Run: 2026-10-27-01M5YJENH69MF4JTC44W9ZAVQS

Run Details

Duration:
7m 20s
Cost:
$0.116916
Provider:
Moonshot AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The first wrong thing was the flowers. Rory noticed them after she left the road and followed Eva’s dropped pin into Richmond Park. They crowded the grass beneath her torch beam, white and yellow heads rising through November’s dead growth. Frost had silvered the railings at the gate. Her breath had clouded on the climb over. Yet here the stems stood supple and green, and the air carried the green-pepper scent of crushed sap. She checked the time. 23:41. Eva’s message had arrived at nine, after three days of unanswered calls. No greeting. No explanation. A location pin, a photograph of oaks surrounding a dark clearing, and four instructions. Midnight. Bring the pendant. Come alone. Before leaving her bicycle at the gate, Rory had forwarded the pin to Silas and told him to call the police if she had not contacted him by one. Alone did not mean unaccounted for. She had also brought a torch, a power bank and the steel pen Yu-Fei kept for signing delivery receipts, though she had no clear idea what use the pen might be. The pendant rested beneath her shirt. It had arrived at the Golden Empress two weeks earlier in a plain box addressed to Aurora Carter, with no note and no sender. A crimson stone, no larger than her thumbnail, hung from its silver chain. She had meant to leave it at home. Standing outside her flat, with Eva’s message open on her phone, she had gone back for it. Now it held a warmth that did not match her skin. At 23:49, she found the oaks. Their trunks had split and folded with age, bark forming deep seams around hollows wide enough to hide a person. Standing stones marked the spaces between them, eight upended slabs with no carvings Rory could see. Beyond lay the clearing from Eva’s photograph. She stepped between the stones. The traffic noise stopped. Not faded. Stopped. The distant wash of tyres on wet tarmac, an aircraft’s labouring engines, the motorcycle that had followed her along the road for half a mile: all gone. A plane crossed above the branches, its red light winking between clouds. No sound accompanied it. Rory’s torch passed over grass, flowers, stones. No Eva. “Your directions were rubbish.” Her voice reached the oaks and died there. “I’m here. If this is your idea of an apology, you’re paying for my bike to be cleaned.” Something pressed moisture from a leaf behind her. Rory turned. The beam found a stone, a sheath of ivy, her own route through the grass. She took two paces to her left. Her trainers made two wet sounds. A third followed. She waited, then scuffed one foot across the ground. The answering scuff came a moment later, soft and precise, from the opposite side of the clearing. An echo needed a wall. The nearest stone stood no higher than her waist. She switched off the torch. Darkness did not arrive all at once. The clouds retained a diluted city glow, and the flowers kept pinpricks of it in their petals. At the edge of her sight, a pale shape stood beside one of the oaks. She turned her head and found only a patch of lichen climbing a stone. When she looked down at her phone, the lichen reached the height of a shoulder in the corner of her vision. Rory raised the torch and swept the beam across it. The stone stood bare apart from the lichen, fixed in its original ragged patch. “Very funny,” she said. No one laughed. She made herself approach the place as she would a bad delivery address: establish what she could verify, ignore whatever the customer insisted was obvious. Eight stones. A split oak near the centre. Thirty-two paces across the clearing. Her entrance lay between the two stones flanking a holly bush. She tore a blank strip from a Golden Empress receipt, wrote 23:51 on it, and wedged it beneath the left-hand stone. The pendant pulsed against her breastbone. She drew it out. The crimson stone contained a dim red light, buried below its surface. It faded as she watched, then returned with another touch of warmth. Rory closed her hand around it. The glow shone between her fingers. “Eva, if you can see this, come out.” A branch shifted at the edge of the clearing. There was no wind. The movement was too slight to identify: a withdrawal, perhaps, or the settling of weight. Her phone buzzed. Silas’s name filled the screen. For one clean, practical instant, Rory thought of the gate, the road, the locked door above his bar. Then she read the message. Rory, your bike’s still at the gate. Police are here. It’s Friday. Please call me. She looked at her watch. The second hand passed twelve. 