Run: 2026-10-27-01M5YHXN91Q67JHJYH42JX7MKX

Run Details

Duration:
9m 35s
Cost:
$0.149033
Provider:
Moonshot AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Quinn checked the time on her worn leather watch as she reached the bottom of the service stairs. Five forty-two. Above her, Camden had begun its morning clatter of shutters and delivery vans. Below, the abandoned station held a different kind of commerce. Stalls crowded the old platform. Their tables displayed stoppered bottles, tarnished keys, bundles of feathers and notebooks with their titles scraped away. A canvas awning sagged beneath a departures board whose painted destinations had faded to ghosts. Police work lamps stood among them, throwing hard white light across tiles that had not felt a train’s vibration in decades. DS Iqbal met her beside the ticket barrier, scene suit crackling at his knees. “Male, no identification. One wound to the chest. Wallet’s gone, phone’s gone. I’ve got bottles without labels, enough powder to keep a lab busy till Christmas and a witness who thinks the British Museum gives its staff very odd holidays.” “Where?” He pointed along the platform. The body lay between two stalls, one hand extended towards the tracks. The man had worn a good coat and expensive shoes. A gold signet ring remained on his right hand. Blood darkened his shirt around a single neat puncture, but the platform beneath him was clean. Quinn stopped outside the forensic markers. “Robbery?” “Or a purchase that turned into an argument.” Iqbal nodded towards an overturned table. Broken glass fanned across the dust. “Someone gets stuck, traders grab what they can and bolt. I find the stallholder, I find my knife.” Quinn looked at the surrounding tables. Corks sat firm in their bottles. Little brass weights held down squares of silk. Even the cash tins had their lids shut. “Panic kept to the one stall.” “People don’t panic to a standard.” “No. They usually bleed to one, though.” She crouched near the body without crossing the marked path. The stain on the shirt had spread no wider than her palm. There was no pool beneath his back, no trail across the platform and no spatter on the stall canvas. Iqbal’s expression changed as he followed her gaze. “Killed somewhere else, then. Carried down and dumped.” “Through the market?” “Service stairs. Lock was off when uniform arrived.” Quinn rose and approached the broken glass. None of it had caught the light with a wet edge. She used her pen to lift the largest shard. Dust coated its inner surface. Whatever the bottle had once contained, it had stood open and empty long before someone broke it beside a corpse. “Your struggle was dressed,” she said. Iqbal folded his arms. “It could still be my way in. Illegal market, dead customer, witnesses who don’t want their stock examined.” “It’s an interpretation.” “You have a better one?” “Not yet. Mine has the advantage of waiting for evidence.” On a crate near the body sat two clear evidence sleeves. One held a disc of bone, yellowed and notched around its rim. The other contained a small brass compass. Verdigris mottled its casing. Fine sigils ringed the face, too regular for scratches and too worn to read at a glance. Quinn turned the sleeve towards the light. The needle pointed along the platform. “North’s behind you,” Iqbal said. “I know.” “Rail lines. Old electrical cable. Take your pick.” She rotated the sleeve. The needle swung, passed the painted numeral at its edge and settled in the same direction. Not north. Towards a tiled wall beyond the last stall. “Don’t do that.” The voice came from the far side of the barrier. The young woman sitting there had curly red hair crushed beneath a borrowed police cap. Round glasses reflected the work lamps. Freckles stood out against a face drained of colour, and a worn leather satchel rested between her feet, its buckles strained by the books inside. Quinn knew her before Iqbal consulted his notebook. Eva Kowalski had appeared in three photographs in the file on Aurora’s circle: leaving a house in Highgate, crossing a museum courtyard, standing outside a café while Quinn’s surveillance team tried to work out which meetings were social and which involved merchandise. “Miss Kowalski,” Quinn said. Eva tucked a curl behind her left ear. “Detective Quinn. You’ve taken down my statement twice.” “I haven’t taken it once.” “The other detective did. Then a man in white overalls asked me whether I’d touched anything. Then your sergeant took my phone.” “And now you can tell me why a research assistant from the British Museum called in a body beneath Camden at half past four.” Eva’s fingers tightened around the satchel’s strap. “I came to meet someone.” “In a closed Tube station?” “In the Veil Market.” Iqbal gave Quinn a look that invited her to share his patience. Eva pushed her glasses up. “You can keep calling it a drug den if that helps your paperwork. It sells information, banned alchemical stock and