Run: 2026-10-27-01M5YHRBC43VXQW6045A3S4EB9

Run Details

Duration:
44.5s
Cost:
$0.016177
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory came down to the bar with a bag of takeaway containers balanced against her hip. Silas had asked for the leftovers from her shift at the Golden Empress, and she had brought enough fried rice to feed him through his next inventory. The Raven’s Nest had filled while she was upstairs. Coats hung from the backs of chairs, and a pair of men argued over a map on the wall, each pointing at a different border. Green light from the sign above the entrance fell across the wet pavement outside. Silas lifted the hatch for her. His silver signet ring clicked against the wood. “Tell me there are dumplings.” “There were. Your knee took too long on the stairs.” “My knee didn’t go upstairs.” “No, but it gave me enough time to eat them.” He took the bag and looked inside. “I’ll have to put you on a lower floor.” Rory leaned against the bar while he fetched plates. A woman sat at the far end with a glass of white wine and a folded newspaper. She wore a charcoal jacket over a white shirt, the collar buttoned at her throat. Her hair, once a mass of red curls, had been cut close around her ears. The woman turned a page. A silver ring flashed on her left thumb, thick and battered, with a blue stone set into it. Rory had bought it for her from a stall at Cardiff market when they were sixteen. The stone had fallen out twice. Each time, Eva had taken it back to the man at the stall and argued until he fixed it for nothing. Rory put her hand on the bar. “Eva?” The woman looked up. For a moment her face stayed still; then she put down the newspaper. “Rory Carter.” The old name landed with a force Rory felt in her chest. She walked around a stool and stopped beside her. “You cut your hair.” Eva touched the side of her head. “Four years ago. I kept finding it in the sink and decided to get there first.” “You hated it short.” “I hated lots of things at seventeen. Tomatoes. Men with bicycles. Your dad.” “My dad knew about the tomatoes.” “He put them in everything.” Rory pulled out the stool beside her. Eva shifted her wineglass to make room. Up close, the changes multiplied. A fine line ran from the corner of Eva’s mouth towards her chin. Her nails had been cut short, the polish stripped away. She had worn rings on almost every finger at school; now she wore only the one on her thumb. “What are you doing here?” Rory asked. “I had a meeting on Dean Street. It ran late, and I didn’t fancy the train with everyone else.” “You’re working in London?” “Three days a week. I started in October.” “You could have told me.” Eva folded the newspaper along an existing crease. “I could have.” Rory watched her slide it into a leather satchel. Eva had once carried her schoolbooks in a plastic bag with a hole in the bottom. Rory used to pick up the pens that fell through. Silas set a plate of rice beside Rory and another behind the bar. “Your dinner.” Eva glanced between them. “Do you know each other?” “She lives upstairs.” Silas offered Eva his hand. “Silas.” Eva shook it. Rory noticed her grip: firm, brief, nothing like the sweeping embraces she used to inflict on strangers at parties. “This is Eva. We grew up together.” Silas nodded. “I’ll leave you to catch up. There’s a fork under the napkin, Rory, before you accuse me of treating you like an animal.” He moved down the bar with his plate. Eva watched him go. “You live above a pub?” “A bar. He gets particular about it.” “And you work at a Chinese restaurant?” “I deliver for them.” Eva looked at the container in the bag, then at Rory’s jacket, still marked with a pale streak of flour near the cuff. “I thought you’d gone back to university.” “I didn’t.” “Your mum told mine you were looking at courses.” “She probably was.” Rory unfolded the napkin and took a forkful of rice. She had missed lunch and ate another before Eva could speak. Across the room, someone dropped a glass. Silas fetched a brush, favouring his left leg as he went. Eva rested her forearms on the bar. “Your mother also told mine you’d joined a running club.” “I bought trainers.” “Right.” “She’s got a whole version of my life built around that pair of trainers.” Eva smiled, and Rory recognised her at last. The smile started on one side, as if the other half needed persuading. “At school, she used to tell my mother you practised piano every evening.” “I did. For three evenings.” “Your mother made me listen to you play that tune with the ducks.” “It was swans.” “You played it like ducks.” Rory laughed. Eva laughed with her, then picked up her glass and drank. They had not sat together since the summer after university, when Eva had driven to Cardiff in a car with one green door. They had eaten chips on the bonnet outside Rory’s parents’ house. Eva had asked her to come to a party, and Rory had declined because Evan was waiting inside. Eva had crumpled her chip paper and thrown it through the open car window. Six years. Rory counted them against the scratches in the bar top. “How’s your mum?” she asked. Eva turned the stem of her glass between finger and thumb. “She died last March.” The fork stopped against Rory’s plate. “Your mum died?” “Lung cancer.” “I didn’t know.” “No.” Rory put the fork down. A grain of rice clung to its prong. “I’d have come.” Eva looked at her, not at the plate or the room. “I know you would.” “Why didn’t you call?” “I