Run: 2026-10-27-01M5YHM834G08891FM7G2J3D3R

Run Details

Duration:
9m 58s
Cost:
$0.163440
Provider:
Moonshot AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door opened on Lucien Moreau, rain in his platinum hair and blood soaking one side of his charcoal suit. Aurora stared at him. Beneath the landing’s bare bulb, his charm had survived the journey; his tailoring had not. His ivory-handled cane took more of his weight than usual, and one gloved hand pressed against his ribs. He lifted his head. One eye caught the light, amber and bright. The other remained black. “Rory.” “No.” “I have not yet asked a question.” “You were going to.” His gaze moved over her cropped pyjama trousers, the oversized Cardiff University shirt, the pencil holding her black hair in a knot. Something warm disturbed the careful blankness of his face. “You look well.” “You look stabbed.” “Superficially.” A drop of blood fell from his cuff onto the landing. Aurora looked past him. The stairs descended into curry-scented darkness. Somewhere below, the restaurant’s front bell chimed, followed by the soft thump of a door closing. Lucien’s fingers shifted around his cane. “How many?” she asked. “Two.” “Friends?” “Collectors. My father sends his regards.” “Does he send them with knives, or was that your idea?” “I have made several poor decisions tonight. May I discuss them inside?” She kept her hand on the door. Six weeks of silence had given her plenty of openings for this conversation. None had involved his blood on Eva’s welcome mat. “Please, Rory.” The politeness decided her. Lucien only remembered manners when he had run out of manoeuvres. She stepped back. “Inside. Slowly.” He crossed the threshold without touching her. Aurora peered down the stairwell once more, saw nothing, and shut the door. She shot all three deadbolts, then checked them again. Ptolemy uncoiled himself from a fortress of atlases and trotted across the rug. The tabby sniffed Lucien’s shoes and gave an affronted chirp. “Your cat remembers me.” “Eva’s cat remembers everyone who might feed him. Don’t flatter yourself.” She cleared a tower of research notes from a kitchen chair and pointed. “Sit.” Lucien lowered himself into it with care. His cane remained within reach, the ivory handle turned towards his good hand. “Eva told me you would be above Silas’s.” “The ceiling’s being replastered. For another nine days, this is my flat, and you’ve chosen an inconvenient way to visit.” “She offered it as a refuge.” “Eva offers everyone refuge. It’s why there’s nowhere to sit.” A cold draught stirred the papers on the table. The little bone charm above the lintel gave a dry click. Lucien glanced at it. “Her threshold is less accommodating to my father’s associates than most.” “Her threshold has three deadbolts and a landlord who hasn’t fixed the hinge since March. Don’t make it sound mystical.” “The charm came from Prague.” “Of course it did.” Aurora fetched Eva’s first-aid tin from beneath a roll of vellum and set it on the table. “Jacket off. Shirt too.” His eyebrows rose. “You can keep your dignity,” she said. “It isn’t covering the wound.” He removed his jacket, revealing a dark stain that spread from his ribs to his waist. Aurora helped him ease the shirt free without brushing his side. His shoulders had once fit beneath her hands as naturally as the kitchen scissors did now. She gave her fingers colder work. The blade had left a long gash beneath his ribs. Ugly, but shallow enough for Eva’s supplies and Rory’s steady hands. “Why not a hospital?” “The men who did this would enjoy helping with the paperwork.” “Lucien.” “They wanted a book I declined to sell. I objected to their method of negotiation.” “And the book?” “In a safe place.” “Your definition of safe has always been flexible.” She cleaned the wound. Lucien gripped the edge of the table, but his face revealed nothing beyond a slight tightening around his mouth. When she threaded the needle, he watched her hands instead. “Local anaesthetic?” she asked. “In the tin.” “Brandy?” “Already administered.” “That explains the entrance.” The first stitch drew a string of French through his teeth. Of his four languages, that one sounded least elegant when he used it against furniture. Aurora tied off the suture. “Was that flattering?” “Deeply.” At the next stitch, his hand closed around her wrist. His thumb covered the small crescent scar on her left wrist, the pale curve fitting beneath it with an accuracy that made her arm go still. He released her at once. “Sorry.” “For that?” “We could begin there.” A knock travelled through the flat. Two taps, a pause, two more. Ptolemy’s tail swelled. “Rory?” a woman called from the landing. “It’s Eva. My train was cancelled.” Lucien drew the thin blade from his cane without a sound. Aurora stared at the door. The voice had Eva’s London vowels, even the slight rasp she developed after a long journey. It did not have the muffled thump of Eva dropping her luggage, or the immediate complaint about the stairs. Aurora raised her voice. “Use your key, then.” Silence. The handle dipped. Once. The deadbolts held. Ptolemy backed beneath the table, his ears flat. After a moment, a footstep withdrew from the landing. It made no sound on the stairs. Aurora slid the blade from her own hand—when had she picked up the kitchen scissors?