Run: 2026-10-27-01M5YJ3Y77RRXV2FP9HX82T77M

Run Details

Duration:
37.2s
Cost:
$0.014694
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The escalator ended in a wall of bricked-up advertisements. Someone had painted a door on the mortar in black, down to the brass handle and a keyhole shaped like a tooth. A constable stood beside it, holding a sliver of bone between finger and thumb. “It opened for Sergeant Malik,” he told Detective Harlow Quinn. “I’ve knocked three times. Nothing.” Quinn touched the painted handle. Cold brick met her palm. “Where did you get that?” “On the floor. There were six of them.” “Where are the others?” “Malik took one. The paramedics took two. I bagged the last two.” Quinn held out her hand. The constable dropped the sliver into it. One end had a hole drilled through it; grease darkened the edges. “Any signs of a mechanism?” “We looked for a catch. There isn’t one.” Quinn pressed the bone against the painted keyhole. The handle turned under her other hand. The door opened onto a Tube platform. Stalls crowded the length of it beneath dead fluorescent tubes. Their owners had strung lamps from the ceiling and covered the old advertisements with canvas. One stall displayed glass eyes in trays of salt. Another held jars of yellow powder, each sealed with a strip of red paper. No traders remained, but their goods still lay out, and a kettle whistled somewhere beyond the far end of the platform. Quinn put the bone in an evidence bag. Sergeant Malik waited beneath a station clock with no hands. He had rolled his sleeves to his elbows, exposing blue nitrile gloves. “Paramedics confirmed death at twenty past ten,” he told her. “No identification on the body. One witness, one knife, no sign of a struggle.” “Who called it in?” “The witness. She found a phone signal at the top of the stairs.” “And the rest of the market?” “Gone before we arrived. She says they scattered when she found him.” Quinn glanced along the platform. A string of meat hooks swung above a bare counter, though the air felt still. “You let them leave?” “They left before I got here. The witness stayed.” Malik led her past a stall stacked with books bound in cracked leather. A young woman sat on an upturned crate beside it, her satchel clamped between her feet. Round glasses enlarged her green eyes. She tucked a red curl behind her left ear as Quinn approached. “This is Eva Kowalski,” Malik said. “She works at the British Museum. She knew the victim.” “His name was Daniel Voss,” Eva said. “He dealt in manuscripts. I came to collect a catalogue he’d borrowed.” “From the museum?” “From me. It was my copy.” “Did you find it?” Eva shook her head. The body lay behind the bookstall, on a strip of red carpet between two trestle tables. Voss wore a charcoal coat over a pale shirt. A knife protruded from his chest, its bone handle level with the third button. His hands rested at his sides, palms up. Blood had soaked through his shirt and spread beneath him in a dark pool. Quinn crouched without touching the carpet. Her worn watch strap creaked against her left wrist. “Who moved him?” “No one,” Malik said. “The paramedics checked for a pulse and stepped back.” Eva rose from the crate. “He wasn’t like that when I found him.” Malik turned to her. “You told me he was on his back.” “He was. His coat was open.” “The paramedics might have closed it.” “They didn’t. I watched them.” Quinn studied the coat. Its right side lay beneath Voss’s shoulder, creased and dark with blood. The left covered his chest, except where the knife had punched through wool and shirt. “Did you touch him?” Quinn asked. “I checked his neck. Then I pulled my hand away.” “Which side?” “His left.” Eva showed her right hand. A brown smear marked the base of her thumb. Quinn looked at Voss’s neck. Blood streaked the skin below his right ear, on the side away from Eva. Malik took out his notebook. “You said you checked for a pulse.” “I did.” “Then how did blood get on your hand?” Eva’s fingers tightened around her satchel strap. “His collar had blood on it. I moved it.” Quinn leaned closer. The collar on Voss’s left side was clean. The right collar had a wet, black edge. “Show me,” she said. Eva knelt opposite her. She reached towards Voss’s neck, stopped short of his skin and hooked her fingers under the left collar. “Like that.” Her thumb faced the cloth. “Was the blood wet?” “Yes.” “Was there a knife in him?” “No. I would have seen it.” Malik looked from Eva to the body. “You left him here and went up for a signal. Anyone could have come back.” “I didn’t leave at once. I shouted. People ran. Then I went to the stairs.” “How long?” “I don’t know. A minute.” Quinn pointed at the knife. “The blade went through the coat. If his coat was open when she found him, somebody put it there afterwards.” “Or she missed it.” “Look at her hand.” Malik bent over Voss. The knife handle rose above the collar, close enough that Eva’s wrist would have struck it. “All right,” he said. “Somebody came back. Why put a knife in a dead man?” Quinn examined the blood on the shirt. The cloth around the blade had split, but the torn edges remained pale. A thin dark