sent a message.” Rory reached for her phone in her jacket pocket. She remembered a number she had not recognised, a message that began with her name and ended with a request to call. Evan had been standing beside her at the kitchen counter. He had asked who it was. She had told him she did not know, and he had watched her delete it. “I changed numbers after I left Cardiff.” “I sent it to the old one. It showed as delivered.” Rory turned the phone over in her hand. The screen reflected the bar lights, a row of small white marks. “I saw it. I didn’t read all of it.” Eva’s fingers loosened around the glass. “You saw it?” “Evan was there. He wanted to know who it was, and I didn’t recognise the number. I deleted it.” “You could have read it later.” “Yes.” The men by the map had moved on to a photograph of a bridge. One of them traced its span with a finger, leaving a streak on the glass. Rory watched Silas wipe it away after they returned to their table. “My mother asked for you,” Eva said. Rory looked back at her. “At the end?” “Before the end. When she could still ask for things.” Eva opened her satchel and took out the newspaper, then put it back. “She wanted those lemon biscuits your mum made. She called them Rory’s biscuits because you brought a tin round when you were about twelve.” “I burned the bottoms.” “She scraped them with a knife and ate them anyway.” Rory pressed her thumb against the small crescent scar on her left wrist. Eva’s mother had put a plaster over it once, years after the cut had healed, because Rory had insisted the skin felt strange in cold weather. “I’m sorry.” Eva nodded. She had a faint mark on her cheek where the arm of her glasses must have rested. Rory had never seen her wear glasses. “I didn’t go to the funeral,” Rory said. “You didn’t know about it.” “I knew she was ill. You told me on the phone.” “That was a year before she died.” “I could have asked after her.” Eva lifted her glass, found it empty, and set it down again. “You called me when you needed to leave him.” “You told me to come to London.” “I did.” “I kept the number you gave me on a piece of paper in my shoe. I thought he’d find it in my bag.” Eva’s hand moved towards Rory’s, then stopped on the bar. “I was glad you called.” “You sounded angry.” “I was angry. You kept saying you’d wait until he was at work, and his shifts changed every week.” “I got out.” “You did.” Silas approached with a bottle. “Another?” Eva glanced at Rory. “I’ve got a train.” Rory checked the clock above the photographs. It was just after eight. “They run later than that.” “I know. I’m thinking about whether I want another.” Silas left the bottle where she could see it and went back to his plate. Eva studied the label. “I take it back. Your dad wasn’t as bad as tomatoes.” Rory picked up her fork. “He’ll be pleased. He’s been competing with them for years.” “I saw him outside the hospital once. He asked if I’d heard from you.” Rory’s fork scraped against the plate. “What did you tell him?” “That you were all right.” “You knew I was here?” “You’d called me from the station.” “I asked you not to tell him.” “I didn’t tell him where you were.” “You told him I’d called.” Eva pushed the empty glass away. “He stood there in a suit he’d slept in. His tie was undone, and he had a parking ticket in his hand. He looked like he’d forgotten what it was.” Rory kept her eyes on her plate. “He called my mother every day that week.” “I know.” “He called Evan too.” Eva’s chair creaked as she turned. “He didn’t tell me that.” “Evan told him I’d come back when I’d had time to calm down. My dad believed him.” Eva drew a breath. “I didn’t know.” “You could have asked me.” “You weren’t answering.” “I wasn’t answering him.” “You weren’t answering me either, Rory.” The words sat between them. Rory could see a pulse in Eva’s throat, just above the buttoned collar. Eva had used to shout when they fought. She had once thrown a shoe at Rory across a school corridor and then retrieved it, hopping, while a teacher watched. Now she sat with both feet under her stool. Rory took a mouthful of rice. It had gone cold. “I got your messages,” she said. “All of them?” “Most. I didn’t know how to answer without telling you everything.” “You could have told me nothing. You could have sent a full stop.” “I know.” Eva rubbed the blue stone with her thumb. A thin seam of glue showed around its edge. “I kept that number because I thought you’d call it.” “I’m sorry I didn’t.” Eva looked down at her jacket, picked a thread from the sleeve and wound it around her finger until it snapped. “I had her at home for the last six months. The nurses came in the morning, and I worked in the afternoons when my brother could sit with her. She kept making lists of jobs for us.” “What sort of jobs?” “Clean the gutters. Paint the kitchen. Take the cat to the vet, and don’t let him charge for the fancy food.” “She never trusted vets.” “She trusted the one with the limp. He retired.” “Mr Lewis.” “That was him. She asked for him when the cat stopped eating. I had to tell her three times he’d retired.” Rory could picture the narrow kitchen, Eva’s mother at the table with a mug cupped in both hands. There had always been a tea towel over one shoulder and a radio on the windowsill. Once, when Rory had stayed for dinner without warning, Eva’s mother had cut three chops into strips and served them with extra potatoes. Nobody had mentioned the missing fourth