Run: 2026-11-11-01M7556BR1H6E4XZHZAC9HK4WQ

Run Details

Duration:
11.5s
Cost:
$0.002408
Provider:
Meta

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
She reached the iron gate on Richmond Road at eleven forty-three and found it locked against the night. Her delivery bag still hung from her shoulder from her shift at Golden Empress, the strap damp where rain had soaked through the canvas during the last run. The note sat in her coat pocket, a thin square of paper with an address in block capitals and three words underneath. Bring the Heartstone. Midnight. Richmond. She had carried that note since she found it taped inside the door of her flat above Silas' bar, and she had carried the pendant since supper, first against her skin under her shirt and then out in the open when the metal chain grew cooler. She stared at the padlock, at the wet rails, at the deer warning sign bolted to the post. Her reflection floated in a puddle at her feet, black hair plastered to her forehead, blue eyes wide in the glow from a passing bus on the road behind her. "Gate's shut. Brilliant start, Rory." She tested the rails with both hands. The leather of her gloves squeaked. She walked the fence line away from the road, past the tea kiosk with its shutters down, past a bin tipped on its side, until she found a gap where a branch had pushed through and a stretch of mud marked a deer path into the dark. She squeezed through sideways, bag first, coat snagging on a thorn. The park swallowed sound behind her. Trees rose in black columns. The grass soaked through the knees of her jeans within ten steps. A fox crossed the path ahead of her and stopped with its head raised, and she stopped with it, and the animal trotted on without a noise. The deer path led her down toward the older trees, toward a part of Richmond Park her maps named with no name at all. She kept her phone light on low to save battery, the beam in a narrow cone ahead of her boots. Ancient oak standing stones showed through the trunks in a broken circle, each stone taller than she stood, grey and pitted, moss thick on the north side of every face. Wildflowers grew between them in a ring despite the month and the cold. Bluebells, cornflowers, poppies torn open to the moon, petals bright enough to catch light that no source gave them. The scent hit her at the boundary, sweet and green and wrong for a night that bit through her coat. She counted the stones as she walked. Nine. Seven visible from where she stood. Two hidden behind the oaks. "You got the note. You wore the thing. No backing out now, Carter." She touched the pendant through her shirt. The crimson stone, no bigger than her thumbnail, pushed heat against her ribs. The heat came and went in a rhythm she felt in her teeth. She had worn it for six hours and the pulse had quickened each time she turned toward Richmond. She pressed her thumb against the crescent scar on her left wrist, a habit from childhood, and the friction steadied her fingers. The chain tickled her neck. She zipped her coat higher and lowered her phone light to the ground, where dew lay on the flowerbeds in a bright skin. The flowers moved before she did. She took a step and the bluebells along the edge of the path leaned toward her boot. She took another step and the poppies turned their faces up. No wind touched the higher branches. No wind touched her hair. A drip sounded from the nearest oak, a single drop striking a leaf, then another, then a run of drops in a pattern too even for rain. She lifted her face to the canopy. The branches held dry. The drip kept time with the pulse in the pendant, one beat for one drop, one beat for one drop, until she could not tell which rhythm belonged to the stone and which belonged to the tree. "Hello?" Her voice came back off the stones in a flattened shape. She waited for another voice to answer it. None answered. The drip stopped mid-pattern. In the quiet that followed, a shape shifted between two stones at the far side of the circle, tall and narrow, darker than the shadow around it. She fixed her eyes on the spot and the shape stayed, and she blinked and the shape stood in a different place, closer to the oaks, closer to her, with no movement between. The flowers parted along a line that reached from the stones toward the path. Wet grass bent there, fresh, and the dew shone on the bend. She checked her phone. The clock read eleven forty-seven. She had entered the park at eleven forty-three and she had walked for what her legs called twenty minutes. She locked the screen and unlocked it again. Eleven forty-seven. The signal bars showed nothing. The map showed a blue dot in a blank space with no roads. She turned in a slow circle to get her bearings and found footprints in the dew behind her, her own bootprints coming out of the dark, and beside each print a second print, longer, narrower, heel to toe, made at a pace that matched hers stride for stride for thirty steps and then stopped. "Eva, pick up. I'm in Richmond Park. I'm in the Grove. There's a note and I followed it and I need you to call me back before my battery dies." The voicemail tone sounded. She ended the call and stared at the black screen. Her own face stared back, blue eyes set in a white oval, hair stuck wet to her cheeks. She wiped her face with her sleeve and the reflection wiped with her. The pendant burned against her sternum through two layers of cloth. She pulled the chain out from under her shirt and held the stone in her palm. It throbbed against her skin, hot then less hot then hot again, and each throb sent a matching throb through the stones in the circle. A