Run: 2026-11-11-01M754DJGJ5BHEQC87PT1Z8X37

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You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

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The third deadbolt jammed and Rory Carter leaned her shoulder against the door of Eva's flat on Brick Lane. Curry steam pushed up through the floorboards from the kitchen below. Ptolemy, Eva's tabby cat, balanced on a stack of research notes and stared at the brass handle. Rory turned her left wrist, the small crescent scar on the skin caught the landing light, and she worked the key with her fingers until the lock gave. The door opened a crack. Lucien Moreau stood on the landing in a tailored charcoal suit dark with rain at the shoulders. His platinum blond hair lay slicked back against his skull. One eye shone amber and the other eye stayed black. An ivory-handled cane rested against his leg. Water dripped from the hem of his trousers onto a curry-stained tile. He towered over Rory by five inches and he blocked the rectangle of yellow light from the hall bulb behind him. "Wrong flat." Rory pushed the door with her hip. The edge struck his shoe. He shifted his weight and the cane tapped the tile twice, paused, and tapped again. The pattern belonged to the pavement outside Silas' bar on the night she last saw him. "Move, Lucien." "Eva's name sits on the doorbell." Rory glanced past his elbow at the bell. Eva had scratched her name into the plastic with a pin. Rory's hand tightened on the door edge. The wood pressed into her palm and her scar throbbed against the grain. "Eva has a lecture in the British Library." "And you have a delivery bag on your shoulder." Rory looked down. The Golden Empress bag hung from her shoulder with grease spots on the canvas. Yu-Fei Cheung had sent her out with spring rolls and a torn recipe card at four o'clock. She had detoured to Eva's because Evan's car had circled Silas' bar twice and because her own flat above the bar felt like a glass box. "You followed my route." "I read your route on the bag." He held out a folded square of paper between two fingers. The paper dampened at the corners. Rory stared at the hand, at the ivory handle of the cane, at the rain on his forearms. "Touch that and I close this door on your fingers." "Take it. Then close the door." Rory snatched the paper. She unfolded it against the door with one hand. Evan's handwriting slanted across the lines. Found you. No signature. No date. Her thumb smeared the ink. Lucien watched her face and his cane stopped tapping. "Where did you get this?" "Under your door." "My door has three deadbolts and a chain." "Your door had a gap at the bottom." Rory folded the paper into a hard square. She pressed the square between her scarred wrist and the door frame. A memory hit her from Cardiff: Evan at the bus stop with a flower in his fist and a smile that promised change. Her father Brendan Carter had used that same smile in court, the barrister smile, and her mother Jennifer Ellis had warned her about men who rehearsed kindness. "He left that for me?" "He left that for you this morning." "You went into my flat." "I stood in your doorway. The letter fell out from under the mat." "You touch my things and you vanish for six months and you turn up with warnings?" Lucien lowered his hand from the cane. The amber eye held her stare. The black eye reflected the landing light and gave nothing back. "I went into the doorway. I did not touch your things." "That is a distinction for a courtroom, not for me." Rory stepped back and pulled the door wide. She did it for the letter, for Evan's name in ink, for the car she had seen outside Silas' bar. She did not do it for Lucien. "Get inside before the curry house notices a demon on the stairs." Lucien crossed the threshold. Ptolemy leapt from the notes and landed on the rug with a thud. The cat circled Lucien's shoes and rubbed against the polished leather. Lucien froze and the cane lifted clear of the cat's tail. "Your cat likes me." "Your shoes smell of expensive polish. Ptolemy likes expensive things. Eva feeds him tuna from a tin with French writing on it." Rory locked the first deadbolt. The click rang through the flat. She locked the second deadbolt. The click rang again. She locked the third deadbolt and turned the key twice for safety. Lucien stood in the narrow hallway among books and scrolls and watched each lock engage. "Three deadbolts," he said. "Eva counts them when she panics." "Does she panic often?" "She panics when men like you arrive without warning." Rory moved past him into the main room. Books covered the table, the sofa, the floor between the sofa and the radiator. Scrolls leaned against a milk crate. Research notes formed drifts along the skirting board. Eva's one-bedroom flat above the curry house held the smell of cumin, old paper, and Ptolemy's litter tray behind the curtain. Lucien followed her and his suit brushed a tower of paperbacks. Two books slid and hit the rug. Rory lunged and caught a third book before the spine cracked. She shoved