Run: 2026-11-11-01M754XE3NC7J2A9GX67E8RPWW

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Duration:
17.1s
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$0.003843
Provider:
Meta

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign over the door of the Raven's Nest bled light across rain on the Soho pavement. The buzz cut through traffic and a bus sighing at the kerb. Inside, the bar smelled of lemons and old oak and ale that had soaked into wood over years of use. Maps covered the walls between black-and-white photographs. Bottles lined the shelves behind the counter and threw the light back in amber and green. Silas Blackwood stood among them with his sleeves rolled to the elbow. He polished a glass and watched the rain press against the window. A silver signet ring rode on his right hand. The ring caught the bar light each time he turned his wrist. His weight settled late on his left leg. The pause came from an old knee injury and a night in Prague that had set his life on a new course. Rory pushed the door with her hip because both hands held a delivery bag from the Golden Empress. Water ran from her straight shoulder-length black hair onto the shoulders of her jacket. Her bright blue eyes found the bar and stopped cold. The glass in Silas' hand hung motionless in the air. The ring on his finger flashed and faded. A muscle jumped in his jaw under his neatly trimmed beard. Grey streaked his auburn hair at the temples. She had known that hair dark. She had watched him cross a Cardiff car park after a lecture with a clean, fast stride. No limp had marked him then. No archive of maps had lined his walls. Silas set the glass down on the wood and the wood rang under it. "You are wet through, Rory." Rory dumped the delivery bag on a stool and the stool legs screamed against the floorboards. "Yu-Fei put me on the late run. Six drops in the rain and one customer with no bell on the door." Silas reached under the counter for a towel and tossed it across the bar. The towel landed beside her elbow and pushed a coaster to the edge. "Golden Empress pays better than Pre-Law would have paid you." Rory dragged the towel through her hair and water darkened the cotton in a spreading patch. "Pre-Law paid in lectures from my father through the phone. Brendan Carter, barrister, Cardiff, with advice for every hour of the day." Silas cocked his head toward her left wrist. Her sleeve had ridden up and the small crescent-shaped scar showed pale against wet skin. "Your father sends advice. Your mother sends soup. London gets the rest of you." Rory tugged the sleeve down over the scar and her fingers found the zip on her jacket. "Mum Ellis gets lessons for the soup. Dad Carter gets silence. Eva got me a ticket and a flat above this bar. That counts for a lot." Silas pulled a bottle from the shelf and poured a short measure into a glass. The amber liquid hit the glass with a warm splash. He slid the glass toward her and kept his own hand clear of the counter. "Drink. You look like a drowned courier with opinions." Rory wrapped both hands around the glass. Heat climbed through the glass into her palms. The smell of malt and oranges lifted into her face. "You look like the landlord of a pub with a secret. Where did the spymaster go?" Silas laughed through his nose and the sound held no music. "Prague took the spymaster. Prague left the limp and the bar licence." Rory studied his eyes. Hazel flecked with brown caught the light over the bottles. The eyes were the same. The rest belonged to a different man. "I read the report. Botched operation. You vanished from the service and from every phone list I owned." Silas rested his ringed hand flat on the counter. The silver band left a dent in his skin and the dent faded in seconds. "You vanished farther. Cardiff to London with Evan at your heels and a backpack of law textbooks for weight." Rory's grip tightened round the glass and the glass sang faintly against her nails. "Eva packed the backpack. Eva made the call. Evan made the threats. I made the train." The sentence landed between them and the rain hammered the window glass. Silas lifted his own glass and did not drink. His fingers whitened round the stem. "That flat above the bar stayed empty for months. I kept the key on a hook in the back room behind the bookshelf. I kept the light on for a tenant who never climbed the stairs." Rory stared at the bookshelf at the far end of the bar. Six rows of cloth spines filled the shelves. One spine sat a fraction out of line and the gap showed darkness behind it. "You kept a room for meetings. Men in coats came and went." Silas drank at last and set the glass down with care. "Men in coats came and went. A girl in a delivery jacket climbs the stairs now. The room has seen worse." Rory pulled a stool toward the bar and the stool legs screamed again. She sat and her knees knocked the underside of the counter. Silas stood a head taller than her even perched on the stool. "You never called. Not after Evan. Not after I left Cardiff. Not once." Silas shifted his weight and his left leg gave a small buckle before it locked. He caught himself on the edge of the bar and the bottles behind him chimed. "You never called either. Jennifer Ellis wrote once. She asked after my knee. Your father wrote a letter through a solicitor. Formal language. No names." Rory laughed and the laugh scraped her throat. "Brendan Carter writes letters through solicitors. Mum writes soup. Eva writes texts at three in the morning. That is the family archive." Silas reached for a second glass and poured for himself. He held the bottle level and the pour