—and placed them beside the needle. “Eva has a key,” she said. “She does.” “And she never knocks. She says it makes a flat feel rented.” Lucien returned the sword to its cane. “You see? You were made for hospitality.” “Sit still.” She finished the stitches. Neither of them commented on the charm clicking above the lintel, though it kept up a dry, insectile rhythm while she bandaged him. Only when she had taped the last dressing did Lucien speak again. “Forty-four days.” Aurora dropped the bloody gauze into the bin. “Is that how long an apology takes to mature?” “Since Southwark.” “I know what you meant.” “I arrived in London tonight.” “Convenient. You can catch the next train back.” “I intended to find you tomorrow.” Her hands stopped under the tap. “In a suit without a hole in it?” “There was a speech.” “Was it good?” “It had excellent structure.” She dried her hands on a tea towel printed with an anatomical drawing of a raven. Eva had never explained why. Lucien looked down at his bare hands. “You kissed me in Southwark. I stayed. In the morning, I called it an error in judgement.” “You waited until I was dressed. I’ll give you that.” “Rory—” “No. You don’t get to shorten this because it hurts your face to hear it.” He accepted that with a small nod. She folded the tea towel once, then again. “I spent the next week wondering which part had been the error. Kissing you, or believing you when you said you wanted me to.” “Neither.” “You took your time correcting it.” “I know.” “That isn’t an answer.” “No.” He pressed his palms together, forearms braced on his knees. “Before I came home to you that night, my father’s steward showed me a photograph. You were leaving Golden Empress with a bag in each hand. He knew your hours. He knew which entrance you used. He knew you sometimes took the long way back to Silas’s when the weather was fine.” Aurora stopped folding the towel. “He asked what you were worth to me.” “What did you tell him?” “That you delivered my dinner.” Her mouth twisted. “And then you came home and made the lie convincing.” “I tried.” “Don’t. You managed beautifully.” The bone charm clicked on. Beyond the walls, a bus sighed along Brick Lane. Lucien kept his gaze on hers. “I thought if London believed you meant nothing, the questions would stop. If you hated me, you would stay away from my houses, my associates, my father’s reach.” “You decided that without me.” “Yes.” “You made me think I was easy to leave and called it protection.” “Yes.” The absence of an excuse angered her more than one would have. She threw the tea towel onto the counter. “I could have helped.” “You would have gone looking for the steward.” “I’d have found him.” “I know.” “Don’t sound proud. You don’t get to admire the part of me you were busy punishing.” His amber eye lowered. The black one stayed fixed on her. “The danger ended three weeks ago.” She laughed once, without humour. “Three weeks?” “The rest was cowardice.” That took the air out of the next sentence. Aurora gripped the back of the chair opposite him. “Did you miss me during the cowardice, or was that more convenient too?” “In four languages. It became repetitive.” “You could have used one of them to send a message.” “Yes.” “Stop agreeing with me.” “I am attempting honesty. You have always complained that I ration it.” She came around the table before she could turn the movement into anything more considered. Lucien straightened, wincing as the bandage pulled. “What do you want now?” she asked. “An hour in which you stop looking at the door.” “That isn’t what I asked.” “No.” He drew a breath. “I want to stay in London. I want to see you when neither of us is bleeding. I want to take you somewhere with poor lighting and worse wine and listen to you dismantle the menu. I want to tell you when I am frightened instead of presenting you with the bill for it afterwards.” “Lucien.” “And I want to know whether anything remains that you would choose, knowing what I did. If there is not, I will accept it.” “You make acceptance sound like another favour you’re doing me.” “Then I will learn to do it without making a speech.” Aurora put the first-aid tin down. Its latch clicked against the Formica. She crossed the remaining space and took hold of his open collar. His hands stayed on his knees. “If this is anger,” he began, “I would rather you did not—” “Don’t tell me what I feel.” “I was going to ask you not to reopen my stitches.” “That was almost sensible.” She kissed him. For an instant he offered only his mouth, warm and careful beneath hers. Then her fingers slid into his rain-damp hair, and his hand found her waist. He did not pull. He simply held her there, as if she might change the shape of the moment and he intended to leave room for it. She kissed him harder. His breath caught; the cane tipped over and struck the rug. Neither of them retrieved it. When she drew back, he kept his hand at her waist. “This fixes nothing,” she said. “No.” “I’m still angry.” “I had noticed.” “And you’re not sleeping here because I kissed you.” His gaze moved to the sofa, buried beneath scrolls, two jumpers and Ptolemy’s knitted blanket. “Where am I sleeping?” “There. Move anything with a ribbon before you move the rest.” “Naturally.” She checked his bandage, found no fresh blood, and stepped away before her hands could invent another reason to touch him. Lucien retrieved his cane but left the blade sheathed. “What happened to the speech?” she asked. “You interrupted it.” “The one you were saving for tomorrow.” “It ended with you asking me to stay.” “Presumptuous.” “Hopeful. I had allowed for revision.” Aurora picked up two cups from the draining rack. After a moment, she put one back and took down a clean one instead. “Tea first. Then the sofa. In the morning, you can try the rest of your apology.” “And if it is no better?” “Make breakfast.” He filled the kettle at the sink. When she set the second cup beside it, his hand covered hers on the handle. Aurora left it there.