the books into a pile with her knee and her hip. "Touch nothing." "I touched nothing. Gravity touched your books." "Gravity has a French accent in this flat." She cleared a stool with her foot. The stool scraped the floorboards and Lucien sat on the edge of it with the cane across his knees. The ivory handle shone under the lamp. A small brass button sat at the base of the handle. Rory had seen Lucien press that button once outside the Golden Empress, and a thin blade had slid from the shaft with a sound like a zipped coat. "Your blade and your suit and your car outside," Rory said. "You dress like a funeral and you carry a weapon in a walking stick." Lucien pressed the button with his thumb. The blade clicked back into the cane with a soft snick. He laid the cane across Eva's table on top of a scroll. "Your bag and your route and your three deadbolts," he said. "You dress like a courier and you hide in your friend's library." Rory set the kettle on the hob. The kettle handle burned her palm and she shook her hand. Lucien saw the scar on her left wrist flare red as she pulled back. "That scar," he said. "Childhood. A broken bottle at a Cardiff fête. My mother wrapped it with a tea towel and my father paid for stitches he bragged about in court." "Did Evan give you that scar?" Rory picked up the paper square from the door frame and threw it at the bin. The paper hit the rim and dropped inside. Ptolemy chased the sound and knocked a tin of paperclips across the floor. Metal scattered in a bright spill. "Evan gave me a different set of marks," she said. "A bruise on my ribs shaped like his hand. A split lip he blamed on a door. A winter when I slept with my bag packed." Lucien stood. The stool legs screeched. He bent and gathered the paperclips with his fingers. His charcoal sleeve rode up his wrist and revealed skin pale as the inside of a shell. His hands shook around a single paperclip. "I heard about Evan from Eva." "Eva talks too much when she drinks." "She talks when she worries. She worried after the night at Silas' bar." Rory turned off the kettle before the water boiled. Steam hissed from the spout and fogged the window above the sink. Brick Lane traffic blurred through the wet glass. A bus brake squealed around the corner and Ptolemy flattened his ears. "The night at Silas' bar," Rory said. "You mean the night you kissed me behind the bins and then you left when your phone rang?" Lucien dropped the paperclip into the tin. The tin rang. "I left when Avaros called." "Avaros. Your father's realm. Your demon father. Your human mother from Marseille who had no idea what she carried." "You listened to Eva." "I listened to you. You told me in French, and I know four words of French." "You know five words. You said them wrong." Rory laughed once. The sound surprised her and hurt her throat. She grabbed two mugs from the rack and set them on the counter with a clatter that sent Ptolemy under the sofa. "Tell me the five words," Lucien said. "Tell me why a fixer for demons needed a delivery girl with a Pre-Law degree from Cardiff University." Lucien sat down again. The stool creaked under his weight. He spread his hands on his knees and the cane lay across the table between a scroll and a chipped plate. "You read contracts for Yu-Fei," he said. "Yu-Fei told me. You spotted a clause in a supplier contract that would have cost him his lease. You did it in ten minutes and you laughed at the lawyer who wrote it." "Yu-Fei exaggerates." "You left Cardiff because Evan followed you to London and because your father wanted you in courtrooms and because Eva wanted you alive." Rory filled the mugs with water from the kettle. The kettle had reached a boil after all. Steam curled around her face and hid her eyes for a second. She welcomed the cover. "You have a file on me," she said. "I have notes. Eva has a file. Eva showed me the file when she asked me to keep Evan away from your door." "And you kept him away by running my address through your contacts?" Lucien's jaw tightened. The muscle moved under the skin of his cheek. He pressed his thumb against the brass button on his cane and released it. Click. The blade remained hidden. "I ran your old address through contacts to find who sold it to Evan," he said. "A man in South London fed Evan information for cash. That man sold your childhood friend's address to three people. Eva found your name on his list." Rory set a mug in front of him. The mug featured a cartoon tiger and the words World Best Boss in cracked paint. Lucien wrapped his hands around the mug and the heat reddened his knuckles. "Why tell me now?" Rory asked. "Evan put that letter under your door this morning. I saw the envelope in your doorway when I came to warn you about the man in South London." "You came to warn me." "I came to Eva. Eva told me you stayed here tonight." Rory gripped her mug with both hands. The ceramic burned her scar. Lucien leaned forward and the sleeve of his suit brushed her wrist as he reached for the sugar tin on the counter. The wool scratched her skin and his fingers