Run: 2026-10-27-01M5YJ5CG73DBY5TJ383HMH7RD

Run Details

Duration:
5m 38s
Cost:
$0.092357
Provider:
Moonshot AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Tomás Herrera ran with the medical bag clamped against his ribs, one shoulder lowered through the rain. Quinn’s heel skidded on the Camden High Street crossing. She caught a traffic bollard, regained her stride and watched him vanish between a night bus and a shuttered pharmacy. “Police! Herrera, stop!” The bus dragged a brown wave across the pavement. Quinn went through it. Cold water filled her shoes; her trousers clung above the ankles. Beyond the bus, Herrera glanced back. Rain had flattened his dark curls, and his Saint Christopher medallion swung outside his coat on a length of chain. “You followed the wrong man from Soho, Detective.” “Then you won’t mind answering a few questions.” He increased his pace. Forty minutes earlier, she had watched him leave the Raven’s Nest beneath its green neon sign. He had paused under the awning to speak with two men whose faces occupied half her incident board, then set off with the bag. Quinn had followed his car from Soho, keeping her distance until Camden. When she drew alongside and raised her warrant card, he had abandoned the vehicle with the engine running. Six weeks of surveillance. Three dead men. A clique whose members treated police interviews as an inconvenience between drinks. Herrera’s name appeared around the edges of every statement: former NHS paramedic, licence revoked, no fixed employment, available when somebody needed a wound closed without a hospital form. He turned into a side street. A couple outside a chicken shop saw Quinn’s warrant card and flattened themselves against the window. Herrera kicked a discarded delivery crate into her path without breaking stride. She struck it with her shin. Pain flared; she swore and kept running. “Control, Quinn. Foot pursuit, Camden. Male suspect making towards the rear service roads.” She pressed the radio closer to her mouth. “I need units and a containment point.” “Nearest unit four minutes, Detective.” Herrera reached the end of the street and ducked beneath a railway arch. Four minutes would be four years if he got into a car. The arch smelled of wet soot and fried oil. Puddles covered the potholes. Quinn took the cleaner line along the wall, gaining ground while Herrera splashed through the centre. Beyond it, hoardings screened a row of empty commercial units. Their printed artist’s impressions promised artisan bakeries and private flats; somebody had sprayed a row of eyes across the smiling residents. Herrera’s pace faltered at a narrow turn. Quinn closed the distance. A door opened ahead of him. A man backed out carrying an amplifier, blocking half the passage. Herrera twisted sideways to avoid him. Quinn caught the medical bag’s strap and hauled. He turned with it rather than let the bag tear free. “Let go.” “Put it down.” His left forearm struck the brickwork. The sleeve rode up, exposing the pale knife scar from wrist to elbow. Quinn seized his wrist. He rotated against her thumb, drove his shoulder into her chest and forced her back a step. “There’s a patient under that station.” “There’s always a patient with you.” “He has a punctured lung.” “Call an ambulance.” “He’d be dead before it found the door.” “Because of what your friends did to him?” For an instant, Herrera stopped pulling. His warm brown eyes fixed on hers, exhausted rather than afraid. “You have no idea who my friends are.” The amplifier carrier pushed between them with an apology neither answered. Herrera wrenched his arm loose. His coat pocket snagged on Quinn’s cuff and ripped. Something pale struck the pavement with the click of a dropped tooth. He ran. Quinn snatched the object up as she passed. It was no larger than a domino, smooth and yellowed, with three cuts crossing a circle on one face. Bone. She closed her fist around it and followed him through a gap in the hoardings. The abandoned Tube entrance stood behind the screens, sunk below street level and concealed by a black iron gate. Its tiled frontage had lost most of the letters above the arch. The surviving roundel had been split down the middle and filled with concrete. No tube map, no posters, no way in. Herrera banged on the gate. “Open up.” A light came on inside the old ticket booth. Quinn slowed. The booth glass had been painted over. Now a man sat behind it in a railway porter’s cap, his hands folded beside a brass scale. Water streamed down the outside of the glass, but none touched him. “Token,” the porter called. Herrera opened his bag and produced another piece of carved bone. The porter placed it on the scale. The brass