead.” Rory had been hoping for more than that when she’d gone to the grove. Still, Isolde had brought them to this door. The pendant warmed again. Rory tucked the photograph away, drew the moonsilver blade from her coat, and stepped between the stones. Cold passed over her face. For an instant she smelled wet leaves and the river; then a rich, sweet scent closed around her, like pears left too long in a bowl. She stood in an orchard beneath an amber sky. The trees grew in precise rows over a slope of dark red soil. Their trunks were broad and knotted, their branches heavy with fruit: purple globes as large as melons, clusters of green pears, and pale translucent shapes that rang softly whenever they touched. Beyond the orchard lay vineyards, gardens and the tiled roofs of distant buildings. Farther off, a long table stood on a terrace, bright with lamps and crowded with people. Even from here Rory could hear music. Behind her, the portal shimmered between two dark trees. Nyx emerged from it without a sound. Isolde followed, pausing on the threshold as if listening to something too distant for Rory to hear. “This is Dymas?” Rory asked. “Yes,” Isolde said. “And that is the house you seek.” At the foot of the slope stood a building of black stone, half swallowed by the orchard. Its roof had collapsed beneath the roots of an enormous tree. A single round window faced them, glazed in dull gold. Rory had expected gates, perhaps guards. The place looked abandoned. They descended between the trees. Soft wind moved through the branches, carrying the scent of roasting meat from the terrace. Rory’s stomach tightened. She’d eaten before leaving the flat, but the smell made her suddenly, fiercely hungry. Nyx stopped beside a tree. One of the translucent fruits had split, revealing a small silver spoon at its centre. “An odd crop,” Rory said. “The tree appears to have taken an interest in dessert,” Nyx whispered. Rory reached toward the fruit. A branch shifted, putting it within easy grasp. She pulled her hand back. The branch withdrew. “Nothing here is free,” she said. Isolde’s pale eyes followed the movement. “Some things cost more when refused.” “That’s comforting.” At the bottom of the slope they found a path paved with broken plates. Glazed flowers, gilded rims and fragments of painted faces flashed underfoot. No two pieces matched. The path led to a pair of bronze doors set into the black stone. The doors were warm. A groove ran across them at Rory’s chest height, filled with some dark, tacky substance. She touched it with the tip of the blade and lifted away a thread of amber syrup. On the left door, words had been scratched into the metal in several hands. Some were in scripts she didn’t recognise. Near the bottom, cut deep enough to scar the bronze, was a single English sentence: IF YOU CAN STILL TASTE HOME, KEEP YOUR NAME. Rory stared at it. “Did Mei write that?” she asked. “I do not know,” Isolde said. The Heartstone pulsed against Rory’s skin. She looked back up the slope; the portal was still visible between the trees. Nyx flattened into the narrow shadow beneath the doors. For a moment only their eyes remained, low to the ground. Then those vanished too. Rory waited with her blade ready. The music from the terrace drifted down the hill, joined by laughter and the clink of glasses. Somewhere nearby, something crunched steadily through an apple. The doors juddered. A bolt scraped back, and Nyx re-formed beside them. “There is a latch on the other side,” they said. “And a corridor. I could not see where it ends.” Rory pushed the doors open. The corridor smelled of old wine and damp stone. Shelves lined both walls from floor to ceiling, packed with jars. Some held herbs and spices, their colours still vivid despite the dust. Others contained things Rory couldn’t identify: a curl of blue smoke, a tiny storm turning slowly over a thimbleful of water, a row of teeth suspended in clear jelly. She leaned closer to a jar filled with what looked like grey sand. As her breath misted the glass, the grains rose and arranged themselves into a miniature street. A red bus crossed it, no bigger than her fingernail. Rory stepped back. The street collapsed. “Don’t open any of them,” she said. “I had no intention,” Nyx replied. From somewhere deeper in the building came a low, rhythmic thudding. It might have been a pestle in a mortar, though Rory couldn’t imagine the size of the bowl. The corridor opened into a vast kitchen. Its vaulted ceiling rose beyond the reach of the lamps. Copper pans hung in ranks overhead, some big enough for Rory to lie in. Stone counters ran the length of the room, scored with knife marks and darkened by age. At the far end, a fire burned beneath a range, though no one stood near it. The thudding came from a wooden dough trough. Its lid lifted and fell, lifted and fell, against something working inside. Rory kept her distance. On one counter lay a leather-bound ledger, open beneath a weight of black glass. A neat column of names covered the page. Beside each was a dish and a date. The last entry was only three days old. Nyx moved to the hearth, their body thinning against the shadows. Isolde went to the ledger. Rory stayed near the centre of the room, watching the trough. “Chen,” Isolde said. Rory hurried over. Halfway down the page, in careful black ink, was MEI CHEN. Beside it someone had written PEAR AND GINGER TART, followed by tomorrow’s date. “She’s here.” Rory pressed a finger beside the name. “Or she will be.” “She may be here already,” Nyx whispered. “There are people below us.” Rory hadn’t heard anything but the trough. She crossed to the hearth, where a narrow stair descended beside the range. Warm air rose from it, carrying the smell of ginger and sugar. They went down single file. Rory led, the cold hilt of the Fae blade firm in her palm. At the bottom, a door stood ajar. A woman sat at a table, peeling a pear. She wore a white apron over a dark