line followed the blade into the wound; the larger stain spread from higher up, beneath the collar. “Where did he bleed from?” she asked. Malik pulled a penlight from his pocket. He angled it beneath the open edge of the coat, then stopped. “There’s a cut under the collarbone.” The gash ran nearly three inches across Voss’s shirt, above and to the left of the knife. Its edges had dried against his skin. “The paramedic saw the knife and left it in place,” Malik said. “She didn’t open the coat.” “Neither will we. Get photographs of the collar and both wounds before the pathologist moves anything.” Malik spoke into his radio. Quinn stood and surveyed the carpet. The blood pool ended at a straight edge beside Voss’s right shoulder. Beyond it, the red fibres showed no stain. “The carpet’s been moved,” she said. Eva looked down. “I don’t think so. It was between the tables when I arrived.” Quinn followed the straight edge with her eyes. It did not match the carpet’s border. It matched the long side of a shallow wooden tray on the nearer table. The tray stood empty except for a scatter of grey dust. Its underside carried a dark smear. “Was that there?” Quinn asked. Eva came around the table. “There were papers on it.” “What papers?” “Loose leaves. Daniel kept them under glass.” “Where’s the glass?” Eva pointed to the floor beneath the table. A rectangular pane leaned against one leg. Quinn crouched beside it. One corner had chipped, and a small crescent of glass lay in the dust. Malik joined her. “Somebody knocked it off during the attack?” “The chip’s underneath the pane,” Quinn said. “It was set down on top of the piece.” She looked at the tray again. A narrow clean strip ran across its dusty surface, interrupted by four small circles. “What held the papers down?” “Brass clips,” Eva said. “Four of them.” “They’re gone too?” Eva nodded. Malik drew a breath through his nose. “Somebody killed him for the pages, shifted the tray over the body and put a knife in him.” “Why shift the tray?” Quinn asked. “To hide where the pages had been.” “The dust already showed that. And the tray has blood on its underside.” She moved to Voss’s feet. The soles of his shoes faced away from the tables. A small brass compass lay beside his left heel, its casing green with verdigris. Someone had opened it. Fine marks circled the face, and its needle pointed towards the brick wall behind the bookstall. Quinn took a compass from her coat pocket and checked it against the one on the floor. North lay in the opposite direction. “Is that his?” she asked Eva. “I’ve seen him carry it.” “What did he use it for?” Eva tucked the curl behind her ear again. “He called it a Veil Compass. He bought it here.” “That tells me where he bought it.” “He said it found openings.” “Openings in what?” Eva looked at the wall. “He didn’t give me a useful answer.” Malik shone his penlight across the bricks. Old soot filled the mortar joints. A strip of clean brick showed beneath the table, level with the height of the tray. Quinn went down on one knee. A second clean strip ran beside the first, and a third beside that. The gaps between them measured roughly the width of a brass clip. “Eva, how wide was the tray?” She held her hands apart. “About that.” “And the glass fitted inside it?” “Yes.” Quinn measured the clean strips against the tray without lifting it. The lengths matched. “The tray stood against the wall,” she said. “Its long side rested on the floor.” Malik looked at the empty table. “Voss put it there?” “Someone did. The wall kept the papers upright. The clips held them to the tray.” “That doesn’t explain the blood underneath.” Quinn looked at the straight edge of the pool, then at Voss’s open hands. “His head was against the tray when he bled. It shielded the carpet. Someone pulled it away and laid him flat.” Malik crouched beside her. “The knife came later. So whoever moved the tray took the papers and staged the stabbing.” “They might have. We know the tray moved. We know the knife went in through a closed coat.” Eva stared at Voss. “I saw the tray on the table when I found him.” Malik straightened. “You’re sure?” “The glass was leaning underneath. I remember because Daniel never left it on the floor.” Quinn walked back to the body. The blood beneath his right collar had soaked into the coat lining, but the outer wool carried only a few drops. She touched neither, tracing the line in the air. “He was wearing the coat when he bled. Someone opened it afterwards.” Eva’s hand rose to her hair. She caught herself and lowered it. “I opened it. I thought he might still be breathing.” “Did you move the tray?” “No.” “Did anyone stand here with you?” “There was a woman at the next stall. She came over when I called out.” “What did she do?” “She knelt on his other side. She told me to check his neck.” “Which side did she take?” “His right.” Quinn pointed to the blood below Voss’s ear. “Did she touch his collar?” Eva looked at the smear. “She put her hand behind his head.” “Did you know her?” “No. She wore a grey coat. Her hair was covered.” Malik wrote it down. “You didn’t mention her before.” “You asked who stayed. She ran with the others.” The kettle beyond the stalls had stopped whistling. Quinn heard water drip onto the track below the platform. “Was the woman wearing gloves?” she asked. Eva closed her eyes for a moment. “One glove. On her right hand.” “What was in her left?” Eva opened her eyes and looked at the empty tray. “A sheet of glass. I thought she’d picked it up to get it out of the way.” “Where did she put it?” “Under the table.” Quinn glanced at Malik. “Get the pane bagged with the chip beneath it. And ask the constable upstairs whether he saw a woman in a grey coat leave.” Malik raised his radio. Quinn turned back to Eva. “When you first saw her holding the glass, where was the compass?”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences124