dish dropped until its chain drew tight, though the token could not have weighed more than a coat button. “One entry.” “One’s all I need.” “You brought police.” “Not willingly.” The gate lock turned. Quinn put on a burst of speed and caught the bars as Herrera slipped through. The gate clanged against her hand. She kept her fingers wrapped around the iron despite the pain. “Three deaths, Herrera. Your name turns up at every scene.” “Because people call me while your scenes are still bleeding.” “Hand over the bag. Come back to the street.” “It contains bandages, morphine and six hours of bad decisions. Which part is your evidence?” “All of it.” He stood in the tiled passage with rainwater running from his coat. Behind him, a staircase descended into darkness. Then something moved below, and a line of blue lamps came on, one after another, down the steps. Herrera touched the medallion at his throat. “Go back to your surveillance, Quinn. Photograph the bar. Follow the money. Build whatever case keeps your superintendent happy.” “You don’t get to choose my suspects.” “No. You get to choose where you stop understanding them.” He turned towards the stairs. “Herrera.” He kept walking. The porter began to draw the gate shut. Quinn shoved her shoulder against it. “Control, Quinn.” Static chewed through her radio. “Suspect has entered a disused Underground entrance off the rear service road. Require immediate—” The speaker gave a thin, rising note and died. She tried her phone. No signal. The location map spun over a blank grey grid. From somewhere beneath her came the sound of a market: coins poured onto wood, an auctioneer’s chant, shoes crossing a concourse, a burst of conversation cut off by a closing door. Warm air rose through the bars. It carried antiseptic, hot wax and the green scent of crushed stems. The porter’s gaze dropped to her clenched fist. “If you’re coming, pay. If you’re not, take your hand off my gate.” Quinn opened her palm. The bone token lay against her skin. “What is this place?” “The Veil Market.” “That isn’t an answer.” “It’s the one written on the lease.” “How many people are down there?” “Fewer than last full moon.” The gate moved another inch. Quinn held it. Beyond the porter, the passage had changed. The concrete-filled roundel now stood above a corridor of white tiles, each marked with a thin black line. At the foot of the stairs, where the station plans in her head placed a solid wall, lanterns hung over rows of stalls. A woman in a surgeon’s gown arranged stoppered bottles beside a hand-painted sign. A man turned a key in the side of a brass cage, and the thing inside struck the bars hard enough to bend them. Quinn blinked rain from her eyelashes. The cage remained bent. Further in, a vendor lifted a sheet of glass. For a moment, it reflected the street behind Quinn instead of the market: the hoardings, the rain, the empty road. Then the reflection mouthed something she could not hear. The porter tapped the scale. “Camden finishes tonight. We move at the full moon. You can inspect the brickwork after.” She looked back through the hoardings. No blue lights. No radios. Her backup could seal the gate, photograph the entrance and wait for a warrant. Sound police work. Herrera would remain below with the bag, surrounded by people who had opened a locked station for him and shut it against her. The token’s design pressed into her palm. DS Morris had drawn the same circle and three cuts on the last page of his notebook. The pen had torn through the paper. Three years ago, he had died during a search that produced no accused, no weapon and no explanation the pathologist would sign without qualifications. The review had used the word unexplained four times in two pages. Quinn had read those pages until the print lost its meaning. She raised the radio again. “Control, Quinn. I’m entering the station in pursuit. Units are to hold at street level and establish what exits serve the site. Do not rush the gate.” Static answered. She repeated the message, then clipped the radio to her belt. Her cropped hair dripped down her neck. She checked the worn leather watch on her left wrist: less than two minutes since her last contact with Control. The porter held out his hand. “Token buys entry. Nothing else.” “And my suspect?” “Costs extra.” “Rules?” “Don’t steal. Don’t bleed on the stock.” His eyes settled on the baton at her hip. “And keep that out of sight unless you intend to use it.” Quinn placed the bone on the scale. The brass dish sank. Somewhere under the concourse, a bell rang once. The gate opened just wide enough for her shoulders. She ducked through, crossed the tiled threshold and started down the stairs after Herrera.
