Run: 2026-10-27-01M5YHR8YQFNHP4RM0TCDXNAEB

Run Details

Duration:
45.4s
Cost:
$0.017052
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory opened the door with Ptolemy wedged between her ankles. Lucien stood on the landing, one hand on his ivory-handled cane. Rain darkened the shoulders of his charcoal suit. His platinum hair, slicked back from his face, had escaped its order at one temple. Neither of them spoke. Ptolemy stepped over the threshold and inspected Lucien’s shoe. “Eva isn’t here.” Rory bent to scoop up the cat. “You’ve had a wasted journey.” “I came to see you.” “Then you’ve had two.” She started to close the door. Lucien put his cane across the gap, its rubber tip against the frame. “Move that.” He withdrew it. He did not step away. “I need your help with a document.” “There are solicitors for that.” “Your signature is on it.” Rory held the cat against her chest. Ptolemy objected with a low, gravelly noise. “What document?” Lucien reached into his inside pocket. Rory’s grip tightened before she could stop it. He noticed; his hand paused. “Paper,” he said. “I can see your pocket. Get it out.” He unfolded a sheet and held it under the landing light. The heading read CONSENT TO TRANSFER. Beneath it sat a block of dense text and a signature that resembled hers, right down to the long tail on the final r. Rory shifted Ptolemy into one arm and took the page. The signature looked convincing at first glance. The capital A leaned right, though hers leaned left. Whoever had copied it had also missed the small break where her pen tended to lift between the o and the r. The body of the document made less sense. It named her as the consenting owner of a sealed box held at an address in Whitechapel. It gave permission for the box and its contents to pass into the custody of a company called Ashdown Holdings. “I don’t own a box in Whitechapel.” “I know.” “How?” “Because I own it.” Rory looked up. Lucien’s amber eye caught the light. His other eye remained black. “Then why does it have my name on it?” “Eva registered it for me. The clerk required a human name, and she used yours.” Rory stared at him. “She didn’t tell you?” “No.” “That was careless of her.” “You don’t get to decide that.” Ptolemy stretched a paw towards the paper. Rory set him down before he could shred it and read the address again. “I’ve never signed anything like this.” “I believed that.” “Did you ask Eva?” “I went to her office. She wasn’t there.” “She’s in Bristol until tomorrow.” “I know that now.” “And you knew I’d be here?” “Yu-Fei told me you were feeding the cat.” Rory folded the page once. “You could have rung.” “You don’t answer my calls.” She glanced at him. “There’s a reason for that.” “I remember it.” The smell of fried onions drifted up from the curry house below. A door banged at the foot of the stairs, followed by footsteps and a burst of laughter. Lucien stepped aside to make room for two neighbours climbing past. One of them greeted Rory and gave Lucien’s suit a curious look. Rory waited until they reached the next flight. “Give me five minutes with Eva’s notes,” Lucien said. “She kept the registration receipt. I need the number on it.” “What happens if you don’t get it?” “Ashdown takes the box. The transfer goes through at eleven.” “What’s in the box?” “Records.” “Of what?” “Debts. Names. Payments.” “Yours?” “Some.” She looked at the forged signature again. Her name had no business on any of it. Neither did Eva’s, though Eva had managed that part herself. “What happens if Ashdown gets those names?” “People pay debts they’ve already settled. Some of them won’t be given the chance to argue.” Rory handed the page back. “And the receipt stops that?” “The original registration overrides a transfer if the owner disputes it in person.” “You said you owned the box.” “I put it in Eva’s name. She put it in yours.” “Excellent work from both of you.” Lucien accepted the criticism without a flicker. That annoyed her more than an argument would have. “I can dispute it,” she went on, “but you need the registration number.” “Yes.” “Why didn’t you say that at the door?” “I thought you might prefer an explanation before a request.” “You put a cane in my door. Your manners had already suffered.” He looked down at the ivory handle. “I was wrong to do that.” Rory stepped back. “Leave it on the landing.” His hand tightened on the handle. “The blade stays outside,” she said. “You can fetch it when you leave.” After a moment, he rested the cane against the wall. Rory took the forged transfer from him and let him through. The flat smelled of cardamom, cat food and old paper. Books covered the narrow hall table in stacks, with scrolls balanced across them like rolling pins. Eva had left a mug beside the sofa with three pens and a dried teabag inside it. Rory had cleared a space at one end of the table for her takeaway and had eaten half of it before the knock. Ptolemy returned to his bowl. Lucien shut the door, and Rory slid all three deadbolts into place. “Which notes?” she asked. “Eva kept the receipt with her research on storage sites.” “That narrows it down to every surface in the flat.” Lucien took in the piles. “She had a blue folder.” “Blue folder. Fine.” Rory moved to the table and lifted a stack of notebooks. Lucien reached for a roll of parchment on the armchair. “Ask before you open anything.” He lowered it. “May I?” “Not that one. It’s a list of people Eva doesn’t trust.” “Am I on it?” “Yes.” “Near the top?” “She alphabetised it.” His mouth shifted. Rory turned away before she could smile. She found a blue folder under a book about Roman burial practices. Inside were photographs of drain covers, several maps and a shopping receipt for milk. “Wrong one,” she said. Lucien stood beside the sofa, his hands at his sides. “You can search the shelf by the window,” Rory told