dress. Her black hair was pinned up untidily, and flour streaked one cheek. A dozen peeled pears sat in a bowl beside her. Another dozen waited in a basket, though every time she took one, Rory thought she saw a fresh fruit settle into its place. “Mei?” The knife stopped. The woman looked up, wary at once. Rory put the blade away and took out the photograph. “Yu-Fei gave me this. Your daughter asked her for help.” Mei set down the pear. For a moment she didn’t move. Then she stood so quickly her chair fell backwards. “Is she all right?” “She misses you. She’s with your sister.” Mei gripped the edge of the table. Her eyes were bright, but her voice stayed steady. “How old is she now?” “Eleven. Nearly twelve.” Mei closed her eyes. “I thought it had been less.” Rory took a step into the room. “We found a way in. We can take you back.” Mei looked past her to the stair, then at Nyx and Isolde. “You can’t. Not until I’ve finished.” “Tomorrow’s tart?” “The tart, and the next one, and the one after that.” Mei lifted her wrist. A thin black line circled it, too even to be a scar. “I signed for a year. That was what he said.” “Who?” “The man who came to the restaurant. He wanted cooks for a competition.” A bitter smile crossed her face. “He paid the advance in cash. Enough for my sister’s operation.” The basket rustled. Another pear rolled against its neighbours. “I was meant to cook for a year,” Mei said. “But each time I finish a dish, there’s another order. They call it a year of service. The hours between don’t count.” Rory examined the black line without touching it. “Where’s the contract?” “In the kitchen ledger. They brought it down once when I complained.” Rory thought of the heavy book upstairs. “Can we cut it?” Mei gave her a tired look. “I’ve tried. The pages mend.” Isolde came forward. “A promise may be cut where it is written, or where it is worn.” Rory drew the moonsilver blade again. Mei flinched. “It cuts wards,” Rory said. “Isolde gave it to me.” Mei looked at Isolde, who inclined her head. After a moment Mei held out her arm. Rory braced her own wrist against the table. The dagger’s cold bit into her fingers. She slid the tip beneath the black line as carefully as she could, leaving a sliver of air between metal and skin. The line tightened. Mei gasped. Rory lifted the blade. For an instant it met resistance, as if she were drawing it through wire. Then the line parted with a sharp snap. Upstairs, the dough trough burst open. Something heavy struck the floor. “Go,” Rory said. Mei snatched a small cloth bag from beneath the table. They ran for the stairs, Isolde moving soundlessly behind them. Rory reached the kitchen first and stopped short. A mass of pale dough had heaved itself out of the trough. It spread across the floor, gathering flour, knives and scraps into its sticky surface. As Rory watched, it pulled itself towards the hearth. Nyx swept ahead, a long shadow racing over the stone. They caught the edge of a hanging pan and brought it crashing down in front of the thing. The dough surged over it without slowing. “Doors!” Rory shouted. Mei ran past her. Rory followed, but the dough struck the end of a counter and sent it skidding across the corridor entrance. Jars shattered on the shelves beyond. A cloud of pepper rose, making Rory cough. Isolde touched the counter. “A table set for no guest is a lonely thing.” The counter did not move. Rory grabbed one end. “Nyx!” They became solid beside her and took the other. Together they shoved. The counter scraped just far enough for Mei to slip through, then Isolde. Rory squeezed after them, scraping her shoulder on the stone. Nyx flowed through the gap as shadow. Behind them, the dough struck the counter hard enough to crack it. They ran between the shelves. Rory caught a glimpse of the miniature street spilling from its broken jar, red bus and all, before it scattered beneath their feet. At the bronze doors Mei fumbled with the latch. Rory reached around her, pulled it free, and shoved. The orchard air hit them, sweet and warm. They climbed the slope toward the two dark trees. Mei stumbled once; Rory caught her arm, feeling the bare skin where the black line had been. Behind them, something pressed against the bronze doors. They boomed in their frame but held. The portal shimmered ahead. The Heartstone grew warm against Rory’s chest. Mei slowed. “What if it doesn’t take me?” Rory took her hand. “Then we’ll find another way.” They stepped through together. Moonlight lay over the grove. The air was cold enough to sting Rory’s lungs, and somewhere beyond the standing stones an owl called. Mei dropped to her knees in the grass, pressing both hands into it. Nyx emerged behind them, followed by Isolde. The darkness between the stones thinned until Rory could see the trees beyond. Mei was still kneeling. Rory crouched beside her and took out her phone. There was no signal in the grove, but the screen lit Mei’s face when Rory opened the photograph. “She’s taller now,” Rory said. “And she’s cut her hair short.” Mei touched the image with one flour-streaked finger. “Will you come with me?” “Of course.” They helped her to her feet. As they passed between the standing stones, Rory’s phone found a signal and began to buzz with messages. She checked the date first. Only forty minutes had passed since they’d left the restaurant. She called Yu-Fei. When she answered, Rory put the phone into Mei’s hand and walked beside her through the dark park, giving her room to speak.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences62
tagDensity0.371
leniency0.742
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.07% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2287
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"quickly"
count1
4
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"suddenly"
2"slowly"
3"quickly"
4"carefully"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Chen"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
