Run: 2026-10-27-01M5YJJCJ1VF2V8PR2S1TW6YNS

Run Details

Duration:
6m 43s
Cost:
$0.108161
Provider:
Moonshot AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Quinn ducked beneath the police tape at the bottom of the service stairs and checked the worn leather watch on her left wrist. 06:12. Above her, Camden would be waking to delivery vans and shutters rattling open. Down here, the abandoned station still belonged to 1938. The air tasted of wet iron and extinguished wax. Scene lamps threw hard shadows across the platform, picking out green tiles, a dead advertising hoarding and the man lying on his back beside the far wall. DS Rook waited with a rolled station plan under one arm. He had dust on one knee and the resigned expression he wore whenever a scene refused to fit the first available form. “Gareth Venn, thirty-eight. Antiques restorer with a workshop in Ealing. Wallet, keys, phone, no sign of a robbery. Paramedics found no wound and no needle marks. Woman who called it in is in the old ticket office.” “Cause?” “Pathologist’s en route.” Rook nodded towards a row of yellow evidence markers. “We’ve got candle stubs, copper bowls and enough chalk to keep a primary school going. Invitation-only market, stolen antiquities, something chemical on the side. Venn takes the wrong thing, his friends panic and clear out.” Quinn looked along the platform. Six pale rectangles interrupted the dust near the tunnel mouth. A blackened wick lay in one. Nothing else remained except the body and the police. “How many friends?” “Enough to carry the stock.” “And they took their footprints with them.” Rook lowered the cup in his hand. Quinn approached the first evidence marker without crossing the taped route. A trail of footprints led from the service stairs, passed the copper bowls and stopped near a brass pillar. Beyond the final print, the dust lay smooth all the way to Venn’s body. She crouched. The last three steps were short and evenly spaced. Whoever made them had been walking. Rook joined her. “He jumped.” Quinn measured the gap with her eyes. Nearly four metres. “From a walking step.” “He could have run and come back along the edge.” “In the same shoes, without leaving a second mark?” Rook’s jaw tightened. “Fine. Someone moved him.” Quinn rose and walked to the body. Venn wore a brown tweed jacket over a waistcoat, both too warm for the close station air. His shirt collar had twisted beneath his tie. Grey dust coated his shoulders, but none marked the platform beyond his outline. No drag furrow led from the footprints. No second set of heels had disturbed the dust around him. “Without touching the floor,” she said. “The scene’s contaminated.” “You used that dust to give me twenty dealers and a hurried exit.” “I gave you a theory that fits on a charge sheet.” Rook set his cup on an upturned crate. “You’ve been here three minutes. Give me a chance to be wrong properly.” A pale disc rested on Venn’s breastbone. It looked like bone, polished by handling, with a hole bored off-centre and three cuts along its rim. Quinn photographed it with her phone before leaning closer to Venn’s hands. Pale green grit clogged the nails of his right hand. She turned his wrist with a gloved finger. His cuff carried a fresh scrape, and a sliver of white glaze clung to the tweed. “What’s in the coat?” Rook consulted his notes. “Seventy-two pounds, a receipt from a café on Parkway, two keys and a compass. The compass is odd.” “Odd how?” “It doesn’t point north.” Quinn looked at the tiled wall behind the body, then at the scrape on Venn’s cuff. “Show me the witness.” Eva Kowalski sat on a wooden stool in the ticket office, her round glasses reflecting the open door. Curly red hair had escaped its knot around her freckled face. She held a worn leather satchel on her lap with both arms; the corners of books pushed against its sides. A uniformed constable stood outside. Eva tucked hair behind her left ear and watched Quinn enter. “Miss Kowalski. You found Venn.” “I called the police.” “After you found him.” “Yes.” Eva’s fingers tightened on the satchel. “I didn’t touch him. I checked for a pulse at his neck. That was all.” “Why meet an antiques restorer in a sealed station at four in the morning?” “He sent me a photograph of an object. He wanted it identified before he sold it.” “You work for the British Museum.” “As a research assistant. Restricted archives.” “And that qualifies you to value stolen goods?” “No.” Eva’s green eyes flicked towards Rook. “It qualifies me to recognise things auction houses shouldn’t have.” Quinn pulled the door wider, admitting more light from the