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Run: 2026-11-11-01M755M8YNRDQFP3Z6P53GJAMN
Run Details
Model:
Muse Ember (Reasoning, Max)
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
18.9s
Cost:
$0.003825
Provider:
Meta
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
84.46%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
37.43%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
94.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
59.52%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
61.51%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
84.5640%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
I tore the front door
open and Lucien Moreau stood in the narrow hallway with his cane across the threshold.
He wore a charcoal suit
and smoothed his platinum hair with one gloved hand.
His amber eye and his
black eye both fixed on me. "You picked three deadbolts." "I did." "In a shared hallway." "Eva handed me a key." "Eva trusts nobody." "She trusted me once." "Once."
I shoved the door with
my shoulder. The cane did not move.
Lucien leaned his weight into
the ivory handle and let the thin blade inside the shaft kiss the floorboards.
Ptolemy launched off Eva's sofa
and landed on a stack of scrolls beside the kettle.
A bundle of research notes
slid across the table and stopped against the salt shaker. "Move, Lucien." "No." "You lost that right in Cardiff." "Cardiff cost you a flat, a degree and a man you once defended." "And you collected the fee." "I collected nothing. I paid." "Paid whom? Evan? Your father?" "Both." I slammed the door again. The cane jerked.
The ivory handle struck my
ribs and forced the air from my lungs.
Lucien stepped forward, into the
flat, and the scent of cumin from the curry house downstairs followed him through the gap before he kicked the door shut with his heel.
Eva's flat pressed in on
all sides.
Books leaned against books on
the windowsill.
Scrolls filled the shelves above
the sink. Research notes pinned above the desk
fluttered
in the draught from the hallway.
Ptolemy planted his paws on
a pile of translations and stared at Lucien's shoes. "You get one minute," I said. "I need a roof for the night." "Find a hotel." "Hotels keep registers." "Your problem." "Our problem. Avaros placed a bounty on a name you use." "Which name?" "Malphora."
My hand tightened on the
door edge.
Lucien watched my fingers instead
of my face. "How do you know that name?" "You ordered for Golden Empress under that name last spring. Yu-Fei Cheung keeps his own ledger. The ledger reached Marseille." "I used it once. For Evan's benefit." "Someone in Avaros read it twice." "My father," he said. "Good. Tell him to focus on his own son." "He wants mine. He wants yours as collateral."
Ptolemy sneezed at a scroll
and knocked a tin of ink off the table. The tin rolled, tick-tock, tick-tock, and stopped against Lucien's shoe. Black ink spread across the floorboards in a thin, glossy line. Lucien lifted his cane. The blade slid free with a soft click and hovered millimetres from the tin.
He twisted the handle and
the blade vanished again. "Eva's research holds a binding rite for half-demons," he said. "Eva's research stays in this flat." "The rite names me. The rite names you as the witness. Avaros knows both facts. They sent a collector to Brick Lane tonight." "Collector, not you." "Me first. The collector follows."
I crossed to the kitchen
drawer and pulled out the longest knife Eva owned. The blade caught the lamplight. Lucien did not step back.
He stepped closer, until the
lapel of his suit brushed my shoulder and his cane rested beside my hip. "Put the knife down, Rory." "Make me." "With pleasure, if you want an audience from the curry house."
My pulse hammered against my
throat. I raised the knife.
He caught my left wrist
between his thumb and forefinger.
His grip landed on the
small crescent-shaped scar and held it there, as if the scar gave him a handle on the rest of me.
He pressed his thumb against
the scar. My breath snagged. "You never told me about the accident." "You never asked. You asked about Evan." "Evan left the bruises. This scar predates him." "Childhood. A broken bottle. A careless adult. End of story."
His thumb moved once across
my skin.
I pulled the knife hand
tighter.
I did not pull my
wrist away. "Let go." "Of course."
He released me at once
and lifted both hands, empty, to shoulder height. "Cardiff," he said. "You think I sold your address." "You entered Evan's name in a ledger." "I entered a false address in that ledger. An address in Bristol. Evan paid a fixer in Bristol and discovered an empty house. That bought you four months." "Four months of you watching from a distance." "I watched because your father threatened to cut your funding if I contacted you. Your father threatened Eva. Brendan Carter flies to London with a solicitor when he feels insulted." "He sent a letter to Eva?" "He sent a solicitor. Eva scared the solicitor off with a curse in old Welsh. She enjoyed that part."