23:53. Wednesday. The crescent scar on her wrist showed white beside the strap. Her phone gave the date as Friday. The time read 02:16. She pressed Silas’s number. The call failed before it connected. No signal. She tried again with the same result, then took a screenshot, though she could not have said what good that would do. Her watch advanced to 23:54. She had been inside for five minutes. Rory put the pendant back beneath her shirt and returned to the entrance. The strip of receipt remained beneath the stone. Rain had soaked it to pulp. When she lifted it, the paper tore along the fold and the ink she had written minutes earlier feathered into grey stains. She counted the boundary. Nine stones. The new one stood between the holly and her entrance, or where her entrance had been. It had the same weathered surface as the others, the same collar of wildflowers. No freshly disturbed soil surrounded it. Rory chose the widest gap and walked. She kept the holly at her back and took a straight line through wet grass. The ground dipped. She stepped over a root, adjusted her course to avoid a patch of bramble and continued without turning. The split oak appeared ahead of her. She stopped. The clearing lay beyond it. Nine stones. White flowers. The pulp of the receipt in her left hand. Behind her, where the holly should have been, rose the dark wall of an oak. She checked her phone. 02:16. Her watch had lost no time and gained none: 23:57. At midnight, something was due to happen. Eva had not said what. Rory looked at the impressions her trainers had left in the grass. They marked her route towards the centre, dark crescents in the wet blades. She followed them with her torch, searching for the point where her straight path had bent. Every print faced inwards. Even the ones she had just made. “Rory.” Eva’s voice came from the boundary. Rory put the split oak between herself and the sound before she answered. “Where are you?” “Outside.” “Silas is outside. So are the police. Speak to them.” A pause. Beyond the oak’s roots, a patch of flowers trembled, though the grass around it remained still. “Don’t bring them here.” “Then come out and give me a reason.” “You brought the pendant.” Rory’s fingers closed around the chain beneath her shirt. “You asked me to.” “I asked you to bring it. Not wear it.” The voice had moved. The first words had come from near the holly. These came from deeper in the clearing, close enough that Rory could hear Eva’s familiar catch on the final consonant. She did not turn towards it. “Which gate did I climb?” “What?” “Richmond Park has gates. You gave me a pin. Tell me which one I used.” The pendant warmed again. This time the pulse lasted long enough for Rory to feel the silver chain heat against her neck. “Take it off, Rory.” “No.” “You don’t know what it does.” “Neither do you.” The voice did not answer. Rory drew the pendant out and held it away from her body. Its inner light had strengthened. Each pulse began as a red point at the centre of the stone and spread to its edges. The chain slipped through her fingers by a fraction. The pendant swung towards the split oak and remained there, straining against the still air. She followed its line with her torch. Between two roots lay a narrow break in the ground. It was no wider than her hand. The beam lit the roots on either side, picked out grains of soil and a beetle folded beneath a leaf, then stopped at the gap. Not darkness waited within it. Her torch simply had nothing left to show. The pendant pulsed. A thread of air moved through the grass around the roots. It smelled of cold stone and, beneath that, the stale sweetness of a room closed for years. Rory stayed where she was. “Eva,” she said, “what was in your message?” The voice answered from the other side of the clearing. “Rory, please.” “What did you write?” “Take it off before it opens.” The gap between the roots had not changed. Rory measured it against the torch in her hand, then against the width of her boot. She needed facts, measurements, anything that would stay the same while she looked at it. Her phone remained in her other hand. No signal. Friday’s date. Silas’s message. She selected Eva’s number and pressed call. The screen displayed CALL FAILED. Under the split oak, a mobile phone began to ring. Three rising electronic notes sounded from the gap, followed by two lower ones. Eva had used the same ridiculous tune since Cardiff, an old game theme she refused to change because it made Rory wince. The sound came muted through whatever lay beneath the clearing, as though the phone were ringing in another room. Rory stared at the roots. The tune stopped. After two seconds, it began again. She pressed Eva’s number a second time. CALL FAILED appeared at once. The ringing continued beneath her feet. Behind Rory, close enough for the words to touch her ear, Eva’s voice said, “That isn’t my phone.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.12
leniency0.24
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
97.03% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1683