ran clean. "Three in the morning. That fits Eva. She was always awake for other people's emergencies." Rory turned the glass in her hands and the amber liquid swirled and settled. "She changed, Si. She got married in Wales. She teaches. She asked after you and I had no answer worth giving." Silas looked out at the green neon reflection in the wet window. The reflection split across the glass and across his face. "Time gives everyone a new answer. It leaves the old one in the file." Rory pushed the glass away a fraction and then pulled it back. Her scar showed again under the bar light. Silas looked at it and looked away with a deliberate effort that showed in his shoulders. "Childhood accident, is it not? A fence in Cardiff. Your mother put a plaster on it and sent you back to the garden with a warning." Rory covered the scar with her thumb and the thumb pressed hard enough to ache. "You remember everything. You file it all away." Silas tapped the silver ring against the counter once and the ring clicked. "I filed you under Cardiff, nineteen, Pre-Law, and a talent for exits. London filed you under courier, tenant, daughter of Brendan and Jennifer. The file got thick." Rory stood from the stool and the stool toppled into the nearest table. Glasses on the table jumped and settled. The delivery bag slid against the bar leg and a container lid popped open. "Yu-Fei will sack me if that curry lands on the floor." Silas bent with a wince and caught the bag before the container fell. His knee bent short and his hand found the bar for balance. The ring flashed as he righted the bag and set it on the floorboards clear of the spill. "Yu-Fei Cheung runs a clean kitchen. He counts his containers. He also counts his riders." Rory crouched beside him and wiped the spill with the towel. The towel soaked up the sauce and the bar smelled of spice and wet cotton. Their hands brushed over the floorboards and both of them froze for a beat longer than sense allowed. "Your knee. Prague did that." Silas pressed his palm against the joint through his trousers and his mouth thinned. "Prague did that and Prague did the rest. The service retired me with a medal and a pension and a silence I have kept for ten years." Rory sat back on her heels and water dripped from her jacket onto her boots. The puddle under her boots spread toward his shoes. "Ten years. I was in Cardiff then. I was nineteen and furious and certain London would fix it." Silas lifted the delivery bag and set it high on the bar where the rain could not reach it. His limp showed in each step round the end of the bar and the limp showed longer in the dim light between the photographs. "London fixes nothing. London gives a flat and a bar and a view of a neon sign. The rest stays with the tenant." Rory found the curve of her mouth with her thumb and the mouth refused the shape of a smile. "You gave a flat and a bar. You gave distance too. I knocked on the bar door in my first week. A man in a coat answered and said you were in the back room. He gave me the key and closed the door." Silas came round the bar and stood close enough for her to see the grey in his beard and the lines round his hazel eyes. He held the key in his ringed hand and the key swung from a leather tag worn smooth at the edges. "That man in a coat was a contact. The back room was business. You were a tenant with a lock. I kept business off the stairs." Rory took the key and the leather tag rasped against her palm. The key was warm from his hand. "I was a tenant with a lock and a scar and a father who kept his love in solicitor letters. I needed a friend with a limp and a ring and sense." Silas held her gaze and his breath shortened in his chest. The photographs on the wall stared past them in black and white. The maps showed borders that had moved since the ink dried. "I needed a quiet bar and no questions. I got both. I lost the rest in Prague." Rory slipped the key into her jacket pocket and the pocket lining held the shape of old receipts and a bus ticket. "You lost the rest before Prague. You lost the man who crossed the car park in Cardiff and made law lectures bearable with bad jokes." Silas put both hands on the bar to steady them and the ring clicked against the wood. "I lost him in Prague. You lost the girl who sat in the front row and argued with your father on the phone in the foyer. We sit here now with the bill for both." Rory picked up her glass and drank. The malt burned clean on her tongue and warmed her throat. She set the glass down and the glass rang against the wood. "Then we pay it in instalments. Curry deliveries and bar shifts and soup from Mum." Silas poured another measure and pushed the glass toward her hand with his ringed finger. "Instalments sound bearable. I have the bar. You have the stairs." Rory stood and took the delivery bag from the bar. Her shoulder-length hair dripped onto the jacket and the jacket dripped onto the floorboards. The green neon sign buzzed above the door and threw her shadow long across the bar. "Yu-Fei needs that bag at ten. I need a dry shirt and a call to Eva before she writes another three a.m. text." Silas stepped aside from the bar and his limp dragged a fraction behind the movement. He opened the door with his shoulder and rain sprayed the threshold. "Ten o'clock. The flat door sticks in this weather. Lift the handle as you turn the key." Rory shouldered the bag and stepped into the rain. The neon light turned her hair green at the edges. Silas stood in the doorway with his hand on the frame and the silver ring bright against the wood. "Sit down before I have to carry you up those stairs."