I lowered the knife to
the drainer. The metal clanged against a plate. "You could have told me." "You slammed a door in Marseille before I finished the sentence." "You stood beside a man who wanted my father's money." "I stood beside a man who wanted leverage over your father. I traded the leverage for your name. Avaros holds the debt now. That debt follows us both." Ptolemy circled Lucien's legs, tail high, and butted his head against the cane. Lucien looked down at the tabby with open surprise. "Eva feeds him stolen chicken." "Eva feeds him chicken she bought. He judges everyone." "He judges me fairly." The lock above our heads clicked. Not the front door. A lock inside the flat. The bedroom door at the far end of the room shuddered on its frame. Lucien turned toward the sound. His cane came up. The blade snapped out and caught the light along its edge. Ptolemy yowled and hurled himself at the bedroom door. Wood splintered around his claws. From behind the door, a heavy thump answered him, again and again. "Step behind me, Rory," Lucien said.
created_at
"2026-11-11T11:24:27.491Z"
11/11/2026, 11:24:27 AM
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4115
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6828
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0
native_tokens_reasoning
5365
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
6
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
60
tagDensity
0.1
leniency
0.2
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
100.00%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
965
totalAiIsmAdverbs
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
84.46%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
965
totalAiIsms
3
found
0
word
"weight"
count
1
1
word
"fluttered"
count
1
2
word
"pulse"
count
1
highlights
0
"weight"
1
"fluttered"
2
"pulse"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
58
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
0
narrationSentences
58
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
(empty)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
112
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
repeatedSegmentCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
30
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
965
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
13
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
37.43%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
21
wordCount
533
uniqueNames
4
maxNameDensity
2.25
worstName
"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity
3
worstWindowName
"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien
12
Moreau
1
Eva
3
Ptolemy
5
persons
0
"Lucien"
1
"Moreau"
2
"Eva"
3
"Ptolemy"
places
(empty)
globalScore
0.374
windowScore
0.667
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
40
glossingSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
965
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
112
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
28
mean
34.46
std
22.77
cv
0.661
sampleLengths
0
20
1
25
2
23
3
61
4
38
5
51
6
48
7
35
8
15
9
60
10
35
11
27
12
47
13
43
14
18
15
45
16
10
17
32
18
20
19
124
20
13
21
54
22
22
23
18
24
29
25
20
26
26
27
6
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
58
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
86
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
112
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
94.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
536
adjectiveStacks
1
stackExamples
0
"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount
10
adverbRatio
0.018656716417910446
lyAdverbCount
0
lyAdverbRatio
0
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
112
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
112
mean
8.62
std
6.25
cv
0.726
sampleLengths
0
20
1
14
2
11
3
4
4
2
5
4
6
5
7
3
8
4
9
1
10
7
11
5
12
19
13
15
14
15
15
2
16
1
17
6
18
13
19
5
20
5
21
5
22
1
23
5
24
3
25
13
26
30
27
7
28
7
29
7
30
13
31
14
32
6
33
7
34
3
35
3
36
2
37
11
38
2
39
1
40
7
41
8
42
6
43
20
44
7
45
6
46
4
47
9
48
8
49
14
59.52%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
10
diversityRatio
0.4107142857142857
totalSentences
112
uniqueOpeners
46
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
0
totalSentences
53
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
61.51%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
21
totalSentences
53
matches
0
"I tore the front door"
1
"He wore a charcoal suit"
2
"His amber eye and his"
3
"I shoved the door with"
4
"I slammed the door again."
5
"My hand tightened on the"
6
"He twisted the handle and"
7
"I crossed to the kitchen"
8
"He stepped closer, until the"
9
"My pulse hammered against my"
10
"I raised the knife."
11
"He caught my left wrist"
12
"His grip landed on the"
13
"He pressed his thumb against"
14
"My breath snagged."
15
"His thumb moved once across"
16
"I pulled the knife hand"
17
"I did not pull my"
18
"He released me at once"
19
"I lowered the knife to"
ratio
0.396
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
49
totalSentences
53
matches
0
"I tore the front door"
1
"He wore a charcoal suit"
2
"His amber eye and his"
3
"I shoved the door with"
4
"The cane did not move."
5
"Lucien leaned his weight into"
6
"Ptolemy launched off Eva's sofa"
7
"A bundle of research notes"
8
"I slammed the door again."
9
"The cane jerked."
10
"The ivory handle struck my"
11
"Lucien stepped forward, into the"
12
"Eva's flat pressed in on"
13
"Books leaned against books on"
14
"Scrolls filled the shelves above"
15
"Ptolemy planted his paws on"
16
"My hand tightened on the"
17
"Lucien watched my fingers instead"
18
"Ptolemy sneezed at a scroll"
19
"The tin rolled, tick-tock, tick-tock,"
ratio
0.925
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
53
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
22
technicalSentenceCount
1
matches
0
"His grip landed on the small crescent-shaped scar and held it there, as if the scar gave him a handle on the rest of me."
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
6
uselessAdditionCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
5
fancyCount
0
fancyTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
60
tagDensity
0.083
leniency
0.167
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
84.5640%