Run: 2026-10-27-01M5YHPXSG0TTSQJRWT1C5HDGB

Run Details

Duration:
10m 15s
Cost:
$0.165256
Provider:
Moonshot AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory arrived at Richmond Park with soy sauce on one cuff and Eva’s voice note on her phone. The service gate stood open by the width of a person. Its chain hung from the post, the padlock shut around nothing. A sign faced the road with the closing time painted over and scratched out again. Beyond it, wet gravel held her torchlight in small white points. She checked the time. Twenty-three forty-six. Eva’s message had asked for eleven fifty. Rory played it once more with the volume low. “Rory? Don’t ring this number. Richmond, the old service gate. Follow the white flowers. Bring the pendant. I’ll wait by the stones.” Nineteen seconds. Eva’s voice, scraped thin around the consonants. No greeting, no explanation, no room for questions. The number had been disconnected when Rory rang it from the Golden Empress. Yu-Fei had watched her take off her delivery jacket, then put it back on, and had not asked where she was going. Eva had got Rory out of Cardiff. Rory could cross a park after closing. She slipped through the gate and left it as she had found it. For the first few steps, tyres hissed on the road behind her. Then they didn’t. The change came without a fade. Rory stopped and looked back. The gate remained visible between two trees, framed by the orange glow of a streetlamp. Aircraft lights travelled above the park. She waited for the engine noise to catch up. The lights cleared the oaks and continued towards Heathrow without bringing any sound with them. Rory switched off the torch. The road lamp still marked the gate. A cloud moved across the moon, and the park’s geometry settled around her: trunks, path, bramble, the metal bar of a boundary fence. She counted to five, switched the torch back on and went in. The flowers began beyond the first fallen log. White stitchwort grew along the path in a line too consistent for chance. Poppies stood among it, their petals furled for the night. Frost had silvered the grass near the gate. None touched the flowers. Rory crouched and rubbed one white petal between finger and thumb. It broke with a wet snap and left a green smear on her skin. A real plant, whatever the calendar thought. Under her jacket, the Heartstone pulsed. She drew it out by the silver chain. The crimson stone rested against her palm, no larger than her thumbnail. Its inner glow did not reach her skin. When she held it still, the glow contracted around a point at its centre, paused, and opened again. The warmth faded when she stepped off the path. It returned over the flowers. Rory took three paces to the left. Cool metal. Three back. Heat. She coiled the chain once around her fingers and followed. At twenty-three fifty-one, the path reached a boundary of ancient oaks and standing stones. Roots had buckled the earth around the trunks. The stones leaned at different angles, their surfaces dark with moisture. Some stood no higher than her knee; others rose above her head. None bore a name or mark that she could see. Before crossing between them, she tore a strip from the delivery receipt in her pocket and tied it to a low branch. She pulled the knot tight, checked that she could see it from both sides and stepped through. The clearing had not been visible from the path. It opened in front of her, round and uncluttered, with wildflowers crowding its edges. The grass at its centre lay flat beneath the moon. No fountain. No bench. No sign of Eva. Rory looked back. The receipt strip hung beyond the stones, a pale stitch against the oak. A way out she could see. “Eva? It’s Rory. I’ve brought it.” Her voice thinned before it reached the far trees. Nothing echoed. “Five minutes,” she told the clearing. “Then I’m going.” She walked the boundary with the torch aimed at the ground. Her trainers pressed water from the grass. Now and then she found a hollow beneath a root or a stone chipped by weather, but no bag, no coat, no footprints that didn’t belong to her. At twelve paces from the entrance, she stopped. A thirteenth step sounded behind her. Rory turned with the torch low. Her track lay dark across the grass. Empty space separated her from the boundary stones. A drop of water fell from her cuff and struck a leaf with a hard, distinct tick. Not the same sound. She took two paces and stopped. Nothing followed. Three more. Only the wet compression beneath her own feet. Deer moved through Richmond at night. So did foxes. Water settled. Branches shifted. She gave each explanation its due and kept walking. Near a split oak, something pale withdrew at the edge of the torch beam. Rory lifted the light. A standing stone occupied the spot. Its top sloped towards the ground, and white flowers grew close around its base. She could see no gap behind it wide enough to conceal an animal larger than a cat. She glanced towards the receipt to fix her position. The split oak stood on her left. The stone stood ahead of it. When she looked back, the split oak was on the stone’s right. Rory moved one pace sideways. The stone’s outline shifted against the trees with the solidity of everything else in the clearing. Moss clung to its northern face. A beetle crawled from beneath a flake of lichen and vanished into a crack. She backed away from it. The Heartstone had stopped responding to direction. Its warmth came at regular intervals now, wherever she turned. Against her sternum, under the cloth, then through it. At the centre of the clearing, the wildflowers ended along a straight seam in the grass. Rory crouched without crossing it. No cut marked the earth. The stems on either side had simply grown in different directions, leaving a gap no wider than her finger. The pendant pulsed again. Something beneath the seam answered with a sound too low to hear. She caught it in her teeth. Rory stood and put the Heartstone back inside her jacket. Her phone vibrated. One bar of signal had appeared. The lock screen read 03:18. Under it, the date said Thursday. She had left the restaurant on Monday night. The first message was from Yu-Fei. Rory, it’s Thursday. You’ve missed your shifts. Are you safe? Rory read the date again. Her stopwatch, started after she entered the clearing, had counted eleven minutes and twenty seconds. The seconds were still advancing. She opened Yu-Fei’s message. Her thumb missed