tagDensity0.145
leniency0.29
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1972
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
87.32% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1972
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"pulse"
count2
1
word"measured"
count2
2
word"tracing"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"measured"
2"tracing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences137
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences137
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences243
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen24
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1972
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions30
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
17.09% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions90
wordCount1091
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity2.66
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Detective1
Harlow1
Quinn29
Tube1
Malik20
Eva23
Voss12
One3
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Malik"
3"Eva"
4"Voss"
places(empty)
globalScore0.171
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences84
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1972
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences243
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs177
mean11.14
std10.43
cv0.936
sampleLengths
031
114
215
310
45
58
64
712
824
95
108
1115
127
1369
148
1522
1624
174
1813
196
2012
2120
224
239
2447
2516
2619
273
286
294
304
3161
3215
333
3413
355
368
374
388
396
406
415
4231
436
4410
452
462
4714
4819
495
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences137
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs175
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences243
ratio0.008
matches
0"One end had a hole drilled through it; grease darkened the edges."
1"A thin dark line followed the blade into the wound; the larger stain spread from higher up, beneath the collar."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1092
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.0173992673992674
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0027472527472527475
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences243
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences243
mean8.12
std4.62
cv0.569
sampleLengths
09
122
214
310
45
55
65
75
88
94
1012
115
127
1312
145
158
168
177
187
1910
2015
219
2214
2321
248
2510
2612
2710
2814
294
3013
316
3212
335
3415
354
369
3713
3816
396
4012
416
4210
437
4412
453
466
474
484
4916
47.53% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.2716049382716049
totalSentences243
uniqueOpeners66
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences120
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences120
matches
0"he told Detective Harlow Quinn"
1"Their owners had strung lamps"
2"He had rolled his sleeves"
3"he told her"
4"She tucked a red curl"
5"His hands rested at his"
6"Her worn watch strap creaked"
7"Its right side lay beneath"
8"She reached towards Voss’s neck,"
9"Her thumb faced the cloth."
10"He angled it beneath the"
11"Its edges had dried against"
12"It did not match the"
13"It matched the long side"
14"Its underside carried a dark"
15"She looked at the tray"
16"She moved to Voss’s feet."
17"she asked Eva"
18"She held her hands apart."
19"She touched neither, tracing the"
ratio0.175
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount111
totalSentences120
matches
0"The escalator ended in a"
1"Someone had painted a door"
2"A constable stood beside it,"
3"he told Detective Harlow Quinn"
4"Quinn touched the painted handle."
5"Quinn held out her hand."
6"The constable dropped the sliver"
7"Quinn pressed the bone against"
8"The handle turned under her"
9"The door opened onto a"
10"Stalls crowded the length of"
11"Their owners had strung lamps"
12"Another held jars of yellow"
13"Quinn put the bone in"
14"Sergeant Malik waited beneath a"
15"He had rolled his sleeves"
16"he told her"
17"Quinn glanced along the platform."
18"A string of meat hooks"
19"Malik led her past a"
ratio0.925
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences120
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags18
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences124
tagDensity0.145
leniency0.29
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.0649%