hovered a breath away from the crescent scar. She pulled her wrist back. The mug tilted and tea sloshed over the rim onto the table. Lucien caught the mug with one hand and set it down before the tea reached the scrolls. "Sorry," he said. "Do not touch my wrist." "I will not." "Do not touch my door or my bag or my route." "I will not." "Do not kiss me behind bins or anywhere else in East London." Lucien looked up at her. The amber eye glinted and the black eye stayed flat and dark. "I will not kiss you," he said. "You kissed me." Rory stared at him. The cat emerged from under the sofa and sat on Lucien's foot. The heat from the radiator dried the rain on his trousers and the wool smelled of wet ash. "I punched you after that kiss," Rory said. "You punched my shoulder." "I meant your face." "You missed my face." "You ducked." "I ducked because Eva screamed from the doorway of Silas' bar and Silas came out with a crate of bottles and your ex stood across the street with his phone in his hand." The kettle clicked off. Ptolemy yowled at the silence and rubbed his head against the table leg. Rory crouched and scooped the cat into her arms. Ptolemy purred against her chest and his claws pricked her jumper through the knit. "Evan stood across the street," she said into the cat's fur. "Evan watched me kiss a demon and he smiled that courtroom smile." Lucien stood and his cane tapped the floorboards once. He moved to the window and pulled the curtain aside with two fingers. The curry house sign flashed pink and orange through the rain. A black car idled at the kerb with its wipers beating a slow rhythm. "That car," Lucien said. Rory rose with Ptolemy in her arms. She stood beside Lucien at the window. His shoulder pressed her shoulder through the suit wool and the jumper. The contact sent heat down her arm that had nothing to do with the radiator. "That car belongs to a man who works for the South London contact," Lucien said. "He followed me from Silas' bar." "He followed you here?" "He followed me to Brick Lane." Rory shifted the cat to her left arm and reached for the curtain with her free hand. She yanked the curtain shut. The rings on the rod screamed. The pink light vanished. "You brought him to Eva's flat." "I brought him to the street outside Eva's flat. He parked and he stayed in the car. He watches the door." Rory set Ptolemy on the sofa. The cat leapt onto a pile of books and settled with a sigh. Rory turned to Lucien and her back hit the edge of the table. A scroll tumbled off the table and rolled under the stool. "You use Eva's flat as bait," she said. "I use my own body as bait. The car follows me, not you." "You use people as bait. You used me as bait outside Silas' bar. You stood me under a streetlight where Evan could see us." Lucien bent for the scroll. His hand closed around the paper cylinder and he straightened with the scroll in his fist. The paper trembled in his grip. "I stood you under the streetlight because Silas' bar has cameras on the front door and no cameras on the alley," he said. "Evan stood across the street and Silas saw him. Silas called the police. Evan left. That plan worked." "The plan put Evan's eyes on my mouth." Lucien laid the scroll on the table with care. His fingers smoothed the paper where his palm had dented it. "You are right," he said. Rory blinked. Lucien Moreau, fixer, broker, half-demon from Avaros, sat on Eva's stool and admitted fault in a flat above a curry house while a cat slept on her research notes. "Say that again," she said. "You are right. I put you in danger. I chose the streetlight and the alley and the cameras and I did not ask you." "You chose a client that night," Rory said. "Your phone rang and a client paid you to leave." "Avaros called. My father required a contract signed before midnight. The contract bound a family in Marseille to a house they would regret for a century. I left Silas' bar and I signed the contract and I saved that family." "You saved strangers and you left me with Evan." Lucien gripped the cane handle. The ivory turned white under his thumb. "I left you with Silas and Eva and a locked door," he said. "Evan left the street when Silas called the police. I checked on you at two in the morning. You slept on Eva's sofa with Ptolemy on your feet." Rory remembered the morning. She had woken with cat hair in her mouth and a bruise on her ribs from Evan's hand and a text from Eva that said Brick Lane. She had not seen Lucien in the room. She had assumed he had gone. "You checked on me?" "I stood in Eva's doorway. I did not enter the room." "You stand in doorways a lot." doorway is where I belong," he said. "I belong in doorways and cars and streets. I do not belong in flats with three deadbolts." Rory picked up her mug. The tea had cooled. She drank and the cold tea coated her tongue. Lucien watched her throat move and his gaze dropped to the scar on her wrist and rose again to her face. "You learned Welsh," she said. Lucien tilted his head. "For my mother," she said. "You spoke Welsh on the phone outside the Golden