Run: 2026-10-27-01M5YHDYBJV0RE41XVDTQYQR2H

Run Details

Duration:
46.9s
Cost:
$0.017217
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door opened against the chain, and Lucien’s face appeared in the narrow gap. Rain darkened the shoulders of his charcoal coat. A drop clung to the end of his platinum hair, which had escaped its usual slicked-back order. Rory kept her hand on the door. “How did you find me?” “Silas told me your ceiling had come down.” “Did he also tell you to come here?” “No. He told me to stop standing in front of his taps.” Ptolemy wound around Rory’s ankles, pressing his tabby flank against her bare leg. She shifted her foot before he could slip into the corridor. “Eva isn’t in.” “I came to see you.” “I gathered that.” Lucien lifted a leather folder. His ivory-handled cane rested against his other arm. “I need your signature.” Rory looked at the folder, then at his face. His amber eye caught the light from the hall; the black one gave nothing away. “You could have posted it.” “I need to sign it with you. There’s a witness downstairs.” “Then you’ve brought two people I don’t want at Eva’s door.” “Madame Bisset stayed in the car.” “Give her my thanks.” Rory moved to close the door. Lucien put his hand against it, leaving the chain taut. “Don’t.” “Take your hand away.” He did. Water shone across his knuckles. “The agreement expires at midnight. If we don’t sign the release, it renews for another year.” She stopped with the door an inch from the frame. “Your agreement.” “Our agreement.” “You wrote my name into it.” “You signed it.” “You told me it was a delivery receipt.” The curry house extractor rattled through the floor. Lucien’s gaze dropped to the chain. “I did.” Ptolemy reached up and hooked a claw into Rory’s shorts. She peeled his paw away. “Send it to my solicitor.” “It requires both signatures in the same room, on the same page. Madame Bisset has to witness them.” “Then bring her up.” Lucien glanced over his shoulder. “She can’t manage the stairs. Her knee.” “Convenient.” “I didn’t injure her.” “Congratulations.” Rory shut the door. On the other side, his cane tapped once against the landing. She slid the chain free, opened the door again and stepped aside. “You get five minutes.” Lucien entered, ducking his head beneath a scroll pinned across the doorframe. Rory locked the three deadbolts behind him. He watched her hands but made no comment. Eva’s sitting room had lost another patch of floor since Rory arrived two nights earlier. Books rose in uneven stacks beside the sofa, and a map covered the coffee table beneath cups, pencils and a plate of toast crusts. Lucien stood just inside the room, holding his wet cane away from the papers. “Take your shoes off.” He looked down at them. “You’re dripping on Eva’s notes.” He set the folder on a clear corner of the table and bent to unlace his shoes. Ptolemy approached and inspected one polished toe. “He bit you last time,” Rory reminded him. “He bit my cuff.” “You had a hand inside it.” Lucien straightened, shoes in hand. “I remember.” Rory took them from him before he could put them on a stack of books. His fingers brushed hers. Neither of them moved for a moment, and then she carried the shoes to the kitchen doorway. “Where’s the release?” He opened the folder. Three sheets lay inside, covered in dense print and held together with a brass clip. Rory took them to the window, where the light was better. The first page named her in full. Aurora Jennifer Carter. Lucien had once teased her about the middle name, repeating it in a grand voice until she threw a dishcloth at him. She turned the page. The agreement had bound her to act as a courier for Moreau & Co., a business with no office Rory had ever seen. The release removed her name and cancelled every obligation beneath it. She read the text twice. “What’s the cost?” “Nothing.” She raised her eyes. “To me.” “Still nothing.” “And to you?” Lucien leaned his cane against the sofa. “A fee.” “How much?” “Eight thousand pounds.” Rory lowered the papers. “You paid eight thousand pounds to take my name off?” “I haven’t paid it yet.” “Why is there a fee at all?” “The original contract guaranteed twelve months of service. The other party wanted compensation for losing the second year.” “You could have waited until the end.” “The renewal clause required notice six months ago.” “You knew about that?” “Yes.” “And you didn’t tell me.” His jaw shifted. “No.” She put the papers down on top of Eva’s map. “Was that before or after you told me you’d handled everything?” “After.” “Right.” “I expected to find a cheaper way out.” “Did you expect to tell me when you found it?” “I’m telling you now.” “Because you ran out of time.” Lucien picked up a pencil from the table, turned it between his fingers and set it down where he had found it. “Yes.” Rory went into the kitchen. The kettle held enough water for one cup. She filled it at the tap and switched it on, though she had no idea whether Lucien still drank tea. He had kept a tin at her flat for weeks without touching it, preferring coffee from the shop near Silas’s bar. She had thrown the tin away after he stopped coming round. He appeared in the doorway. “Silas told me you were staying with Eva until your ceiling was repaired.” “He talks too much.” “He was concerned.” “He was annoyed I left a bucket on his stairs.” “That too.” Rory opened a cupboard. Eva’s mugs crowded the shelf, their handles hooked through one another. She took down two. Lucien watched her set them beside the kettle. “I didn’t think you’d let me in.” “I didn’t want Madame Bisset sitting in a car until midnight because you couldn’t organise a meeting.” “She has a crossword.” “Then I hope she’s enjoying