Run: 2026-10-27-01M5YJ6EWT0J8W3DDQ8E1MVKB3

Run Details

Duration:
7m 14s
Cost:
$0.122830
Provider:
Moonshot AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory opened the door. Lucien Moreau stood on Eva’s landing with rain darkening his charcoal suit and one hand pressed beneath his ribs. His platinum hair had slipped from its usual sleek order. Blood shone on his fingers. For a moment, only the curry house downstairs made any noise: pans striking a hob, a man shouting for two portions of rice. “If you’ve come for Eva, she’s in Edinburgh.” “I know.” “Then you’ve wasted the climb.” Rory began to close the door. “There’s a barb in my side,” Lucien said. “I can’t remove it myself.” She stopped with the door half shut. His ivory-handled cane bore most of his weight now. The hand wrapped around it had gone white at the knuckles. “There are hospitals.” “Not for this.” “There are other humans in London.” His mismatched eyes held hers, one amber, one black. “Yes.” “That isn’t an answer.” “It’s the only honest one I have.” Ptolemy pushed between Rory’s ankles and sat in the doorway. The tabby surveyed Lucien, then gave an enthusiastic chirp. “Don’t encourage him,” Rory told the cat. Lucien’s mouth twitched. “I wouldn’t dream of it.” She looked past him into the empty stairwell. “Who followed you?” “No one. I changed trains twice, crossed a roof and spent twenty minutes in the British Library reading about medieval beekeeping.” “You hate bees.” “I find their organisational success oppressive.” A drop of blood slid from his cuff onto the lino. Rory opened the door wider. “Boots off. If you ruin Eva’s rug, I’ll put the barb back.” He stepped inside without touching her. Ptolemy twined around his ankles until Lucien nearly stumbled, then led him into the flat as though conducting an inspection. Rory shut the door and turned all three deadbolts. Books covered the sitting room in uneven towers. Scrolls lay beneath mugs on Eva’s desk; research notes had swallowed the sofa and most of the floor. Rory cleared the kitchen table with one sweep of her arm, sending a stack of translations onto a chair, and spread a clean tea towel over the wood. “You weren’t above Silas’s,” Lucien said. “Eva asked me to stay with Ptolemy. You could have rung.” “You would have told me not to come.” “Yes. Then I’d have had a choice.” He lowered himself onto a kitchen chair. “You’re right.” “Don’t start agreeing with me just because you’re injured.” “I’ll save it for when I’m feeling stronger.” She fetched Eva’s first-aid tin and set it beside his cane. When she reached for his jacket, he caught her gaze. “No disappearing while my back’s turned,” she said. “No deciding what I can’t handle. And no calling this protection.” “Understood.” “Say it like you mean it.” His jaw tightened, but not at her. “No disappearing. No decisions on your behalf. No lies about why I’m here.” She helped him out of the wet jacket. His waistcoat followed. Blood had soaked his shirt along the left side, black in the flat’s weak light. He unbuttoned it far enough for her to reach the wound, then braced both hands against the chair. The barb sat below his ribs, no longer than her little fingernail. Dark metal. Fine grooves ran along the exposed tip. “My father’s work,” Lucien said. “If I touch it, the summons takes hold. At dawn, it pulls me back to Avaros.” “And if I touch it?” “Nothing, provided you don’t make a wish while doing so.” Rory picked up the tweezers. “You’ve waited three months to become funny again?” “Ninety-six days.” Her hands stopped. He looked at the table. “I wasn’t counting at first.” She took hold of the barb. “This will hurt.” “I had gathered that.” “Don’t be brave. It makes people do stupid things.” “I’ll endeavour to remain a coward.” She braced her free hand against his side. Heat came through his skin; his breath stirred the black hair at her temple. For one treacherous second, she noticed the familiar line of his throat, the place where his collar had opened, the restraint in the way he kept himself from leaning towards her. Then she pulled. Lucien’s whole body locked. The chair scraped against the floor. Rory turned the barb once, felt the hidden hook give, and drew it free. He folded forwards with a harsh breath. She caught his shoulder before his forehead met the table. “Got it,” she said. “So you have.” She dropped the metal into a saucer and pressed clean gauze over the wound. His hand covered hers—not holding it there, just resting over her fingers. “Look at the wall,” she said. “I beg your pardon?” “You’re watching my face.” “You have tweezers in your other hand. I’m assessing the risk.” “Assess the wall.” He obeyed. The wall offered Eva’s calendar, three takeaway menus and a sketch of something with too many teeth. Rory cleaned the blood from her fingers. “You kissed me beside that sink.” His gaze returned to hers. “Then you called it an error of judgement. You left while I was making tea, and by morning your number didn’t work.” “I remember.” “Do you? Because you’ve had ninety-six days to come up with something better than ‘I remember’.” Ptolemy jumped onto a book stack and began washing his paw. Lucien stared at the saucer. “My father summoned me. That explains the first night.” “It explains the train journey.” “Yes.” “What about the rest?” He drew a breath and winced. Rory’s hand tightened on the gauze before she could