low tap answered from inside the nearest standing stone, wood on hollow wood, three taps, a pause, three taps. She stepped to the stone and put her hand flat against its face. The rock felt warm from the moss side to the smooth side. The tap came again, from the center of the stone, where no seam showed. The flowers around her feet pressed close to her ankles and held there. The dew marks in the grass formed a ring around her boots with a gap at her back, the gap facing the broken part of the circle, the part where the path went deeper between the oaks. The footprints behind her had multiplied. She counted pairs in the phone light and lost count at eight. "Show yourself. I didn't come this far to play guessing games." The tap stopped. A breath moved through the flowers, a thin sound with no wind behind it, and the petals lifted for it. The shape appeared between the two far stones where the gap in the dew ring pointed. It did not walk out. It became visible in the place, taller than a person, shoulders narrow, head tilted at an angle her neck could not copy, and the wildflowers bent away from it in every direction as if the ground under it gave off heat. The pendant went hot enough to sting her palm. She raised her phone light and the beam caught no face, no eyes, no coat, only the stones behind the shape and the flowers bent flat around its feet. She spun back toward the stones and her own voice said her name from the place she had stood a second before.
created_at"2026-11-11T11:16:51.593Z" 11/11/2026, 11:16:51 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1304
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
76.99% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1304
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"pulse"
count2
1
word"quickened"
count1
2
word"throbbed"
count1
3
word"throb"
count2
highlights
0"pulse"
1"quickened"
2"throbbed"
3"throb"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences82
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences82
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences87
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen54
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1304
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions9
wordCount1215
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.33
worstName"Richmond"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Richmond"
discoveredNames
Richmond4
Road1
Golden1
Empress1
Heartstone1
Park1
persons(empty)
places
0"Richmond"
1"Road"
2"Golden"
3"Park"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences64
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1304
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences87
matches
0"carried that note"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs16
mean81.5
std54.92
cv0.674
sampleLengths
0167
15
2121
3145
413
5101
6120
71
8111
9110
1030
11117
12107
1311
14123
1522
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs160
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences87
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount142
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount2
adverbRatio0.014084507042253521
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences87
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences87
mean14.99
std11.38
cv0.759
sampleLengths
018
128
222
33
41
51
646
718
830
95
107
116
1247
1311
146
155
1612
1727
1824
1920
2030
2113
2219
2320
247
251
266
275
2813
297
3013
3113
3218
3322
345
3523
366
3717
3811
396
405
4127
427
434
4437
451
4611
478
482
494
32.76% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.28735632183908044
totalSentences87
uniqueOpeners25
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
ratio0
38.18% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences77
matches
0"She reached the iron gate"
1"Her delivery bag still hung"
2"She had carried that note"
3"She stared at the padlock,"
4"Her reflection floated in a"
5"She tested the rails with"
6"She walked the fence line"
7"She squeezed through sideways, bag"
8"She kept her phone light"
9"She counted the stones as"
10"She touched the pendant through"
11"She had worn it for"
12"She pressed her thumb against"
13"She zipped her coat higher"
14"She took a step and"
15"She took another step and"
16"She lifted her face to"
17"Her voice came back off"
18"She waited for another voice"
19"She fixed her eyes on"
ratio0.455
11.95% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount69
totalSentences77
matches
0"She reached the iron gate"
1"Her delivery bag still hung"
2"The note sat in her"
3"She had carried that note"
4"She stared at the padlock,"
5"Her reflection floated in a"
6"She tested the rails with"
7"The leather of her gloves"
8"She walked the fence line"
9"She squeezed through sideways, bag"
10"The park swallowed sound behind"
11"Trees rose in black columns."
12"The grass soaked through the"
13"A fox crossed the path"
14"The deer path led her"
15"She kept her phone light"
16"Wildflowers grew between them in"
17"Bluebells, cornflowers, poppies torn open"
18"The scent hit her at"
19"She counted the stones as"
ratio0.896
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences50
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"She turned in a slow circle to get her bearings and found footprints in the dew behind her, her own bootprints coming out of the dark, and beside each print a s…"
1"It became visible in the place, taller than a person, shoulders narrow, head tilted at an angle her neck could not copy, and the wildflowers bent away from it i…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
85.3294%