Run: 2026-10-27-01M5YHNM7H5PQPB8MPGJCKJ5AG

Run Details

Duration:
39.1s
Cost:
$0.014082
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory came down the stairs with a bag of takeaway containers against her hip. The lift had broken again, and she had promised Silas she would leave his dinner behind the bar rather than outside his office door. The Raven’s Nest had filled during the rain. Coats hung from chair backs, and the old maps on the walls had gathered a dull shine from the lamps. Silas stood at the till, counting notes with his right hand, his silver signet ring catching against the edges. “Yu-Fei sent the duck,” Rory called. “Tell her I’ll pay her tomorrow.” “She put extra pancakes in.” “Then I’ll pay her tonight.” Rory slipped behind the bar. A woman sat at the far end with a glass of water and a folded umbrella between her knees. Her jacket lay across the next stool, its sleeves turned inside out. Rory moved it before she noticed the face above it. The woman looked up from her phone. “Rory?” Rory held the jacket by its collar. The lining was green silk, darkened at one shoulder by rain. “Nia?” For a moment neither reached for the jacket. Nia had cut her hair close around her ears. At school she had worn it long enough to sit on, plaited with bits of blue wool that came loose in maths. Her eyebrows were the same, thick and straight, but she had a pale line across her chin that Rory did not remember. Nia took the jacket and folded it over her lap. “I thought you were still in Cardiff.” “I wasn’t aware I’d gone back.” “No. I suppose you wouldn’t be.” Silas came down the bar with two plates. He glanced between them. “I’ve brought my dinner out. You can have half if you’re staying.” Rory kept her hand on the counter. “I’ve got food upstairs.” “Good. More for me.” He carried the plates to the other end. Nia watched him open the containers and separate the pancakes with a knife. “You live upstairs?” “Third floor.” “I came in because of the sign. I saw it from the taxi.” “The green one?” “It’s difficult to miss.” Rain rattled the window beside them. Nia turned her glass a quarter turn, then another, leaving a wet ring on the wood. “Are you waiting for someone?” Rory asked. “No. I came from a dinner. Everyone else went on somewhere, and I wanted a drink.” “You’ve got water.” “I ordered a whisky first. I looked at it for a while, then he took it away.” Rory glanced towards Silas. “He didn’t charge me. I asked him to.” “He’ll find a way.” Nia smiled, and Rory saw the girl who had once stood on a bus seat and led half their class in a song about their chemistry teacher. The smile went before Rory could decide whether to return it. She put the takeaway bag under the counter. “You stopped drinking?” “Two years ago.” Rory looked at the glass again. Nia’s nails were short and bare. She used to bite them until the skin split, then paint over the damage with whatever colour she had stolen from her sister. “Good,” Rory said. Nia lifted the glass. “It was more work than I expected.” A pair of customers came in under one umbrella. Silas rose to serve them, carrying his plate behind the till. Rory moved out from behind the counter and took the empty stool beside Nia. “What kind of dinner?” “Work. A client paid for twelve people to eat a very small piece of fish.” “What work?” “Solicitor.” Rory turned to face her. “You?” “I passed the exams. They let me in.” “You set fire to Mrs Morgan’s coat.” “I set fire to a bin. Her coat happened to be over it.” “You put the bin there.” Nia pressed her thumb against the line on her chin. “I did. My supervisor hasn’t asked about that.” “What sort of law?” “Commercial property. Leases, mostly. Tonight was a developer who wanted to thank us for finishing a deal.” Rory looked at the jacket. The fabric had a clean, sharp edge where it folded over Nia’s knee. “You always wanted to get out of Cardiff.” “I wanted to go to Brazil and work with jaguars.” “That lasted three weeks.” “Four. I had a poster.” “You had my poster. You took it off my bedroom wall.” Nia laughed. The sound drew a glance from the couple at the table behind them. She lowered her glass without drinking. “Your mother made me give it back.” “She found it under your bed.” “She found everything under my bed.” “She found a boy under there once.” “He was looking for his shoe.” “He was fourteen.” “So was I.” Rory rested her elbows on the bar. The old photographs across the room showed men in dark coats outside buildings she did not recognise. Their faces had faded to the colour of cigarette ash. “How is your mum?” Nia asked. “She’s teaching part-time now. She says she’s retiring every summer, then she buys another set of pens.” “And your dad?” “Still at it.” “Of course.” “He asked after you last