created_at"2026-10-27T11:33:08.245Z" 10/27/2026, 11:33:08 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.085
leniency0.17
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1593
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1593
totalAiIsms0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"clenched fist"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences126
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences126
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences169
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1593
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions47
wordCount1272
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.49
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Herrera"
discoveredNames
Herrera16
Camden2
High1
Street1
Saint1
Christopher1
Raven1
Nest1
Soho1
Quinn19
Tube1
Morris1
Control1
persons
0"Herrera"
1"Saint"
2"Christopher"
3"Raven"
4"Quinn"
5"Morris"
places
0"Camden"
1"High"
2"Street"
3"Soho"
globalScore0.753
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences96
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1593
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences169
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs97
mean16.42
std17.73
cv1.08
sampleLengths
046
13
250
38
48
54
670
747
834
913
1028
115
1225
1360
147
154
1631
1711
182
193
2040
216
226
235
243
258
268
2717
288
2937
302
3143
3252
335
342
359
3639
374
3811
3928
402
414
423
432
444
4532
4610
4710
489
4915
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences126
matches
0"been painted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs206
matches(empty)
92.14% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences169
ratio0.018
matches
0"Cold water filled her shoes; her trousers clung above the ankles."
1"Pain flared; she swore and kept running."
2"Their printed artist’s impressions promised artisan bakeries and private flats; somebody had sprayed a row of eyes across the smiling residents."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1274
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.016483516483516484
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences169
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences169
mean9.43
std6.17
cv0.655
sampleLengths
017
19
220
33
49
54
611
76
820
98
108
114
1216
1324
1412
1518
164
173
1812
1928
206
2116
2212
236
247
2521
267
275
2813
2912
309
314
3216
3310
3421
357
364
376
3811
396
408
4111
422
433
446
4513
464
4717
486
496
61.54% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.3905325443786982
totalSentences169
uniqueOpeners66
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences120
matches
0"Then something moved below, and"
1"Further in, a vendor lifted"
2"Then the reflection mouthed something"
3"Somewhere under the concourse, a"
ratio0.033
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences120
matches
0"She caught a traffic bollard,"
1"He increased his pace."
2"He had paused under the"
3"He turned into a side"
4"She struck it with her"
5"She pressed the radio closer"
6"Their printed artist’s impressions promised"
7"He turned with it rather"
8"His left forearm struck the"
9"He rotated against her thumb,"
10"His warm brown eyes fixed"
11"His coat pocket snagged on"
12"It was no larger than"
13"She closed her fist around"
14"Its tiled frontage had lost"
15"She kept her fingers wrapped"
16"He stood in the tiled"
17"He turned towards the stairs."
18"He kept walking."
19"She tried her phone."
ratio0.242
60.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount96
totalSentences120
matches
0"Tomás Herrera ran with the"
1"Quinn’s heel skidded on the"
2"She caught a traffic bollard,"
3"The bus dragged a brown"
4"Quinn went through it."
5"Rain had flattened his dark"
6"He increased his pace."
7"He had paused under the"
8"Quinn had followed his car"
9"A clique whose members treated"
10"Herrera’s name appeared around the"
11"He turned into a side"
12"A couple outside a chicken"
13"Herrera kicked a discarded delivery"
14"She struck it with her"
15"Pain flared; she swore and"
16"She pressed the radio closer"
17"Herrera reached the end of"
18"The arch smelled of wet"
19"Puddles covered the potholes."
ratio0.8
41.67% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences120
matches
0"Now a man sat behind"
ratio0.008
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences53
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Herrera would remain below with the bag, surrounded by people who had opened a locked station for him and shut it against her."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"She pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.043
leniency0.085
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.043
94.0670%