Run: 2026-11-11-01M755QTS94H5A513BHMT6JJZ7

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
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Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door opened on Lucien Moreau. I gripped the edge and stared at his mismatched eyes. One amber. One black. Both fixed on me. "Step back, Rory." "Step off the landing." "Eva asked me to come." "Eva asks no Frenchman for anything." He wedged the ivory handle of his cane into the gap and held the door open with one hand. His charcoal suit showed no dust from the climb. Curry smoke rose from the floorboards below and curled around his polished shoes. "Move that cane or I break it." "Break it and you break the only warning you have." "Warning about what." "Evan." My hand tightened on the door. The name hit harder than the knock had. I shut my jaw and held his gaze. "You lost the right to speak that name in my doorway months ago." "I buried his trail. I did not sell it." "You left me at Cardiff station with a train ticket and a lie." "I left you alive." Lucien reached inside his suit and drew out a sealed envelope. Black wax. A sigil pressed into the seal, a crescent broken by a line. "Eva sent this through me," he said. "She would not trust the post with Avaros." I did not take the envelope. Ptolemy pushed past my legs and sniffed the tip of Lucien's cane. The tabby cat rubbed his flank against the ivory handle, purred once, and fixed his amber stare on Lucien's face. "Ten minutes," I said. "Kitchen only. Touch no paper. Leave before I change my mind." "Your mind rarely changes once it locks." "Consider it locked." I stepped aside. Lucien entered and the flat closed around him. The room squeezed a person dry. Books stacked along all walls in uneven towers. Scrolls filled the low shelves. Research notes pinned over the table, over the sofa, over the one window. The tick-tock of a clock behind a pile of dictionaries beat against curry steam from the restaurant downstairs. Turmeric and fried onion hung in the air with old paper and cat fur. Eva had built a nest against the world and left the door barred with three deadbolts against it. Lucien took the kitchen corner as ordered. He set his cane against the counter and faced me with his hands open at his sides. "State your business," I said. "One sentence. No theatre." "Evan reached London two days ago." I crossed my arms. "Source." "Silas. His men saw Evan buy a phone outside the bar." "Silas tells men a great deal for money." "Silas told me because Evan asked for you by your old name." My left wrist burned under my sleeve. I pulled the cuff down over the crescent-shaped scar and felt Lucien track the movement. "Malphora," he said. I flinched. Only Eva used that name. Only Eva and the people who had chased me from Cardiff. "Say it again and I throw you down the stairs." "Evan said it to Silas. Silas repeated it to me." "Then Silas earned his money twice." Lucien nodded toward the table. "Eva wrote that name in the margin of a summoning text. She circled your scar beside it." My fingers found the edge of the nearest note. Eva's handwriting crowded the page. Avaros. Blood price. Witness. My name sat beside a drawing of a crescent scar, copied line for line from my wrist. "She researched you," I said. "She researched your father." Lucien said it flat, as if he had rehearsed the sentence for months and hated the sound of it. I looked up. "My father practiced law." "Brendan Carter practiced a second trade in Avaros before you were born." A laugh broke out of me, sharp and short. "You came into Eva's flat with a fairy tale about my father?" "Ask Eva. Ask her why she keeps a demon's ledger under her bed." I moved to the bedroom doorway. The door stood locked. Eva always left the key in the hall cupboard, beside the cat food and her spare glasses. Lucien stepped forward. "Rory." I stopped with my hand on the cupboard door. "Do not use that tone with me." "Your father made a bargain in Avaros. He traded a name for your life after your accident. The scar marks the contract. Eva found the ledger page in your mother's effects." "My mother died last spring. You know that." "I know. Jennifer Ellis Carter kept the page inside a hymn book. Eva bought the book at a market in Shoreditch." I opened the cupboard and took out the key. My palm shook against the metal. I pressed my thumb hard into the scar until the skin blanched. "My mother never spoke of Avaros." "She spoke Welsh to you when she feared the walls listened. Did she not?" "A ffwrdd â ti," I snapped. Lucien answered without pause. "Tu me connais. You know me better than that." French rolled off his tongue and filled the cramped kitchen. He knew four languages and used each one like a locked door. English for business. French when he wanted mercy. Italian when he lied. Arabic when he prayed. I had learned the pattern in three months beside him and unlearned it in one night at Cardiff station. "Give me a reason to believe a word," I said. "I refused Evan's money." Lucien lifted his hands higher. "He offered double my fee to hand over your flat above Silas' bar. I took the money's opposite. I burned the address and told him you had left London." "You let him follow me to Eva." "I let him believe he followed you. Your deliveries at the Golden Empress masked your route. Yu-Fei Cheung paid for discretion. I gave him a route through Peckham and a man who matched your height." Cool-headed thinking had served me for years. Law training had taught me to test a story from the edges inward. I tested his. "If you protected me, why did you vanish?" "Because protection looked like control. You saw the cane and the suits and the men who owed me favours. You decided I owned you." "You decided I needed owning." "Yes." The honesty landed wrong in my chest. I turned and threw the bedroom key onto the table. It skidded through a stack of notes and stopped against the sealed envelope. "Open it," Lucien said. "You brought it. You open it." He cracked the wax with his thumbnail. Paper whispered. He read the single line inside and his face changed. The polished fixer vanished. Something older and younger looked out from behind his eyes. "Eva wrote one word," he said. "Read it." "Run." I snatched the paper from his fingers. Eva's hand shook across the page. Run. No signature. No