Empress. I heard you switch from English to French to Spanish and then you spoke Welsh. My mother teaches Welsh in a school outside Cardiff. I recognised the vowels." "I learned Welsh from a book in Eva's flat." "Eva owns a Welsh dictionary?" "Eva owns three Welsh dictionaries. She left one on this table." Rory looked at the table. A thick dictionary sat under a pile of scrolls with a coffee ring on the cover. She pulled the dictionary free and flipped it open to a marked page. Eva had underlined a word in red pen and written a note in the margin. Rory read the note and her ears burned. Lucien read the note over her shoulder. His breath brushed the hair at her temple. The note said: Rory — ask the Frenchman what he calls the border between night and morning. He knows. He pretended not to know in Cardiff. Rory shut the dictionary. The pages slapped together and startled Ptolemy awake. The cat stretched and knocked a book off the sofa. "Cardiff," Lucien said. "You met me in Cardiff," Rory said. "You wore a different suit. You carried a different cane. You pretended you worked for a translation agency." "I worked for a translation agency that month. The agency translated contracts for Avaros." "You translated a contract for my father?" "Your father Brendan Carter represented a man who owed money to Avaros. I translated the debt papers. Your mother Jennifer Ellis brought tea into the office and she corrected my Welsh. She told me my vowels sounded like a tourist with a cold." Rory laughed and the laugh steadied her hands. She set the dictionary down and turned to face Lucien. He stood close enough that the rain smell rose from his suit and mixed with cumin from below. "My mother likes you," she said. "Your mother likes everyone who brings her tea." "She corrected your Welsh and she gave you a biscuit. That counts as adoption in Wales." Lucien smiled. The smile altered his face and softened the hard line of his jaw. His amber eye crinkled at the corner. His black eye stayed dark and still and honest in a way that made Rory's chest ache. "Your mother gave me two biscuits," he said. "She gave you one biscuit and she told you to eat it because law exams would kill you." Rory pushed past him toward the bookshelf. She needed distance from the smile and from the shoulder contact and from the way his voice dropped when he spoke about her mother. She reached for a scroll on the top shelf and her fingers brushed the paper. Lucien reached for the same scroll. His hand covered hers. The paper crinkled between their palms. Neither of them moved. Ptolemy meowed from the sofa and the sound broke the spell. Rory pulled the scroll free and held it against her chest like a shield. "Eva catalogues the scrolls by age," she said. "This one predates the printing press. Eva will cry if you dent it." "I dented the last scroll and I smoothed it." "You smooth things with your hands." "I smooth scrolls." Rory unrolled the scroll on the table. The paper crackled and revealed ink in a language she did not recognise. Lucien leaned over the table and pointed at a line with his forefinger. His sleeve brushed her elbow. His finger hovered above the ink. "This line names a price," he said. "A price in years." "Eva says this line names a road." "Eva guesses. Eva hates roads." Rory traced the line with her eyes and Lucien traced it with his finger. Their hands moved in the same direction across the page. His knuckle touched her knuckle and heat jumped from bone to bone. She did not pull away at once. She let the contact last through three words of ink. "You still read contracts for Yu-Fei?" he asked. "I still deliver spring rolls for Yu-Fei. Yu-Fei still pays me in cash and in gossip." "Yu-Fei told me you refused a promotion." "Yu-Fei told you wrong. I refused a desk job. I like the bag. I like the route. I like moving through London with food in my hands and law in my head." Lucien straightened. His finger left the scroll and his hand found his cane on the table. He lifted the cane and the ivory handle clicked against the dictionary. "You like moving," he said. "You hate doorways." "I like doorways with three deadbolts." "You like knots. You like codes. You like puzzles with teeth." Rory rolled the scroll with care. The paper resisted and she used both hands to keep the edge flat. Lucien set the cane against the wall by the radiator and the wood of the handle tapped the plaster. "The car outside," Rory said. "What do we do about the car?" "We wait. The man in the car works for the South London contact. He watches me. He does not know your name." "He knows my address from Evan." "He knows your old address. Eva's flat stays off his list." Rory tied the scroll with string from the table drawer. The string bit her fingers. Lucien watched her hands and his mouth tightened around a word he did not speak. "Eva's flat stays off his list because Eva paid him," Rory said. "Eva paid him with information about me." "Information about you?" "My real name. My father's name. The name Avaros uses for my family." Rory dropped the scroll onto the table. The