him. “Leave the envelopes shut.” He went to the shelf. Ptolemy abandoned his food and followed, rubbing against Lucien’s trouser leg. Lucien looked down as though he had encountered a difficult client. “He likes you,” Rory said. “He likes the smell of the fish I had for lunch.” “You can both be right.” Lucien crouched and offered the cat two fingers. Ptolemy sniffed them, then rubbed his cheek against his knuckles. Rory remembered those hands at the back of her neck, the pressure of his thumb beneath her ear. She put the folder down harder than she meant to. A loose photograph slipped onto the floor. Lucien rose to pick it up. Rory reached it first. “I’ve got it.” He stepped back. “You don’t have to flinch every time I come near you.” “I didn’t flinch.” “You moved.” “People do.” He returned to the shelf. Rory put the photograph away, but she no longer knew which folder it had come from. For four months, Lucien had occupied a particular part of her life: late dinners after her delivery shifts, conversations that began with work and stretched across a table until the restaurant staff stacked chairs around them, his coat over her shoulders when she had forgotten hers. Then Evan’s solicitor had called, and Lucien had given him the address of the bar beneath her flat. A single address. Evan had appeared there the next afternoon. Rory had spotted him through the window before he saw her. Silas had locked the door and told him to leave. She still remembered the shape of Evan’s hand against the glass, his fingers spread, his mouth moving around her name. She opened another folder. “You told me the solicitor had a court order,” she said. Lucien stopped searching. “I told you I believed he had one.” “You didn’t ask to see it.” “No.” “You didn’t ask me either.” “No.” Rory turned a page. She could not read the writing on it; the letters ran together. She set it aside. “He used your name when he spoke to Silas. He told him you’d sent him.” “I know.” “Do you? Because when I told you, you asked whether Evan had touched me.” Lucien’s face tightened. “I wanted to know if he had hurt you.” “He had. You knew what he’d done before I came to London.” “I meant that afternoon.” “I know what you meant. I had to explain why the answer didn’t make it better.” Ptolemy jumped onto the sofa between them and began washing a paw. Lucien drew a breath. “I gave him your address because he told me there were papers that needed serving. I thought I was keeping you out of a larger legal problem.” “You thought you knew better than I did.” “Yes.” The word landed without a defence attached. Rory had wanted it months ago. Now she picked up a map and smoothed its folded edge. “I changed my route home for weeks,” she said. “I checked every car outside the bar. I hated that he could still make me do that.” Lucien leaned against the shelf, leaving the books untouched. “I went to his office.” “I know. His solicitor rang me to complain.” “I wanted the address removed from his records.” “You threatened him.” “I did.” “You don’t get to fix that by frightening someone on my behalf.” “I understand.” “Do you?” He met her eyes. “I understand that I made another decision for you.” Rory pressed her palm against the map. The small crescent scar on her wrist showed beneath her sleeve. Lucien’s gaze dropped to it, then returned to her face. “I missed you,” he said. The map crackled under her hand. “That doesn’t change what you did.” “I know.” “You could have put that in one of your messages instead of sending me the name of a locksmith.” “I sent the locksmith because you needed new locks.” “Silas had already changed them.” “I found that out when he threw me out.” Rory looked at him. “He threw you out?” “He used the word ‘ushered’.” Despite herself, she let out a short laugh. Lucien’s expression softened, and she held up a hand. “Don’t make anything of that.” “I won’t.” He went back to the shelf. Rory searched beneath a heap of scrolls and found a second blue folder, this one swollen with receipts and typed forms. “Here.” Lucien crossed the room, then stopped at the edge of the table. Rory opened the folder. The first page bore Eva’s handwriting, sloping across the top: WHITECHAPEL STORAGE. “There’s a date,” Rory said. “Six months ago.” “That fits.” She turned the page. A receipt had been stapled to a copy of a registration form. Her name appeared in the owner’s box, written in Eva’s hand. Rory took out her phone and photographed it. “I’m sending this to her.” “Of course.” “And I’m asking why she thought she could register your box under my name.” “I’d like to hear the answer.” “You can wait until I’ve finished asking.” She sent the photograph with a message, then read the receipt. The registration number ran along the bottom, stamped in red. “Is that what you need?” Lucien bent closer. His sleeve brushed her arm. Neither of them moved for a moment. “Yes,” he said. Rory pulled the receipt free of the staple and held it up. “You said the owner had to dispute the transfer in person.” “At the storage office.” “So you need me there too.” “I do.” “You could have mentioned that before I let you in.” “I thought you might close the door.” “I did close the door.” “You know what I mean.” She set the receipt on the table between them. “You don’t get to leave out the part that costs me time because you’re worried about my answer.” Lucien looked at the paper. “No. I don’t.” Her phone buzzed. Eva’s reply appeared beneath the photograph. I was going to tell you. Please don’t bin my notes. Rory typed back: You can explain the box first. Lucien watched her thumb move over the screen. “What did she say?” “She’s concerned about her notes.” “That sounds like Eva.” Rory glanced at the clock above the kitchen doorway. Ten seventeen. Her delivery shift started at noon, and she had promised Yu-Fei she would cover the lunch orders. “How