the reply box, then found it. Richmond Park. Old service gate. Grove inside. Bring someone with you. She pressed send. The signal bar disappeared. A red mark appeared beside the message. Rory tried a call. The screen showed Yu-Fei’s name without connecting. She ended it before the silence could become another thing to listen to. “No more waiting.” Her voice had gone rough. She cleared her throat and faced the receipt marker. “Eva, if you’re here, I’m leaving. Follow my voice.” She walked towards the boundary without running. The grass pulled at her laces. Once, at the edge of vision, the whole line of standing stones seemed to lean away from her, but when she turned her head they stood in their original places. The Heartstone pulsed against her chest. From the centre of the clearing, Rory’s own voice called, “Eva? It’s Rory. I’ve brought it.” The same breath before Eva’s name. The same drop in volume at the end. Not an echo. An echo would have returned the clearing’s shape. This returned her. Rory stopped. She pressed the torch against her thigh, shading its glare without switching it off, and let her vision reach into the grey beyond it. The receipt marker remained ahead. The clearing stayed behind her. She did not turn. “If you’re Eva, tell me the first thing I said when you met me at Paddington.” A stem tapped against another stem. Then came a wet sound in the grass behind her, close to her left shoulder. Not a footstep. A weight settling. Eva’s voice answered from the dark. “You weren’t wearing the pendant.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.222
leniency0.444
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1377
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
60.06% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1377
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"pulsed"
count3
1
word"warmth"
count2
2
word"echoed"
count1
3
word"vibrated"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"echo"
count2
6
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"warmth"
2"echoed"
3"vibrated"
4"silence"
5"echo"
6"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences158
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences158
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences165
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1377
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions47
wordCount1305
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.53
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond3
Park2
Eva7
Rory20
Golden1
Empress1
Cardiff1
Heathrow1
Heartstone4
Thursday2
Monday1
Yu-Fei4
persons
0"Eva"
1"Rory"
2"Heartstone"
3"Yu-Fei"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Golden"
3"Cardiff"
4"Heathrow"
globalScore0.734
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences105
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"appeared beside the message"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1377
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences165
matches
0"checked that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs73
mean18.86
std14.34
cv0.76
sampleLengths
018
148
26
316
422
517
649
713
841
930
1047
118
1235
1332
146
1546
1614
1712
1810
1955
2039
219
2232
2316
246
256
2611
279
2846
298
306
3138
324
3318
3422
3514
364
3737
3822
3912
4041
415
4226
4345
444
4518
4610
473
4811
496
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences158
matches
0"been disconnected"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs212
matches
0"was going"
1"were still advancing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences165
ratio0.006
matches
0"Some stood no higher than her knee; others rose above her head."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1313
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.022086824067022087
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.002284843869002285
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences165
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences165
mean8.35
std5.42
cv0.649
sampleLengths
018
111
211
315
411
54
62
77
89
922
102
117
128
1313
1422
157
167
1713
1812
193
206
215
2215
236
249
2515
265
277
2823
2912
308
3113
3210
338
344
3511
3614
377
386
398
4012
418
4218
439
445
457
462
472
481
4910
50.71% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3333333333333333
totalSentences165
uniqueOpeners55
93.24% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences143
matches
0"Then they didn’t."
1"Only the wet compression beneath"
2"Once, at the edge of"
3"Then came a wet sound"
ratio0.028
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences143
matches
0"Its chain hung from the"
1"She checked the time."
2"She slipped through the gate"
3"She waited for the engine"
4"She counted to five, switched"
5"It broke with a wet"
6"She drew it out by"
7"Its inner glow did not"
8"It returned over the flowers."
9"She coiled the chain once"
10"She pulled the knot tight,"
11"It opened in front of"
12"Her voice thinned before it"
13"she told the clearing"
14"She walked the boundary with"
15"Her trainers pressed water from"
16"Her track lay dark across"
17"She took two paces and"
18"She gave each explanation its"
19"Its top sloped towards the"
ratio0.266
68.39% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount112
totalSentences143
matches
0"Rory arrived at Richmond Park"
1"The service gate stood open"
2"Its chain hung from the"
3"A sign faced the road"
4"She checked the time."
5"Eva’s message had asked for"
6"Rory played it once more"
7"Eva’s voice, scraped thin around"
8"The number had been disconnected"
9"Yu-Fei had watched her take"
10"Eva had got Rory out"
11"Rory could cross a park"
12"She slipped through the gate"
13"The change came without a"
14"Rory stopped and looked back."
15"The gate remained visible between"
16"Aircraft lights travelled above the"
17"She waited for the engine"
18"The lights cleared the oaks"
19"Rory switched off the torch."
ratio0.783
69.93% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences143
matches
0"Before crossing between them, she"
1"Now and then she found"
ratio0.014
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"She pressed the torch against her thigh, shading its glare without switching it off, and let her vision reach into the grey beyond it."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.222
leniency0.444
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.6331%