it.” He stayed in the doorway. His socks had damp patches at the toes. “Your feet are wet.” “My shoes leaked.” “They cost more than my rent.” “They’re old.” She fetched a clean tea towel and tossed it at him. He caught it against his chest. “Use that.” “For my feet?” “No, hang it on the wall and admire it.” He dried his feet while balancing on the edge of a chair. The sight pulled a laugh from her before she could stop it. Lucien looked up. “There you are.” Rory reached for the tea bags. “Don’t.” “I liked hearing you laugh.” “You heard it last month.” “You laughed at me then, too.” “You deserved it.” “I fell off a bar stool.” “You told Silas the stool was uneven.” “It was.” “You missed it.” He smiled. The expression changed his face, loosening the precision he carried like another piece of tailoring. Rory turned back to the mugs. The kettle clicked off. She poured the water and passed one mug to him. “Milk?” “No.” “Sugar?” “No.” “You used to take both.” “I stopped drinking it that way.” “When?” “After you stopped making it for me.” Rory set the milk carton down harder than she intended. A white splash landed on the counter. “Don’t put that on me.” “I wasn’t asking you to feel responsible.” “What were you asking?” Lucien wrapped the tea towel around the back of the chair. “I wanted you to know I noticed you weren’t there.” “You had three months to notice.” “I noticed each day.” She wiped up the milk with the corner of the tea towel. He reached for it, but she pulled it away. “You can’t stand in Eva’s kitchen and make this sound like we misplaced each other. You lied to me.” “I know.” “You told me the deliveries were for a client who paid cash. You knew I needed the work.” “The work was real.” “I carried a sealed box into a house where the windows had teeth.” “I didn’t know about the windows.” “You knew what was in the box.” He looked at his tea. “Yes.” “And when I asked why the man who took it had blood on his collar, you told me he’d cut himself shaving.” “He had.” “Lucien.” His mouth closed. “I went back the next day. He opened the door with the cut still there. It ran from his ear to the middle of his chest.” Lucien set his mug down. “He was alive.” “That wasn’t the question.” “I didn’t want you involved with his kind of business.” Rory pointed toward the sitting room. “You had my name on a contract with him.” “I know what I did.” “Then say it without dressing it up.” He gripped the edge of the counter. His cuff slid back, exposing a thin white scar along his wrist. “I needed someone he would trust to carry the box. He knew you worked for Yu-Fei. He knew you delivered food to his neighbours. I used that.” “And me.” “And you.” Rory folded the tea towel into a square. Her crescent scar showed above the hem of her sleeve. “You could have asked.” “You would have refused.” “Yes.” “I couldn’t afford that.” “You could afford eight thousand pounds.” A short breath escaped him. He looked at her, then away. “Fair.” She carried her tea back to the sitting room. Ptolemy occupied the release papers, his tail stretched across Lucien’s name. Rory lifted him beneath the front legs. “Move, you criminal.” The cat settled against her chest, claws catching in her shirt. Lucien followed her and stopped beside the table. “I never meant for him to call on you again.” “He came to the restaurant.” “I heard.” “Yu-Fei threw a ladle at him.” “I heard that as well.” “She hit him.” “I paid for the ladle.” Rory stared at him. “You what?” “He broke it when he stepped on it. Yu-Fei sent me the bill.” Despite herself, she pictured Yu-Fei writing it out, every digit pressed deep into the paper. “She should have charged you for the soup.” “She did.” Rory put Ptolemy on the sofa. He turned once and sat, watching Lucien with narrowed eyes. “The release says I can’t discuss the client.” “It says you can’t disclose his name for payment.” She checked the line again. He was right. “I can tell Eva?” “Yes.” “Yu-Fei?” “Yes.” “Silas?” “He already knows more than I do about most things.” Rory found a pen beneath a notebook. She uncapped it, then paused over the signature line. “You called me that night.” Lucien stood still. “Yes.” “Four times.” “I wanted to explain.” “I listened to the messages.” “I know.” “The last one cut off. You were about to say something.” He reached for his mug and discovered he had left it in the kitchen. “I was about to ask you to come over.” “To explain?” “To see you.” “That’s not the same thing.” “No.” Ptolemy jumped down and squeezed between their legs. Lucien shifted to give him room, bringing himself close enough that Rory caught the scent of rain in his coat. “You could have come to me without a folder.” “You wouldn’t have opened the door.” “You don’t know that.” “I knocked at your flat twice.” Her grip tightened around the pen. “When?” “The week after the restaurant. Silas said you were out.” “I was at Eva’s.” “I gathered that today.” She looked at the ink spot his wet sleeve had left on the edge of Eva’s map. “Why didn’t you leave a note?” “I wrote one.” “And?” “I put it in my pocket.” Rory looked up at him. “That sounds like you.” “I didn’t know what to put in it.” “You speak four languages. Pick one.” His smile returned, then faded. “I was sorry. I wanted you back. Both sounded thin on a page.” Rory set the pen down. “You wanted me back where?” “At your kitchen table. In the passenger seat of my car, telling me I’d taken the wrong turning. At Silas’s bar, stealing the olives from my drink.” “You hated those olives.” “I bought the drink for you.” “You told me it was yours.” “You kept stealing them.” Her hand rested on the papers between them. Lucien touched the back of it with one finger, giving her room to pull away. She turned her