objects that don’t belong in ordinary collections. It trades here until the full moon, then moves. This was its last night beneath Camden.” “And the bone?” Quinn held up the notched disc. “An entry token. You show it at the arch. No token, no market.” “Yours?” “His, I assume. You took it out of his coat.” Quinn lowered the sleeve. “What did you come to buy?” “The name of a man selling pages stolen from the restricted archives. He’d offered one to a dealer I use. I wanted to see the hand that wrote the catalogue note.” “Did you?” “I found the market empty and that man on the floor.” Quinn glanced at the compass. “And this?” For the first time, Eva looked away from her. “A Veil Compass.” “You’ve seen one before.” “I’ve handled three. Never owned one.” Eva stood, then stopped when Iqbal raised a hand. “The casing is Shade work. The marks around the face protect whoever carries it.” “From what?” “Depends on where you take it.” Quinn waited. Eva’s mouth flattened. “It points to the nearest rift. An opening between places. Portal, if you prefer a word that sounds worse in a witness statement.” Iqbal rubbed the bridge of his nose. Quinn kept her attention on the compass. “Which way was it pointing when you found him?” “At the wall.” “You said you didn’t touch anything.” “I didn’t need to. It was under his left hand.” Quinn returned to the body. Green stained the pads of the dead man’s fingers. Three dull crescents marked his palm where the casing had pressed against it. His shoes carried black silt deep in the seams. Pale station dust coated Quinn’s own boots after ten minutes on the platform, but none clung to his soles. He had held the compass. He had not walked across this floor. Quinn looked along the line the needle indicated. The last stall stood in front of an old advertisement, its enamel skin cracked over a smiling woman drinking something brown. Beyond the body, beyond the staged wreckage, the wall had drawn no interest from anyone. Iqbal’s team had searched the stalls, photographed the stairs and marked the footprints around the service entrance. The lights all faced inwards. She picked up the evidence sleeve. “Iqbal. Bring a torch.” He followed her past the body. “The survey shows earth behind that wall.” “You’ve read the survey?” “I read it while you were driving here.” “Good. You can tell me how far the earth goes.” At the last stall, the compass needle remained fixed. Quinn moved it beside an iron table leg. The needle did not shift towards the metal. She walked three paces to the left and tried again. It settled on the same section of advertisement. Eva had come as far as the barrier allowed. “It won’t point north.” “So you said.” “You don’t have to believe the rest to stop treating it like a broken compass.” “I treat everything as evidence of what it does, not what its owner calls it.” Quinn crouched at the base of the wall. The dust there had thinned to a grey skin. A crescent of black grit interrupted it, no larger than a fingernail. Under Iqbal’s torch, mica flecked inside the grit. The same glitter had caught in the dead man’s shoes. She moved the beam upwards. A dark bead sat in the grout at knee height. It had collected in a hollow and kept its wet rim. Iqbal leaned closer. “Blood?” “Possibly.” “There’s no trail.” “There wouldn’t be, if he lost most of it on the other side.” “There is no other side.” A strip of torn ticket lay against the skirting. As Quinn watched, it shifted towards the wall and pressed flat. The air around her face remained still. She traced the torch beam along the tiles without touching them. One sat a fraction proud of the rest. Its lower edge showed a clean scrape where enamel had rubbed enamel. Behind the advertisement’s rusted frame ran a seam too straight to be a crack. Quinn looked back at the platform. From the body, a searcher saw an illegal market, an overturned stall and a dead man whose wallet had vanished. From the wall, the arrangement changed. The broken glass lay between the stairs and the corpse, placed where it would catch the eye first. The body pointed towards the one route nobody had searched. Iqbal lowered his torch. “He could have been carried from the stairs.” “He could. Then his killer brought silt from somewhere else, put an empty bottle through a staged fight and left a navigational instrument pointing at a concealed gap.” “Or the instrument’s broken.” “It may be. The draught isn’t. The grit isn’t. The blood in the grout isn’t.” Eva’s satchel knocked against her shin as she came nearer. “The market wasn’t the way he arrived.” Quinn watched the needle hold against the brass. No, she thought. The market was what they had been meant to find. She turned to Iqbal. “Move the lamps. Photograph the tile, the grit and that mark in the grout before anyone touches them. Then get me the survey again.” “And if the survey still says earth?” Quinn handed him the compass and took the torch. “Then bring me something that opens earth.”
