Run: 2026-11-11-01M753CZFJY5FG4NVAV1BGD05Y

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Duration:
25.3s
Cost:
$0.005769
Provider:
Meta

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hit the green neon sign above the entrance to the Raven's Nest and smeared the letters into a wash of light across the wet pavement. Rory pushed the door with her shoulder and carried a Golden Empress delivery bag in her left hand. Water ran from her black, shoulder-length hair onto her coat. She shook rain from her sleeves and stepped into the heat of the bar. Old maps covered the wall behind the tables. Black-and-white photographs filled the gaps between the maps. A coffee machine hissed in the corner. The bar smelled of lemons and wood polish and gin. Silas Blackwood stood behind the counter with a glass in his right hand. The silver signet ring on that hand caught light from the lamps. Grey ran through his auburn hair. His beard framed his mouth. Hazel eyes narrowed at her face. "Rory." She stopped beside the first stool. Her bright blue eyes fixed on the man behind the counter. Her mouth opened and closed. Heat climbed her neck. The crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist showed against skin red from rain. She tightened her grip on the delivery bag. "You cut your hair." Silas set the glass on the counter. His left leg dragged a fraction as he shifted his weight from one foot to the other. His hand found the edge of the bar. The ring tapped wood. "London rain and kitchen scissors did the work in a bathroom above a chippie on Wardour Street." He dragged the cloth from his pocket and polished a second glass. The corners of his mouth lifted. Lines cut his cheeks and stayed there. "Chippie suits your accent better than courtrooms ever did." "Yu-Fei Cheung pays wages on a Friday. Barristers in Cardiff paid in lectures." Silas filled a glass with water from the tap behind the bar and pushed it across the counter toward her. Ice cracked against the sides. He kept his fingers on the rim until she took it. "Drink. You look half drowned." "You look older than the photographs on that wall." He laughed with a short burst of air. His beard shook over his smile. He came out from behind the counter with the limp in his left leg. He crossed the room and stopped at the table by the window. "Fifty-eight years will do that." "You limped in Prague. Mum said you danced at her wedding." Silas touched the back of a chair. His knuckles whitened around the wood. The signet ring pressed a dent into his skin. "Your mum poured cider and your dad argued with the best man about the seating plan. I danced because Jennifer pointed a finger at me and threatened the same treatment." "She keeps that photograph in the hall. You have no beard in it. You have a suit and no limp." He rubbed his thumb along his jaw and through the grey in his beard. His hazel eyes stayed on her face. The bar clock ticked over the radio. "I collected the limp later. Prague gave it to me free of charge." "And the bar?" He waved his right hand at the maps, the photographs and the shelves of bottles. The neon sign threw green light across his hair and turned the grey to silver for a second. "The Nest kept secrets for men who paid cash and never played darts. I kept the lease." "You never liked gin." "I never liked the taste. I liked the company behind the counter." Rory set the delivery bag on the floor beside a stool. Paper rustled inside the bag. She sat on the stool and drank the water. The wood creaked under her weight. Her coat dripped onto the tiles. "You never rang after Cardiff." Silas stopped polishing the glass. His right hand rested on the counter. The ring clicked against the glass and went quiet. "I rang your father twice. Brendan answered once and told me to leave you alone with your books." "I left the books. I left Cardiff too." She pulled her sleeve down over the scar on her left wrist. Her right hand cupped the water glass and warmed her fingers. "Eva told me about Evan." "Eva told you the short version. She left out the part where I packed a bag at three in the morning and sat on a train with forty pounds and a library card." Silas pulled a stool out with his foot and sat down beside her. His knee thumped the side of the stool. His face tightened for a beat and loosened. "She told me enough. She said you lived upstairs and took the back stairs because you did not want to see my face." "I took the back stairs because Yu-Fei's timers beep at seven and because I am good at avoiding awkward conversations." "That talent matches your old man." Air burst through her nose and shook the water in her glass. She set the glass down hard enough for the ice to jump. "Brendan would have cross-examined the rain." "Jennifer would have marked his answers with red pen." He leaned back on the stool and reached for a bottle behind him. His left leg stretched out straight and his hand found the edge of the counter for balance. The bar lamps threw his shadow across the photographs on the wall. "You taught me chess on that stool. You let me win and painted the board king red." Silas looked at the stool under her. His eyes moved to the shelf under the photographs where a chess box sat beside a tin. Dust coated the lid. "You checkmated me at fifteen and accused me of cheating. You checked my sleeves for extra rooks." "You wore cuffs that week." "I wore a proper suit that week. Age changes a man." "You change. I change. The bar stays the same." He poured whisky into the glass he had polished and left it beside his hand. The ring flashed in the lamplight. The liquid caught the green from the sign outside the window. "The bar changes the lock on the back room and the price of lemons. Men on stools change. Maps stay on walls until damp eats the corners." "Do you meet people through the bookshelf?" His eyes flicked toward the tall bookshelf at the end of the bar. The spines of the