Run: 2026-10-27-01M5YHPXW48DC4E2JBBR0BCZE8

Run Details

Duration:
38.1s
Cost:
$0.013684
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain ran off the canvas awning of the closed pharmacy and down Detective Harlow Quinn’s collar. Across the road, Tomás Herrera stood under a bus shelter, one hand clamped around a canvas medical bag. He watched the traffic, not the people waiting beside him. Quinn lifted her phone. The photograph from her briefing showed the same short curls, the same narrow scar along his left forearm. In that picture he had worn an NHS uniform. Tonight his sleeve had ridden up beneath a soaked denim jacket. Her phone buzzed against her palm. “You’ve got a car on its way,” her colleague told her. “Five minutes.” “He’s moving.” “Wait for the car, Harlow.” Herrera stepped off the kerb. Quinn slipped the phone into her coat pocket and followed. A night bus passed between them, its tyres pushing a sheet of water across the pavement. When it cleared, Herrera had reached the mouth of an alley beside a kebab shop. Quinn crossed against the lights. A taxi braked, and its horn cut through the rain. “Metropolitan Police. Herrera!” He turned. For an instant, his hand tightened on the bag. Then he ran. Quinn followed him into the alley, past stacked beer kegs and bins that smelled of wet cardboard. Herrera shoved through a pair of men sheltering beneath a fire escape. One swore and swung an elbow. Quinn caught his shoulder, pushed past and saw Herrera take the corner ahead. “Stop!” He vaulted a low chain between two bollards. Quinn went over it a step later, her shoe slipping on painted metal. She struck the pavement on one knee. Pain shot up her thigh. Herrera gained twenty yards. He crossed the road without looking. A delivery cyclist swerved, hit a parked car and went down. Quinn reached him as he pushed himself onto one elbow. “Police. Are you hurt?” “My bloody wheel is.” The front wheel had folded against the frame. The cyclist’s hands were scraped, but he got to his feet. “Call an ambulance if you need one.” Herrera disappeared around the corner. Quinn ran after him, pulling her warrant card clear of her coat. Camden’s late traffic clogged the next junction. Headlights spread across the wet road. Herrera squeezed between a van and a black cab, then hauled himself over the bonnet of a stationary car. Its driver leaned on the horn. Quinn followed the gap between the vehicles. A passenger opened a door in front of her. She caught its edge before it struck her chest. “Police. Keep it shut.” She slipped through and reached the opposite pavement. Herrera had stopped outside a shuttered tattoo studio. He pressed a hand to his side and looked back. “Detective, leave it.” “Put the bag down.” “You don’t know what’s in it.” “Then show me.” A siren sounded somewhere beyond the junction. Herrera glanced towards it, then ducked through the narrow space between the studio and a boarded-up newsagent. Quinn reached the gap as a metal gate slammed across it. Herrera had pulled a chain through the bars. His hands worked at a padlock on the other side. She seized the gate before he could fasten it. The chain snapped taut. Herrera jerked back, and the padlock fell into a puddle between them. “Move away from the gate.” “There’s a woman with a collapsed lung waiting for me.” “Where?” “Somewhere you can’t bring half the Met.” “Give me the address. I’ll send paramedics.” Herrera gave a short shake of his head. “She can’t go to hospital.” “Why?” He reached into his jacket. Quinn drew her baton and stepped back from the bars. “Hands where I can see them.” He pulled out a small glass vial. Dark liquid coated its sides. A strip of white tape covered the label, with a dosage written in blue ink. “That’s what she needs.” Quinn kept her eyes on his hands. “You lost your licence for using unapproved treatments.” “I lost it for using them on people nobody else would touch.” He slipped the vial back into his pocket and pulled the chain free. The gate swung towards Quinn. She caught it, but Herrera had already turned and run. She forced her way through the gap. At its far end, a broken security light flashed over a service yard. Herrera ran between two skips towards a brick wall. Quinn closed the distance. He set one foot on a crate and reached for the top. She caught his jacket. The denim tore beneath her fingers. Herrera twisted, and the medical bag swung into her wrist. Her baton struck the wall. He landed on the other side with a grunt. Quinn climbed after him. A rusted bracket caught her coat, holding her for a moment at the top. She ripped the cloth free and dropped into a narrow lane. Herrera was at the far end, fumbling with a door beneath a concrete stairwell. He pushed it open and vanished inside. Quinn ran down the lane. The door had no handle on her side, only a steel plate and an old transport notice bleached almost white. She wedged her fingers into the gap before the latch caught and hauled it back. A flight of tiled steps descended into darkness. Water dripped from Herrera’s shoes onto the treads. His footsteps rang below. Quinn switched on her torch and went down. The passage smelled of damp plaster and old wiring. Faded posters clung to the walls behind