Christmas.” Nia’s fingers stopped on the glass. “Did he?” “He wanted to know whether you’d stayed in law.” “What did you tell him?” “That I didn’t know.” Nia looked down at her jacket. A loose thread hung from one cuff, and she wound it around her finger until the skin above it turned white. “I saw him in court once,” she said. “Three years ago. He didn’t recognise me.” “He doesn’t recognise people outside their proper setting. He walked past our neighbour in a supermarket.” “I was wearing a gown.” “Then I can’t help you.” Nia unwound the thread. Rory remembered her father at the kitchen table, marking papers with his glasses low on his nose while Nia ate the crusts Rory left on her plate. He had called them both young advocates when they argued over whose turn it was to wash up. Nia reached for her phone, then left it on the bar. “I heard you left university.” “Your sources were accurate.” “I heard other things as well.” Rory took a beer mat from the stack and flattened its curled corner. “From whom?” “Your dad, for some of it. My sister for the rest.” “My dad didn’t know much.” “He knew you’d gone to London.” “He knew that after I got here.” Nia watched Rory’s hand on the beer mat. “I gave Evan your address.” Rory stopped rubbing the corner. She had pictured this conversation in several forms: a message on her phone, a knock at her mother’s door, Nia standing outside the restaurant with a paper bag of food gone cold. In none of them had Nia put the words on the counter before Rory asked. “I know,” Rory said. “He told me you’d left your medication at his flat. He had a bag with your name on it.” “There was medication in it. Along with my passport and my bank card.” “I didn’t look.” “No.” “He showed me the bag.” “And you gave him the address.” Nia put both hands around her glass. The water trembled against the rim. “You’d sent it to me that morning. You asked me not to give it to anyone.” “I remember.” “I thought if he posted the bag, you could get what you needed without speaking to him.” “You gave it to him over the phone.” “Yes.” “He was outside the restaurant that evening.” Nia stared at her. “You never told me that.” “You never asked.” “I sent messages.” “You sent messages saying he was worried. You sent one saying he’d promised not to contact me if I spoke to him once.” “I was frightened for you.” “I was frightened too.” Silas approached with the teapot he kept under the counter. “Rory?” She shook her head. He poured hot water into his cup and took it back to his plate. Nia’s voice dropped. “What happened outside the restaurant?” “He waited until I finished a delivery. Yu-Fei saw him through the window and came out with a bag of rubbish.” “Did he hurt you?” “He grabbed my wrist. She hit him with the bag.” Nia looked at Rory’s left hand. Rory drew it back from the bar, covering the small crescent scar with her thumb. “That’s old,” she said. “I know. You fell off the wall at the paddling pool.” “I was pushed.” “By a boy on a bike.” “By you.” Nia opened her mouth, then closed it. “You pushed me because I wouldn’t give you the last crisp.” “I’d forgotten.” “My dad took me to A and E. You came round the next day with a card.” “I drew a bike on it.” “You drew a packet of crisps.” Nia gave a breath of laughter, but Rory kept her eyes on the beer mat. “I should have asked you what happened,” Nia said. “You could have asked before you gave him the address.” “I know.” “You could have called me.” “You weren’t answering.” “I answered you that morning.” Nia took the thread from her cuff and pulled it free. It stretched between her hands, longer than Rory expected. “I told myself the medication mattered more than the address. Then you blocked me, and I told myself you’d done it because I kept mentioning him.” “I did.” “I thought you’d call when you were ready.” Rory tore the beer mat along a crease. “I sent you a message from Eva’s phone. After he came to the restaurant.” Nia looked up. “I never got it.” “It said not to tell anyone else where I was.” “I didn’t get it.” “Perhaps Eva had the wrong number.” “I changed mine around then. My old phone went into the river.” Rory turned towards her. “You threw it in?” “No. I fell in with it.” “Where?” “Bristol. By the station.” “You can’t swim.” “I could stand up. It was the canal.” Rory let out a short laugh before she could stop it. Nia looked at her, waiting, and Rory placed the torn pieces of beer mat on the counter. “I went to see your mum after you left,” Nia said. “She made tea. I sat there for an hour and didn’t tell her what I’d done.” “She would have called me.” “I know.” “She was worried enough already.” “I know that too.” At the other end of the bar, one of the new customers asked Silas about a photograph. He lifted it from its hook and carried