created_at"2026-10-27T11:23:46.671Z" 10/27/2026, 11:23:46 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences131
tagDensity0.084
leniency0.168
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
97.45% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1960
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
77.04% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1960
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"charm"
count5
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"structure"
count1
highlights
0"charm"
1"weight"
2"silence"
3"structure"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences121
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences121
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tended to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences241
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen55
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1959
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions31
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
80.23% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions48
wordCount1075
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.4
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien14
Moreau1
Cardiff1
University1
Eva6
Rory1
French1
London1
Aurora15
Brick1
Lane1
Formica1
Ptolemy4
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Eva"
3"Rory"
4"Aurora"
5"Ptolemy"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"London"
2"Brick"
3"Lane"
globalScore0.802
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences82
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1959
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences241
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs193
mean10.15
std10.49
cv1.033
sampleLengths
020
137
216
31
41
57
64
731
83
93
101
1111
1226
136
144
151
161
176
1811
1912
2029
212
2215
233
242
2529
2623
274
2811
2913
301
3120
328
3320
346
3510
3620
374
3811
3920
405
414
4217
434
443
4512
4649
4721
484
4911
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences121
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs184
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences241
ratio0.012
matches
0"Beneath the landing’s bare bulb, his charm had survived the journey; his tailoring had not."
1"Aurora slid the blade from her own hand—when had she picked up the kitchen scissors?—and placed them beside the needle."
2"His breath caught; the cane tipped over and struck the rug."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1081
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.030527289546716005
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.005550416281221091
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences241
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences241
mean8.13
std6.87
cv0.845
sampleLengths
020
14
215
318
44
58
64
71
81
97
104
1122
129
133
143
151
1611
174
186
1916
206
214
221
231
246
2511
2612
277
2813
299
302
314
3211
333
342
357
3613
379
3813
3910
404
4111
4213
431
447
4513
468
4720
486
4910
51.31% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3278008298755187
totalSentences241
uniqueOpeners79
90.09% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences111
matches
0"Somewhere below, the restaurant’s front"
1"Only when she had taped"
2"Then her fingers slid into"
ratio0.027
72.25% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount41
totalSentences111
matches
0"His ivory-handled cane took more"
1"He lifted his head."
2"His gaze moved over her"
3"She kept her hand on"
4"She stepped back."
5"He crossed the threshold without"
6"She shot all three deadbolts,"
7"She cleared a tower of"
8"His cane remained within reach,"
9"His eyebrows rose."
10"He removed his jacket, revealing"
11"His shoulders had once fit"
12"She gave her fingers colder"
13"She cleaned the wound."
14"His thumb covered the small"
15"He released her at once."
16"It did not have the"
17"It made no sound on"
18"She finished the stitches."
19"Her hands stopped under the"
ratio0.369
36.58% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount94
totalSentences111
matches
0"The door opened on Lucien"
1"Aurora stared at him."
2"His ivory-handled cane took more"
3"He lifted his head."
4"The other remained black."
5"His gaze moved over her"
6"Something warm disturbed the careful"
7"A drop of blood fell"
8"Aurora looked past him."
9"The stairs descended into curry-scented"
10"Lucien’s fingers shifted around his"
11"She kept her hand on"
12"None had involved his blood"
13"The politeness decided her."
14"Lucien only remembered manners when"
15"She stepped back."
16"He crossed the threshold without"
17"Aurora peered down the stairwell"
18"She shot all three deadbolts,"
19"Ptolemy uncoiled himself from a"
ratio0.847
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences111
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"His thumb covered the small crescent scar on her left wrist, the pale curve fitting beneath it with an accuracy that made her arm go still."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"He pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences131
tagDensity0.069
leniency0.137
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.015
90.1652%