hand instead, and his fingers closed around hers. “You don’t get to decide things for me again.” “I won’t.” “I want more than that.” “Tell me.” She looked at their hands. His thumb had found the small scar on her wrist, the place he used to kiss when she reached across a table for him. “I want you to ask, even when you think I’ll say no.” “I can do that.” “And if I say no, you leave it there.” He held her gaze. “Yes.” Rory stepped closer. His free hand rose to her cheek, stopping just short. “Can I kiss you?” “You took your time asking.” “Is that a yes?” She pulled him down by his lapel and kissed him. His hand settled against her jaw. He tasted of tea, plain and hot, and when she drew back he followed her as far as the space she left him. The papers slid off the table. Ptolemy sprang after them, landing on the top sheet with both paws. “Your witness,” Rory murmured. Lucien looked at the cat. “Madame Bisset might object.” Rory crouched beside the table. Ptolemy planted himself on the signature line, and Lucien knelt opposite her, reaching for the other edge of the page. “Hold him.” “With both hands?” “He’s got four feet. Use your judgement.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences200
tagDensity0.01
leniency0.02
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2279
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
97.81% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2279
totalAiIsms1
found
0
word"charged"
count1
highlights
0"charged"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences130
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences130
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences328
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2279
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions38
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
22.77% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions72
wordCount1179
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity2.54
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Lucien24
Rory30
Jennifer1
Carter1
Moreau1
Co1
Eva4
Silas1
Yu-Fei1
Ptolemy8
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Rory"
2"Jennifer"
3"Carter"
4"Eva"
5"Silas"
6"Yu-Fei"
7"Ptolemy"
places(empty)
globalScore0.228
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences88
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2279
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences328
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs271
mean8.41
std8.86
cv1.053
sampleLengths
014
125
27
35
48
58
612
724
83
95
103
1113
124
1324
145
1511
1611
176
184
1916
201
214
227
2316
2410
252
262
276
283
298
3014
312
3215
335
3418
354
365
377
381
394
401
4127
424
4327
4453
454
465
475
4824
498
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences130
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs209
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences328
ratio0.003
matches
0"His amber eye caught the light from the hall; the black one gave nothing away."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1182
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.028764805414551606
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences328
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences328
mean6.95
std5.2
cv0.749
sampleLengths
014
18
217
37
45
58
68
712
813
911
103
115
123
135
148
154
169
1715
185
1911
2011
216
224
236
2410
251
264
272
285
2916
3010
312
322
336
343
358
368
376
382
3910
405
415
4218
434
445
457
461
474
481
494
42.68% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats24
diversityRatio0.20426829268292682
totalSentences328
uniqueOpeners67
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences127
matches(empty)
ratio0
53.07% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount53
totalSentences127
matches
0"She shifted her foot before"
1"His ivory-handled cane rested against"
2"His amber eye caught the"
3"She stopped with the door"
4"She peeled his paw away."
5"She slid the chain free,"
6"He watched her hands but"
7"He looked down at them."
8"He set the folder on"
9"His fingers brushed hers."
10"He opened the folder."
11"She turned the page."
12"She read the text twice."
13"She raised her eyes."
14"His jaw shifted."
15"She put the papers down"
16"She filled it at the"
17"He had kept a tin"
18"She had thrown the tin"
19"He appeared in the doorway."
ratio0.417
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount124
totalSentences127
matches
0"The door opened against the"
1"Rain darkened the shoulders of"
2"A drop clung to the"
3"Rory kept her hand on"
4"Ptolemy wound around Rory’s ankles,"
5"She shifted her foot before"
6"Lucien lifted a leather folder."
7"His ivory-handled cane rested against"
8"Rory looked at the folder,"
9"His amber eye caught the"
10"Rory moved to close the"
11"Lucien put his hand against"
12"Water shone across his knuckles."
13"She stopped with the door"
14"The curry house extractor rattled"
15"Lucien’s gaze dropped to the"
16"Ptolemy reached up and hooked"
17"She peeled his paw away."
18"Lucien glanced over his shoulder."
19"Rory shut the door."
ratio0.976
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences127
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences53
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"A drop clung to the end of his platinum hair, which had escaped its usual slicked-back order."
1"The expression changed his face, loosening the precision he carried like another piece of tailoring."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Rory murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences200
tagDensity0.005
leniency0.01
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.01
83.8778%