chop. “Did you paint the kitchen?” “After she died. My brother chose the colour.” “Was it awful?” “Yellow. The sort landlords use when they want a room to look sunny in a photograph.” Rory turned towards her. “You sold the house?” “Last summer. He bought out my share.” “And you came here.” “I found a job here. I’ve got a room in a flat in Walthamstow.” “With strangers?” “One stranger. She labels her milk.” Eva’s mouth shifted at one corner. Rory reached across the bar for Silas’s bottle and held it up. “Do you want another?” Eva put her glass in front of her. “A small one. I’ve got work in the morning.” Rory poured. Eva took the bottle from her and added a little more. “Your mum used to pour wine like that,” Rory said. “She used to leave a bottle open for a week and complain when it tasted like vinegar.” “Your brother drank it.” “He drank anything.” Eva took a sip. Rory ate another forkful, then pushed the plate towards her. “Silas ate the dumplings,” she said. “That’s what I’m telling everyone.” Eva picked up the fork and examined the rice. “Does he know?” “He’s working it out.” From the other end of the bar, Silas lifted his head. “I heard that.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences140
tagDensity0.064
leniency0.129
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2235
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
95.53% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2235
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"traced"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"traced"
1"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences125
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences125
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences257
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2235
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions39
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions106
wordCount1235
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity3.56
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity6
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Golden1
Empress1
Raven1
Nest1
Cardiff2
Eva43
Rory44
Evan2
Silas11
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Eva"
3"Rory"
4"Evan"
5"Silas"
places
0"Golden"
1"Cardiff"
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences94
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2235
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences257
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs200
mean11.18
std12.38
cv1.108
sampleLengths
043
148
214
35
410
55
610
77
89
956
1066
117
121
1317
142
1521
164
177
1816
194
2013
216
225
2314
2447
257
2619
274
288
295
308
313
3235
3313
342
354
365
379
3822
397
402
4123
4212
435
447
457
464
4723
487
492
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences125
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs218
matches
0"was waiting"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences257
ratio0.008
matches
0"For a moment her face stayed still; then she put down the newspaper."
1"She had worn rings on almost every finger at school; now she wore only the one on her thumb."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1104
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.016304347826086956
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0009057971014492754
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences257
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences257
mean8.7
std6.04
cv0.694
sampleLengths
016
127
29
325
414
56
68
75
810
95
1010
117
129
139
1417
1515
1615
175
1818
1916
206
2121
227
231
244
2513
262
2712
289
294
307
3116
324
3313
346
355
367
377
385
3913
4010
4119
427
4319
444
458
465
478
483
499
45.33% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.22178988326848248
totalSentences257
uniqueOpeners57
29.50% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences113
matches
0"Once, when Rory had stayed"
ratio0.009
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences113
matches
0"His silver signet ring clicked"
1"He took the bag and"
2"She wore a charcoal jacket"
3"Her hair, once a mass"
4"She walked around a stool"
5"Her nails had been cut"
6"She had worn rings on"
7"He moved down the bar"
8"She had missed lunch and"
9"They had not sat together"
10"They had eaten chips on"
11"She remembered a number she"
12"He had asked who it"
13"She had told him she"
14"She had a faint mark"
15"It was just after eight."
16"She had once thrown a"
17"It had gone cold."
ratio0.159
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount105
totalSentences113
matches
0"Rory came down to the"
1"Silas had asked for the"
2"The Raven’s Nest had filled"
3"Coats hung from the backs"
4"Silas lifted the hatch for"
5"His silver signet ring clicked"
6"He took the bag and"
7"Rory leaned against the bar"
8"A woman sat at the"
9"She wore a charcoal jacket"
10"Her hair, once a mass"
11"The woman turned a page."
12"A silver ring flashed on"
13"Rory had bought it for"
14"The stone had fallen out"
15"Each time, Eva had taken"
16"Rory put her hand on"
17"The woman looked up."
18"The old name landed with"
19"She walked around a stool"
ratio0.929
44.25% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences113
matches
0"Now she sat with both"
ratio0.009
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences140
tagDensity0.05
leniency0.1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.1534%