it over, his left leg stiff as he crossed the floor. Nia gathered her jacket from her lap. “I’m sorry, Rory.” Rory watched her fold the sleeves in again. “You used to say I made everything into an argument.” “You did.” “I learned it at home.” “You learned some of it at school. You once argued with a vending machine.” “It took my pound.” “You kicked it.” “And got my crisps.” Nia laid the jacket on the vacant stool. A corner of the green lining slipped out. “I thought you’d tell me if he was that bad,” she said. “I told you he checked my phone.” “You said he knew your password.” “I told you he didn’t like me going out without him.” “You said he got jealous.” Rory folded one half of the beer mat into a narrow strip. “What was I supposed to call it?” Nia’s gaze moved to the strip of cardboard. She picked up the other half and set it beside Rory’s. “You could have called it anything. I should have listened.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences151
tagDensity0.066
leniency0.132
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
97.41% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1933
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
94.83% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1933
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"silk"
count1
1
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"silk"
1"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences94
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences94
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences235
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1933
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions35
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions78
wordCount938
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity3.73
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity6.5
worstWindowName"Nia"
discoveredNames
Silas7
Raven1
Nest1
Rory35
Nia34
persons
0"Silas"
1"Raven"
2"Nest"
3"Rory"
4"Nia"
places(empty)
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences70
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1933
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences235
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs197
mean9.81
std10.03
cv1.022
sampleLengths
038
147
26
36
45
55
646
77
81
918
101
1161
1210
137
146
156
1612
1712
187
194
204
2121
223
232
2413
253
264
2722
287
2916
303
3117
324
338
344
3538
368
373
383
3935
403
414
427
4334
444
4515
462
471
485
491
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs161
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences235
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount938
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount11
adverbRatio0.011727078891257996
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences235
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences235
mean8.23
std5.71
cv0.695
sampleLengths
014
124
28
320
419
56
66
75
85
95
1019
1112
1210
137
141
157
1611
171
188
199
2022
2122
2210
237
246
256
268
274
2812
297
304
314
328
3313
343
352
3613
373
384
396
4016
417
4216
433
4417
454
468
474
4827
4911
41.91% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats19
diversityRatio0.2
totalSentences235
uniqueOpeners47
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences83
matches
0"Her jacket lay across the"
1"Her eyebrows were the same,"
2"He glanced between them."
3"He carried the plates to"
4"She put the takeaway bag"
5"She used to bite them"
6"She lowered her glass without"
7"Their faces had faded to"
8"He had called them both"
9"She had pictured this conversation"
10"She shook her head."
11"He poured hot water into"
12"It stretched between her hands,"
13"He lifted it from its"
14"She picked up the other"
ratio0.181
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount79
totalSentences83
matches
0"Rory came down the stairs"
1"The lift had broken again,"
2"The Raven’s Nest had filled"
3"Coats hung from chair backs,"
4"Silas stood at the till,"
5"Rory slipped behind the bar."
6"A woman sat at the"
7"Her jacket lay across the"
8"Rory moved it before she"
9"The woman looked up from"
10"Rory held the jacket by"
11"The lining was green silk,"
12"Nia had cut her hair"
13"Her eyebrows were the same,"
14"Nia took the jacket and"
15"Silas came down the bar"
16"He glanced between them."
17"Rory kept her hand on"
18"He carried the plates to"
19"Nia watched him open the"
ratio0.952
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Nia smiled, and Rory saw the girl who had once stood on a bus seat and led half their class in a song about their chemistry teacher."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences151
tagDensity0.066
leniency0.132
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.4718%