scroll bounced and hit the tiger mug. Tea splashed across the tablecloth and soaked the corner of the dictionary. Lucien grabbed a tea towel from the radiator and pressed it against the spill. His hand covered her hand on the towel. "Your real name is Lucien Moreau," she said. "That name belongs to my human grandfather in Marseille. My father gave me a different name in Avaros. Eva traded that name for your safety." "What is the name?" Lucien pressed the towel harder against the spill. Water darkened the cotton under his palm. His shoulders rose with a breath and fell again. "You do not want that name in this flat," he said. "Give me the name." "I will not." Rory pulled her hand from under his. The towel stayed on the table and the tea spread in a brown tide toward the scrolls. She grabbed the towel and wrung it over the sink. Water poured from the cotton in a thin stream. "You trade names and addresses and people," she said. "You trade them like spring rolls at the Golden Empress." "I trade information to keep people alive. I traded my name to keep Evan away from you." "And you traded my address to find who sold it." "I traded nothing. I asked questions. The South London contact answered because he fears Avaros." Rory threw the wet towel onto the radiator. The towel hissed where the heat hit the damp cotton. Ptolemy jumped from the sofa and darted behind the curtain. The cat's tail lashed the air. "You ask questions with a blade in your cane," Rory said. "I ask questions with money and with patience. The blade stays in the cane." "Until it does not." Lucien picked up the cane from the wall. He held the ivory handle with both hands and the cane pointed at the floorboards. The brass button caught the lamp light. "The blade has never touched a person I care about," he said. Rory stared at the cane. The cane had leaned against Eva's table all evening and the blade had stayed hidden. Lucien had smoothed a scroll and caught a mug and dried a spill and he had not touched her scar. The facts sat in the room like books on the floor. "You care about people," she said. "I care about you." The radiator ticked. The curry house kitchen below rang a bell. Ptolemy sneezed behind the curtain. Lucien stood with the cane in his hands and the amber eye fixed on her face. The black eye reflected the lamp and the window and the curtain and the room full of paper. Rory set her mug down on the counter. The ceramic clinked against the sink edge. She crossed the room in three steps and stopped in front of Lucien. The height difference forced her to tilt her chin up. His suit smelled of rain and wool and the faint iron tang that belonged to Avaros blood in human skin. "Say that in Welsh," she said. Lucien's mouth opened. He closed his mouth. He looked at the dictionary on the table and at the scar on her left wrist and at the door with its three deadbolts. "Say it in English," Rory said. "You said it in English and I heard it." Lucien lifted the cane and set the tip against the floorboards. The tap echoed once. "Say it in French," Rory said. "The French will hurt less." Lucien spoke in French. The words rolled from his mouth in the accent of Marseille and the accent of Avaros and the accent of a man who had learned French at his mother's knee and then had learned to hide that accent in London. Rory recognised the rhythm from Eva's kitchen and from her own school days and from the night outside Silas' bar when he had whispered the same words into her ear before he left. She did not translate the words. She let them hang in the air between the scrolls and the radiator. Ptolemy circled his tail behind the curtain. The black car outside Brick Lane idled through a puddle and spray hit the window. Rory reached past Lucien for the kettle. Her arm brushed his chest and the wool scratched her skin. He did not step back. He did not move the cane. He stood in Eva's flat with rain on his suit and a blade in his cane and a name he would not give her, and he waited for her hand to pass. Her fingers closed around the kettle handle.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags63
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences180
tagDensity0.35
leniency0.7
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount4480
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
91.07% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount4480
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"throbbed"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"trembled"
count1
4
word"traced"
count2
5
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"throbbed"
2"silence"
3"trembled"
4"traced"
5"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences258
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences258
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences374
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen77
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords4481
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions72
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