stop it. “At first, I told myself I was keeping you out of Avaros. Then I went to Marseille, and that excuse wore through. I could have written. I could have answered your message.” “I left one.” “I know.” “Then I hated myself for leaving it.” He flinched more cleanly than he had when she pulled out the barb. Rory sat opposite him. The first-aid tin stood between them, crowded with scissors, antiseptic and Eva’s collection of inexplicable dried herbs. “You knew what Evan was like,” she said. “You knew what it cost me to ask anyone for anything. Then you made me ask where you’d gone.” “Yes.” “Stop saying yes.” “What would you prefer?” “A reason that doesn’t make you sound mysterious.” His mouth twisted. “I was afraid. Not of my father. Not of what wanting you might cost me professionally. You had just got free of a man who made every choice for you. I watched you build a life here with one suitcase, Eva’s spare key and more nerve than I possess. Then you looked at me as though I might be something you chose, rather than someone useful.” “You think rather a lot of yourself.” “Frequently. It has never helped.” She refused to smile. Lucien turned his cane so the ivory handle faced her. A press of the catch would release the thin blade concealed inside. He left it within her reach. “I was useful,” he continued. “I knew which doors opened and which people to avoid. That was safe. Wanting to stay in your kitchen while you burned the toast was not.” “I never burned the toast.” “You were making tea. The toast was an optimistic addition.” “Lucien.” He sobered. “I made my fear sound like principle. There was nothing noble in it. I hurt you, and I left you to invent the reason. I’m sorry.” The apology sat between them without asking her to pick it up. Rory folded the bloodied gauze into a neat square. Her left sleeve had slipped back, exposing the small crescent scar on her wrist. Lucien noticed it, then looked away before she could interpret whatever crossed his face. “You don’t get to arrive bleeding and make that enough,” she said. “It isn’t.” “I haven’t forgiven you.” “I know.” “I might not.” He nodded. “And if you disappear again, you don’t get another speech. You can leave. People leave. But you say goodbye first, even if you think I’ll hate the reason.” “Yes.” She pointed the tweezers at him. “That time, yes is allowed.” He held out his hand, palm up, and waited. Rory looked at it. Then she put the tweezers down and laid her fingers in his. His thumb settled beside the scar, not over it. “I missed you,” he said. “That isn’t an apology either.” “No. It’s inconvenient information.” His thumb moved once across her knuckles. “I missed being wrong and watching you enjoy it. I missed the messages you sent when you delivered to peculiar parts of London. I missed the way you go quiet before doing something reckless, which is apparently the only warning anyone gets.” “I don’t go quiet.” “You went quiet before you kissed me.” “You kissed me.” “Did I?” She pulled her hand back. “You can sleep on the sofa.” “Eva’s sofa has attacked me before.” “Ptolemy attacked you. The sofa failed to help.” Lucien tried to stand. His legs abandoned the attempt, and Rory caught him by the forearm before he could sit down hard. “The barb’s gone,” she said. “Why can’t you stand?” “My legs are objecting to the last hour. Give them time.” “How much?” “An hour. Possibly two.” She guided him towards the sofa, shifting a pile of notes with her foot. He lowered himself onto the edge. Ptolemy immediately claimed his lap. Rory took an empty tea tin from the counter, tipped the barb inside and snapped on the lid. “Eva can examine that when she’s back. Until then, nobody licks it.” Lucien glanced down at the cat. “She means you.” “She means both of you.” When she turned, he was watching her again. This time she didn’t tell him to stop. “If I kiss you,” she said, “it doesn’t settle anything.” “No.” “You’re still sleeping on the sofa.” “You’ve made that admirably clear.” “And you don’t get to call it a second chance.” “What may I call it?” “The next ten minutes.” He didn’t move. Didn’t reach for her. Rory crossed the small space herself and put one hand against his jaw. His breath caught. Hers did too, which annoyed her enough that she kissed him before he could comment. He kept his hand on the sofa until she drew it to her waist. Even then, he let her set the distance. There was nothing polished in the way his fingers tightened against her jumper, nothing rehearsed in the quiet break of his breathing when she moved closer. Ptolemy leapt onto the table and put his head inside the first-aid tin. Rory broke away. “Not the herbs.” Lucien kept hold of her waist for half a second longer, then released her. “Your cat has no respect for Avaros.” “Eva’s cat.” “That explains it.” She rescued the tin and set it on a high shelf. When she looked back, Lucien had gone still, giving her no help with whatever came next. Rory picked up the blanket from Eva’s armchair and dropped it over his legs. “An hour,” she said. “Then you tell me what your father wants.” “That may take longer.” “Then don’t waste time being charming.” She sat beside him, close enough for their shoulders to touch. Ptolemy rearranged himself across both their laps. Lucien moved his hand to the cushion between them, palm up again. Rory took it. “Start with Marseille. Leave out nothing this time.”