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
67.32% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1683
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"warmth"
count2
1
word"echo"
count1
2
word"pulsed"
count2
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"trembled"
count1
5
word"familiar"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count2
7
word"measured"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"echo"
2"pulsed"
3"weight"
4"trembled"
5"familiar"
6"pulse"
7"measured"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences173
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences173
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences195
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1683
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions52
wordCount1550
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.42
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Eva12
Richmond1
Park1
November1
Rory22
Silas4
Yu-Fei1
Golden2
Empress2
Aurora1
Carter1
Friday3
Cardiff1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Rory"
2"Silas"
3"Yu-Fei"
4"Aurora"
5"Carter"
6"Friday"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"November"
3"Golden"
4"Cardiff"
globalScore0.79
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences109
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"appeared ahead of her"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1683
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences195
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs104
mean16.18
std17.02
cv1.052
sampleLengths
07
167
25
330
46
566
668
711
86
943
105
114
1246
139
144
158
1618
178
1817
1913
203
2126
2214
235
2453
2521
2624
274
283
2970
306
3128
3212
338
3428
353
3628
3715
385
3918
4011
4139
427
4313
4436
454
462
4736
487
4943
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences173
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs254
matches
0"were ringing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences195
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1554
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.01866151866151866
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.005148005148005148
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences195
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences195
mean8.63
std6.29
cv0.729
sampleLengths
07
116
217
38
48
518
64
71
812
92
102
1114
121
133
142
1529
166
1731
186
1924
2013
218
2217
2311
246
2520
2616
277
285
294
302
311
3227
3312
344
357
362
374
388
3918
408
412
4215
437
446
453
469
4717
485
499
53.99% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.3333333333333333
totalSentences192
uniqueOpeners64
45.05% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences148
matches
0"Then she read the message."
1"Even the ones she had"
ratio0.014
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount44
totalSentences148
matches
0"They crowded the grass beneath"
1"Her breath had clouded on"
2"She checked the time."
3"She had also brought a"
4"It had arrived at the"
5"She had meant to leave"
6"Their trunks had split and"
7"She stepped between the stones."
8"Her voice reached the oaks"
9"She took two paces to"
10"Her trainers made two wet"
11"She waited, then scuffed one"
12"She switched off the torch."
13"She turned her head and"
14"She made herself approach the"
15"Her entrance lay between the"
16"She tore a blank strip"
17"She drew it out."
18"It faded as she watched,"
19"Her phone buzzed."
ratio0.297
64.73% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount117
totalSentences148
matches
0"The first wrong thing was"
1"Rory noticed them after she"
2"They crowded the grass beneath"
3"Frost had silvered the railings"
4"Her breath had clouded on"
5"She checked the time."
6"Eva’s message had arrived at"
7"A location pin, a photograph"
8"She had also brought a"
9"The pendant rested beneath her"
10"It had arrived at the"
11"A crimson stone, no larger"
12"She had meant to leave"
13"Their trunks had split and"
14"She stepped between the stones."
15"The traffic noise stopped."
16"The distant wash of tyres"
17"A plane crossed above the"
18"Rory’s torch passed over grass,"
19"Her voice reached the oaks"
ratio0.791
67.57% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences148
matches
0"Before leaving her bicycle at"
1"Now it held a warmth"
ratio0.014
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences61
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The distant wash of tyres on wet tarmac, an aircraft’s labouring engines, the motorcycle that had followed her along the road for half a mile: all gone."
1"The sound came muted through whatever lay beneath the clearing, as though the phone were ringing in another room."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.12
leniency0.24
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.0784%