cracked glass. One advertised a concert from twelve years earlier; another had peeled until only a woman’s painted eye remained. At the foot of the stairs, a heavy grille blocked the corridor. Herrera stood beyond it. A man in a long green coat held the gate open for him. “Close it,” Herrera told him. The man saw Quinn’s torch. He swung the grille shut and slid a bolt through its frame. Quinn reached the bars. Herrera backed away, breathing hard, his bag hugged against his chest. Light flickered on the tiled wall behind him, yellow and unsteady. “Tomás. Listen to me.” He stopped. “I found your name in a ledger taken from the Raven’s Nest. Three payments in two months, all marked medical supplies. The same ledger listed a woman who vanished last week.” “What woman?” “Leah Marsh.” His expression changed. He shifted the strap of his bag higher on his shoulder. “Where is she?” “That’s what I’m asking you.” “I treated her at the Nest. A cut on her leg.” “When?” “Ten days ago.” “Who was with her?” “Two men. One had a broken nose.” He looked towards the light behind him. “I don’t know their names.” “Come back through and give me a statement.” “I’ve got a patient.” “Then tell me where she is.” Herrera pushed his wet hair off his forehead. A silver medallion had come loose from under his shirt; it caught Quinn’s torchlight before he tucked it away. “She’s through here. She’ll die while you’re filling in forms.” “Let me see her.” The man in the green coat stepped between them. “Token.” Quinn turned the torch on him. He had a narrow face and a row of silver rings along one ear. “I’m a police officer.” “Token.” Herrera opened his mouth, then shut it. He took a small object from his pocket and pressed it into the man’s hand. The man examined it and moved aside. Quinn rattled the grille. The bolt held. “Herrera!” He looked back once, then ran down the corridor. Quinn pulled her phone out. No signal. She climbed six steps until a bar appeared and called her colleague. “He’s gone into a disused station off Kentish Town Road. Entrance is in the service lane behind the tattoo studio.” “Stay there. We’re two minutes away.” “There’s a locked gate. He’s inside with another man.” “Don’t go through on your own.” Quinn looked down the stairs. The man in the green coat waited at the grille, a cigarette tucked behind one ear. “He says he’s treating someone.” “Herrera’s a suspect, Harlow. He’d tell you anything.” The call broke into a crackle. Quinn moved up another step, but the signal vanished. She put the phone away and went back to the gate. The man held out his palm. “Token.” “What kind?” “Bone.” “I haven’t got one.” “Then you weren’t invited.” Quinn swept her torch across the floor. Rainwater had collected in the hollows between the tiles. Near the wall lay the torn strip of Herrera’s jacket, carried down on the toe of her shoe when she had climbed the wall. Something pale had caught in its stitching. She picked it up. A thin disc, no larger than a pound coin, hung from a broken thread. She rubbed away the grit. A hole had been drilled through its centre, and a shallow pattern of lines marked one side. The man held out his hand again. Quinn kept the disc. “What’s down there?” “Shops.” “In an abandoned station?” “You wanted in.” Voices drifted up the corridor, too many for a handful of shops. A bell rang, followed by the scrape of wheels and a burst of laughter. Quinn thought of the ledger from the Raven’s Nest, of payments that had stopped the day Leah Marsh disappeared. Herrera had recognised the name. He had also run from it. She checked her watch. Rain had darkened the worn leather strap. If she waited, Herrera could leave through another exit before the car arrived. If she followed, nobody outside would know where he had gone or where she had gone after him. She took out her phone and typed the location into a message, adding: Locked grille. Male guard in green coat. Herrera inside. The message sat unsent without a signal. Quinn climbed the stairs until it went through. Then she returned to the gate and held up the disc. The man took it, ran a thumbnail across the carved lines and drew back the bolt. Quinn slipped past him. He shut the grille behind her. She kept her torch low as the corridor widened. The walls opened onto a platform, where stalls crowded both sides of the old track bed. Lamps hung from cables looped around iron pillars. Under their light, jars stood in ranks on folding tables, filled with powders, teeth and strips of meat suspended in clear fluid. A woman in a butcher’s apron weighed something on brass scales. Across from her, a man spread photographs on a blanket while a customer picked through them. People moved between the stalls with their heads down. Quinn caught glimpses of faces beneath hoods, gloved hands exchanging notes and tokens, a crate that rocked against the floor as its owner dragged it past. She found Herrera near a stall stacked with bottles. He pushed through a group of customers, the canvas bag against his ribs. Quinn followed, edging around a trolley laden with parcels. A stallholder stepped in front of her. “No police.” She kept her warrant card inside her coat. “Which way did he go?” The stallholder looked at her empty hands. “Buy something.” Herrera reached the end of the platform and turned down a passage between two hanging sheets. Quinn pushed past the stallholder and followed him through.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences65
