Run: 2026-11-11-01M753WGJY256D6GRKVA9A5ZEN

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Duration:
26.1s
Cost:
$0.005299
Provider:
Meta

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt clicked and the chain shuddered against the wood. Rory kept her palm on the lock bar and looked through the peephole at the man on the landing. Platinum hair lay plastered to his forehead. Damp charcoal wool clung to his shoulders. One eye caught the hall bulb amber. The other eye took light and gave back black. Water dripped from the hem of his suit and pooled round the ivory tip of his cane. She drew the chain, pulled each bolt, and opened the door a hand's breadth. Ptolemy jammed a tabby flank against her calf and fixed his gaze on the visitor. Rory wedged her foot into the gap and held the door edge with her left hand. The small crescent scar on her wrist showed white against the sleeve. "You picked a lock with a name I gave you in March." "Eva mentioned Brick Lane after two glasses at Silas' bar." "Eva did not mention a date or an hour." "She mentioned a cat with a king's name." Lucien lifted the cane clear of the mat and shifted his weight on the landing. Rain hissed on the curry house sign below and the smell of cumin and fried onions pushed up the stairwell. Ptolemy slipped past Rory's foot, circled Lucien's shoe, and butted his head against the damp trouser leg. Rory grabbed the cat by the scruff and hauled him behind her ankle. "Get off my mat, Lucien." "Door, Rory." "No." "Man in the curry house doorway tracked me from the Tube." Rory looked past Lucien's shoulder. A man stood under the awning with a phone in his hand and his face turned up toward the landing. Lucien glanced down the stairs and his knuckles whitened round the ivory handle of the cane. Rory seized his lapel, dragged him over the threshold, and slammed the door in the cat's startled face. She threw the chain home and pulled the three bolts in sequence. Ptolemy yowled and shot between the book stacks. "Your cat will draw blood from both of us." "You brought trouble to Eva's door." Inside the flat, books leaned in towers from floor to shelf and scrolls lay across the table in a crooked line. Research notes curled at the edges and a teacup sat abandoned on a geology text. Lucien's coat dripped onto the rug and his shoes left dark prints on the boards. Rory tossed him a towel from the bathroom rail and set about pulling books off the armchair with both arms. He dabbed at his hair and the platinum strands fell across his forehead. Lucien stepped into the narrow path between two shelves and blocked the route to the kitchen. Rory squeezed past him with an armload of paperbacks. Her shoulder bumped his chest and she turned her face up to him in the tight space. Blue eyes met amber and black at a distance of inches. He did not move. "Move." "You love a narrow hallway." Lucien stepped sideways and his cane scratched the floorboard. Rory dumped the books on the sofa and pointed at the bathroom. He draped his wet jacket over the chair back and followed her into the kitchen with the towel round his neck. The kettle clicked off as she filled two mugs. Steam curled up and caught the light from the one bare bulb. Her left hand shook round the handle and tea sloshed onto the saucer. Lucien lowered his gaze to the crescent scar and she tugged the jumper sleeve down over it. "Tea was Eva's rule for guests." "I am no guest tonight." "Good. Eva will want witnesses." "I should have told you the job came from Avaros." "You should have told me before you took my notes." "I took nothing." "You took the last page and left no word for three months." Lucien set his mug down on the counter with care and the ceramic rang against the stone. Rory turned the tap full blast and watched water hammer the sink. The scar shone white under the stream and her fingers reddened in the cold. He reached past her to turn the tap off and his sleeve brushed her wrist. She snatched her hand back and dried it on the jumper. "That page named a door. I closed it." "You used my name to open it." Ptolemy scratched at the kitchen door and whined for his bowl. Rory crouched in the corner beside a stack of Eva's notes and filled the bowl with dry food. Lucien crouched at her side to move a pile of books out of the cat's path. Their knees bumped and his thigh pressed against hers on the narrow floor. He placed the bowl down and their hands brushed over the rim. Rory pulled her hand away and Ptolemy dived in with his ears flat. Lucien stood and ducked his head under a shelf of scrolls. Rory stood with him and the top of her head hit his chin. "You feed him before yourself." "He pays rent in pest control." Lucien crossed to the window and lifted the blind with his thumb. Rain streaked the glass and a streetlamp threw orange light through the drops. The man from the curry house doorway stood across the road with his collar up and his phone dark in his hand. Lucien reached for the blind cord. Rory caught his wrist and the pulse hammered under her fingers. His black eye turned toward her and his mouth formed a thin line. She let go and killed the lamp. Darkness dropped over the flat and left the book spines in silhouette. Street glow outlined Lucien's profile at the glass. Rory reached for the blind and his shoulder shifted against hers. "Lamp. Now." "Eva's lamp stays on." "Then Eva's flat gets a visitor." "Your hand is on my wrist." "Your hand is on Eva's blind." Rory clicked the lamp back on and the bulb stung her eyes. Her phone buzzed on top of the scrolls and Eva's name lit the screen. She answered on speaker and held the phone away from her ear. Glasses clinked behind Eva's voice and music thumped from Silas' bar. "Ptolemy ate. I have a guest." Lucien leaned toward the phone and his breath warmed the side of her face. Rory