far is this office?” “Fifteen minutes by car.” “And how long inside?” “If the clerk accepts the receipt, ten.” Rory picked up the forged transfer. “You’ve dealt with this clerk before?” “Yes.” “Will he accept a copy, or does he need the original?” “The original.” She looked at the staple holes, then at Eva’s overcrowded table. “Get me an envelope,” she said. Lucien found one beside the mug. He held it open while Rory slid the receipt inside. Their fingers touched at the flap. His hand remained where it was, giving her room to withdraw hers. She pressed the flap down. “I’m coming because my name is on it,” she said. “Not because you asked.” “I understand.” “And when we get there, I do the talking about the transfer.” Lucien took his hand off the envelope. “What would you like me to do?” Rory picked up the forged document and pointed to the company name. “Start by telling me who owns Ashdown.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences159
tagDensity0.094
leniency0.189
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2247
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
95.55% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2247
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"footsteps"
count1
1
word"flicker"
count1
highlights
0"footsteps"
1"flicker"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences155
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences155
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
1"tended to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences298
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2247
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions39
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
3.73% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions94
wordCount1299
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity2.93
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Ptolemy9
Lucien31
Whitechapel1
Ashdown1
Holdings1
Rory38
Eva7
Roman1
Evan3
You1
Yu-Fei1
persons
0"Ptolemy"
1"Lucien"
2"Rory"
3"Eva"
4"Roman"
5"Evan"
6"You"
places
0"Whitechapel"
globalScore0.037
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences103
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"appeared beneath the photograph"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2247
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences298
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs217
mean10.35
std10.5
cv1.014
sampleLengths
010
134
24
39
415
55
64
719
82
98
107
115
125
1314
142
1519
163
178
1841
1910
2038
2145
227
232
241
254
263
2711
289
2915
304
314
321
335
346
3521
366
373
384
398
405
414
426
438
445
454
465
479
483
4952
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences155
matches
0"been stapled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs239
matches
0"was, giving"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences298
ratio0.007
matches
0"He noticed; his hand paused."
1"She could not read the writing on it; the letters ran together."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1301
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.022290545734050732
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0015372790161414297
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences298
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences298
mean7.54
std5.09
cv0.676
sampleLengths
010
111
28
315
44
59
610
75
85
94
106
1113
122
133
145
157
165
175
187
197
202
216
228
235
243
258
2611
276
2824
2910
307
319
3222
338
3417
3520
367
372
381
394
403
416
425
439
4415
454
464
471
485
496
44.97% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.2483221476510067
totalSentences298
uniqueOpeners74
23.64% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences141
matches
0"Then Evan’s solicitor had called,"
ratio0.007
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount41
totalSentences141
matches
0"His platinum hair, slicked back"
1"She started to close the"
2"He withdrew it."
3"He did not step away."
4"He noticed; his hand paused."
5"He unfolded a sheet and"
6"It named her as the"
7"It gave permission for the"
8"His other eye remained black."
9"She glanced at him."
10"She looked at the forged"
11"Her name had no business"
12"she went on"
13"He looked down at the"
14"His hand tightened on the"
15"He lowered it."
16"His mouth shifted."
17"She found a blue folder"
18"He went to the shelf."
19"She put the folder down"
ratio0.291
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount131
totalSentences141
matches
0"Rory opened the door with"
1"Lucien stood on the landing,"
2"Rain darkened the shoulders of"
3"His platinum hair, slicked back"
4"Neither of them spoke."
5"Ptolemy stepped over the threshold"
6"Rory bent to scoop up"
7"She started to close the"
8"Lucien put his cane across"
9"He withdrew it."
10"He did not step away."
11"Rory held the cat against"
12"Ptolemy objected with a low,"
13"Lucien reached into his inside"
14"Rory’s grip tightened before she"
15"He noticed; his hand paused."
16"He unfolded a sheet and"
17"The heading read CONSENT TO"
18"Rory shifted Ptolemy into one"
19"The signature looked convincing at"
ratio0.929
70.92% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences141
matches
0"Whoever had copied it had"
1"Now she picked up a"
ratio0.014
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences57
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Beneath it sat a block of dense text and a signature that resembled hers, right down to the long tail on the final r."
1"For four months, Lucien had occupied a particular part of her life: late dinners after her delivery shifts, conversations that began with work and stretched acr…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences159
tagDensity0.088
leniency0.176
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.9604%