tagDensity0.046
leniency0.092
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1866
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
94.64% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1866
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"footsteps"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"footsteps"
1"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences164
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences164
filterMatches
0"notice"
1"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences226
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1866
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
39.61% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions71
wordCount1540
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity2.21
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Detective1
Harlow1
Quinn34
Tomás1
Herrera29
Raven1
Nest1
Leah1
Marsh1
Locked1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Tomás"
3"Herrera"
places
0"Raven"
1"Leah"
2"Marsh"
globalScore0.396
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences126
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1866
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences226
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs126
mean14.81
std14.51
cv0.98
sampleLengths
044
142
26
313
42
55
615
746
83
914
1048
111
1237
1317
1410
154
164
1719
187
1917
2038
2125
224
2326
243
254
266
273
2824
2929
3025
315
3210
331
347
357
368
375
381
3915
406
4127
424
437
448
4512
4628
4745
484
4930
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences164
matches
0"were scraped"
1"been drilled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs271
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences226
ratio0.009
matches
0"One advertised a concert from twelve years earlier; another had peeled until only a woman’s painted eye remained."
1"A silver medallion had come loose from under his shirt; it caught Quinn’s torchlight before he tucked it away."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1541
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.018170019467878003
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0012978585334198572
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences226
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences226
mean8.26
std5.09
cv0.616
sampleLengths
016
118
210
34
418
59
611
76
811
92
102
115
125
1310
1416
1515
165
1710
183
192
209
213
2217
2312
246
2513
261
278
2813
297
305
314
326
3311
3410
354
364
378
3811
397
405
4112
427
436
4419
456
467
479
489
494
50.29% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.30973451327433627
totalSentences226
uniqueOpeners70
41.67% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences160
matches
0"Then he ran."
1"Then she returned to the"
ratio0.013
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount44
totalSentences160
matches
0"He watched the traffic, not"
1"Her phone buzzed against her"
2"her colleague told her"
3"He vaulted a low chain"
4"She struck the pavement on"
5"He crossed the road without"
6"Its driver leaned on the"
7"She caught its edge before"
8"She slipped through and reached"
9"He pressed a hand to"
10"His hands worked at a"
11"She seized the gate before"
12"He reached into his jacket."
13"He pulled out a small"
14"He slipped the vial back"
15"She caught it, but Herrera"
16"She forced her way through"
17"He set one foot on"
18"She caught his jacket."
19"Her baton struck the wall."
ratio0.275
16.25% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount142
totalSentences160
matches
0"Rain ran off the canvas"
1"He watched the traffic, not"
2"Quinn lifted her phone."
3"The photograph from her briefing"
4"Tonight his sleeve had ridden"
5"Her phone buzzed against her"
6"her colleague told her"
7"Herrera stepped off the kerb."
8"Quinn slipped the phone into"
9"A night bus passed between"
10"Quinn crossed against the lights."
11"A taxi braked, and its"
12"Quinn followed him into the"
13"Herrera shoved through a pair"
14"Quinn caught his shoulder, pushed"
15"He vaulted a low chain"
16"Quinn went over it a"
17"She struck the pavement on"
18"Pain shot up her thigh."
19"Herrera gained twenty yards."
ratio0.888
62.50% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences160
matches
0"If she waited, Herrera could"
1"If she followed, nobody outside"
ratio0.013
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences66
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Quinn followed him into the alley, past stacked beer kegs and bins that smelled of wet cardboard."
1"Quinn thought of the ledger from the Raven’s Nest, of payments that had stopped the day Leah Marsh disappeared."
2"Quinn caught glimpses of faces beneath hoods, gloved hands exchanging notes and tokens, a crate that rocked against the floor as its owner dragged it past."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences65
tagDensity0.031
leniency0.062
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
90.1654%