Run: 2026-10-27-01M5YJ2FNQN7FYYZ6XZVV44SK7

Run Details

Duration:
7m 30s
Cost:
$0.120466
Provider:
Moonshot AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The note had used her full name, the one printed on the Golden Empress rota and almost nowhere else. Aurora Carter. Midnight. The clearing beyond the oak stones. Bring what was given to you. Come alone. Beneath that, the writer had added one line: If you mean to keep it, learn what it is for. She had found the note in her delivery jacket after closing, folded into a square no larger than a receipt. No customer had approached her. Yu-Fei had been at the till, and the alley camera had shown only Aurora leaving with the last order and returning with an empty bag. She had photographed the note, left the photograph beneath Silas’s bar mat, and scheduled a message with her location attached. Then she had chained her bike to the Richmond Park railings and gone in alone, because waiting for the writer to choose another place struck her as the greater risk. She did not intend to hand anything over. The pendant rested beneath her sweater, cold against her sternum. Its silver chain had caught on the zip of her jacket twice during the ride. The crimson stone, no bigger than her thumbnail, carried a faint light even when she covered it with her hand. At the standing stones, the noise of the road stopped. Not faded. Stopped. One step carried the hiss of tyres on wet asphalt; the next held only the crush of her boot through grass. Aurora turned. The path remained behind her, a pale seam between bracken and blackthorn. Beyond it, an amber light marked the road. She could see the railing where she had left her bike. She could not hear the car passing that light. She checked her phone. Twenty-three fifty-eight. No signal. The scheduled message sat in her outbox with its small grey clock beside it. “Ten minutes,” she said. Her voice entered the clearing and vanished. The note’s directions had described a ring of stones. They stood around her now, seven crooked masses beneath the oaks, their surfaces furred with moss. Roots had buckled the ground around two of them. Beyond the ring, the trees grew so close that their trunks overlapped in the torch beam. Inside the ring, wildflowers covered the grass. She had passed dead bracken and bare hawthorn on the path. November had stripped the park back to bark and bone. Here, oxeye daisies opened white faces around her boots. Clover pressed against violet clusters and small blue flowers she could not name. Their colours held in the dark, too distinct under the thin moon. The air smelled of warm stems after rain. The ground was dry. Aurora swept the torch around the clearing. The beam worked without a flicker. That disappointed her. A fault she could fix would have been a kindness. “You asked for midnight.” No one answered. She stepped away from the entrance and gave the stones a wide berth. The light moved over grass, flowers, moss. Nothing crouched behind the stones. Nothing watched from the low oak branches. Her phone changed to midnight. Aurora started the stopwatch and put it back in her pocket. She would give the writer until ten past, then leave. Silas would find the photograph if the message failed. Yu-Fei would remember whether anyone had touched her jacket. There were sensible threads leading out of this. She took four paces towards the centre. She heard five. The last step came behind her, soft through the grass. She turned with the torch. The beam crossed her own line of flattened stems and stopped at the stones. Beyond them, the trees held their layered dark. Aurora waited, then took one pace to her left. Her boot settled. Another patch of grass whispered behind her. She changed direction. Two quick steps, a pause, one longer stride. The sounds followed her rhythm until she stopped. Then came one more step, unhurried, placing itself after hers. She pressed her tongue against her teeth and listened to her own breathing. It had grown shallow. She loosened her grip on the torch before her fingers began to ache. “Footsteps aren’t an explanation.” The clearing returned her voice from somewhere to her right. “Explanation.” Not an echo. An echo would have belonged to the stones. This had a mouth in it: a small catch of breath before the word, the shape of her own London accent worn smooth by Cardiff vowels she had never lost. Aurora faced that direction. Something pale stood beside the farthest stone. She saw it only at the edge of her vision. When she turned her head, it became moonlight on bark. She looked back at the centre of the clearing. The pale shape returned, upright and narrow, its lower half lost among flowers. The torch beam reached the stone. Bark. Moss. A root split like a closed fist. Nothing withdrew. Nothing ran. Aurora lowered the light. The shape remained where her eyes could not hold it. She pulled out her phone. The stopwatch showed four minutes and twelve seconds. The clock at the top of the screen read twelve twenty-six. She watched the seconds advance. The stopwatch counted five. The clock jumped from twelve twenty-six to twelve twenty-seven. “All right.” Her own voice answered from behind the stone. “All right.” Aurora put the phone away. “I’m leaving.” This time, nothing repeated her. She chose the split root as her marker and walked towards it. The entrance lay just beyond, no more than thirty paces. She kept the torch level and counted. At twenty, the stone remained the same distance away. At thirty, her boot crushed stems already flattened by someone else’s passage. She looked down. Four prints marked the grass. Hers, from when she had first approached the centre. The fifth impression lay behind them, longer than her boot and narrow at the heel. The flowers around it stood upright. Only the grass within the print had bent. Aurora did not run. Running would give the follower more steps to copy. She turned five degrees and walked again, fixing her eyes on a gap between two trunks. Branches scraped her jacket. One caught her sleeve, and she pulled it free without looking back. The trees should have led her uphill towards the road. Instead, the ground softened beneath her boots. The smell of warm flowers returned. She emerged beside the split root. The clearing lay in front of her. Her own footprints crossed it in three directions now. She had made two of those lines. Aurora stood still and rolled her shoulders against the tightening of her jacket. The pendant’s chain pressed into the back of her neck. She resisted the urge to tear it off. That was what the note wanted: the stone brought here, then produced in panic, held out where someone could take it. “Rory.” Her mother’s voice came from among the oaks. The single name carried Cardiff in its vowels and the note of impatience that used to bring Aurora in from the garden when she was nine, one shoe missing and both hands dirty. It even caught on the second syllable, as though Jennifer Carter had called it twice already. Aurora’s hand closed around the torch. Her mother was in Cardiff. Aurora had spoken to her on Sunday. She had complained about the rain, asked whether Brendan had remembered his hospital appointment, and told Rory to eat something that had not come