platform. “The compass.” Eva stopped twisting the satchel’s buckle. “Venn sent you its photograph?” “At 03:41. He said the Market had gone quiet and he needed me to come straight away.” “The Market,” Quinn repeated. Eva’s hair slid forward again. This time she left it alone. “The Veil Market. Books, enchanted goods, alchemical stock, information. It moves every full moon. Last night it was here.” Rook gave a short nod towards Quinn, as if she had confirmed his entire report. “There we are. Illegal market.” “Some of what they sell is illegal,” Eva said. “Some of it isn’t yours to legislate.” Quinn took the station plan from Rook and laid it across the closed ticket window. “Where was the entrance?” Eva pointed to the stairs. “There, if you had a token.” “The bone disc?” “You show it when you arrive. Without one, you find an empty station.” Quinn looked at the rectangles in the dust. “And after everyone leaves?” “The Market goes with them.” “Stalls, stock, rubbish.” “Everything.” “Except Venn.” Eva’s gaze dropped. “Except Venn.” Rook folded his arms. “Convenient story. No dealers to interview, no stock to seize, no CCTV worth having. Just a dead man, a bone counter and a compass that doesn’t work.” Quinn held out her hand. “Bring me the compass.” Rook studied her for a moment, then went. Eva shifted on the stool. “You shouldn’t treat it as broken.” “What does it do?” “It points towards a way through.” “Through what?” “Whatever separates here from somewhere else.” Quinn’s expression gave her nothing. Behind the ticket glass, a cracked timetable still advertised a war-time service. She thought of Morris’s file, of nine missing minutes and plaster beneath his nails although no plaster had been found at the scene. Evidence became respectable once someone gave it the wrong name. Rook returned with a clear exhibit bag. Quinn signed for it, put on fresh gloves and removed the compass. It sat small and heavy in her palm. Verdigris mottled the brass casing. Protective sigils ringed the face, their lines so fine that they vanished unless she tilted the glass. The needle pointed down the platform. She turned the compass through ninety degrees. The needle swung inside the casing and settled on the same point. Rook leaned closer. “Magnetised.” Quinn walked ten paces towards the stairs. The needle moved with her, then fixed a little to her right. She sighted along it. The line met the tiled wall near Venn’s body. She crossed to the opposite side of the platform and tried again. This time the needle pointed behind her. “Give me a pencil.” Rook handed one over without comment. Quinn marked her two positions on the station plan and ruled a line from each along the bearing she had taken. They intersected at the wall, less than a metre from where Venn lay. “There’s iron behind the tiles,” Rook said, but he had lost the ease of his earlier theory. “Then we test the iron.” Quinn approached the wall. “First we explain why Venn did too.” Up close, the damage was slight enough to miss from the scene lamps. Three tiles carried fresh scratches at shoulder height. A nail had caught in the grout and lifted a crescent of glaze. Its exposed edge was white; its surface held the same green tint as the grit beneath Venn’s nails. Quinn crouched by the skirting. Dust had gathered everywhere else in soft, level drifts. Here it formed narrow lines, all drawn towards a vertical seam between two tiles. She held the back of her hand near the seam. Cold touched her skin. “Rook. What’s behind this?” He unrolled the plan and turned it towards the light. “Earth. Six metres of it, give or take. There’s a storm culvert farther east.” “Could your dealers have broken through?” “And rebuilt the wall before we arrived?” “They cleared twenty stalls without leaving a heel mark. I’m trying to keep an open mind about their skills.” Rook came to stand beside her. He looked from the seam to the body, then back along the interrupted footprints. “His own trail stops over there,” Quinn said. “Nobody dragged him. Nobody carried him across the platform. He scraped that wall with his right hand, and whatever the compass responds to, it responds to the same place. Your market didn’t simply pack up and leave him behind.” Eva had appeared at the ticket-office door. The constable hovered behind her, uncertain whether to intervene. “If the way closed while he was still inside,” she said, “he might have found another opening.” Rook turned on her. “Inside what?” Eva looked at Quinn rather than him. “The Market.” Quinn set the compass on the floor beside the wall. Its needle remained fixed on the seam. She held out her gloved hand for the bone token, and Rook placed it in her palm. “Miss Kowalski,” she said, “show me exactly how they used the door.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences75