73.76% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2287
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"warmth"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count2
2
word"shimmered"
count2
3
word"stomach"
count1
4
word"comforting"
count1
5
word"rhythmic"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"long shadow"
count1
8
word"racing"
count1
9
word"shattered"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"pulsed"
2"shimmered"
3"stomach"
4"comforting"
5"rhythmic"
6"weight"
7"long shadow"
8"racing"
9"shattered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences214
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences214
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences253
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2287
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions24
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions121
wordCount1920
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity3.07
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Mei"
discoveredNames
Rory59
Heartstone3
Mei23
Golden1
Empress1
Yu-Fei2
Isolde17
Nyx13
English1
Fae1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Heartstone"
2"Mei"
3"Empress"
4"Yu-Fei"
5"Isolde"
6"Nyx"
places
0"Golden"
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences147
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if listening to something too distant for Rory to hear"
1"looked like grey sand"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2287
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences253
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs118
mean19.38
std15.3
cv0.79
sampleLengths
044
122
24
313
431
514
65
71
836
96
1057
1112
1222
1321
1431
159
1680
1733
185
1910
2038
2110
2237
2320
245
2512
2613
278
286
2912
302
3143
3236
3336
349
354
366
376
3820
3924
4031
4112
4220
435
4461
4539
466
477
486
4929
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences214
matches
0"been scratched"
1"was pinned"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs336
matches
0"were drawing"
1"was still kneeling"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences253
ratio0.012
matches
0"For an instant she smelled wet leaves and the river; then a rich, sweet scent closed around her, like pears left too long in a bowl."
1"She looked back up the slope; the portal was still visible between the trees."
2"Mei stumbled once; Rory caught her arm, feeling the bare skin where the black line had been."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1926
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount54
adverbRatio0.028037383177570093
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.006749740394600207
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences253
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences253
mean9.04
std5.27
cv0.583
sampleLengths
011
120
213
38
414
54
613
74
820
97
1014
115
121
1310
1418
158
166
1710
1817
1916
2014
214
228
2314
248
254
2617
275
2826
299
3013
3131
3213
3316
347
359
367
3717
385
393
407
4117
4211
4310
446
454
465
4715
483
4914
50.72% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.31620553359683795
totalSentences253
uniqueOpeners80
86.81% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences192
matches
0"Then those vanished too."
1"Somewhere nearby, something crunched steadily"
2"Then she stood so quickly"
3"Then the line parted with"
4"Only forty minutes had passed"
ratio0.026
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences192
matches
0"They rose from the grass"
1"Their edges moved like smoke"
2"She stood in an orchard"
3"Their trunks were broad and"
4"Its roof had collapsed beneath"
5"They descended between the trees."
6"She’d eaten before leaving the"
7"She pulled her hand back."
8"She touched it with the"
9"She looked back up the"
10"She leaned closer to a"
11"It might have been a"
12"Its vaulted ceiling rose beyond"
13"Its lid lifted and fell,"
14"She crossed to the hearth,"
15"They went down single file."
16"She wore a white apron"
17"Her black hair was pinned"
18"Her eyes were bright, but"
19"She slid the tip beneath"
ratio0.161
77.19% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount147
totalSentences192
matches
0"The oak standing stones had"
1"They rose from the grass"
2"Rory held the Heartstone away"
3"The thumbnail-sized gem gave a"
4"Rory glanced at her."
5"Isolde stood among the wildflowers"
6"The grass beneath her feet"
7"Nyx gathered themselves out of"
8"Their edges moved like smoke"
9"Rory took the folded photograph"
10"Mei stood outside the Golden"
11"Isolde regarded the photograph."
12"Rory had been hoping for"
13"The pendant warmed again."
14"Rory tucked the photograph away,"
15"She stood in an orchard"
16"The trees grew in precise"
17"Their trunks were broad and"
18"Nyx emerged from it without"
19"Isolde followed, pausing on the"
ratio0.766
52.08% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences192
matches
0"Even from here Rory could"
1"IF YOU CAN STILL TASTE"
ratio0.01
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences81
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Their trunks were broad and knotted, their branches heavy with fruit: purple globes as large as melons, clusters of green pears, and pale translucent shapes tha…"
1"Isolde followed, pausing on the threshold as if listening to something too distant for Rory to hear."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags23
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
69.35% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags20
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"they whispered (whisper)"
1"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
2"Rory pressed (press)"
3"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
4"Rory shouted (shout)"
dialogueSentences62
tagDensity0.323
leniency0.645
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.161
89.2996%