books lined up in a neat row. One book leaned against the others. "Manners, Rory. A lady drinks water and minds the shelf." "I minded the shelf at sixteen and you told me to polish brass and not ask questions." He pushed the whisky toward the sink and filled a kettle. Steam rose in a thin column from the spout. He poured hot water into a mug and set it in front of her with a tea bag. "You asked questions for England. You asked about the ring on my right hand until Jennifer fed you cake and shut you up." "You never told me about the ring." He turned the ring around his finger. The silver band caught light and threw it across the counter. His thumb rubbed the edge of the metal. "The ring tells a story better than I do. MI6 had use for it in Prague. The Nest has use for it when a man with a wallet asks for a quiet word." "Yu-Fei asks for a quiet word when the noodles run short. I tell him ring or no ring, the kitchen needs coriander." He laughed and grabbed the counter as his knee buckled a fraction. His beard hid his mouth for a second. He righted himself and stood straighter. "Your mother teaches. Your father argues. You deliver noodles and argue with rain." "I argue with traffic lights. They always win." She drank the tea and tasted bitterness from the bag. Steam warmed her face. The rain tapped the window in a steady rhythm over the hum of the neon sign. "You eat?" "I eat delivery mistakes. Tonight I packed spring rolls for a man in a suit. He ate them and tipped me in compliments." "A suit in Soho wants a quiet word. Noodles come second." "Spring rolls come first in my world. Compliments buy bus fare." He reached under the counter and took a small dish of almonds. He set the dish on the counter between them. A few almonds rolled against the edge of the dish. "Eat the compliments and the almonds." "You kept my stool." He looked at the stool where she sat. The wood bore a pale patch where years of coats had rubbed the polish away. A narrow groove marked the underside near the front leg. "Bar stools keep people. This one kept a girl who read law books under the counter and stole cherries from the bowl." "I stole cherries because you counted them." "I counted them because you stole them. Nothing changes between us except the price of cherries." She picked an almond from the dish and cracked it between her teeth. Salt coated her tongue. She reached for another almond and lined it up beside the first on the wood. "I rang you last winter." His hand stopped on the bottle. Rain hammered the glass above the sink. The radio played a tune with piano and brush drums. "I saw your name on the phone. I left the phone on the shelf and poured a drink for a man who needed a story about Prague." "A story about Prague?" "He needed a lie with good bones. I gave him one. You needed a door open." "I needed a train ticket and a friend who lived above a bar." She tucked her hair behind her ears. Her bright blue eyes blinked hard at the counter. She traced the rim of her glass with her thumb and the scar on her left wrist caught the light. "Eva needed you in London. I needed you safe. The flat upstairs had a lock I trusted." "You trusted a lock more than a phone call." He pushed the whisky glass away. The signet ring clicked against his mug. He folded his hands on the counter and the silver band pressed into his skin. "I trusted a lock and a woman named Eva. Both did their jobs." "Eva does jobs. I do deliveries. You do pints and passwords." "The Nest does the rest." He limped to the bookshelf at the end of the bar. His hand brushed the spines and stopped on the chess box. He opened the lid and took out a red king with paint chipped from its base. He carried the king back to the counter and set it beside her glass. "Your mother sent that through Eva in March. No note. The king came in a tin." Rory picked up the red king. Paint flaked under her thumb. The wood felt smooth from years of hands. She turned the king in her fingers and set it on the counter facing Silas. "She paints kings red because the shop sold out of black." "Jennifer paints the king red because you called it a traitor in 2019." The corners of his mouth lifted. His hazel eyes crinkled at the edges. He tapped the base of the king with the signet ring. "I called it a traitor because you sacrificed it to teach me a lesson about pride." "You learned the lesson. You left Cardiff. You left Evan. You left law books that bored you to tears." "I left a lot of things. You stayed with a bar and a limp and a ring." The green neon sign buzzed above the door. Light flickered across the maps and the photographs. Silas stood beside her stool and filled the space between the counter and the table. His height cast a shadow over the chess king. "I stayed with the work I knew. Prague took my knee. London gave me this place. The work kept my hands busy." "Your hands look busy wiping the same glass since I walked in." He looked at the glass in his right hand. The water inside the glass reflected the lamps. He set the glass down on the counter beside the red king and kept his hand on the rim. "Old habits keep a man from asking questions he does not want answered." "Ask one. Go on." "Did Eva force you upstairs or did you choose the flat because the stairs led past my door?" She stared at the water in her glass. Her thumb traced the rim in a slow circle. The scar on her left wrist pressed against the wood of the counter. "I chose the flat because the rent suited my wages and because the stairs smelled of lemons." "Lemons." "Lemons and polish and gin from a man who does not like gin." He leaned his weight on the counter. The silver signet ring on his right hand sat beside the red king. His left leg stayed straight and his face tightened around the pain in his knee. "You answer a question with three answers and a joke." "You ask questions like an interrogation in a play your father wrote." "Brendan wrote better