out of a cardboard box. She had not told her where she was going tonight. “You’re not her.” The words left her before she could weigh them. For several seconds, she heard only the minute ticking of stems against her trousers. Then her own voice spoke from the trees. “You’re not her.” The figure appeared at the edge of her sight again. Aurora kept her face turned towards the opposite stone. She shifted her eyes until the shape came into view. It stood inside the ring now. No nearer than before, perhaps. Distance had become difficult to judge. Its head reached the same height on the stone that hers would have reached. A straight dark line framed where its face should be. Shoulder-length hair. One arm bent at the elbow, holding something in front of its chest. Aurora looked at her own raised torch. The figure’s arm held the same angle. She lowered her hand by an inch. Its arm remained where it was. The torch beam rose. Flowers flashed white. The beam travelled across the grass, reached the figure’s feet, and found only stems. Aurora stopped the light on the empty place. Behind her, cloth brushed cloth. She turned. The clearing was empty again. Seven stones. Three lines of footprints. Her breath made a dry sound in her throat. The pendant warmed against her skin. She caught it through her sweater. Heat gathered in the crimson stone, then receded. A moment later it returned, following a rhythm that did not match her pulse. A thread of red light showed between her fingers. At the same time, the gap between two standing stones lost its depth. The trees beyond it had been visible a moment earlier. Now the torch beam entered the gap and ended. No trunk caught the light. No ground lay beneath it. Darkness occupied the space with the clean edges of an open door. The pendant pulsed again. Aurora backed away from it. One step. She stopped before a second could answer hers. From the empty place beside the split root, her own voice spoke. “You brought it.” This time, it had not waited for her to speak first.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity0.091
leniency0.182
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1598
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
81.23% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1598
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"flicker"
count1
1
word"footsteps"
count1
2
word"echo"
count2
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count1
highlights
0"flicker"
1"footsteps"
2"echo"
3"pulse"
4"pulsed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences180
matches
0"d in panic"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences180
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tend to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences190
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1598
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
92.71% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount1571
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.15
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Golden1
Empress1
Carter2
Aurora18
Silas2
Richmond1
Park1
London1
Cardiff3
Jennifer1
Sunday1
Brendan1
Rory1
One4
persons
0"Carter"
1"Aurora"
2"Silas"
3"Jennifer"
4"Brendan"
5"Rory"
6"One"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
3"Cardiff"
globalScore0.927
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences128
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1598
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences190
matches
0"passing that light"
1"faced that direction"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs94
mean17
std15.86
cv0.933
sampleLengths
019
117
219
350
450
58
645
710
824
942
1022
114
127
1350
147
1555
1612
1726
184
193
2032
215
2247
237
243
2510
2627
279
2810
2911
3018
3130
324
3310
341
3541
364
377
3842
3915
404
414
4210
4324
4418
452
468
472
485
492
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences180
matches
0"was given"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs262
matches
0"was going"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences190
ratio0.005
matches
0"One step carried the hiss of tyres on wet asphalt; the next held only the crush of her boot through grass."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1579
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.022165927802406588
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.0037998733375554147
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences190
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences190
mean8.41
std5.56
cv0.661
sampleLengths
019
12
21
36
46
52
619
720
85
925
1020
1130
128
1310
1415
1520
1610
172
181
1921
202
2112
228
2311
249
254
262
272
2814
294
307
319
3216
339
3416
357
3611
3710
389
3913
4012
418
424
437
446
453
4610
474
483
4913
47.89% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.33157894736842103
totalSentences190
uniqueOpeners63
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences163
matches
0"Then she had chained her"
1"Then came one more step,"
2"Only the grass within the"
3"Instead, the ground softened beneath"
4"Then her own voice spoke"
ratio0.031
99.75% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount49
totalSentences163
matches
0"She had found the note"
1"She had photographed the note,"
2"She did not intend to"
3"Its silver chain had caught"
4"She could see the railing"
5"She could not hear the"
6"She checked her phone."
7"Her voice entered the clearing"
8"They stood around her now,"
9"She had passed dead bracken"
10"Their colours held in the"
11"She stepped away from the"
12"Her phone changed to midnight."
13"She would give the writer"
14"She took four paces towards"
15"She heard five."
16"She turned with the torch."
17"Her boot settled."
18"She changed direction."
19"She pressed her tongue against"
ratio0.301
61.23% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount130
totalSentences163
matches
0"The note had used her"
1"The clearing beyond the oak"
2"She had found the note"
3"Yu-Fei had been at the"
4"She had photographed the note,"
5"She did not intend to"
6"The pendant rested beneath her"
7"Its silver chain had caught"
8"The crimson stone, no bigger"
9"The path remained behind her,"
10"She could see the railing"
11"She could not hear the"
12"She checked her phone."
13"The scheduled message sat in"
14"Her voice entered the clearing"
15"The note’s directions had described"
16"They stood around her now,"
17"Roots had buckled the ground"
18"She had passed dead bracken"
19"November had stripped the park"
ratio0.798
30.67% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences163
matches
0"Now the torch beam entered"
ratio0.006
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences65
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The single name carried Cardiff in its vowels and the note of impatience that used to bring Aurora in from the garden when she was nine, one shoe missing and bo…"
1"She had complained about the rain, asked whether Brendan had remembered his hospital appointment, and told Rory to eat something that had not come out of a card…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity0.091
leniency0.182
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.7830%