created_at"2026-10-27T11:33:43.461Z" 10/27/2026, 11:33:43 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"His thumb moved once [once]"
dialogueSentences118
tagDensity0.127
leniency0.254
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.017
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1887
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
89.40% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1887
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"oppressive"
count1
2
word"treacherous"
count1
3
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"oppressive"
2"treacherous"
3"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences118
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences118
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences221
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen66
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1886
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions35
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
52.44% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions49
wordCount1025
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.95
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Eva6
Rory20
Lucien16
Ptolemy6
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Eva"
2"Rory"
3"Lucien"
4"Ptolemy"
places(empty)
globalScore0.524
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences76
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as though conducting an inspection"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1886
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences221
matches
0"enough that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs154
mean12.25
std11.73
cv0.958
sampleLengths
04
134
223
38
42
55
66
713
827
93
103
116
1210
134
147
1519
167
178
1811
1921
203
216
2211
2317
2426
259
2654
276
2811
298
307
319
329
338
3421
3519
361
376
3820
3944
4021
4121
425
4310
4413
452
463
4710
489
494
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences118
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs196
matches
0"was watching"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences221
ratio0.014
matches
0"Scrolls lay beneath mugs on Eva’s desk; research notes had swallowed the sofa and most of the floor."
1"Heat came through his skin; his breath stirred the black hair at her temple."
2"His hand covered hers—not holding it there, just resting over her fingers."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1030
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.03300970873786408
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.003883495145631068
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences221
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences221
mean8.53
std7.36
cv0.862
sampleLengths
04
119
210
35
423
58
62
75
86
98
105
117
129
1311
143
153
166
179
181
194
207
2110
229
237
243
255
268
273
2821
293
306
3111
325
3312
346
3520
369
378
3818
3928
406
4111
428
437
447
452
469
478
4811
4910
44.57% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.25339366515837103
totalSentences221
uniqueOpeners56
66.01% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences101
matches
0"Then she pulled."
1"Then she put the tweezers"
ratio0.02
57.62% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount41
totalSentences101
matches
0"His platinum hair had slipped"
1"She stopped with the door"
2"His ivory-handled cane bore most"
3"His mismatched eyes held hers,"
4"She looked past him into"
5"He stepped inside without touching"
6"He lowered himself onto a"
7"She fetched Eva’s first-aid tin"
8"His jaw tightened, but not"
9"She helped him out of"
10"His waistcoat followed."
11"He unbuttoned it far enough"
12"Her hands stopped."
13"He looked at the table."
14"She took hold of the"
15"She braced her free hand"
16"He folded forwards with a"
17"She caught his shoulder before"
18"She dropped the metal into"
19"His hand covered hers—not holding"
ratio0.406
14.46% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount90
totalSentences101
matches
0"Rory opened the door."
1"Lucien Moreau stood on Eva’s"
2"His platinum hair had slipped"
3"Blood shone on his fingers."
4"Rory began to close the"
5"She stopped with the door"
6"His ivory-handled cane bore most"
7"The hand wrapped around it"
8"His mismatched eyes held hers,"
9"Ptolemy pushed between Rory’s ankles"
10"The tabby surveyed Lucien, then"
11"Rory told the cat"
12"Lucien’s mouth twitched."
13"She looked past him into"
14"A drop of blood slid"
15"Rory opened the door wider."
16"He stepped inside without touching"
17"Ptolemy twined around his ankles"
18"Rory shut the door and"
19"Books covered the sitting room"
ratio0.891
49.50% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences101
matches
0"Even then, he let her"
ratio0.01
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Ptolemy twined around his ankles until Lucien nearly stumbled, then led him into the flat as though conducting an inspection."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he continued (continue)"
dialogueSentences118
tagDensity0.119
leniency0.237
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.017
89.1334%