explanation. Ptolemy yowled from the bedroom doorway. We both turned. The tabby stood with his back arched high and his tail thick as a paintbrush. He stared at the locked bedroom door and hissed. The hair along his spine rose on end. "Eva locks that door when she leaves," I said. "The cat hates the lock. He hisses at the key." Lucien picked up his cane. "Eva locks that door from the inside when she hides." "She is not home." "Then who fed Ptolemy today?" I stared at the food bowl by the bedroom door. Kibble filled it to the brim. Eva measured a scoop each morning with a chipped blue cup. The cup sat clean on the draining board. Lucien moved closer to the bedroom door. I grabbed his sleeve and held fast. "Do not," I said. "You need to know." "I need you out of this flat before Evan finds it." "Too late for that choice." My grip slipped. His sleeve pulled free. He laid his palm flat against the bedroom door. The wood gave no sound. Behind the door, a floorboard creaked under weight. I stepped back. My left wrist throbbed. Lucien's thumb brushed the scar through my cuff as he passed me, a brief pressure, warm and deliberate. His mouth set in a hard line. He did not look at me. He looked at the door. "Eva," he said, his voice low. "Open on my word. Lucien Moreau. Avaros blood. Open." Silence pressed against the thin walls. The clock gave its tick-tock. Ptolemy hissed again, louder, and crouched beside my feet. Lucien lifted his cane. The ivory handle clicked. The thin blade slid out over his knuckles. Then something knocked three times from inside the locked bedroom door.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences70
tagDensity0.186
leniency0.371
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1415
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
85.87% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1415
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"measured"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"throbbed"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"measured"
1"weight"
2"throbbed"
3"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
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label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences119
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences119
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences176
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1415
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions27
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
51.05% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount859
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.98
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
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Moreau1
Eva7
Cardiff2
Cool-headed1
Silence1
Ptolemy3
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Eva"
3"Cool-headed"
4"Silence"
5"Ptolemy"
places
0"Cardiff"
globalScore0.51
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1415
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences176
matches
0"used that name"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
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mean15.05
std13.24
cv0.88
sampleLengths
06
118
23
34
45
56
641
77
810
93
101
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1213
139
1413
154
1625
1715
1838
1915
207
213
2211
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259
266
275
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298
3012
3122
323
3318
3410
3510
366
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3835
395
404
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427
4312
4421
4513
4627
474
4816
4931
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences119
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs150
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences176
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount863
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.015063731170336037
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.002317497103128621
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences176
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences176
mean8.04
std5.55
cv0.69
sampleLengths
06
110
22
32
44
53
64
75
86
919
109
1113
127
1310
143
151
166
178
188
1913
209
2113
224
2311
242
2512
267
278
286
2912
3020
314
3211
337
343
353
368
376
388
395
4013
4118
4214
4318
447
4517
465
474
486
494
55.30% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.3693181818181818
totalSentences176
uniqueOpeners65
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences97
matches
0"Only Eva used that name."
1"Only Eva and the people"
2"Then something knocked three times"
ratio0.031
55.05% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences97
matches
0"I gripped the edge and"
1"He wedged the ivory handle"
2"His charcoal suit showed no"
3"My hand tightened on the"
4"I shut my jaw and"
5"I did not take the"
6"I stepped aside."
7"He set his cane against"
8"I crossed my arms."
9"My left wrist burned under"
10"I pulled the cuff down"
11"My fingers found the edge"
12"My name sat beside a"
13"I looked up."
14"I moved to the bedroom"
15"I stopped with my hand"
16"I opened the cupboard and"
17"My palm shook against the"
18"I pressed my thumb hard"
19"He knew four languages and"
ratio0.412
11.55% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount87
totalSentences97
matches
0"The door opened on Lucien"
1"I gripped the edge and"
2"Both fixed on me."
3"He wedged the ivory handle"
4"His charcoal suit showed no"
5"Curry smoke rose from the"
6"My hand tightened on the"
7"The name hit harder than"
8"I shut my jaw and"
9"Lucien reached inside his suit"
10"A sigil pressed into the"
11"I did not take the"
12"Ptolemy pushed past my legs"
13"The tabby cat rubbed his"
14"I stepped aside."
15"Lucien entered and the flat"
16"The room squeezed a person"
17"Books stacked along all walls"
18"Scrolls filled the low shelves."
19"The tick-tock of a clock"
ratio0.897
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
86.54% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"he said, his voice low"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"I snapped (snap)"
dialogueSentences70
tagDensity0.171
leniency0.343
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.029
88.1784%