shifted the phone to her other hand and held it between them. "She says the scroll stays with her." "I came for shelter, not the scroll." "Then say that to her." "I need one hour, Eva. No scroll. No trouble at your door." Eva's voice crackled and Rory ended the call. She set the phone face down on the geology text and picked up her mug. Lucien picked up his and turned in a slow circle round the kitchen, taking in the notes, the scrolls, and the single chair. Rory opened the fridge for milk and a handwritten list held to the door with a magnet caught her eye. Eva had written milk, cat food, rice, and a name in black marker. Lucien stood behind her and read over her shoulder. She slammed the fridge and the bottles rattled inside. "Eva crosses names off with a black marker." "She crossed mine in March." Lucien lowered his mug to the counter and left a wet ring on the stone. His gaze landed on the scroll tube on the shelf above the sofa. He reached for it with his free hand. Rory stepped between him and the shelf and planted her palm flat on the tube. Her chest brushed his tie and she looked up at the amber eye close to her face. He lowered his hand and the cane tapped the floorboard under his shoe. "Hands off." "I want the hour, Rory. That was my request." "Requests get bolts. Rules get couch." Rory hauled a folded blanket from the bedroom doorway and shook it out over the book piles. Dust rose in the lamplight. Lucien caught the other corner and the blanket stretched between them. She smoothed the corners with her left hand and the scar flexed with each pull. Her black hair fell across her face and Lucien lifted his hand toward it. His fingers stopped a breath from her cheek. Blue eyes held his gaze and her jaw tightened. "You cut your hair." "You notice hair. You miss locked doors." Rory pulled the blanket from his grip and laid it over the armchair in one sharp tug. Books slid and Ptolemy leapt onto the wool, circled twice, and kneaded the fabric with his claws. Lucien perched on the chair edge with his cane across his knees and his damp jacket dripping onto Eva's rug. Rory set the second mug on the floor beside his shoe and kept her hand round her own.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.025
leniency0.05
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1466
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
93.18% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1466
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences91
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences91
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences131
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen23
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1466
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
54.64% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions56
wordCount1206
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity1.91
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory23
Lucien21
Eva6
Ptolemy6
persons
0"Rory"
1"Lucien"
2"Eva"
3"Ptolemy"
places(empty)
globalScore0.546
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences88
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1466
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences131
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs54
mean27.15
std38.28
cv1.41
sampleLengths
0134
112
210
39
48
565
65
72
81
911
1079
119
126
13141
141
155
1693
176
185
195
2010
2110
223
2312
2469
258
267
27107
285
296
30115
312
324
336
346
356
3649
376
3827
397
407
415
4212
4397
448
455
4681
472
489
496
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs191
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences131
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount904
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount2
adverbRatio0.0022123893805309734
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences131
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences131
mean11.19
std4.94
cv0.441
sampleLengths
011
119
27
37
47
59
617
714
815
916
1012
1112
1210
139
148
1515
1620
1717
1813
195
202
211
2211
235
2420
2516
2618
2712
288
299
306
3121
3215
3315
3420
3513
3616
379
3817
3911
404
411
425
439
4412
4521
469
4712
4813
4917
48.60% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.3053435114503817
totalSentences131
uniqueOpeners40
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences91
matches
0"She drew the chain, pulled"
1"She threw the chain home"
2"He dabbed at his hair"
3"Her shoulder bumped his chest"
4"He did not move."
5"He draped his wet jacket"
6"Her left hand shook round"
7"He reached past her to"
8"She snatched her hand back"
9"Their knees bumped and his"
10"He placed the bowl down"
11"His black eye turned toward"
12"She let go and killed"
13"Her phone buzzed on top"
14"She answered on speaker and"
15"She set the phone face"
16"She slammed the fridge and"
17"His gaze landed on the"
18"He reached for it with"
19"Her chest brushed his tie"
ratio0.264
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount85
totalSentences91
matches
0"The third deadbolt clicked and"
1"Rory kept her palm on"
2"Platinum hair lay plastered to"
3"The other eye took light"
4"Water dripped from the hem"
5"She drew the chain, pulled"
6"Ptolemy jammed a tabby flank"
7"Rory wedged her foot into"
8"The small crescent scar on"
9"Lucien lifted the cane clear"
10"Rain hissed on the curry"
11"Ptolemy slipped past Rory's foot,"
12"Rory grabbed the cat by"
13"Rory looked past Lucien's shoulder."
14"A man stood under the"
15"Lucien glanced down the stairs"
16"Rory seized his lapel, dragged"
17"She threw the chain home"
18"Ptolemy yowled and shot between"
19"Lucien's coat dripped onto the"
ratio0.934
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences70
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
86.5474%