created_at"2026-11-11T11:11:59.1Z" 11/11/2026, 11:11:59 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2078
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
87.97% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2078
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"weight"
count3
1
word"silence"
count2
highlights
0"weight"
1"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences103
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences103
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences144
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2078
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions54
wordCount1287
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.86
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho1
Blackwood1
Prague1
Golden1
Empress1
Cardiff1
Silas24
Rory22
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Blackwood"
3"Silas"
4"Rory"
places
0"Soho"
1"Prague"
2"Golden"
3"Cardiff"
globalScore0.568
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences100
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2078
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences144
matches
0"known that hair"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs84
mean24.74
std19.68
cv0.796
sampleLengths
0149
1116
214
35
416
521
627
710
816
922
1023
1114
1217
1327
1440
159
1625
1716
1811
1912
2026
2118
2224
2319
2414
2516
2627
2736
2835
2912
3011
3121
3236
3313
3430
3525
368
3722
3820
3915
4014
4121
4222
4314
4436
4526
4615
478
4813
4927
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences103
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs189
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences144
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount906
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount10
adverbRatio0.011037527593818985
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0011037527593818985
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences144
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences144
mean14.43
std6.46
cv0.448
sampleLengths
019
112
220
37
416
512
612
79
812
98
1022
1118
1214
1310
1410
158
1611
178
186
1917
206
218
2214
235
2416
2521
2614
2713
2810
2916
3022
318
3215
3314
3417
3527
3615
3710
3815
399
407
418
4210
4316
4411
4512
464
4710
485
497
45.83% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.2847222222222222
totalSentences144
uniqueOpeners41
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences103
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences103
matches
0"He polished a glass and"
1"His weight settled late on"
2"Her bright blue eyes found"
3"She had known that hair"
4"She had watched him cross"
5"Her sleeve had ridden up"
6"He slid the glass toward"
7"His fingers whitened round the"
8"She sat and her knees"
9"He caught himself on the"
10"He held the bottle level"
11"Her scar showed again under"
12"His knee bent short and"
13"Their hands brushed over the"
14"His limp showed in each"
15"He held the key in"
16"She set the glass down"
17"Her shoulder-length hair dripped onto"
18"He opened the door with"
ratio0.184
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount97
totalSentences103
matches
0"The green neon sign over"
1"The buzz cut through traffic"
2"Maps covered the walls between"
3"Bottles lined the shelves behind"
4"Silas Blackwood stood among them"
5"He polished a glass and"
6"A silver signet ring rode"
7"The ring caught the bar"
8"His weight settled late on"
9"The pause came from an"
10"Rory pushed the door with"
11"Water ran from her straight"
12"Her bright blue eyes found"
13"The glass in"
14"The ring on his finger"
15"A muscle jumped in his"
16"She had known that hair"
17"She had watched him cross"
18"Silas set the glass down"
19"Rory dumped the delivery bag"
ratio0.942
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences103
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences77
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
86.1268%