created_at"2026-10-27T11:28:55.085Z" 10/27/2026, 11:28:55 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Eva stood then [then]"
dialogueSentences71
tagDensity0.085
leniency0.169
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.028
97.06% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1699
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
91.17% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1699
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"silk"
count1
1
word"standard"
count1
2
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"silk"
1"standard"
2"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences112
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences112
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"tended to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences177
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1699
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions51
wordCount1061
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity2.17
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Iqbal14
Broken1
Kowalski1
Aurora1
Highgate1
Quinn23
Eva9
persons
0"Camden"
1"Iqbal"
2"Kowalski"
3"Aurora"
4"Quinn"
5"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore0.416
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences88
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1699
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences177
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs106
mean16.03
std16.09
cv1.004
sampleLengths
043
158
214
340
41
55
647
76
81
938
1028
116
126
137
1441
158
168
173
188
1952
206
2122
223
235
2410
2551
2613
275
282
298
3030
313
3210
3346
3450
354
3616
375
3822
3924
4012
415
424
4312
4448
459
4613
471
4810
4910
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences112
matches
0"been meant"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs185
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences177
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1062
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.014124293785310734
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0009416195856873823
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences177
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences177
mean9.6
std7.02
cv0.731
sampleLengths
018
12
213
310
45
517
615
721
814
940
101
115
1212
1310
149
1516
166
171
1814
196
2018
216
226
238
248
256
266
277
2810
2912
3019
318
328
333
348
357
3611
379
385
3920
406
414
4218
433
445
4510
4611
4712
487
494
65.91% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.4293785310734463
totalSentences177
uniqueOpeners76
31.45% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences106
matches
0"Even the cash tins had"
ratio0.009
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences106
matches
0"Their tables displayed stoppered bottles,"
1"He pointed along the platform."
2"She crouched near the body"
3"She used her pen to"
4"She rotated the sleeve."
5"His shoes carried black silt"
6"He had held the compass."
7"He had not walked across"
8"She picked up the evidence"
9"He followed her past the"
10"She walked three paces to"
11"It settled on the same"
12"She moved the beam upwards."
13"It had collected in a"
14"She traced the torch beam"
15"Its lower edge showed a"
16"She turned to Iqbal."
ratio0.16
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount76
totalSentences106
matches
0"Quinn checked the time on"
1"Stalls crowded the old platform."
2"Their tables displayed stoppered bottles,"
3"A canvas awning sagged beneath"
4"Police work lamps stood among"
5"DS Iqbal met her beside"
6"He pointed along the platform."
7"The body lay between two"
8"The man had worn a"
9"A gold signet ring remained"
10"Blood darkened his shirt around"
11"Quinn stopped outside the forensic"
12"Quinn looked at the surrounding"
13"Corks sat firm in their"
14"She crouched near the body"
15"The stain on the shirt"
16"Iqbal’s expression changed as he"
17"Quinn rose and approached the"
18"None of it had caught"
19"She used her pen to"
ratio0.717
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences106
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Eva Kowalski had appeared in three photographs in the file on Aurora’s circle: leaving a house in Highgate, crossing a museum courtyard, standing outside a café…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences71
tagDensity0.042
leniency0.085
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.5196%