tagDensity0.16
leniency0.32
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1598
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
90.61% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1598
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"measured"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"flicked"
count1
highlights
0"measured"
1"pulse"
2"flicked"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences108
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences108
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences171
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1598
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions65
wordCount1004
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.29
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Rook19
Quinn23
Venn8
Kowalski1
Eva12
Morris1
persons
0"Camden"
1"Rook"
2"Quinn"
3"Venn"
4"Kowalski"
5"Eva"
6"Morris"
places(empty)
globalScore0.355
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences80
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like bone, polished by handling, w"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1598
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences171
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs102
mean15.67
std14.03
cv0.896
sampleLengths
046
136
233
337
41
547
630
73
85
97
107
1144
1217
135
1410
154
1610
179
187
1963
206
213
2213
2332
2437
2534
264
2722
282
294
3016
314
3249
3316
345
354
364
3722
3814
3916
406
416
428
4317
4413
456
465
4717
484
4911
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences108
matches
0"been found"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs172
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences171
ratio0.012
matches
0"She held a worn leather satchel on her lap with both arms; the corners of books pushed against its sides."
1"Its exposed edge was white; its surface held the same green tint as the grit beneath Venn’s nails."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1007
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.018867924528301886
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0029791459781529296
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences171
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences171
mean9.35
std6.61
cv0.707
sampleLengths
023
11
213
39
49
527
611
722
837
91
1012
1135
125
1310
146
159
163
175
187
197
2011
2119
2214
232
249
256
263
272
287
293
304
3110
329
333
344
357
3617
378
3813
397
4011
416
423
4313
4419
4513
467
4718
4812
4910
74.31% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.45294117647058824
totalSentences170
uniqueOpeners77
66.67% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences100
matches
0"Nearly four metres."
1"Pale green grit clogged the"
ratio0.02
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences100
matches
0"He had dust on one"
1"His shirt collar had twisted"
2"It looked like bone, polished"
3"She turned his wrist with"
4"His cuff carried a fresh"
5"She held a worn leather"
6"She thought of Morris’s file,"
7"It sat small and heavy"
8"She turned the compass through"
9"She sighted along it."
10"She crossed to the opposite"
11"They intersected at the wall,"
12"Its exposed edge was white;"
13"She held the back of"
14"He unrolled the plan and"
15"He looked from the seam"
16"Its needle remained fixed on"
17"She held out her gloved"
ratio0.18
40.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount84
totalSentences100
matches
0"Quinn ducked beneath the police"
1"The air tasted of wet"
2"Scene lamps threw hard shadows"
3"DS Rook waited with a"
4"He had dust on one"
5"Rook nodded towards a row"
6"Quinn looked along the platform."
7"A blackened wick lay in"
8"Nothing else remained except the"
9"Rook lowered the cup in"
10"Quinn approached the first evidence"
11"A trail of footprints led"
12"The last three steps were"
13"Rook joined her."
14"Quinn measured the gap with"
15"Rook’s jaw tightened."
16"Quinn rose and walked to"
17"Venn wore a brown tweed"
18"His shirt collar had twisted"
19"Rook set his cup on"
ratio0.84
50.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences100
matches
0"Whoever made them had been"
ratio0.01
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Quinn repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences75
tagDensity0.093
leniency0.187
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.027
90.7198%