plays than briefs. Jennifer marked both." "Does Jennifer know you need a trim?" "Jennifer knows my beard needs a trim. She told Eva who told me in a message with exclamation marks." Rory took her phone from her coat pocket. The screen stayed dark. A Golden Empress sticker clung to the cracked corner of the case. She turned the phone over and laid it face down on the counter. "Eva sends exclamation marks in batches. She sent nineteen after I missed her birthday." "You missed her birthday." "Delivery shift. Double noodles. Chinese New Year rush and a landlord with no patience." Silas reached under the counter and took out a silver key. He laid the key on the wood beside the chess king. The metal gleamed under the lamps. "The back stairs lock sticks in rain. Use the front key after ten. The front door keeps the rain off your hair." "I like rain. Rain gives me time to think." "Think upstairs. The flat heater works. I had Yu-Fei's cousin fix the valve in July." She picked up the key. The metal felt warm from his hand. Her scarred wrist brushed the edge of the counter as she closed her fingers around the key. "You had a cousin fix a valve." "Yu-Fei has cousins for every trade in Soho. One cousin fixes valves. Another cousin moves crates. A third cousin asks no questions." "The third cousin sounds like you at twenty." "At twenty I had two good knees and no title behind a bar." He gestured at the bar with his right hand. The ring caught light from the lamps. His sleeve pulled back and showed the bones of his wrist. "And no grey in my hair. Prague and time took those gifts." "Time took my law degree. Cardiff took the rest." She turned the red king on the counter so the crown faced Silas. Her fingers left a faint print in the dust on the wood. "Check." "Not yet." He slid his stool closer with his foot and sat down beside her. The stool legs scraped the tiles. He winced and rubbed his left knee with his right hand. "Sit, Rory. The rain will keep."
created_at"2026-11-11T10:45:31.256Z" 11/11/2026, 10:45:31 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2567
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
86.37% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2567
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"weight"
count3
1
word"flicked"
count1
2
word"traced"
count2
3
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"flicked"
2"traced"
3"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences140
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences140
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences234
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2567
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions20
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount1406
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.78
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Golden2
Empress2
Blackwood1
Silas11
Rory4
persons
0"Blackwood"
1"Silas"
2"Rory"
places
0"Raven"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences127
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2567
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences234
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs136
mean18.88
std12.92
cv0.684
sampleLengths
068
175
21
347
44
536
617
725
89
913
1036
115
129
1340
145
1511
1622
1730
1820
1928
2013
213
2233
2317
244
2512
2637
275
2821
2918
308
3123
325
3333
3429
3523
3620
376
3824
396
409
4142
4217
4328
4417
455
4611
479
4832
4927
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences140
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs205
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences234
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1410
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount10
adverbRatio0.0070921985815602835
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences234
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences234
mean10.97
std5.65
cv0.515
sampleLengths
026
118
210
314
48
58
67
710
813
912
106
115
126
131
146
1511
165
174
1813
198
204
217
2217
238
244
2517
2612
276
287
299
3013
3120
325
3311
345
359
368
376
3814
3912
405
4111
427
436
449
4530
4620
4714
487
497
42.31% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.23076923076923078
totalSentences234
uniqueOpeners54
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences140
matches(empty)
ratio0
8.57% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount74
totalSentences140
matches
0"She shook rain from her"
1"His beard framed his mouth."
2"She stopped beside the first"
3"Her bright blue eyes fixed"
4"Her mouth opened and closed."
5"She tightened her grip on"
6"His left leg dragged a"
7"His hand found the edge"
8"He dragged the cloth from"
9"He kept his fingers on"
10"He laughed with a short"
11"His beard shook over his"
12"He came out from behind"
13"He crossed the room and"
14"His knuckles whitened around the"
15"He rubbed his thumb along"
16"His hazel eyes stayed on"
17"He waved his right hand"
18"She sat on the stool"
19"Her coat dripped onto the"
ratio0.529
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount133
totalSentences140
matches
0"Rory pushed the door with"
1"Water ran from her black,"
2"She shook rain from her"
3"A coffee machine hissed in"
4"The bar smelled of lemons"
5"Silas Blackwood stood behind the"
6"The silver signet ring on"
7"His beard framed his mouth."
8"Hazel eyes narrowed at her"
9"She stopped beside the first"
10"Her bright blue eyes fixed"
11"Her mouth opened and closed."
12"Heat climbed her neck."
13"The crescent-shaped scar on her"
14"She tightened her grip on"
15"Silas set the glass on"
16"His left leg dragged a"
17"His hand found the edge"
18"The ring tapped wood."
19"He dragged the cloth from"
ratio0.95
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences140
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences69
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.5748%