46.96% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions211
wordCount2960
uniqueNames31
maxNameDensity2.06
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory61
Carter2
Eva16
Brick4
Lane4
Moreau2
Golden2
Empress2
Cheung1
Evan6
Cardiff3
Brendan1
Jennifer2
Ellis2
Lucien55
Ptolemy15
World1
Best1
Boss1
Avaros5
English1
French3
Spanish1
Welsh3
Frenchman1
You4
Yu-Fei2
London4
South2
Marseille1
Water3
persons
0"Rory"
1"Carter"
2"Eva"
3"Moreau"
4"Cheung"
5"Evan"
6"Brendan"
7"Jennifer"
8"Ellis"
9"Lucien"
10"Ptolemy"
11"You"
12"Yu-Fei"
13"Water"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Golden"
3"Cardiff"
4"Avaros"
5"English"
6"French"
7"Spanish"
8"London"
9"South"
10"Marseille"
globalScore0.47
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences164
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sounded like a tourist with a"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount4481
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences374
matches
0"traded that name"
1"hide that accent"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs217
mean20.65
std17.51
cv0.848
sampleLengths
080
177
22
343
42
56
639
78
89
960
104
117
1235
1310
146
1539
165
173
188
198
2070
215
227
235
2413
2516
2624
2711
2810
2935
3012
3139
324
3322
3447
354
366
374
389
3957
4042
412
427
438
4472
4525
4630
4723
4832
494
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences258
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs486
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences374
ratio0.003
matches
0"Lucien read the note over her shoulder. His breath brushed the hair at her temple. The note said: Rory — ask the Frenchman what he calls the border between night and morning. He knows. He pretended not to know in Cardiff."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1706
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.0123094958968347
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences374
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences374
mean11.98
std10.82
cv0.903
sampleLengths
019
111
217
328
45
517
610
710
87
912
1021
112
127
135
1415
1516
162
176
188
1911
207
2113
228
239
243
2514
2617
2726
284
297
3011
316
3218
3310
346
354
369
376
382
392
402
415
429
435
443
458
468
478
4812
4923
39.57% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats39
diversityRatio0.16042780748663102
totalSentences374
uniqueOpeners60
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences208
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount58
totalSentences208
matches
0"His platinum blond hair lay"
1"He towered over Rory by"
2"He shifted his weight and"
3"She had detoured to Eva's"
4"He held out a folded"
5"She unfolded it against the"
6"Her thumb smeared the ink."
7"She pressed the square between"
8"Her father Brendan Carter had"
9"She did it for the"
10"She did not do it"
11"She locked the second deadbolt."
12"She locked the third deadbolt"
13"She shoved the books into"
14"She cleared a stool with"
15"He laid the cane across"
16"He bent and gathered the"
17"His charcoal sleeve rode up"
18"His hands shook around a"
19"She grabbed two mugs from"
ratio0.279
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount205
totalSentences208
matches
0"The third deadbolt jammed and"
1"Curry steam pushed up through"
2"Ptolemy, Eva's tabby cat, balanced"
3"Rory turned her left wrist,"
4"The door opened a crack."
5"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
6"His platinum blond hair lay"
7"An ivory-handled cane rested against"
8"Water dripped from the hem"
9"He towered over Rory by"
10"Rory pushed the door with"
11"The edge struck his shoe."
12"He shifted his weight and"
13"The pattern belonged to the"
14"Rory glanced past his elbow"
15"Eva had scratched her name"
16"Rory's hand tightened on the"
17"The wood pressed into her"
18"Rory looked down."
19"The Golden Empress bag hung"
ratio0.986
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences208
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences98
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"A memory hit her from Cardiff: Evan at the bus stop with a flower in his fist and a smile that promised change."
1"Her father Brendan Carter had used that same smile in court, the barrister smile, and her mother Jennifer Ellis had warned her about men who rehearsed kindness."
2"She had woken with cat hair in her mouth and a bruise on her ribs from Evan's hand and a text from Eva that said Brick Lane."
3"Lucien smiled. The smile altered his face and softened the hard line of his jaw. His amber eye crinkled at the corner. His black eye stayed dark and still and h…"
4"Rory set her mug down on the counter. The ceramic clinked against the sink edge. She crossed the room in three steps and stopped in front of Lucien. The height …"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags63
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags47
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Lucien spoke (speak)"
dialogueSentences180
tagDensity0.261
leniency0.522
rawRatio0.021
effectiveRatio0.011
85.9201%